Guest Nezbyte Report post Posted July 21, 2002 Ok, well, i figured we'd get some poems in this. I got a few to start us off good. Here's the first: “Do You Remember Love?” Do You Remember Love? The Question I would wish to ask Do You Wish for acceptance? That feeling that isn’t leaving fast Do you hope for that mysterious girl? But you knew it wouldn’t last And the question that I must ask, Is this… Do You Remember Love? Once so young and innocent Out spoken and surreally divine Back then all your time was spent Drinking upon the worldly wine From the chalice of bliss Only a sprinkle of ignorance will remain Do you even remember that first kiss? At night all I could do is speak your name Your eyes, the deep blue sea Yet mine are green and gold In your eyes I can see ___ Myself, and all the lies I’ve told My mind is so cold Now my eyes are shut I can’t bear to see that face I will keep alone, stay from your world And when the collective mind separated I was severed from my connection to my real self My reality became abbreviated I think I have now left. Do You Remember Love? I think I do Do you remember me? And that place we shared years ago. Why did I have to leave? I hate myself and I love you, what a coincidence. Will this Kiss have to end? Sadly yes, for a condemed man cannot love .... Do You Remember Love? Do You Remember Love? Do You Remember Love? Do You Remember Love? “Gallows – Ad Mortum” As I walk down this long corridor to my final fate I think of my life, and all those that I hate Looking up, seeing the moon and the stars Filtering in through my mind’s prison bars Eyes both gleaming and inside screaming; Insane Insides eking, my mind is seeking escape. From the pain a single name exists in the dark I’m a lost soul, a forgotten passenger; I follow under the arch The laughter of a mad man is making others hide I feel like I’m looking into her angelic eyes Don’t cry, not for me. Death is the only way I can be free. Illuminated only by the moon my mind tries to play With leather over my eyes I walk up the stairs Feeling your presence everywhere, add the last thread around my neck. The gallows are a good place to catch shadows of light All my life I’ve learned the steps of the Devil’s Dance With omnipresence he’s nurtured my violence. Look into my eyes; Kiss me good-bye. Ill post some more if this gets any replies Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest M Nyland Report post Posted July 21, 2002 "Angel" I do not wish for all that’s good Because I know it is not true But I wish to understand Why God had chosen you Of all the angels he has known He picked you to be the one To fall to Earth and live your life Underneath our golden sun You bring joy and happiness Wherever your spirit walks While voices of the heavens Echo when you talk Angel The sky is brighter as you watch The days pass slowly by For one day you shall have your wings And to heaven you will fly But on that day I wish for us To never be apart For if you leave I’m sure That it will break my heart You are an… Angel Angel Any opinions would be nice..since I wrote this in about 5 minutes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Maven's Eyebrows Report post Posted July 22, 2002 Bill This story is about a man named Bill Who had no control over his drill Bill had a beautiful wife named Hill But for a young intern's body he would kill. One day Bill was alone in his room When he smelled the scent of fresh perfume In walked Monica, looking so pretty Suddenly Bill got the urge for some titty. Bill felt the heat when he looked at her thighs But the temperature wasn't the only thing to rise Slowly his penis grew into a wood With stretching slacks, the President stood. He pulled down his trousers and shedded his briefs Ready to show Miss Lewinsky his beef With a twinkle in his eye, ol' Slick Willy said "Get on your knees and give me some head!" Suddenly Hillary opened the door And saw her husband alone with this whore Thinking fast she grabbed a sickle And in one swift motion, sliced off his pickle. The Viagra Song Hey all you guys Who can’t get your dick high Stay calm, keep cool! If you can’t get it tall You can still have a ball Now you can use your tool! Just pop in a pill And raise your dill Get a boner, a real wood! Now you can get a stiffy In a jiffy With Viagra, it’s all good! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest EricMM Report post Posted August 1, 2002 It was supposed to be a metaphor I guess... It sucks I know. Rainbow or “Inspired by you” You are the only real light in my life Your smile outshines the sun And when those eyes and dimples shine through me That light separates into a rainbow A rainbow of different colors and feelings Different yet interrelated feelings inspired by you Red is the color of passion and mutual abandonment The color of sensitive lips and sensitive tips Red is the color or skin flushed by the heat within Red is the sound of panting breaths and songbird cries Red is the feeling of total embraces and delicious friction Powerful lust and physical love all inspired by you Orange is the shade of the rage of attachment Your face is orange when I push the buttons I know are wrong Orange is being really hurt by the only person who really can Orange is the sound of sobbing arguments and hot tears Orange is the color disappointments only you can inspire Yellow is the shade of being happy with you Yellow is the shade of your smile smiling because I’m smiling at you When I’m funny every giggle you make is yellow to me Every little boring thing I do with you becomes a treasured memory Yellow makes my leaden life turn to gold Yellow is the color of the happiness inspired only by you Green is the evil shine of jealousy The color of the sparks when two gazes cross When they were checking you out and I hate them for it Green is senseless and unfair and real Green makes me hate your guy friends because they make you happy Green is a shitty color inspired by you Blue is the color of the sadness of failure The world turns blue when I can’t make you smile Blue is the shadow of every orange fight Ruined relationships shine blue Blue is the sound of painful silences and tears cried alone Blue is when I cry because I feel you hate me Indigo is the pale glow of contentment Indigo is lying lazily together or walking hand in hand Indigo is the feeling of our warmth mingled, not fucking but sleeping Indigo is looking like shit and know that they still think you’re sexy Indigo is two people banishing bad dreams with mutual comfort Indigo is the absolute emotional safety inspired by you Violet is the tone of a world without you When memories are not enough to fill the emptiness Violet is when you’re busy or angry or away, anywhere not here Violet is the internal scream of confusion and loneliness Violet is the cold depression where you used to sleep with me The violet shadows beneath my eyes are inspired by missing you A rainbow is even more beautiful than its most radiant color A rainbow is all the colors together in one place Although orange and blue and violet hurt They are beautiful because they make the rainbow complete They are part of my reaction to your illuminating smile A rainbow of feelings inspired by you Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Flyboy Report post Posted August 11, 2002 Some Day Some days I think what it’ll be like to touch you. Some days I think what it’ll be like to kiss you. The days I think to myself enter my mind in a flood. Without you with me, my body feels dead. I would do anything for you, if only you make this dream come true. Our love would be true, and I wouldn’t do anything to harm you. The way I look at you, you never notice. The things I say to you, you’ll never understand. You’re a big woman, that’s hurting a man. How do you do what you to do me, I really don’t know. Maybe one day I’ll get the courage to you ask you to be mine. Some days I feel ill, but somehow you give me the will. As I wake up and think to myself, "Is this that day?" "Or is this just another some day?" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Ozymandias Report post Posted September 2, 2002 No offense to the authors, but I think it's safe to UNPIN this thread since nobody has responded in almost a month and it only has 4 replies to begin with. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Cancer Marney Report post Posted September 3, 2002 ...not to mention that all of them sucked. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Incandenza Report post Posted September 3, 2002 This thread gives me hellish flashbacks of the time I had to type up some entries for my high school's literary magazine when I was in the 10th grade. Aspiring poets should NOT let their work be seen until they're at least in their 20's, believe me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites