Crimson Commentskis

[Guest realitycheck]

All right, looks like a pretty solid show, sans the two matches that were lacking (And the results of them have now been edited in... such as they are.)

 

Big ups to Crowe and Atlas on getting their victories, and also to Duran for retaining his title. I read Crowe's match and gave him feedback, so I guess I should toss through Atlas's and see what carnage he thought up... *shudder*

 

Comment away, you lot.

 

-Z

[Rawknight 0]

Note to booky types.. that's MEANT to make Crow #1 contender rather than be a draw.

 

I asked Crow for that ending and sent him match stuff, and he wrote, putting me over lots in the match and being generally kick ass cool - AND using my finish and intros and modifying THEM to make them cooler.

 

And now I don't have to face Atlas! Yay me! I hate losing lots!

[Guest emerald_fusion]

A lack of time mean't i had to no-show, but Duran's match looked good enough to beat anything i wrote anyway. The rest of the show also looked good, particularly the main event.

[Guest Crowe]

WRITE OR DIE MATCH

Omega Storm vs. Quiet Death vs. Terry Wayne

- Z's comments gave me a thrill, but disappointing to see these three promising guys go. Especially Quiet Death, I loved that gimmick.

 

SINGLES MATCH

TV Title Match

Syndicate vs John Duran©

- An enjoyable read from Mr Duran, keep up the good work and more gold shall come your way. There are a few things needing improvement (I'd personally like to see a bit more description), but all shall improve naturally the more matches you write.

 

TAG MATCH

"Hollywood" Spike Jenkins/Kaine vs Tryst/Christian Blackwell

- ... you know this match could have owned if Tryst didn't die for two days.

 

SINGLES MATCH

World Title Contendership

Crow vs Va'aiga

- Yeah, I thought that I wrote a decent 4498 words in this match. I noticed some errors upon re-reading that I must avoid from doing in my next match. Hope my match did your idea justice, Card.

 

MAIN EVENT

World Title

Barbed Wire Deathmatch

Sean Atlas vs Dace Night©

- Fuckin' great match, I really got into it and I love the innovation you used with the finish. I must lift my game when I face you for that title.