Paul Heymans WWE

[Guest Corino 1000]

Alright I kind of got this idea from Real fn show but I couldn't figure out another way to get the comnpany on Paul. Alright WWE has been bought by Vince and Paul Heyman bought it. This is my roster, TV shows and ect.

 

 

Faces

 

 

Main Event

 

Chris Benoit

Eddie Guerrero

Kurt Angle

John Cena

 

Upper Midcard

 

Booker T

 

Midcard

 

Billy Kidman

Lance Storm

Rey Mysterio Jr

Ultimo Dragon

Hurricane

 

Lower Midcard

 

AJ Styles

Simon Diamond

Jerry Lynn

Paul London

Spanky

Shannon Moore

Spike Dudley

Chris Sabin

Funaki

 

Openers

 

Sonjay Dutt

Matt Stryker

Deranged

 

 

Heels

 

 

Main Event

 

The Rock

Big Show

Brock Lesnar

Chris Jericho

 

Upper Midcard

 

Edge

 

Midcard

 

Charlie Hass

Shelton Benjamin

Chavo Guerrero Jr.

Christian

Matt Hardy

Rhyno

Tajiri

 

Lower Midcard

 

CM Punk

Doug Basham

Jamie Knoble

Nunzio

Hotstuff Hernadez

 

Openers

 

Jimmy Yang

Tony Mamaluke

 

 

Managers

 

Teddy Long

Ric Flair

Tommy Rich

 

Tag Teams

 

FBI- Nunzio, Tony Mamaluke

WGTT- Charlie Hass, Shelton Benjamin

London and Spanky- Paul London, Spanky

Funaki and Ultimo- Ultimo Dragon, Funaki

Sabin and Simon- Chris Sabin, Simon Diamond

 

Stables

 

FBI- Nunzio, Tony Mamaluke, Tommy Rich

Straight Edged Revolution- WGTT, Ric Flair, CM Punk

 

TV Shows

 

Smackdown

Velocity

 

Titles, Champions

 

WWE World Title

Cruiserweight Title- Rey Mysterio

Intercontinental Title

Tag Titles

 

Announcers

 

Taz

JR

 

 

 

I will be posting up a Smackdown every Thursday and Velocity every Saturday. I will start with the first Smackdown this Thursday which takes place March 14th the first Smackdown after Wrestlemania.

[Guest Your Olympic Hero]

Alright I kind of got this idea from Real fn show

Do you mean me from my ECW w/ Heyman thread?

[Guest Real F'n Show]

I havent updated mine forever, but click the link in my sig and you can see it. Your Olympic Hero's ECW thing kicks ass though. Keep this up, looking forward to reading your shows. Maybe I'll write another one for mine soon.

[Guest Corino 1000]

Alright I kind of got this idea from Real fn show

Do you mean me from my ECW w/ Heyman thread?

No I got it from Real f'n show when I read his Eric Bishoff thing and thats when I got the idea to do it.

 

My first Smackdown will be up this Thurday.

[Guest Corino 1000]

                                    Paul Heymans WWE

 

 

What crazy things will happen on the first night of Smackdown as Paul           

 

Heyman becomes the new boss of WWE? Who has been fired from WWE? Who has

 

been hired to WWE? All these questions will be answered this Thursday on

 

Smackdown don't miss it!!!! 

[Guest Corino 1000]

Ok here's my first Smackdown. Don't be shy about saying your opinion.

 

 

 

Smackdown

March 18th

 

 

 

The night starts off with the pyros the goes to Paul Heyman backstage sitting on his chair.

 

Paul Heyman- The rain of Vince is over. For months I’ve been General Manager sucking up to Vince. Now its over! I’m the boss and Vince is gone. I am a newer better boss then Vince ever was and will be! The WWE has taken a few weeks off. But I have made many adjustments to the WWE. I’ve fired, hired many people to the company. To prove my new workers are perfect over the weeks there will be tournament for the WWE title. The two surviving wrestlers of the tournament will face at Backlash for the WWE championship.

 

 

The FBI are backstage leaning on a wall waiting London and Spanky. They come and the FBI and London and Spanky start talking.

 

Tommy Rich- Hey Spanky, London we da FBI got an offer for you.

 

Spanky- Yea wats that?

 

Nunzio- What my good man Tommy is trying to say is that we all know in are tag match right now that we obviously are gonna win….without a doubt.

 

Paul London- So what are you saying? We can’t beat you?

 

Nunzio- No fellas that’s not what I’m saying. There is a chance for you guys to win. We know you guys don’t want to look bad so if you take this offer will lay down and let you pin us. All you a have to give us is some….Mollahh!!!

 

Spanky- So you are saying we can’t beat you!

 

Tommy Rich- You take this offer you guys can beat us…Copish?

 

Spanky and London- We don’t need your pity.

 

When they are done talking Spanky and London look like there leaving but start beating the crap out of the FBI. The guards come in and break the brawl. Some harsh words between both groups.

 

 

 

Paul London and Spanky vs. Tony Mamaluke and Nunzio with Tommy Rich

 

Tony Mamaluke and London are in first. Some chain wrestling here, London overpowering Tony till it ends up he gets stiffed in the back and crawls across the ring to Nunzio and tag him. Nunzio and London are now in. Nunzio with many cheap shots. Then throws Paul into the ropes then London sunsets Nunzio both men a go into a pin sequence then roll out and tag their partners. Spanky comes gives some dropkicks whatever, He starts paying attention to Nunzio. Mamaluke gets a cheap shot then starts working on the leg of Spanky. After the work on the leg Tony tags Nunzio. He positions Spanlys leg for Nunzio to knee off the ropes. He does so. Nunzio then starts dancing in Londons face. London tries to get in the ring which causes the ref to look at him stopping him to get to get in the ring. Nunzio and Mamaluke double team Spanky. Nunzio make’s a clap and Tony goes in. Tony continues to work on the leg of Spanky. He throws Spanky against the ropes as London is still frustrated. Spanky comes back and delivers a deadly tornado ddt to Tony. Both men are down. They both crawl to their partners Tony get to Nunzio first. Then Spanky gets London. Paul’s in ready to go, Nunzio charges up to Paul, moonsault dropkicks him. He keeps getting up Paul keeps clothlining him, Until he lifts him up and gives him a sliding DDT. He goes to the ropes and signals for the London Calling. He’s about to do it and Tommy Rich goes over to the ropes when the ref isn’t looking and throws him off the ropes. Nunzio goes for pin with his feet on the rope. 1…2…3. FBI WIN!!!!! After the match all three members off the FBI start pounding on Spanky and London. When they are done they celebrate the win with there theme music doing all sorts of Italin Taunts. 8:32

 

 

 

Benoit is being interviewed by Terri. He’s talking about how he is going to the title Backlash.

 

 

Terri- Why do you think you’re going to win the title at Backlash?

 

Chris Benoit- It’s simple Terri, I’m the greatest technical wrestler ever! There’s no one who’s going to stop me from winning this title. Not Brock, Rock, Kurt, Eddie, Big Show, nobody!!! The Rabid Wolverine will not be not be stop!

 

Just then the Rock comes and starts talking to Benoit.

 

The Rock- So Benoit you think your going to win the Title?

 

Chris Benoit- Ye. Rock interrupts

 

The Rock- It doesn’t matter what you think. You call yourself The Rabid Wolverine. Well Wolverine meet The Bromo Bull!!! You call yourself the greatest technical, well your looking at the greatest wrestler ever! So tonight in our match I wish you luck and you’ll need it. But I got one question for. Do u smell what the Rock is cooking?

 

The Rock then walks way.

