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Guest The Last Free Voice

THE RUSH now up on the main page.

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Guest The Last Free Voice

My first solo RUSH is now up at TSM. Feedback me.

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Good job on the rush man, keep it up.

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While I haven't read your columns yet, I and many others won't likely do so until you fix this one thing -- the match segments. You really, really need to break them up into paragraphs.

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That's my fault. It's easier to format by just having it be one chunk.

 

Also, his summaries are VASTLY shorter than mine were. I did mine move-for-move. He just summarizes how the match goes.

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Guest The Ultimate Fantasy

I liked the Rush, and I like your recap way too,Voice. ALthough I do miss that fact that the L-A-Z would recap the promos WORD FOR WORD, that is dedication, although he tried too hard.

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Guest The Last Free Voice

This is the first net writing gig I've had, so I'm still trying to get a style that works for me. Hopefuly I'll get better each week.

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