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The show will be posted in a few minutes. Be sure to click on OAOAST Entertainment so you can go from LA to the feedback thread.

 

Two things:

 

1. BPP, I had trouble figuring out who was saying what at the end. You might wanna go back and space it out.

 

2. Here's the School's Out logo, I thought it was too big to use on the show.

 

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Guest Tony149

LATE BREAKING NEWS

 

The show will be shown worldwide sometime tomorrow. Zack told me Foshi is finishing up his match. A replacement finish was made, and the show is ready to go, but I'll wait for the match.

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Guest Tony149

BPP and the crew have first-look in the Glass Ceiling Folder. All of the OAOAST shows are posted there then moved into the main forums.

 

The show is now up in OAOAST Home Entertainment.

 

BTW, some of you like to use LONG-ASS sayings like BOOOOOOOOOOOO and whatnot; I had to trim or cut them down because SP & BPP said they were having trouble reading the show.

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Guest What?

Great show...already 5,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,001x better than Backlash!

 

 

Not like that's hard to do or anything but...Still, awesome show...great follow-up to AngleMania II

 

 

 

Tony...what's an Oklahoma Roll? I know I know this...I know I've seen it, but I SO just had a brain fart

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Guest Kingpk

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn, what a program. I'd have to say that SD/Parka was a bit of a show-stealer. Nice work LPYC.

 

And that opening bit with the Knights was funny as hell.

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Guest Angle-plex
The only person accountable for Plex's losing streak is Angle-Plex himself. The only people responsible for not having fun are the people who have forgotten how. Sooner or later, Plex shoulda spoke up and said, 'Hey fuck you, I'm takin' the win this week bitches.' Or, 'Hey, I'm gettin' tired of this bullshit, it's time we did something serious with me.' That's all it woulda taken, Zack.

 

Jesus, I sure hope that was a work, because that's the biggest load of bullshit I've ever heard.

 

Thumbs up on the show though, and probably the last time my character will ever be used.

 

BPP EDIT: Yes, its a worked shoot...something are works, some are shoots...we dont really know which is which anymore

 

i want popcorn

 

=)

 

END EDIT

Edited by Big Poppa Popick

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Guest Big Poppa Popick

LA Thoughts: By segment

 

Intro: Nice Job Tony...Loved the Friends reference

 

Poster: Ohh that looks nice...should've dimmed the flares though...but 3 is a magic number!

 

Orion/BPP segment: Slickie wrote this one up, pretty entertaining as it follows Orion messing with BPP but like most heel plans, this one backfires...im so kicking his ass

 

Announcer intros: Damn Straight! iZ is greater than the SAT!

 

Boogie Knights party: I didn't get the DJ reference, but the joke at the end was pretty swell...I wonder if the glowsticks will be used later on?

 

Orion/BPP: Certainly not my best effort in writing a match. I loved this comment Tony

 

[qoute]JESSE

The man more hated than the United States of America is on his way to the ring

 

In addition, the hinting we've had with Jesse seeing the truth was nicely paid off in your commentary...I think that in itself raised the match 1/2* .

DAMMIT! Why did I lose *oh I wrote it* ... Damn Orion...but hey, what a way to put over a finishing move... All the build was for Popick to win this one, but Orion pulled it out by cheating means, a win is a win...probably left the crowd confused as to why popick lost, which lowers the match reason, but was needed

 

2.5 AngleSaults

 

PRL/Andrew

 

These kinds of feuds are exactly what the North American title needs to regain its lost prestige ... I think what, there's 6 belts merged into the NA title. Cappa/PRL tension continues and Hyland and his tweener ways keep him face against the hated PRL... It's nice to see psychology play a role too... iZ Match of the Night

 

3.5 AngleSaults

 

Vitamin X

 

And he's iZ! Eat your heart out -nuff said

 

SJ Promo

 

Wow...another guy gunning for the NA title...that's what 4? And he puts over Cappa...and we get a tag team match too? BONUS! SJ is the breakout start of iZ since the split

 

MWC vs. FA

 

About the same reaction as the opener...solid but undefined...and Eskimo losing didnt make sense until the Jingus swerve...the longest running tag team we had and now theyre split? I dont think these two have fought ever... gotta be something interested

 

2.5 AngleSaults

 

IOU vs. LI (World Tag Team Title match) -floaters

 

ill admit it, im a guilty mark for the iOU...job cracks me up...we got what we thought...a build for the iou, but simply the los infernales were too much...but a new addition with this nefarious masked man? somethings not right here

 

And darn those finishes where the lights go off...i dont like the dark

 

3 AngleSaults

 

and the second great quote of the night

 

[qoute]Poet smiles thinly and winks at him. "You know, Job . . . three is a magic number. Trust me.[/qoute]

 

Tony and the Body Shop

 

Allow me to give a STANDING OVATION for Tony's greatest PROMO EVER ... We shouldve called this PPV Backlash, cause that seems to be happening now... BRAVO TONY!

 

yeah, and the eF segment was good too...Why am I friends with Zack anyways?

 

for everything

 

SEGMENT OF THE NIGHT!

 

ShooterJay and Cappa

 

Two fan favorites, cant decide...who gets to face the NA champ? Well, odds are itll be SJ since Cappa's dealing with PRL...and sure enough...theres that damn PR guy again... The Run in made a hell of alot of sense...and im happy with how these matches highlight those after the NA title...

 

action was kinda blah though

 

2.75 AngleSaults

 

Widow/Crystal

 

Women's wrestling...nuff said...

Looks like Poet lost his lady

 

poor guy

 

2 AngleSaults...im feeling generous

 

School's Out promo

 

HHH + Jokes = Fun

 

TE PROMO

 

As long as they give us free tshirts ...im all for it

Did I mention I think TE are starting to outshine alot of the other stables on hD... Its an original gimmick to say the least

 

Knight gets a belt

It doesnt mean anything, but ha, I dig hardcore madnes!

 

Parka/SD

 

When stables go bad...

 

SD is definitely more apropro in Boogie Knights... But why do heels always regain their heat after fluke face wins.

 

Did I mention I mark for BK?

 

2.5 AngleSaults

 

Foshi/Paul Stanley

 

These guys showed up? Damn...mustve missed that in the pre-show report.

 

At its best, it continues the fued...but cmon...DVD on a chair...THAT HURTS! Make it seem worse than how it was!

 

Although this reeks of WCW and the Rap guys vs. country hicks...i hope the next match is a guitar on a pole match....

 

and jarrett whacks both of them

 

2 anglesaults

 

hehehe..Purist rules...

 

way to short of a written match...not the best effort there...but the mad purist push continues

 

1.5 anglesaults

 

K-MOney bringing back history with his promo on anglesault...good build

 

anglsault can bring the goods when he wants too and this gets another mention for a great line of the night

 

[qoute]ANGLESAULT (CONT'D0

K-Money, tonight I'm gonna bling-bling your ass straight to hell.

[/qoute]

 

as/k-money

 

hD match of the night...easily...k-money gets elevated...but those in the steel cage match next suck

 

3.5 anglesaults

 

ss/sg

 

this aint a shoot brother, i could care less =)

 

at least one of em is gone...get this lovefest off my screen!

 

3 anglesaults

 

purist...wants a title shot...i might have a problem with that

 

ohh theres someguy...and i whack him! thatll teach him, and hes too much a coward to attack me even if i am ever on helddown...wait why would i be on helddown?

 

ef/zack

 

4 anglesaults easily...match of night honors...but the dq ending takes off the rating...but there's the slow build turn finally happening...was Popick the masked man all along?

 

Trinity Infiniti

 

THIS is how a heel stable should always start out...anyone who wanted a shot at zack...looks like theres umm 3 reasons why you dont want to get near him right now...poor poor zackie

 

but i do believe popick lost his mind...and this whole thing just got really shootish didnt it

 

i give MAD PROPS for SP's rant...mine was okay but his was just pure poetry

 

i dont like it when events end with the big match ending in a dq...but i think the payoff will be worth it

 

what will happen on iZ?

 

not at the level we set at am2...but easily a very well done ppv

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Guest HollywoodSpikeJenkins

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Everyone in the Un-Stable loss, except for me....

 

who didn't have a match....

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Guest What?