 

 

 

Rhyno vs. Billy Kidman

 

Rhyno and Kidman tie up Rhyno tries to use strength to win but Kidman quickness dodges all his moves. Kidman get thrown into the ropes by Rhyno and tilt o whirl head scissors followed by some armdrags and an armbar. Rhyno reaches the ropes. Billy scoop slams him then Billy goes for the pin 1… he kicks out rapidly. Kidman gets on the ropes. He waits for Rhyno to get up. When he does Kidman tries a cross body but Rhyno catches him. He’s about to scoop slam Billy but drops him cause his arm can’t take holding him. Kidman gets up and gives Rhyno a brutal enzuguri. He goes for the pin 1…2…2.99999 he kicks out!!! Kidman waits across the ring for the Rhyno to get up. When he gets up Kidman charges up at him and Rhyno gives him a deadly spinebuster. Both men are down. Rhyno gets up first. He starts getting ready for the gore. He goes and misses crashing shoulder first into the rail. Rhyno takes a breather outside the ring. Kidman goes against the ropes and goes for a tope. It successful. He throws Rhyno in the ring then goes for the pin 1..2.. he kicks out! Kidman starts getting frustrated. He throws Rhyno against the ropes and when he comes back he gives Kidman a killer gore! He goes for the pin 1…2…3 Rhyno wins!!! Rhyno leaves celebrating and favoring arm of his. 5:54

 

 

 

Rey Mysterio walks in to Paul Heymans office.

 

Rey Mysterio- You know how you said there will be a tournament for the WWE championship? Well I was wondering what about the cruiserweight championship?

 

Paul Heyman- Yes I the cruiserweight title is a great title. I’am very fond of the cruiserweight title. So with that I will grant your request. Next week there will be a 4 man dance Rey Mysterio vs. Tajiri vs. Hurricane vs. Jamie Knoble. Winner of the match has the title to themselves. Are you happy now Rey? I ‘am a very busy man. Unlike Vice I care for the company. Now be off with!

 

Rey Mysterio- Thank you Mr. Heyman.

 

Rey leaves the office of Paul Heyman.

 

 

 

AJ Styles vs. Tajiri

 

The match starts off with a couple of fancy cruiserweight chain wrestling moves. Tajiri ends up throwing AJ into the ropes and when he comes back Tajiri hurricaneuanas Styles. AJ charges again but a drop toe hold by Tajiri followed by a leg dropTajiri starts giving styles a ton of brutal kicks. He goes for the pin 1…2.he kicks out! He starts pounding on AJ untilAJ chops him back. Tajiri gives AJ a deadly kick to the back Styles gives one back to him. Both keep kicking each other and chopping each other. Tajiri goes against the ropes to forearm AJ but Styles superkicks him instead. He gets up Tajiri and throws him into the turnbuckle. Then does that moonsault off Tajiri and does the spinning punch. He sets up Tajiri for a 450. Tajiri throws the ref into the ropes causing AJ to fall. Tajiri gets up and chops the shit out of Styles then tries a frankenstiener but AJ catches him. He’s trying to get the styles clash but he can’t because Tajiri keeps grabbing on to the ropes, So Styles gives him a ravishing powerbomb off the second rope with a pin. 1…2…he kicks out!!! He lifts up Tajiri and gives him a stalling suplex. Next he gets on the turnbuckle and delivers mean leg drop. He goes for a pin 1…2..he kicks out!!! AJ starts to get frustrated so he lifts Tajiri for powerbomb the turnbuckle. Tajiri climbs out of the powerbomb and locks in the Tarangela. After 5 seconds the hold is let go. Tajiri stays behind the ropes. AJ goes up to Tajiri gives a headbutt to the gut of AJ then a sunset pin 1…2..he kicks out!!! Tajiri tries to the throw Styles into the ropes but AJ throws into the ropes then Tajiri does his famous handspring into a back elbow. Tajiri goes for a pin 1…2..he kicks out!!! Tajiri also getting frustrated. He slingshots Styles into the ropes, Styles lands on the second rope then does the moonsault DDT. He goes for the pin 1…2..he kicks out!!! Styles getting frustrated again. Styles lifts him up for the Styles Clash, he’s struggling with it. When Styles is about to it Tajiri green mist Styles in the face then hurricaneuanas his way out of the Styles Clash. 1…2…2.9999..3 Tajiri wins!!! After the match Tajiri makes signs to the crowd that he’s going to win the cruiserweight title next week. 8:12

 

 

Highlight Reel

 

Chris Jericho’s Highlight Reel is all set up the ring. He’s there sitting on one of his chairs.

 

Chris Jericho- Hello assclowns and welcome to The Highlight Reel. I know have all been waiting for the highlight reel, the highlight of the night. As you may or may not know tonight I will be facing Eddie Guerrero tonight to advance in the tournament. So for today’s Highlight Reel I have taken the pleasure in inviting Eddie Guerrero to Chris Jericho’s highlight reel!!!!

 

Eddies theme comes on the crowd starts popping, Eddie finally gets in the ring.

 

 

Eddie Guerrero- How are you doing homes?

 

Chris Jericho- I ‘am doing great Eddie. I guess your wondering why I called you out here huh? Well I’ve called you out here to wish good luck in your match. I’m a bit concerned with your lying, cheating and stealing. Are we agreed to have a fair contest tonight Eddie Guerrero.

 

Eddie Guerrero- Obviously. What do you think of me homes?

 

Just then The Big Shows theme comes on and he enters the ring.

 

Big Show- Hello Chris, Eddie. Why are guys talking about that your guys are going to win the title at Backlash. Everyone’s going throw so much trouble just to make sure they win the WWE Title. Benoit making promises he can’t keep same with Rock. Jericho making sure Eddie doesn’t cheat in the end it doesn’t matter. Because in the end we all know its Big Show. John Cena doctor of Thuganmoics. Well next week you’ll be seeing a doctor but one of Thuganmoics I guarantee it!

 

John Cena theme music comes on and he takes his shirt off, The Big Show is throwing the chairs out of the ring to get ready for a fight. When John enters the ring Jericho gets between them.

 

Chris Jericho- Guys lets save this for next week. You can kill each other another time, not on my highlight reel!

 

Big Show- Why should we listen to you Jericho?

 

John Cena- Yo, Yo, let me through so I can kick this sasquatches ass!

 

Lesnars Theme comes on. Instead of getting in the ring he stays outside of the ring.

 

Brock Lesnar- Big Show you know your not going to win. I’ve beat you before, remember Judgment Day Big Show, remember Backlash last year Cena?

 

While Lesnars talking, Kurt Angle comes from the back and hits Lesnar with a chair.

 

Kurt Angle- Remember Summerslam Brock? Enough with BS. You all know that I’m going to win this Title. Not only for me but for the troops.

 

Eddie Guerrero- Hey homes ESE man I’m going to win…without cheating Jericho.

 

Everyone starts arguing about who’s going to win, when it breaks out into a brawl. Everyone starts fighting each other. Kurt Angle leaves and says he’s not going to lower himself to that level. Like 20 officials enter the ring to break it up. After everything has cleared up and the highlight reel was over the announcers start talking about how explosive it was.

 

Tournament Match

 

Chris Jericho vs. Eddie Guerrero

 

