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Guest The Superstar
Posted

Hmmm....looked kinda unorganized, with everything just put together and whatnot.

 

job squad- Work on your grammar. PLEASE.

 

Good main event,

 

BBP love fest= GAY! ;)

 

HeldDOWN > IntenseZone

Guest Big Poppa Popick
Posted

i havent even read it yet, but it was SP's first time =)

 

be nice super

Posted

Things were a little uneven between promos/matches, I think. And it's my first time so yeah, it's not as polished as I'd like it to be.

Guest Kingpk
Posted

It was nice, but SOME people *coughjobsquadcough* need to remember that spell check is your friend.

Guest Big Poppa Popick
Posted

i give MOTN credits to Jay and PRL

 

bravo job

 

im proud of our writing talent

Guest Zack Malibu
Posted

Excellent job on the main, SP. I knew you wouldn't let me down.

 

Kudos to the new guys for getting their stuff in. Jay, it's about TIME you were with us ;).

 

Dandy's interview at the promo was giving me visions of Tenay and West doing the interrogations on TNA.

 

Good show. But hD is still better.

Guest ShooterJay
Posted

Glad to be here man.

 

Many many thinks to SKBF/PRL for putting me over so strong, way more than I would've asked- I appreciate it.

 

You'll be getting plenty more of ShooterJay goodness, from now on I'm in it for the haul.

Guest HollywoodSpikeJenkins
Posted

HeldDOWN > IntenseZone

Guest Big Poppa Popick
Posted

i still think its funny how the helddown crew is always insulting the iZ people ... but if you look over on the helddown side the iZers arent really insulting them

 

good job guys...

Guest The Superstar
Posted

Oh shut up Popick. We're being what we like to call "brutally honest." We felt that HeldDOWN was better than IntenseZone, and we said so.

Posted

How about a little constructuve criticism then, instead of the requisite (and very ghey) heldDOWN > IntenseZONE crap. It's a feedback thread, not a battleground for ghey supremacy.

Guest HollywoodSpikeJenkins
Posted
Oh shut up Popick. We're being what we like to call "brutally honest." We felt that HeldDOWN was better than IntenseZone, and we said so.

felt?

 

 

I thought it was the honest truth.....

 

 

 

*cough*

Guest Lightning Flik
Posted

Match wise it didn't feel bad, but for some reason the promos and everything else seemed a little ... out of place.

 

Seriously nice matches. But everything else felt mashed together.

Posted

I've not quite figured out how to fit it all together. Thankfully I'm not posting every show. :)

Posted

I liked the show.

 

I won't lie to you, HD was a little easier on the eyes while reading, but this was still a good show.

 

I can't say too much against IZ because after LA I might be pulling double duty with "another" character.

Guest j.o.b. squad
Posted
job squad- Work on your grammar. PLEASE.

j.o.b. squad > gramar

 

that is all

Guest Tony149
Posted

I only scrolled through the show, but it looked okay. Sure, the show wasn't as crisp as HD or our PPVs, but a lot of the eariler OAOAST shows weren't either. Considering this was SP's first shot, he did rather well. I can barely look back at "The Body Shop" shows I wrote in May because its horribly put together and stuffed.

 

SP, you'll get better at "directing" the shows; it takes time. Hell, it took me around 5-6 months to find a format and stick with it.

Guest j.o.b. squad
Posted
Was that irony?

yup

 

but who knows how long i will stick with version 3

 

I started out as brain damaged spot monkey who got trained in submision wrestling but i droped that gimmick before I even had a match. Then I was obsesed with being on the bottom of the card which lasted 2 matches(both on the upper card irony there). And now I am obsesed with being the co-third draft pick and so far that gimick has lasted a match.

 

version 3 is my third gimmick talk about irony there.

 

wonder what i will be next. perhaps an explorer

 

just incase anybody was wondering live in bagdad was the song from the heavy metal episode of cowboy beebob.

Guest Mystery Eskimo
Posted

Good show. Even if the storyline I was supposed to be doing appears to have vanished without anyone telling me.

Posted

Eskie, I screwed some things up accidentally there. I'll PM you w/an explanation. My bad, dude.

Guest y2jailbait
Posted

My match went well, but ya know, that reject doesn't have character specs. At least i couldn't find any, so I had to give him jobber moves and the butal SPEAR~! I can't really try and do a feud with him if I don't have info on his character. Can someone give me some info on him, or maybe Reject himself could PM me some stuff.

Guest Big Poppa Popick
Posted

he's under the sn Natural Born Thriller 4:20 dood

Guest Undisputed
Posted

Fun show! Hopefully the Double DQ means I can ALWAYS claim a title shot~! :P

Guest TheZsaszHorsemen
Posted

Good show. I think Undisputed's character has HUGE potential and I tried to do something with him before the split.

Guest Big Poppa Popick
Posted

i'd think a few other people on iZ agree with ya

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