Rawknight

*considers doing Forest Toxxic shirt... or county. either's cool*

hmm.. i couldnt find anyone in a vest who WASN'T stocky. and i tried 3 different chins and none of them worked. And i can't squueze stuff to make people look thinner at that low resolution. So... at least i got the tattoo!

*MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARK OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT*

and NONE of them have dreads, so it's f'n hard to do the Bahama Bomber i'm afraid ...and i'm editing my posts backwards. Damn 3am

http://forums.thesmartmarks.com/index.php?...CODE=getgallery Nearly as hard as finding a pic base *was gonna use Mike McKenzie of the packers, but Z (or maybe tom) said it didn't look like WC* *needs a pic of a YOUNG busta*

King. Look i even did the tattoo!

*checks Mansons avatar after a tidy up job* ....i amz teh pwned

/me is sad /me was gonna ask King to manage Chris Card when I got round to bringing him back /me also understands totally, cos this is why i quit as booker for the GFWA after 8 months at the helm

FANTASTIC CARD! Now another 78 like that and i can hold the world title for a year

The resets at the start are showing the match hasn't developed past the early striking stage. I didn't want to hit a SINGLE move till about 4K, in the end i think i gave you a couple but i didn't get any myself, so the whole story to that section is strikes work, but until the opponent is worn down ANY throw doesn't. Includes the Misawa/Kawada back pedalling out of a German spot. I was also under the impression that Danny had some amateur background, which is where the matwork comes from. It's similar to Va'aiga vs Tom where i was trying to suggest that Tom was carrying me to a good match. I KNOW you hate delay sell spots. The Stinger Tease is supposed to suggest that Va'aiga is TOTALLY prepared to fuck Danny up, and to give Danny a counter to get control of the match. It's a big move to tease for a simple transition, but I'd wanted a lraiat tease elsewhere and seeing as our last match had about FIVE lariat teases I didn't want to overdo it. I'd have had Danny counter the Maori Drop, but that would have just been falling forward onto Va'aiga and wouldn't have naturally set up anything. The counter to the Germans with the loose as hell elbow is hinting at something that had been skirted round before in the match. Danny either dislodged or broke Va'aiga's cheekbone with that elbow (Hence the "SHould Va'aiga fight on?" question) Even a wobbly strike hitting the sweet spot was enough to send the Maori staggering around in pain, but I didn't WANT to express the actual break, because I was gonna do a post show promo from the hospital, putting you over HUGE. That didn't happen because I didn't want to promo before the 'fuck's up, after all would Duran be in hosptial seeing Va'aiga NOT talk about it at all if he won. Or for that matter if Grap or Janus won. The finish was supposed to represent the two current grandstand superstars expending every last bit of energy they had trying EVERYTHING to win and showing their fighting spirit by running on fumes. I wanted to play up the stable rivalry, which is why I used the other moves. I was finding your moveset horribly limiting near the end. Dace's opinion was it ended up being late 90s AJ, a period often criticised for mindless stuff, but I haven't really seen ANYTHING between 94 and 2000, so i wouldn't know. In hindsight i REALLY should have used two counts, but at the time I wanted a total chaotic scramble feel to the finish, and the pacing of my match - which I took a TON of time getting right, stuffing commentary around the holds and lulls and stripping big stuff to the bear minimum is meant to suggest this. I did EVERYTHING I could to make this match as dramatic as possible, and as readable as possible. I changed my writing style, I took a TON of time with the phrasing, the match pacing within the writing. I made sure this was the best WRITTEN match I'd ever done, rather than concentrating wholly on the wrestling side as I usually do. I hope you reconsider and come back and try to kick my motherfucking ass again. That's what I did to Crow after the botched Frog Splash finish I HATED and bitched out Z about for... well I'm still doing it now if i'm bored. I would ALSO like to hear from King on what he thought of the two matches comparitively, but I'd rather that was done in private.

My old GM started up EYE again! It's marked on the quality of angles you can create. I'm looking at you Flesher! www.eyefed.com

COME ON! COME ON! COME MOTHERFUCKING ON! Promo to come TO-MOTHERFUCKING-NIGHT!

*passes the blunt King's way*

well you get time to write promos for more cheap heel heat

If we're in agreement that crazy stuff can go on in board promos that's cool. Seems that's the way so i'm drifting with the flow here. Maybe the fed does need a sense of chaos to it again. Can't leave all the chaos to the 'TOASTERS. See I'm easily persuaded on things, *voice: no you're not* Oh alright i'm not then. Never mind. The WC attack was just after my heel turn. It was a short backstage segment to solidify it. (like dropping Dace on his head wasn't enough) I asked first and got a damn good segment out of it, and it worked better, cos WC was playing the rib injury angle, so i made sure to do something rib affecting. Sooo.... both ways work Asking and not asking. Now who wants a pass... Crow? Kibs?

Not to extend the debate or anything, but I asked Wildchild if i could beat the crap out of him, he said yes and I Maori Dropped him onto a crate of electrical equipment. I think we have to agree it works both ways then btw.. we never had that match that should have set up WC! Va'aiga vs Wildchild HAS to happen sometime, cos we've only faced once and I no showed it

OMGWTF! Raynor has been paralyzed by watching a Big Show DVD and is unable to mark IRL! *sends Raynor a big bag of flour*

*takes the blow on the head and no sells* *watches Dace sell the clanging noise by holding his ears*

Small room. One light. No windows. TV with no aerial. DVD Player. Big Show DVD.

Oh crud.. Danny's showing *prepares to watch the best match he's ever wrote get beat*

s'cool man. didn't mean to come off as preachy And if I bring Card back you're welcome to deliver a shitwrecking to him... provided you're feeling facey and don't mind high heels/testicles/mace spray stuff happening to ya.

Thugg.. it's cool to beat the crap out of people if you ASK first. btw Spike, can the Unnamed Double Superbomb you?

Wherabouts are ya Mike? And provided you're not my freind Kirt's ex Mike or Spiky Mike the Rock City DJ it's all groovy *grins* And let's not have the proper Uni debate. I get enough of that with my brother (BA (Film Studies) SHU) and his girlfriend (BA Hons (Natural Biology) Sheff.)

9283 of puro goodness. I may not write the longest matches, but this WILL NOT SUCK. This is also the longest thing i've ever written for anything ever.

It's a lovely buiilding too. Now if the bus centre wasn't in the way it'd make a fantastic cityscape