Both men start the match with a tie up some mat wrestling it ends up when Eddie gets an armbar. Chris reaches the ropes quickly. They tie up again. Jericho gets some cheap kick to the leg of Eddie. Jericho continues working on that leg shin breakers the whole deal. He gives some elbows to Guerrero and continues working on the leg. He lifts Guerrero up and throws him into the ropes. Chris comes charging in and Eddie gives him a shoulder. Jericho dazed, Eddie starts climbing up to the second rope. He’s about to jump but can’t with his bad leg. Chris back on track goes up to Guerrero and gives him a dragon screw of the second rope. Chris keeps working on the leg. Chris throws Guerrero against the ropes Eddy comes back with a tiltowhirl headscissors Eddie looks like he’s getting momentum but Jericho comes back with another dropkick to the leg. Jericho tries to get in The Walls of Jericho but Guerrero kicks him away from it. Guerrero who is close to the ropes flips Y2J over them when he comes back charging. Both men stay down for a while. Jericho starts to get in the ring but Guerrero goes against the ropes and dropkicks him he goes back out. The drop kick hurt Eddie’s leg more. Guerrero though gets enough energy to dive to the outside. Both men are out outside. Guerrero even though doing the splash is more hurt then Jericho. When the count out reaches 8 Chris gets in and out of the ring to stop the timing. Jericho puts Eddie’s bad leg on the guardrail and starts stomping it. Jericho leaves Guerrero outside. Jericho starts taunting in the ring. When he Guerrero is getting back in the ring Chris tries that dropkick thing he usually does but misses cause Eddie duck. Jericho is down in front of Guerrero. Then Eddie tucks back the ropes and does the flip thing he usually does. He goes for the pin 1…2...he kicks out!!! Guerrero struggles to get up but sets up Jericho for a frog splash, he’s about to do it but falls down do to the injured leg. Jericho spotting Guerrero down goes for the lion sault. Its successful, he goes for the pin 1…2…he kicks out!!! He goes for it again but Eddie moved out of the way, causing Jericho to land on his feet knocking the ref out of the ring. Jericho dropkicks the leg of Guerrero and runs out of the ring to get a chair. When Eddie gets up Jericho smacks him with the chair, then throws it out of the ring. He goes for the pin. The ref gets up and sees Chris pinning Eddie 1…2…3 Jericho wins to advance in the tournament!!! After the match Chris gets heat with the crowd for cheating after saying he wanted a fair contest, then picks up the mic and says your not the only on that can Lie, Cheat, and Steal!!! 17:45

 

 

 

Tournament Match

 

Chris Benoit vs. The Rock

 

The match starts when they circle each other. Benoit offers a hand shake The Rock is quite hesitant to take it. After around a minute he takes it and the crowd goes wild. They start of with some reversals showing that they know each other pretty well. Benoit seeps Rock you some submissions. The Rock reaches the ropes. They both stop and look at each other. They tie up again Rock stomps Benoit in the stomach then throws him into the ropes and lips him over. He starts doing those fancy stomps. He starts focusing on the arm of Benoit. He throws him into the ropes and when Chris comes back Rock applies an armbar. Benoit rolls throw and gets a headlock on Rock. Rock gets a head scissors Benoit rolls throw they bridge up and Rock gives a deadly DDT Benoit. He goes for a pin 1…2.he kick out!!! The Rock continues working on Benoit. He gives elbows to Benoit and a couple of leg drops then goes for a pin 1…2.he kicks out!!! Rock throws b against the ropes tries a cloth line Benoit ducks and gives Rock a triple german. Both men stay down for a while. The get up they start struggling to punch each other. Benoit throws rock against the ropes and gives him a shoulder block. He lifts Rock up and gives him some suplexes. Benoit waits for Rock to get up. He charges up to Rock, Rock spinebusters him. Both men again down. Rock goes for a pin 1…2..he kicks out!!! Rock signals for a peoples elbow he throws the pad into the crowd. He comes back and he misses it! When they both get up Benoit gives Rock some knife edges. He takes Rock up to the ropes for a superplex. Benoit lifts Rock up but Rock goes back down on the turnbuckle. He throws Benoit off the ropes, Benoit gets back on. The crowd is really tense. The Rock starts punching Benoit and signal for a Rock Bottom off the top rope. The Rock has it but Benoit reverses it into the crippler crossface off the top rope. The Rock stays in it for about 20 seconds then taps out. Chris Benoit wins to advance in the tournament!!! After the match Benoit and rock are in the ring. Rock is mad because he lost. But he shakes Chris Benoits hand after the match. 18:15

[Guest Your Olympic Hero]

Tony Mamaluke and Nunzio with Tommy Rich[/b]

*awaits the arrival of JT Smith, Tracey Smothers, and Big Sal*

[Guest Markingout]

London and Spanky are trying too sound way too serious when there chracters are mean't too be fun and amazing guys. THey also seemed too attack FBI for no reason at all. They should of acted confused the whole time and eventually just walked out.

 

Try too make things easier too read

Some chain wrestling here, London overpowering Tony till it ends up he gets stiffed in the back and crawls across the ring to Nunzio and tag him.

 

At first I thought London got hit, then I realized it was Mamaluke that got hit. Try running spell check before its posted.

 

Don't post full match details just the story. Like " It was a good wrestling match in a great back and forth match with the FBI trying too pull all of there tricks out of there bag. They did so and got the cheap victory when Tommy Rich pushed London off the ropes". Something like that just more elaborative.

 

Chris Benoit- It’s simple Terri, I’m the greatest technical wrestler ever! There’s no one who’s going to stop me from winning this title. Not Brock, Rock, Kurt, Eddie, Big Show, nobody!!! The Rabid Wolverine will not be not be stop!

 

Benoit's chracter here is questionable because he sounds like an aggresive heel, when he is a serious face. The Rock should of cutting of one of his hell rant promo's and Rock is saying how he is going too pin Chris Benoit. When Benoit comes and stares the Rock in the eyes,and walks away.

 

The highlight reel was interesting. Everyone coming out was crazy way too build for the tournement. Its different. not bad.

 

Instead of a pure filler match of AJ and Tajiri it should of been a tag match Hurricane and Rey Rey vs Tajiri and Noble. It would of built up the crusier title. And in the end they all could be in a corner and all leave indivually why the announcers hype it.

 

I might edit in later with more thoughts on the other matches.

[Guest Real F'n Show]

London and Spanky are trying too sound way too serious when there chracters are mean't too be fun and amazing guys. THey also seemed too attack FBI for no reason at all. They should of acted confused the whole time and eventually just walked out.

 

Try too make things easier too read

Some chain wrestling here, London overpowering Tony till it ends up he gets stiffed in the back and crawls across the ring to Nunzio and tag him.

 

At first I thought London got hit, then I realized it was Mamaluke that got hit. Try running spell check before its posted.

 

Don't post full match details just the story. Like " It was a good wrestling match in a great back and forth match with the FBI trying too pull all of there tricks out of there bag. They did so and got the cheap victory when Tommy Rich pushed London off the ropes". Something like that just more elaborative.

 

Chris Benoit- It’s simple Terri, I’m the greatest technical wrestler ever! There’s no one who’s going to stop me from winning this title. Not Brock, Rock, Kurt, Eddie, Big Show, nobody!!! The Rabid Wolverine will not be not be stop!

 

Benoit's chracter here is questionable because he sounds like an aggresive heel, when he is a serious face. The Rock should of cutting of one of his hell rant promo's and Rock is saying how he is going too pin Chris Benoit. When Benoit comes and stares the Rock in the eyes,and walks away.

 

The highlight reel was interesting. Everyone coming out was crazy way too build for the tournement. Its different. not bad.

 

Instead of a pure filler match of AJ and Tajiri it should of been a tag match Hurricane and Rey Rey vs Tajiri and Noble. It would of built up the crusier title. And in the end they all could be in a corner and all leave indivually why the announcers hype it.

 

I might edit in later with more thoughts on the other matches.

nobody ever did a review like that for my shows

 

Good mini-review though, and good show Corino.

[Guest Markingout]

LoL, I will man. I gotta check out the other fantasy feds.

[Guest Corino 1000]

Ive got a reason for that. And the point of that was to show that London and Spanky weren't intimidated by the FBI. Gets them a little over as a good tag team that will stand there ground.

 

London and Spanky are trying too sound way too serious when there chracters are mean't too be fun and amazing guys.

 

Thanks for that information.

 

Don't post full match details just the story. Like " It was a good wrestling match in a great back and forth match with the FBI trying too pull all of there tricks out of there bag. They did so and got the cheap victory when Tommy Rich pushed London off the ropes". Something like that just more elaborative

 

I think that Benoit was being confidante because he's never won the title and he's anxouis to win it. Oh shit I forget to put some words that Benoit was gonna say. Well he was gonna say that he'll prove it in the ring tonight then walk away.

 

Benoit's chracter here is questionable because he sounds like an aggresive heel, when he is a serious face. The Rock should of cutting of one of his hell rant promo's and Rock is saying how he is going too pin Chris Benoit. When Benoit comes and stares the Rock in the eyes,and walks away.

