Guest Dopey Report post Posted December 20, 2002 I'm not trying to call out the Spider Poet, but I would like to hear from all my fellow poets. Spin your words hear please. Sometimes I hear the breaking hearts of the Angels. The lament of those who watch. They look down upon the feats of men, So much counts as not. Sometimes I hear the breaking hearts of the Angels. Their eyes filled with tears. With two wings they cover their face, Their hands stop their ears. Sometimes I hear the breaking hearts of the Angels. Lamenting the task they bare. To bring forth the Justice of God, upon those who refuse to care. (Dopey 12/20/2002) I eagerly await your poetry and prose. Peace and love, Dopey. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest SP-1 Report post Posted December 20, 2002 Indeed. Well, I suppose I will set aside my inherent paranoia, and what probably amounts to greed and write something specifically for the board here. *ahem* I look upon the smiling face of a love I could not claim. And from afar I make a case that I am not insane. Wrong to love and worse to live is wisdom I have been told. But passion comes for the winged life of men who do live bold. The reflection in your glasses betray that you know I'm here. Confusing contacts are now your passes to refuse to see me clear. For sight is blind to a certain extent but knowing can show the way. And I fight in kind and won't relent until you've heard what I must say. I say this and you hear that but the universe will tear you down. My being rises to a peaking flat and you leave me without a sound. Speechless and shaken. I stand here forsaken for a love I could not claim. * * * Not my best. It's probably pretty aimless and crappy, to be perfectly honest. But it's 5 AM and I should be asleep, so don't expect much better for a while. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest spiny norman Report post Posted December 20, 2002 Title: Short Poem. Po. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest JAxlMorrison Report post Posted December 20, 2002 I'm too lazy to put something on here, so I will just say go to this section of my website if you are interested www.geocities.com/jbored105/newsongs.html Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Dopey Report post Posted December 22, 2002 In Times of Trouble In times of trouble and times of need, I run to the hands that once did bleed. To pull me up from this horrible mess, To bring me peace in His hand of rest. Dopey 12/21/02 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Metal Ed 0 Report post Posted December 22, 2002 A Time To Crack Skulls by Edward Bonham III When bouncy pop bullshit fills the halls I take hold of my ball bat It's time to crack skulls When metal is appropriated by men with no sac I lace up my boots Their skulls, I will crack Be it in the skating rinks Be it in the malls Where ever there are pop bitches It's a time to crack skulls (12/21/02) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Dopey Report post Posted December 22, 2002 I hope JAxlMorrison doesn't mind me quoting him. I went to his website and read a killer poem called 'I Don't Want To Be Saved Anymore'. You can see the apathy and pain bleeding from these words. I really felt this one stanza. "When all the faith you've ever had is shattered When everything you've ever wanted has been scattered When eveything inside feels so bruised and battered When, in the end, nothing you've done has mattered" I can only speak from my own life, but I have felt some of this when I got divorced 8 years ago. I went on a backsliding trip away from God and spent a few years in the world. It took a while for the pain to subside and for God to softly speak to me and bring me back to His arms of mercy and love. This goes to JAxlMorrison, no matter what the pain, horror, or condemnation of the world you've seen and experienced if you are a true child of God, He will eventually gently and lovingly draw you back to Him. It's all about the love brother. Peace be with you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Agent of Oblivion Report post Posted December 22, 2002 Man...Tennyson doesn't have SHIT on Metal Ed. As a matter of fact, none of those dead english pussies do. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Dopey Report post Posted December 22, 2002 "THROUGH ME LIES THE ROAD TO THE CITY OF GRIEF. THROUGH ME LIES THE PATHWAY TO WOE EVERLASTING. THROUGH ME LIES THE ROAD TO THE SOULS THAT ARE LOST. JUSTICE IMPELLED MY MIGHTY ARCHITECT: THE POWER DIVINE, AND PRIMAL LOVE AND WISDOM SURPASSING ALL, HAVE HERE CONSTRUCTED ME. BEFORE I WAS CREATED, NOTHING WAS SAVE THINGS ETERNAL. AND ETERNAL I SHALL ENDURE. ABANDON ALL HOPE, YE WHO ENTER HERE!" In characters obscure, above a gate I saw these words inscribed upon the rock. "Master," I said, "these words bid me ill" He answered me like one of understanding: "Here must all misgiving be cast off; All cowardice must here be overcome. For now we have approached unto that place Of which I spoke, where you shall see those souls Who mourn the lack of intellect's true light." The Divine Comedy Inferno, Canto 3 By Dante Alighieri Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest SP-1 Report post Posted December 22, 2002 Metal Ed, I salute you, my poetic brother. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites