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Guest DR PHIL
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This is the wierdest series of posts I've ever seen on here!

 

Yet it's compelling, if your trolling around this is the strangest form ever!

 

Please continue.

Guest Dean and Foam
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"A system is like the tail of truth, but truth is like a lizard. It leaves its tail in your fingers and runs away, knowing full well that it will grow a new one in a twinkling." Ivan Sergeyevich Turgenev

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Guest Dean and Foam
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Please continue.
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Guest Dean and Foam
Posted (edited)

continuity

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Guest spiny norman
Posted

I thought this was going really well until this second page here. Then you sort of changed your persona and your style of writing altogether. Originally you said things like "hummin" etc with no punctuation but now you just said "o'". Plus on the first page you said something like humourous, then you wrote mom.

 

You seem to have gone from writing like a Canadian, Briton, whatever, to an American.

 

Unless this is all part of the characterisation, I suggest you try to refine your writing technique. If it is on purpose, than I think you are absolutely beguiling as a writer.

Guest Dean and Foam
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continuity

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Guest DR PHIL
Posted

That was some deep shit!

I just wish I knew what the fuck you are talking about!

 

That cigarette lighter's in the head line makes you sound stoned.

Is this meant to be an autobiographical thread?

Guest Dean and Foam
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That cigarette lighter's in the head line makes you sound stoned.

Is this meant to be an autobiographical thread?

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Guest Vern Gagne
Posted

Statement 1: Sleep

 

When you are tired you sleep.

Guest Dean and Foam
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Statement 1: Sleep

 

When you are tired you sleep.

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Guest Vern Gagne
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Statement 1: Sleep

 

When you are tired you sleep.

I feel this has validity, Vern Gagne. Could you expand?

That's not my style. I don't give into the man. The man wants me to expand.

Guest Dean and Foam
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That's not my style. I don't give into the man. The man wants me to expand.
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Guest Dean and Foam
Posted (edited)

continuity

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Guest Dean and Foam
Posted (edited)

STATEMENT EIGHT: IRRELEVANT

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Guest Marshall
Posted

Danielle is a slut. BONG!

 

Seriously, Dean and Foam, where is all this heading, sugar?

Guest Dean and Foam
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continuity

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Guest Dean and Foam
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continuity

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Guest spiny norman
Posted

No! I want to know the conclusion! Just because those less learned can't see the light, please don't spoil it for those who appreciate what you're doing and who want to see if the meaning of life truly is 42! Please, come back!

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