[Guest Corino 1000]

Here's this weeks Velocity. Feel free to voice your opinions.

 

 

Velocity

March 20th

 

 

CM Punk is in the locker room putting on tape and getting ready for a match tonight. He starts talking.

 

CM Punk- Ladies and gentlemen Paul Heyman hired me not just to entertain you beer drinking, drug doing, fans but to fix the WWE from its bad ways. Though Paul Heyman has made many great changes there is still many flaws in new WWE. Like for example beer should be banned from WWE arenas (The crowd boos). Yea that’s right you pigs! Tonight in my match against Sonjay Dutt will be the beginning of the big change in WWE. You see when I was a little punker back in the day I fought against drugs, and beer, unlike you guys who were doing drugs and drinking beer. You see you slobs don’t know that drugs kill your brain cells and make you dumb….Not that many of you weren’t already. Tonight the reign of CM Punk in WWE will start!!! WWE will bow down to me!!! Straight edge for life!!!!

 

 

 

Deranged vs. Jimmy Yang

 

The match starts off with some amazing chain wrestling. Yang ends up getting thrown into the ropes. Deranged goes against the ropes for a 619, Yang ducks Deranged comes back with a 450 hurricaneuana pin 1…2.he kicks out!!! They both get up and Deranged and Deranged gives Jimmy Yang an enzegurie. Deranges starts working on him giving him elbows and leg drops and stuff. He throws Jimmy against the ropes when he comes Yang gives him a tiltowhirl bull dog. Deranged gets up quickly Yang gives a back spinning wheel kick. Yang sets him up for Yang Time. He goes for it and misses. Both men are down. When they get up they start chopping each other back and fourth. Till Yang throws Deranged into the ropes when he comes back he tiltowhirls into a Blue Print. 1…2…3 Deranged Wins!!! 5:14

 

 

Ultimo Dragon with Funaki vs. Chavo Guerrero Jr.

 

This match is a great spot fest from the side of Ultimo. Chavo on the other side tries many cheap shot. Later on in the match Chavo attacks Funaki outside causing him to get Asia Moonsaulted. Ultimo take him back in the ring tries that finisher of his I forgot the name but when he comes down Ultimo knocks the ref down by mistake and Chavo low blows him. Then gives Ultimo a deadly super kick, pins, and gets his foot on the ropes. The ref gets up and sees the pin 1…2…3 Chavo Guerrero wins!!! After the match Funaki rushes in and chases Chavo out of the ring and Funaki tries to explain to the ref the foot of the ropes. 7:45

 

 

Chris Sabin is walking around the arena looking for Simon Diamond he finds him leaning on a wall.

 

Chris Sabin- Hey Simon I’ve been looking for you everywhere.

 

Simon Diamond- Do you want something from me?

 

Chris Sabin- Kind of. I was wondering since where both new guys learning the ropes. Maybe we can be tag partners. What do you say?

 

Simon Diamond- Yee sure why not.

 

Just then and there the WGTT walk in start mocking the new guys.

 

Shelton Benjamin- Hey Charlie are you listening the kids want to be tag partners?

 

Charlie Hass- I sure I am. To bad they don’t know the truth right.

 

Chris Sabin- Oh and what’s that?

 

Shelton Benjamin- That you kids don’t have what it takes to make it in this business. I’m surprised Paul Heyman hired you.

 

Simon Diamond- Well show you we have what it takes in the ring tonight!

 

Simon and Sabin walk away. WGTT just stay there and act like its nothing and start making jokes about it.

 

 

CM Punk vs. Sonjay Dutt

 

This match a very good mat wrestling contest at the beginning. After a while they move on to trying moves but men still reversing them. This whole type of wrestling ends when Dutt is thrown into the ropes come back tries a hurricaneuana Cm Punk catches him and throws him back then does a shining wizard. He goes for a pin 1…2.he kicks out!!! After a little while more of Punk working on Sonjay, Sonjay comes back when Punk throws Dutt into the ropes Sonjay ducks a cloth line goes against the ropes and when he comes back he does that tiltowhirl submission thing that he does a lot. So whatever when he lets goes against the ropes and dropkicks CM Punk outside the ring. While Punk is recovering Dutt gets on the top rope and does a moonsault to the outside, the crowd goes wild. After a little while of both men fighting each other Dutt has the lead and is going for a Hindu Star press. CM throws his ref into the ropes and Dutt falls on the ropes. Punk goes up and delivers a Pepsi Plunge. 1…2…3 Punk Wins!!! After the match Punk picks up the mic and says “This is only the beginning for WWE!!!” His theme comes on and he leaves. 11:12

 

 

WGTT vs. Sabin and Diamond

 

In this match Charlie and Sabin are in first. Hass obviously is moving faster in the ring and getting more submissions done then Sabin. After a while of technical wrestling Sabin forearms Hass and starts pounding on him. He sets up Charlie so that Diamond can jump off the ropes and knee him. That’s what he does after Sabin tags in Simon. Diamond starts beating up Hass. Simon starts working on the leg of Hass. After a while of pounding Shelton comes in and superkicks Diamond. Both men down trying to crawl to their partners. Shelton gets tag first and runs across the ring and smacks Sabin so he falls off the ropes. They continue working on Simon. Shelton applies a couple of chickewings cross armbars everything. Shelton throws Simon into the ropes then pancakes him into the ropes tags Charlie and Hass grabs the feet of Diamond Benjamin goes jumps over Charlie and does that thing the always do. After more while of beating up Simon. Hass goes for a superkick Simon ducks and gives Hass a superkick. Both men trying to get to the ropes. Diamond gets Sabin. Hass gets Benjamin. Sabin delivers many clothlines to the WGTT and then to end he gives Shelton an enzegurie. Sabin goes for a future shock on Shelton but out of nowhere Ric Flair runs down the aisle and starts beating up Chris. WGTT and Flair start beating up the new tag team of Sabin and Diamond. After a brutal attack WGTT and Ric walk down the aisle with their hands up and get tremendous boos from the crowd. 12:14

[Guest Markingout]

Here's this weeks Velocity. Feel free to voice your opinions.

 

 

                                            Velocity

                                              March 20th

 

 

CM Punk is in the locker room putting on tape and getting ready for a match tonight. He starts talking.

 

CM Punk- Ladies and gentlemen Paul Heyman hired me not just to entertain you beer drinking, drug doing, fans but to fix the WWE from its bad ways. Though Paul Heyman has made many great changes there is still many flaws in new WWE. Like for example beer should be banned from WWE arenas (The crowd boos). Yea that’s right you pigs! Tonight in my match against Sonjay Dutt will be the beginning of the big change in WWE. You see when I was a little punker back in the day I fought against drugs, and beer, unlike you guys who were doing drugs and drinking beer. You see you slobs don’t know that drugs kill your brain cells and make you dumb….Not that many of you weren’t already. Tonight the reign of CM Punk in WWE will start!!! WWE will bow down to me!!! Straight edge for life!!!!

 

 

 

Deranged vs. Jimmy Yang

 

The match starts off with some amazing chain wrestling. Yang ends up getting thrown into the ropes. Deranged goes against the ropes for a 619, Yang ducks Deranged comes back with a 450 hurricaneuana pin 1…2.he kicks out!!! They both get up and Deranged and Deranged gives Jimmy Yang an enzegurie. Deranges starts working on him giving him elbows and leg drops and stuff. He throws Jimmy against the ropes when he comes Yang gives him a tiltowhirl bull dog. Deranged gets up quickly Yang gives a back spinning wheel kick. Yang sets him up for Yang Time. He goes for it and misses. Both men are down. When they get up they start chopping each other back and fourth. Till Yang throws Deranged into the ropes when he comes back he tiltowhirls into a Blue Print.  1…2…3 Deranged Wins!!! 5:14

 

 

Ultimo Dragon with Funaki vs. Chavo Guerrero Jr.

