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In A World Gone Mad..... We Have Our Own Minds

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Guest HollywoodSpikeJenkins

New concept I am trying out.

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Where are we?

 

 

 

 

 

Inside . . .

 

 

 

 

Inside where?

 

 

 

 

You know where . . .

 

 

 

 

You're scaring me . . . where are we?

 

 

 

You know where we are . . .

 

 

 

 

Why are you doing this?

 

 

 

 

Because it isn't right.

 

 

 

 

What isn't right?

 

 

 

 

 

Everything.

 

 

 

 

Please, let me out of here. I'm scared.

 

 

 

 

Not yet.

 

 

 

 

 

Please, just tell me what I have to do. I want to go home.

 

 

 

 

Why is it this way?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why is what this way? Please . . . ?

 

 

 

 

 

The biggest threat to life, is the cancer that wants to consume it.

 

 

 

 

What are you talking about . . . ?

 

 

 

WHY IS HE DOING THIS TO YOU? WHY ARE THEY ALL DOING THIS TO YOU?

 

 

 

Who? What?

 

 

 

All of them. They are all doing this to you. Holding you back. Not letting you get ahead. Making sure you stay the same way forever.

 

 

 

What are you talking about?

 

 

 

You know what I am talking about. You don't want to be who you are, but you want to be what you can be. You want to be a champion. You want to be taken seriously . . . they won't let you though . . .

 

 

 

 

Why?

 

 

 

Jealousy? No. They mock you. For fun. They won't let up. No matter what you do. You can defeat 100 men, and still. You are nothing to them. You never will be either.

 

 

 

 

Where am I?

 

 

 

 

Deep inside the darkness. The one place will know never to find you. Where all of your dreams lie.

 

 

 

 

Where is that?

 

 

 

 

Then there is he . . .

 

 

 

 

He?

 

 

 

The one who says he will be there for you. But he won't. He will only use you. Like he did before.

 

 

 

Who?

 

 

 

WHO DO YOU THINK? He doesn't want to be near you. You disgust him.

 

 

 

Why?

 

 

 

 

We will make him pay. Not the way he thinks. Not the way anyone thinks. We will get him, on the inside.

 

 

 

The inside?

 

 

 

 

He wants it so bad that he is willing to die over it. But we won't let him. We will NEVER let him get it.

 

 

 

Get what?

 

 

 

He will NEVER GET IT!

 

 

 

 

WHAT IS IT HE WANTS?

 

 

 

What you want.

 

 

 

 

He wants . . . what I want?

 

 

 

 

He will never get it, will he . . .

 

 

 

 

I.....what........no.

 

 

 

What a pathetic man. Willing to risk it all, on something so small.

 

 

 

It's not small to me.

 

 

 

It isn't. It's everything you want. Everything WE want.

 

 

 

 

Who are you?

 

 

 

 

What about The Other?

 

 

 

 

The Other?

 

 

 

 

 

He holds the key. The key to it all.

 

 

 

 

 

What key? Key to what?

 

 

 

 

He has what you want. You will challenge death, and claim what is yours. It has always been yours. But he has never let you get it.

 

 

 

 

Why? Why is this happening . . . ?

 

 

 

No matter how much they refuse you. No matter how much they think they are better than you. You will not let them beat you.

 

 

 

Who are you?

 

 

 

 

You will not let them beat you.

 

 

 

 

WHO ARE YOU?

 

 

 

It is your right, to hold it.

 

 

 

ANSWER ME!

 

 

 

YOU WILL NEVER LET THEM BEAT YOU!

 

 

 

Who are you?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am, you.

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Guest Powerplay

All that you are is a face in the mirror! I close my eyes and you disappear!

 

I'm what you face when you face in the mirror! As long as you LIVE I will still be here!

 

Sorry, but this is reeks of that song from Jekyll & Hyde. Confrontation, right? Anyways, interesting promo. You haven't taken a serious approach in a while, and I'd like to see where you go with it.

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Guest kelloggs

well, I can tell you're motivated, but the question is can you keep the intensity and write a match to follow it up. It's a very trippy promo, but I still get it. Don't let the man hold you down Spike.

 

M. Francis

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