No, AS won...I think only one member of Un-Stable lost, and that's SupahStah!~

 

 

 

hehe...I wrote the hD match of Living Angleously....I rule :D

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No, AS won...I think only one member of Un-Stable lost, and that's SupahStah!~

 

 

 

hehe...I wrote the hD match of Living Angleously....I rule :D

Oh yep, your right. I completely forgot.

 

 

 

Still a

 

 

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Guest The Mad Cappa

Wow, just wow. I was speechless after reading the PPV, especially after reading the promos. I thought the PPV was excellent. Everybody had a great effort. However, I feel like a let down for writing a sub par match compared to the rest of the excellent matches.

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Guest Tony149
Tony and the Body Shop

 

Allow me to give a STANDING OVATION for Tony's greatest PROMO EVER ... We shouldve called this PPV Backlash, cause that seems to be happening now... BRAVO TONY!

 

hehehe..Purist rules...

 

way to short of a written match...not the best effort there...but the mad purist push continues

 

purist...wants a title shot...i might have a problem with that

That was my greatest promo ever. The only problem: How to write it in a way that doesn't start a OAOAST civil war. So I made sure to throw out jabs at the faces (i.e. You're/I'm segment) so you know it's not pure hate.

 

I enjoyed The Purist's promo. If you re-read it, I foreshadow an upcoming feud (look closely at the Rambo reference).

 

The match had to be short because I didn't want to upset AP over the use of his character. So I wrote it in a way where both men had about even time beating up the other.

 

As for the Purist wanting a title shot. I wanted SG/SS to be the second to last match. But your segment called for a backstage attack, while SS wrote SG was celebrating in the ring; I needed a soild lead-in ... Purist promo, go to Cole, SJ attacks SG. I thought it worked well.

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Guest Anglesault
No, AS won...

Which is what shocked the hell out of me. I was expecting to lose.

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Guest What?

Well, I originally wrote it for you to lose (when I hit the SB#3), but Tony or BPP changed it so you won.

 

 

 

I'm glad, actually...I think it builds the feud. I wanted to write it so you won with the Money Clip, but then I thought "Naw...It's only been shown the I used the Money Clip once, so..." it would be kinda lame to be finished by a finisher that has been used once.

 

 

 

 

And what the HELL is an Oklahoma Roll?!

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Guest SP-1

Plexie, the BASE of what I said was shoot, in that all this crap has been agitating me for auite some time. The specifics are work, however, as I just took that base agitation and jacked it up to unreasonable levels and then infused it with my character's view of things (a view tained by losing Widow, being frustrated, and whatever Stephen Joseph has told him, along with an already mounting level of insanity).

 

So, yes, as for what you quoted it's work. No worried.

 

 

I thought this was a great, great show, and EVERYONE should be proud of their efforts. Though I have to say, Tony, that promo had me laughing.

 

Zack, a special note: I know we joke around and such, but if there's ever a Zack Malibu/Spiderpoet III, and it's higher than the mid-card . . . one day . . . WAY down the line . . . you're writing that. Because tonight's match was rockin', AngleMania II's match was rockin'. Good job.

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Guest Lightning Flik

I must say that this was a hell of a show.

 

Great going guys. I'm so buying the replay (re-reading it).

 

And the TE promo makes me wonder what's up with us. Can't wait to get into the know.

 

Might I also add, for being the blowoff PPV that doesn't do anything, or rather, shouldn't have; it did a lot to build on a new "season".

 

It's going to be interesting as hell.

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Guest Anglesault
Thank you, LPYC. That was killing me.

Team Angle won the tag titles wih an Okie Roll

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Guest DawnBTVS

Awesome, awesome show. Can't wait to see where everything's heading now. :headbang: 2 Thumbs Up here

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Guest j.o.b. squad

good show but get ready for iz and a story of religon, evil half clones, ghey jokes and the masacre of well meaning ninja security guards

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Guest caboose

Awesome show. And what an ending.

 

And your all welcome for spitting on the legacy of Caboose. :D

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Guest The Mad Cappa
get ready for iz and a story of religon, evil half clones, ghey jokes and the masacre of well meaning ninja security guards

:lol:

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Guest Big Poppa Popick
get ready for iz and a story of religon, evil half clones, ghey jokes and the masacre of well meaning ninja security guards

:lol:

oh my

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