 

This match is a great spot fest from the side of Ultimo. Chavo on the other side tries many cheap shot. Chavo attacks Funaki outside causing him to get Asia Moonsaulted. Ultimo take him back in the ring tries that finisher of his I forgot the name but when he comes down Ultimo knocks the ref down by mistake and Chavo low blows him. Then gives Ultimo a deadly super kick, pins, and gets his foot on the ropes. The ref gets up and sees the pin 1…2…3 Chavo Guerrero wins!!! After the match Funaki rushes in and chases Chavo out of the ring and Funaki tries to explain to the ref the foot of the ropes. 7:45

 

 

Chris Sabin is walking around the arena looking for Simon Diamond he finds him leaning on a wall.

 

Chris Sabin- Hey Simon I’ve been looking for you everywhere.

 

Simon Diamond- Do you want something from me?

 

Chris Sabin- Kind of. I was wondering since where both new guys learning the ropes. Maybe we can be tag partners. What do you say?

 

Simon Diamond- Yee sure why not.

 

Just then and there the WGTT walk in start mocking the new guys.

 

Shelton Benjamin- Hey Charlie are you listening the kids want to be tag partners?

 

Charlie Hass- I sure I am. To bad they don’t know the truth right.

 

Chris Sabin- Oh and what’s that?

 

Shelton Benjamin- That you kids don’t have what it takes to make it in this business. I’m surprised Paul Heyman hired you.

 

Simon Diamond- Well show you we have what it takes in the ring tonight!

 

Simon and Sabin walk away. WGTT just stay there and act like its nothing and start making jokes about it.

 

 

CM Punk vs. Sonjay Dutt

 

This match a very good mat wrestling contest at the beginning. After a while they move on to trying moves but men still reversing them. This whole type of wrestling ends when Dutt is thrown into the ropes come back tries a hurricaneuana Cm Punk catches him and throws him back then does a shining wizard. He goes for a pin 1…2.he kicks out!!! After a little while more of Punk working on Sonjay, Sonjay comes back when Punk throws Dutt into the ropes Sonjay ducks a cloth line goes against the ropes and when he comes back he does that tiltowhirl submission thing that he does a lot. So whatever when he lets goes against the ropes and dropkicks CM Punk outside the ring. While Punk is recovering Dutt gets on the top rope and does a moonsault to the outside, the crowd goes wild. After a little while of both men fighting each other Dutt has the lead and is going for a Hindu Star press. CM throws his ref into the ropes and Dutt falls on the ropes. Punk goes up and delivers a Pepsi Plunge. 1…2…3 Punk Wins!!! After the match Punk picks up the mic and says “This is only the beginning for WWE!!!” His theme comes on and he leaves. 11:12

 

 

WGTT vs. Sabin and Diamond

 

In this match Charlie and Sabin are in first. Hass obviously is moving faster in the ring and getting more submissions done then Sabin. After a while of technical wrestling Sabin forearms Hass and starts pounding on him. He sets up Charlie so that Diamond can jump off the ropes and knee him. That’s what he does after Sabin tags in Simon. Diamond starts beating up Hass. Simon starts working on the leg of Hass. After a while of pounding Shelton comes in and superkicks Diamond. Both men down trying to crawl to their partners. Shelton gets tag first and runs across the ring and smacks Sabin so he falls off the ropes. They continue working on Simon. Shelton applies a couple of chickewings cross armbars everything. Shelton throws Simon into the ropes then pancakes him into the ropes tags Charlie and Hass grabs the feet of Diamond Benjamin goes jumps over Charlie and does that thing the always do. After more while of beating up Simon. Hass goes for a superkick Simon ducks and gives Hass a superkick. Both men trying to get to the ropes. Diamond gets Sabin. Hass gets Benjamin. Sabin delivers many clothlines to the WGTT and then to end he gives Shelton an enzegurie. Sabin goes for a future shock on Shelton but out of nowhere Ric Flair runs down the aisle and starts beating up Chris. WGTT and Flair start beating up the new tag team of Sabin and Diamond. After a brutal attack WGTT and Ric walk down the aisle with their hands up and get tremendous boos from the crowd. 12:14

That CM Punk promo hardly sounded like Punk. If Heyman had problems he wouldn't hire Punk.

 

You see when I was a little punker back in the day I fought against drugs, and beer, unlike you guys who were doing drugs and drinking beer. You see you slobs don’t know that drugs kill your brain cells and make you dumb….Not that many of you weren’t already. Tonight the reign of CM Punk in WWE will start!!! WWE will bow down to me!!! Straight edge for life!!!!

 

CM Punk does not sound like that. If you going too make him cut a promo make him sound like himself. He didnt even use his number catch phrase in here.

 

The matches still have there flaws. Some being that alot of stuff makes no sense.

 

Deranged goes against the ropes for a 619, Yang ducks Deranged comes back with a 450 hurricaneuana pin 1…2.he kicks out!!!

 

For Deranged to do that he has too go too the top rope. And he never does the Dragonrana. Also, this happened right after the chain wrestling? This seems like the last near fall before the end of the match. Like I said before you have too watch the moves that you put in. Yang is technical he is not going too tilt O whirl bullldogs

 

Ultimo take him back in the ring tries that finisher of his I forgot the name but when he comes down Ultimo knocks the ref down by mistake and Chavo low blows him.

 

Your acting as if you are actually typing the matches. Don't make it sound like that. And never the thing I forgot. If you dont know it dont book the wrestler.

 

Chris Sabin- Kind of. I was wondering since where both new guys learning the ropes. Maybe we can be tag partners. What do you say?

 

Simon Diamond- Yee sure why not.

 

Simon Diamond is a ten year pro... Also you made it seem like WGTT where 15 year vets, they are both like 5 years I belive. Atleast the main event was built though.

 

This match a very good mat wrestling contest at the beginning. After a while they move on to trying moves but men still reversing them. This whole type of wrestling ends when Dutt is thrown into the ropes come back tries a hurricaneuana Cm Punk catches him and throws him back then does a shining wizard.

 

Punk hits the Shining Wizard as a trademark late in the match.

 

Punk throws Dutt into the ropes Sonjay ducks a cloth line goes against the ropes and when he comes back he does that tiltowhirl submission thing that he does a lot. So whatever when he lets goes against the ropes and dropkicks CM Punk outside the ring.

 

LoL,never say you don't know. Its a tilt'O whirl into a octopus hold. Never say "whatever when he lets go". Say Dutt lets go after he sees Punk aint tapping. You need too build trademarks more instead of a moonsault Sonjay should of hit that crazy springboard 360 plancha. Then the fans have something too look foward too.

 

After a little while of both men fighting each other Dutt has the lead and is going for a Hindu Star press.

 

You should of said Dutt just keeps fighting and finally ground Punk and goes for the finish in the Hindu Press. Once again you need too watch the way to write up the matches. It seems soooo rushed.

 

In this match Charlie and Sabin are in first. Hass obviously is moving faster in the ring

 

Sabin is a shitload faster than Haas. There were flaws in the main event that I dont have too point out

 

Ric Flair runs down the aisle and starts beating up Chris. WGTT and Flair start beating up the new tag team of Sabin and Diamond. After a brutal attack WGTT and Ric walk down the aisle with their hands up and get tremendous boos from the crowd. 12:14

 

Talk about burying a living legend on a show nobody watches.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ive got a reason for that. And the point of that was to show that London and Spanky weren't intimidated by the FBI. Gets them a little over as a good tag team that will stand there ground.

 

 

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London and Spanky are trying too sound way too serious when there chracters are mean't too be fun and amazing guys.

 

 

 

Thanks for that information.

 

 

QUOTE 

Don't post full match details just the story. Like " It was a good wrestling match in a great back and forth match with the FBI trying too pull all of there tricks out of there bag. They did so and got the cheap victory when Tommy Rich pushed London off the ropes". Something like that just more elaborative

 

 

 

I think that Benoit was being confidante because he's never won the title and he's anxouis to win it. Oh shit I forget to put some words that Benoit was gonna say. Well he was gonna say that he'll prove it in the ring tonight then walk away.

