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[Guest Big Poppa Popick]

Please, your thoughts

[Guest caboose]

Cool promo BPP, it leaves open several potential storylines.

 

P.S I love you too.

[Guest Big Poppa Popick]

Hmm

 

I think thats the best promo I have ever written

 

I'm really digging shooterjay's character...and big things are coming his way

 

And how about the fact that we've got several contenders around for our NA title...Andrew, PRL, Cappa, Jay, and Undisputed have done great making it a title worth something again

 

And I always appreciate the nice match writing from you SP, but i thought jingus was messing up?

 

oh well... =)

 

im not the happiest with the show, because someone forgot to send me their stuff...but the fact that we had 1...no 2! debuts on iZ this week more than made up for that...

 

im looking forward to this drunken guy

 

but my favorite moment...dames's changing of the rules.

 

i guess this means also, youre free to write any beatings you want =)

[Guest AndrewisyourHero]

Maybe it's just me being blind, but you seem to have forgotten to include my promo, Mr. Bookerman sir.

[Guest Lightning Flik]

While it was better than last week, it still felt kinda choppy in bits and pieces.

[Guest Big Poppa Popick]

Cappa, so sorry I forgot your promo ... very nice one too

 

Andrew, your promo was after evenflow's first segment with zack.

 

Flik, how do you think it would be less choppy...You're right because it was, as i dont have much time due to finals, but what kinda transitions are you looking for? it might help us

 

=)

[Guest Tony149]

I haven't scrolled through the whole show yet, but I thought BPP's opening promo was very strong, probably his best.

[Guest Lightning Flik]

Flik, how do you think it would be less choppy...You're right because it was, as i dont have much time due to finals, but what kinda transitions are you looking for? it might help us

 

=)

I don't know. It was just like each segment didn't flow into the next. It's like the next scene sorta just comes out of nowhere in some places. Not sure. Like I noticed it with hD too. Hell, even my first promo in just popped out of nowhere, like I was just suddenly in the Dungeon but like that was my fault, but that's what I meant... It just doesn't seem to click.

 

Might just be that I haven't been doing e-feding for too long to just get it to flow for me. I mean, I have been out of e-feds for two years now, so I just can't see how the one segment goes into the next.

[LaParkaYourCar 0]

....................YOU WEREN'T SUPPOSED TO TELL WHO IT WAS THAT WAS COMING!!

 

well there goes my surprise

[Guest Big Poppa Popick]

oops

 

chalk this one up for finals boys

 

next weeks will be off the hizzle...

 

ppv fallout, a crazy backstage...and free action of everyone

 

oh my

[Guest j.o.b. squad]

good show but it wasent the iou's third match together infact it was our first tag match together. but it was my 3rd victory bah gawd

 

thats right it only took one try to become nubah 1 contenders. guess that happens when you are the numbah 3 draftpick

 

the j.o.b. "i reak of ungramarity" squad

[Guest SP-1]

I'm not sure what you mean, BPP. Jingus's arm? I had SP dropkick it post-match. SP . . . so . . . confuzzled!

 

Otherwise, me likey.

[Guest The Mad Cappa]

Well I liked the show! I can't wait til next week! Also, I've been continued to be entertained with j.o.b. squad's writing skills!

[Guest KanadianKrusty]

Great show but it looks like I was treated as a comedy character which I'm not, I'm more like a straight forward, "all-business" wrestling machine.

 

You see, to me the IOU is kind of like Head-Cheese, job is the comedy guy, and I'm a talented, somewhat charismatic Steve Blackman.

 

note to self: this is the first and last time I compare myself to Steve Blackman

[Guest evenflowDDT]

Ay ya! Sorry I couldn't get in a real promo, but don't worry... I waited to fill out Tony's interview for a reason. Now it'll be like, up to date with storylines and stuff.

 

Oh... and regardless of who wins on Sunday, expect my wrath next IZ. It'll be jolly good fun... some would even call it... divine

[Guest TheBlurricane]

My character specs are up. Expect some cool vignettes in the near future to introduce the character.

 

I guess since the cat is out of the bag I might as well prepare for my debut.

[Guest Mystery Eskimo]

What's this about Jingy's arm?!

 

My storyline got confused again, but thats my own fault for not writing it myself. Good show, I like the new "no rules" idea.

[Guest SP-1]

Psychology is all it amounts to, for one match. I had his arm worked on.

[Guest Big Poppa Popick]

we can just start that feud off on the next iZ

 

i hope you can write a segment for that eskimo

[Guest NaturalBornThriller4:20]

Decent show.

 

I didn't care much for my match, the ending was a bit rushed.

 

Oh, Drunken Fuck - Greatest...Gimmick...Ever

[Guest Mystery Eskimo]

we can just start that feud off on the next iZ

 

i hope you can write a segment for that eskimo

Yeah, I've got spare time again now so I should be able to start contributing properly.

[Guest KanadianKrusty]

btw, who wrote the MWC vs. IOU match?