Mole 0 Report post Posted April 13, 2004 This semester I am taking scriptwriting, which is one of the best classes I have ever taken. I have always wanted to write a script because I have soooooo many ideas, but I never knew how to do it properly. Yes I could have bought a book or looked it up online, but for some odd reason I never did it. I want to be a director/writer for my career and I really think that can happen. We had to write a 10-20 page script that had a beginning/middle/end, basically tell a whole story. I had this great idea, outlined it over 3 pages and eventually wrote 30 pages. Over the next few years, I am going to turn it into a 100-120 page script, but that will take plenty of time and a lot of effort. My point of this thread is to ask people if they could read my script and tell me what they think. Now, I don't want to post the script online just incase somone decides to steal it because that could happen. Plus the fact the script format wouldn't look the same in HTML and I don't want to go through the whole thing fixing it just for HTML. I don't know how I could work this out, but I want some input from people here. I got tons of feedback from my class, my sister and a bunch of my friends. But I also want some feedback from people here because most of you know a shit load about movies. I think the best way to do it is if anyone wants to read it, just PM me and I'll send it to them. Then they could put their feedback in here or in the PM. I know people could steal the idea if I send it to them through a PM, but I still want some input. The script is called "Lights" and this is the premise for it: There are nine friends whose lives all intersect because of the act of fate and a certain action. There are four stories, which are told non-linear and each story is in a different genre. The first is a horror, the second is a romance, the third is a drama and the fourth is a comedy. One thing my Prof. said was that it seemed way too complicated and I should try something easier. I told him that I didn't want to do something "easy" because that is boring. I want to write stuff that is some-what orginal and that would be a challange for me. If anyone would like to read it, just PM me or IM me at ImTheMole. Thanks. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mole 0 Report post Posted April 14, 2004 BUMP Since I only got two people who want to read it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