 

 

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Benoit's chracter here is questionable because he sounds like an aggresive heel, when he is a serious face. The Rock should of cutting of one of his hell rant promo's and Rock is saying how he is going too pin Chris Benoit. When Benoit comes and stares the Rock in the eyes,and walks away.

 

London and Spanky are goofballs, you could of made them stand there ground in funny ways like something that has too do with the movie Godfather like the FBI are talking it looks like they are not listening and Spanky goes,"You talking too me?". Let Spanky do the talking.

 

Benoit has won many titles including the WCW World Title. When Benoit is waiting he is calm and focus not loud and obscene

[Guest Corino 1000]

Deranged did go the tope rope for it as you said I frgot to mention it. And well noted on the Yang thing.

 

For Deranged to do that he has too go too the top rope. And he never does the Dragonrana. Also, this happened right after the chain wrestling? This seems like the last near fall before the end of the match. Like I said before you have too watch the moves that you put in. Yang is technical he is not going too tilt O whirl bullldogs.

 

 

Im not, not gonna book a wrestler because I don't know the name of thier finisher. You did understand what it was though. Whats the name of his finisher though?

 

Your acting as if you are actually typing the matches. Don't make it sound like that. And never the thing I forgot. If you dont know it dont book the wrestler.

 

Sabin and Diamond are both new wrestlers in WWE thats what I meant by new guy.

 

Simon Diamond is a ten year pro... Also you made it seem like WGTT where 15 year vets, they are both like 5 years I belive. Atleast the main event was built though.

 

 

Yea that was a mistake by me.

 

You should of said Dutt just keeps fighting and finally ground Punk and goes for the finish in the Hindu Press. Once again you need too watch the way to write up the matches. It seems soooo rushed.

 

I meant technically faster in the ring.

 

Sabin is a shitload faster than Haas. There were flaws in the main event that I dont have too point out.

 

 

I said I had a reason for having London and Soanky stand thier ground! And Benoit has never won the WWE Title and thats what he's after. That why he's confidant.

 

London and Spanky are goofballs, you could of made them stand there ground in funny ways like something that has too do with the movie Godfather like the FBI are talking it looks like they are not listening and Spanky goes,"You talking too me?". Let Spanky do the talking.

 

Benoit has won many titles including the WCW World Title. When Benoit is waiting he is calm and focus not loud and obscene

[Guest Markingout]

Even if you did forget too mention that Deranged went too the top, Jimmy Yang just ducked a 619...

 

Im not, not gonna book a wrestler because I don't know the name of thier finisher. You did understand what it was though. Whats the name of his finisher though?

 

 

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Your acting as if you are actually typing the matches. Don't make it sound like that. And never the thing I forgot. If you dont know it dont book the wrestler.

 

The name of the finisher is the Asai DDT. I understand, but it makes the match less injoyable having too think. Also makes you look bad when you say things "I Forgot".

 

I meant technically faster in the ring.

 

Sabin can hang with Haas, Haas just knows more about technique and more submissions. It should of ended with Haas slamming him because Haas is much larger than Sabin.

 

I said I had a reason for having London and Soanky stand thier ground! And Benoit has never won the WWE Title and thats what he's after. That why he's confidant.

 

Ok, lets say the reason is that they have a gimmick change, then make them hint that in there matches. When I read your matches they is nor chracter. THe only way too tell the difference between heel and face is sometimes there is a low blow. Why would Benoit be confidant and yelling in a promo if its not his chracter. Benoit is calm and focused. He nevers seems too be yelling in promos. In his promo he is doing too something too get a fued over, not too pimp himself. Its not Benoit.

[Guest Corino 1000]

Yang ducked the 619 moved back and was hurricanueaned.

 

Even if you did forget too mention that Deranged went too the top, Jimmy Yang just ducked a 619...

 

 

You know what. Just tune into my next Smackdown and find out why London and Spanky are acting all serious. LOL

 

Ok, lets say the reason is that they have a gimmick change, then make them hint that in there matches. When I read your matches they is nor chracter. THe only way too tell the difference between heel and face is sometimes there is a low blow. Why would Benoit be confidant and yelling in a promo if its not his chracter. Benoit is calm and focused. He nevers seems too be yelling in promos. In his promo he is doing too something too get a fued over, not too pimp himself. Its not Benoit.

[Guest Markingout]

Yang ducked the 619 moved back and was hurricanueaned.

 

Even if you did forget too mention that Deranged went too the top, Jimmy Yang just ducked a 619...

 

 

You know what. Just tune into my next Smackdown and find out why London and Spanky are acting all serious. LOL

 

Ok, lets say the reason is that they have a gimmick change, then make them hint that in there matches. When I read your matches they is nor chracter. THe only way too tell the difference between heel and face is sometimes there is a low blow. Why would Benoit be confidant and yelling in a promo if its not his chracter. Benoit is calm and focused. He nevers seems too be yelling in promos. In his promo he is doing too something too get a fued over, not too pimp himself. Its not Benoit.

I don't too keep pushing this,but once Yang ducks he is on his feet. Since Deranged just missed that means that he winds up too the side of Yang. You are saying Yang dosen't have seconds too hit Deranged or take him off the top rope.

[Guest Real F'n Show]

dude, if you need help on writing matches, just check out the now defunct "Bischoff's WWE" (link in sig)

[Guest Corino 1000]

I don't need help thanks for the offer but I was rushing the Velocity so it came out bad.

[Guest Corino 1000]

WWE Observer

 

This week on Velocity we all saw the making of the brand new team of Chris Sabin and Simon Diamond. They had there first match on Velocity this week. Nobody has been fired from the WWE this week. Things are said to be going smoothly.

[Guest Corino 1000]

Why did Flair attack Sabin and Simon?

March 25th 2004

 

      Why did Ric Flair and Worlds Greatest Tag Team attack the new wrestlers Chris Sabin, and Simon Diamond. Is this the making of and Alliance between Ric Flair, and WGTT? Were they trying to make an example of them?  Whatever the case it will be answered this thursday on Smackdown.

 

       Thats not all we have in store for you on Thursday for Smackdown. We also have the Rey Mysterio vs. Hurricane vs. Jamie Knoble vs. Tajiri for the Crusierweight championship. We also have to tournament matches tonight Brock Lesnar vs. Kurt Angle, John Cena vs. The Big Show, and other stars such as Chris Benoit, Edge, The Rock ect. All this on Thursday. Make sure to tune in at CT 8/9 on Spike TV!

[Guest Corino 1000]

Heres my Smackdwon for this week feel free to voice your opinion.

 

 

 

Smackdown

March 25th

 

 

 

The night starts off with Flair and WGTT in the ring.

 

Ric Flair- Many of you are wondering why WGTT and I attacked Chris Sabin and Simon Diamond last week on Velocity. Well the reason for that is out of all the new young talent in WWE I have chosen to guide WGTT under my wing. You see I decide to taken them under my wing because I see potential in these young men unlike may others in WWE. But these young men Sabin and Simon think they are good enough to be a tag team in WWE and challenging my two boys. We were just teaching those young men a lesson. If they think they are good enough to face us come out right now and face us! WOOO!!!!

 

Just then and there Sabin and Diamonds theme comes on.

 

Sabin- You guys were teaching us a lesson right? How about we go in the ring and teach you guys a lesson.

 

Out of nowhere CM Punk attacks Sabin and Diamond. He takes them to the ring where all four men attack them. They get Simon and make him get on his knees so that CM Punk can shinning wizard him. They do the same to Sabin. They start pounding on them brutally. But then Sonjay comes out with a chair and chases them out of the ring. All four of them stay outside the ring and CM Punk grabs a mic. Same with Sonjay.

 

CM Punk- Hey guys do you see that. Sonjay wants to get his ass kicked also. I don’t think he knows who he messing with. All three of them don’t realize they are messing with the brand new group the Straight Edge Revolution!!! We are on a mission to stop all drug use not only in the WWE but in the world!!!

 

The Straight Edge Revolution then leaves.

 

 

Kurt Angle is in his locker Room getting ready while Brock Lesnar thuds right throw the door.

