Guest Doomsault Report post Posted June 23, 2002 I just threw together some lyrics in my head about five minutes ago and thought they had a ring to them, tell me what you think, remember I'm totally new at this. The dead walk The living talk About the moon as white as chalk I'd like to walk away from this But I think I'd like One last kiss Weird shit ain't it? Copyright Doomsault 2002 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Edwin MacPhisto Report post Posted June 23, 2002 I get a rather early 90's Depeche Mode from it. Which is not a bad thing at all. Writing lyrics is good stuff, even if you have no clue how to write music itself... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Incandenza Report post Posted June 23, 2002 I couldn't decide if it was more Danzig or more like Nick Cave. I'll leave it to the reader to make the decision on whether either of those choices is good or bad. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest redbaron51 Report post Posted June 23, 2002 sounds like a hair-metal ballad. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