 

Lesnar- Kurt you asked me if I remember Summerslam Kurt. Well I do! And I’m still embarrassed to this. You made me tap out at Summerslam well I’ll make you tap out tonight! And I guarantee I will be asking you at the end of the tournament “Kurt remember Smackdown when I made you tap!” You see Kurt I have beaten you so may times in that ring 1…2…3 but have never made you tap out! Tonight that’s all going to change!

 

Kurt Angle- Brock are you forgetting who you are talking to? You’re talking to Kurt Angle and Olympic Gold Medalist. You think you’ll make me tap out? I will never tap out Brock! Because I know if I believe in my self and if the viewers believe in me that I can kick your ass in that ring all night long! Oh it’s true!

 

Brock- Enough with your crap Kurt! I prove I’m a better overall athlete by making you tap tonight. Remember one thing tonight. Here comes pain!!!!

 

Lesnar the walks out.

 

 

Spanky with Paul London vs. Tony Mamaluke with Nunzio and Tommy Rich.

 

When Spanky and London come out they come out with FBI Jackets and Billy Bob teeth on them and start making fun of the FBI doing Italian taunts and stuff. Spanky waits in the ring. FBI’s music comes and nobodies there. FBI comes through the crowd PL and Spanky don’t know it. Mamaluke gets in the ring and sneak attacks Spanky. For a while Tony is attacking Spanky. Mamaluke works on the legs this whole attack. After around a minute Tony lifts Spanky scoop slams him into the ropes and ties his legs around the buckle. Tony goes to the other side of the ring and delivers a sliding dropkick to the face Spanky. He gets Spanky out of that position and continues working on the leg. He goes for a pin 1…2 he kicks out!!! After a little more Tony throws Spanky into the ropes and when he comes back Spanky gives a hard clothline to Mamaluke. Tony pretends as if he is hurt badly and the ref then starts aiding him. Spanky is in the back not knowing what is going on. In to the ring Nunzio and Tommy go beating up Spanky. When the attack is done Mamaluke pretends as if he was never hurt and starts also pounding on Tony. London (outside the ring) attacks Nunzio and Rich and chases the rest of the FBI to the other side of the ring. (Back in the ring)Mamaluke throws Spanky against the ropes and Spanky comes back with a tiltowhirl head scissors that hurt his leg but he continues to fight as he limps around the ring. He stomps the stomach of Tony and for a Slice Bread #2. He can’t get over because his bad leg so back Mamaluke shin breakers his leg then dragon screws and then gives him the Sicilian crab. Spanky taps and its over. Tony Mamaluke wins!!! After the match FBI get out of the ring and start showing off. 9:15

 

 

The Rock and Benoit are backstage when Edge comes up to them. He starts mocking The Rock on how Benoit beat him to advance in the tournament.

 

Edge- Rocky you don’t deserve to be in the WWE. You suck! You let Benoit beat you last week. What happened to the Rock that never let anybody stand in his way? The Rock who Rock Bottomed Stone Cold Steve Austin 3 times at wrestlemania then pinned him 1…2…3. What happened to him Rocky?

 

Chris Benoit- (Chris Interrupts) Edge who does you thinks you are? Coming up to us and saying that The Rock isn’t a good enough opponent for me. If he isn’t a good opponent for me who is? Nobody! Unless you want to prove me wrong tonight?

 

Edge- Oh I will prove you wrong tonight. Get ready! (He then leaves)

 

Rock- I don’t need…

 

Benoit- Your welcome Rock. (He then leaves)

 

 

John Cena is backstage when his opponent Big Show starts trash talking to him on about how he is going to win the tournament match tonight and how Cena’s going to get his ass kicked tonight. This all ends up in a brawl that Big Show ends up winning because of his weight. He leaves John and the ground hurt.

 

Cruiserweight Title Match

 

Rey Mysterio vs. Tajiri vs. Hurricane vs. Jamie Knoble

 

This match is a very good spotfest. Topes, hurricaneuanas the whole deal. The ending is when Hurricane gets a kick of death by Tajiri and fly’s out of the ring. Knoble takes Rey to the ropes a superplex but Tajiri gets Knoble up for an electric chair. Rey is on the ropes and West Coast Pops Knoble of the Electric Chair. During this maneuver Tajiri gets kicked out of the by the rana. 1…2…3 New Cruiserweight Champion is Rey Mysterio!!! After the match Rey starts celebrating with the crowd. 14:17

 

 

John Cena walks into Paul Heymans office while Big Show and Heyman are talking. John Cena gets ready to kick Shows ass when Heyman gets in the way. John starts critizing Heyman. Heyman then says if he wants it that way, tonight if John Cena losses he will be suspended for 3 months indefinitely. John Cena is about to argue that but Paul says like want to make it 4 then Cena leaves telling BS to get ready.

 

 

Jerry Lynn vs. Matt Hardy

 

This match has great matt wrestling. Many times during this match Matt taunts in Lynn’s face the V1 stuff. The match ends when Matt goes for a twist of fate Lynn throws Matt into the ropes stomps on his stomach goes for a Cradle Matt punches Lynn in the stomach and then twist of fate him. 1…2…3 Matt Hardy wins!!!

 

Tournament Match

If Cena losses he’s suspended

 

Big Show vs. John Cena

 

In this match BS has has the advantage cause his weight. Cena tries many Fu’s but can’t get BS up. The match ends Big Show choke slams Cena and the ref is knocked out of the ring by maneuver. BS tries to get a pin but the ref isn’t there. BS gets the ref and brings him in the ring. When Big Show turns around Cena smacks him with the chain he gets the pin when the ref gets up 1…2…3 John Cena wins to advance in the tournament!!!!! After the match as Cena leaves he gets a look at BS in the ring all mad and upset. They both start staring at each other then John leaves. 11:45

 

 

Booker T is walking backstage looking all frustrated till Teddy Long goes up to him. He asks what’s the matter, Booker replies he’s frustrated because he hasn’t gotten to wrestle since the new WWE started and he is wondering why. He starts talking that don’t they know I ‘m 5 time 5 time 5 time heavy weight champion. Why wouldn’t they want me wrestling? Long replies it cause your black! Teddy Long asks to join his fight against racism. Booker T politely refuses and says he doesn’t think that’s the case that he will just ask Paul Heyman for a match next week. He then leaves.

 

 

Chris Benoit vs. Edge

 

The match is a brawling type match. They go in the crowd all that. After a brutal battle Benoit is busted and looks like it’s the end for him when Edge goes to the ropes for a headbutt in mockery of Benoit. Chris gets the power to get to the ropes punch Edge and turn him around for a German suplex off the third rope with a bridge 1…2…3 Chris Benoit wins!!!!!!!! 13:13

 

 

Kurt Angle in the locker room getting ready. He starts talking about how Brock will lose tonight in the tournament match. The last words he said is the only way you will make me tap out is if I die!!!

 

Tournament Match

 

Kurt Angle vs. Brock Lesnar

 

This match is a great technical contest. Both men try to make each other tap numerous times during the match. The match ends when Kurt Angle goes for a Angle lock Lesnar kicks him back, Angle comes back charging Lesnar drop toe holds Kurt and gets in the Brock lock and eventually the bell rings. Lesnar thinks he won but the announcer says that the time limit ran out and that Kurt Angle never tap out. The announcers starts questioning what is going to happen. Lesnar stays in the ring confused till it shows the copyright of Smackdown and the show ends. 30:00

[Guest Markingout]

The night starts off with Flair and WGTT in the ring.

 

Ric Flair- Many of you are wondering why WGTT and I attacked Chris Sabin and Simon Diamond last week on Velocity. Well the reason for that is out of all the new young talent in WWE I have chosen to guide WGTT under my wing. You see I decide to taken them under my wing because I see potential in these young men unlike may others in WWE. But these young men Sabin and Simon think they are good enough to be a tag team in WWE and challenging my two boys. We were just teaching those young men a lesson. If they think they are good enough to face us come out right now and face us! WOOO!!!!

 

Just then and there Sabin and Diamonds theme comes on.

 

Sabin- You guys were teaching us a lesson right? How about we go in the ring and teach you guys a lesson.

 

Out of nowhere CM Punk attacks Sabin and Diamond. He takes them to the ring where all four men attack them. They get Simon and make him get on his knees so that CM Punk can shinning wizard him. They do the same to Sabin. They start pounding on them brutally. But then Sonjay comes out with a chair and chases them out of the ring. All four of them stay outside the ring and CM Punk grabs a mic. Same with Sonjay.

 

CM Punk- Hey guys do you see that. Sonjay wants to get his ass kicked also. I don’t think he knows who he messing with. All three of them don’t realize they are messing with the brand new group the Straight Edge Revolution!!! We are on a mission to stop all drug use not only in the WWE but in the world!!!

 

The Straight Edge Revolution then leaves.

 

Why this is at the beginning of the card is weird. Your pushing Sabin and Diamond a makeshift team vs the very established WGTT. You should of booked Sabin and Diamond stronger before you started this. Also, why is Flair in the Staright-Edge revolution when he is former Horsemen. The group that wrestled for the money to get drunk and sleep with women? Also, Punk still sounds POS. Its not his mission too stop drugs, all he says in his promos is that he is better than us because he dosent drink or do drugs.

 

Lesnar- Kurt you asked me if I remember Summerslam Kurt. Well I do! And I’m still embarrassed to this. You made me tap out at Summerslam well I’ll make you tap out tonight! And I guarantee I will be asking you at the end of the tournament “Kurt remember Smackdown when I made you tap!” You see Kurt I have beaten you so may times in that ring 1…2…3 but have never made you tap out! Tonight that’s all going to change!

 

Angle made Lesnar tap in the iron man match.

 

Spanky with Paul London vs. Tony Mamaluke with Nunzio and Tommy Rich.

 

When Spanky and London come out they come out with FBI Jackets and Billy Bob teeth on them and start making fun of the FBI doing Italian taunts and stuff. Spanky waits in the ring. FBI’s music comes and nobodies there. FBI comes through the crowd PL and Spanky don’t know it. Mamaluke gets in the ring and sneak attacks Spanky. For a while Tony is attacking Spanky. Mamaluke works on the legs this whole attack. After around a minute Tony lifts Spanky scoop slams him into the ropes and ties his legs around the buckle. Tony goes to the other side of the ring and delivers a sliding dropkick to the face Spanky. He gets Spanky out of that position and continues working on the leg. He goes for a pin 1…2 he kicks out!!! After a little more Tony throws Spanky into the ropes and when he comes back Spanky gives a hard clothline to Mamaluke. Tony pretends as if he is hurt badly and the ref then starts aiding him. Spanky is in the back not knowing what is going on. In to the ring Nunzio and Tommy go beating up Spanky. When the attack is done Mamaluke pretends as if he was never hurt and starts also pounding on Tony. London (outside the ring) attacks Nunzio and Rich and chases the rest of the FBI to the other side of the ring. (Back in the ring)Mamaluke throws Spanky against the ropes and Spanky comes back with a tiltowhirl head scissors that hurt his leg but he continues to fight as he limps around the ring. He stomps the stomach of Tony and for a Slice Bread #2. He can’t get over because his bad leg so back Mamaluke shin breakers his leg then dragon screws and then gives him the Sicilian crab. Spanky taps and its over. Tony Mamaluke wins!!! After the match FBI get out of the ring and start showing off. 9:15

 

The way you write matches is boring and still dosen't tell stories. The part where it acutally showed chracter devolpment with Spanky and Paul London was good though.

 

The Rock and Benoit are backstage when Edge comes up to them. He starts mocking The Rock on how Benoit beat him to advance in the tournament.

 

Edge- Rocky you don’t deserve to be in the WWE. You suck! You let Benoit beat you last week. What happened to the Rock that never let anybody stand in his way? The Rock who Rock Bottomed Stone Cold Steve Austin 3 times at wrestlemania then pinned him 1…2…3. What happened to him Rocky?

 

Chris Benoit- (Chris Interrupts) Edge who does you thinks you are? Coming up to us and saying that The Rock isn’t a good enough opponent for me. If he isn’t a good opponent for me who is? Nobody! Unless you want to prove me wrong tonight?

 

Edge- Oh I will prove you wrong tonight. Get ready! (He then leaves)

 

Rock- I don’t need…

 

Benoit- Your welcome Rock. (He then leaves)

 

Edge starts mocking Rocky. I though Benoit and Rock hated each other. Then there friends. All the chracters change each week. Its sloppy booking.

 

John Cena is backstage when his opponent Big Show starts trash talking to him on about how he is going to win the tournament match tonight and how Cena’s going to get his ass kicked tonight. This all ends up in a brawl that Big Show ends up winning because of his weight. He leaves John and the ground hurt.

 

You do too many backstage brawls for no reason they just started fighting. You should of just built too the match.

 

Jerry Lynn vs. Matt Hardy

 

This match has great matt wrestling. Many times during this match Matt taunts in Lynn’s face the V1 stuff. The match ends when Matt goes for a twist of fate Lynn throws Matt into the ropes stomps on his stomach goes for a Cradle Matt punches Lynn in the stomach and then twist of fate him. 1…2…3 Matt Hardy wins!!!

 

Filler. During the first few weeks you have too get angles or chracters over at any time possible. You dont a need filler in here. Also you had like the longest run on sentence in there too lol. You can tell it was rushed.

 

Kurt Angle in the locker room getting ready. He starts talking about how Brock will lose tonight in the tournament match. The last words he said is the only way you will make me tap out is if I die!!!

 

Tournament Match

 

Kurt Angle vs. Brock Lesnar

 

This match is a great technical contest. Both men try to make each other tap numerous times during the match. The match ends when Kurt Angle goes for a Angle lock Lesnar kicks him back, Angle comes back charging Lesnar drop toe holds Kurt and gets in the Brock lock and eventually the bell rings. Lesnar thinks he won but the announcer says that the time limit ran out and that Kurt Angle never tap out. The announcers starts questioning what is going to happen. Lesnar stays in the ring confused till it shows the copyright of Smackdown and the show ends.

 

This seems like the Benoit-Brock mini fued they did a few months ago.

[Guest Corino 1000]

ummm dude they never hated eachother

 

Edge starts mocking Rocky. I though Benoit and Rock hated each other. Then there friends. All the chracters change each week. Its sloppy booking.

 

That wasn't to win the match.

 

Angle made Lesnar tap in the iron man match

 

Yea about that I forget to put down in the interview that Ric has changed is ways from horsemen days but whatever. Ok advice taken on booking them stronger first.

 

Why this is at the beginning of the card is weird. Your pushing Sabin and Diamond a makeshift team vs the very established WGTT. You should of booked Sabin and Diamond stronger before you started this. Also, why is Flair in the Staright-Edge revolution when he is former Horsemen. The group that wrestled for the money to get drunk and sleep with women? Also, Punk still sounds POS. Its not his mission too stop drugs, all he says in his promos is that he is better than us because he dosent drink or do drugs.

[Guest Markingout]

That wasn't to win the match.

 

Angle made Lesnar tap in the iron man match

I will never tap out Brock!

 

He did in the iron man. Dosen't matter if its too win a match. He tapped to Brock Lesnar none the less.

 

ummm dude they never hated eachother

 

 

 

Edge starts mocking Rocky. I though Benoit and Rock hated each other. Then there friends. All the chracters change each week. Its sloppy booking.

 

Then what happened too week ago between Rock and Benoit that there in a locker room with all this tension. Just a match?

[Guest Corino 1000]

Yea I guess........

 

Then what happened too week ago between Rock and Benoit that there in a locker room with all this tension. Just a match?

[Guest Real F'n Show]

no offense dude, but its really annoying when you quote things after your response...

 

anyway, good show, although I recommend you check out some CM Punk promos.

 

I do like some of your storylines, even if I dont like your style of writing too much.