The Seven Deadly Sins - GREED

[Guest Tyler McClelland]

The Seven Deadly Sins – GREED

The second sin…

By: Mark David Ashburn

- Handler, “The Dark Prophet” Tyler McClelland

 

 

Greed ('grEd) – noun – Excessive or reprehensible acquisitiveness

See also: AVARICE

 

 

Continuing where we left off… bringing it back into perspective…

 

“…End it?” Mandy Lewis asks timidly.

 

Tyler McClelland, with a smug look on his twisted face, nods slowly.

 

“Yes, I want you to end it… as quickly and painless… or painfully… as you wish. However, I want you to end this relationship… and I want you to end it tonight.”

 

Mandy is surrounded by intense sorrow… her eyes tearing up…

 

“I… I don’t want to… let me be with him for a little longer, please?”

 

Tyler, with a killer instinct obviously displayed on his face, rolls his eyes at Mandy.

 

“Please, don’t make me puke… you’re a fucking prostitute, you go through guys like-“ Tyler is interrupted.

 

“…do you think that makes me a horrible human being or something? Does that mean I can’t have feelings?” Mandy blurts out, her eyes now completely filled with tears and starting to flow down her cheeks.

 

“Mandy, if you don’t break up with Danny… forget about the five hundred thousand dollars… you won’t see a fucking cent.” Tyler threatens.

 

Mandy shakes her head firmly, the tears still flowing…

 

“I would give it all away for Danny…”

 

Tyler, obviously frustrated, stands up and starts pacing around the living room. Mandy senses a small victory as “The Dark Prophet” turns his back to her.

 

“You are a fool, Mandy. Believe me, you are making a huge mistake.”

 

”Tyler…” She begins.

 

“What?” He replies sharply.

 

“Call me Julie…”

 

Tyler shoots her a furious look, the eyes of a serial murderer adorned on his face…

 

“One million fucking dollars, Mandy . One million dollars… that is my final offer. Break it off now and you will be an extremely rich person…”

 

“I said call me Julie, Tyler.”

 

Tyler has overestimated her greed…

 

“Get out of my fucking house, you whore… and believe me, you haven’t won a fucking thing here. The only thing you have done is ensure that the end of your relationship will not be determined by you… the relationship will end by my hand…”

 

“Tyler, with all due respect, I’d like to see you try…”

 

With that, Julie walks slowly out of the house… leaving Tyler sitting alone on his couch. Tyler shakes his head sadly, his plan temporarily foiled.

 

(…Maybe I should just let them go on with being happy… just because I lost my love… my life… doesn’t mean I have to ruin Danny’s, too… does it?...)

 

Tyler, your mission is to be felt… to have everyone feel your pain. Well, right now, Danny is in bliss… thanks to you in the first place. Have you lost your edge ALREADY? What happened to the shattered psyche? What happened to your BALLS? He deserves to suffer because he, frankly, is happy… and he’s rubbing it in your fucking face.

 

(…You’re right… Laura is gone because of my business… Laura is gone because I had no way to get back to her. Danny doesn’t deserve fucking anything, especially not love… Fuck that. That bitch Julie thinks she can double-cross me? She thinks she can just go on like nothing happened… like I’m not the damn reason why she’s with him right now? Her disrespect will be her downfall…)

 

Then, you know what you need to do, don’t you?

 

Tyler grins from ear to ear…

 

 

”I’ll tell him… everything.”

 

 

 

Fade to black…

 

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The preceding promotional scene is to be used for entertainment purposes only. “The Dark Prophet” Tyler McClelland, Laura McClelland, and Mandy Lewis are all creative property of Mark David Ashburn and are protected by International Copyright Law. They not be used, under this law, without expressed permission from him. Any reproduction of this promotional scene without written permission from Mark David Ashburn is prohibited. “Deathwish” Danny Williams is used with permission of his handler.

 

 

Stay tuned for part three of The Seven Deadly Sins: “Pride”… it will air on Tuesday, June 23rd 2002…

[Guest Edwin MacPhisto]

Aww, schnap. The woman gets the upper hand.

 

Julie/Mandy seems to have a lot more tenacity and resolve than most of the women who roll through Tyler McClelland's life, so I'm thinking she might make it out of this one alive.

 

But man...again, you leave us with the excellent cliffhanger. We're all being so anticipatory lately! R0x0r.

[Guest realitycheck]

Cold. So... very... cold...

 

This is tough. I'm not sure who to feel sorry for. And Tyler appears to be talking to himself... might want to have him looked at. That can't be good.

 

Short, and a little less compelling than the first one, but you say the next one will be the best, so... yeah. I liked the ending, and the way this one picked up right after the last. Makes it more compelling and for a better cliffhanger. /me waits eagerly for 'Pride'.

 

-Z

And now, back to my regularly scheduled soap opera, "As the Chatroom Scrolls"

[Guest kelloggs]

Cast is ahead after this one

 

Wilson, Thoth, Silent and Eddie Mac will come back with promoage and then I'lll say they're ahead. It's a never ending loop of promo's

 

M. "head is spinning" Francis

[Guest Rabbi_wilson13]

You know its coming from an RP writer when most of its bold and italics.

 

Nice work again, oh evil one, and I went past a tombstone place today, and I kid you not, the stone out front had "McClelland" on it. Dead serious. That's just crazy.

 

Oh, and the girl is of course going to die, Edwin. Tyler lost his love to death, Danny's going to feel the same. Duh.

[Guest Kibagami]

C'mon, Edwin. It's an Outcast promo. The girl ALWAYS! dies.

 

Nice continuation of the first Greed promo. Maybe I missed something earlier, but I'm curious as to who Danny is. (Y) @ cliffhangers.

 

S.

[Guest Tyler McClelland]

"Deathwish" Danny Williams.

 

SWF wrestler.

[Guest Edwin MacPhisto]

Yeah. You missed the first promo, about 2-3 weeks ago.

 

The Danny is the obvious: Danny Williams of the SWF, Outcast's protege and fellow M7 guy.

 

So, no surprises, but it's a fine storyline. Tyler decided that the way to get Danny to focus on the ring and improve enough to hang in the SWF was to get him a woman...so Tyler hired a prostitute not to do the normal prostitute thing, but to get involved with Danny and pretend to fall for him.

 

So, you see how it goes now.

[Guest chirs3]

No way Edwin, she ain't leaving this series alive... at the very least she'll be a vegetable at the end of it.

 

*turns to Outcast* I think someone needs a huuuuuug!

 

And damn it, this is quickly becoming my most anticipated storyline. CRANK 'EM OUT FASTER!

[Guest Tyler McClelland]

I have the next two already done, but I'm gonna actually wait until Tuesday to post the next one this time.

 

Too many promos too quickly = (N)

 

I think that's why not too many people have replied to this one...

[Guest Drew_K]

Tell that whore who's boss, Cast! Heh. Nice stuff. Sorta the anti-pretty woman going on. I must say first, you sir are EEEVVVIIILLLL. Like Doctor Evil evil. And Danny? Well, I wouldn't want to be in his brain when a certain Mr Mclelland drops the bomb on him.

 

So, what purposes did this promo serve? Develop Danny as a person? Check. Make OC a bigger ass, albeit with reasons? Check. Bring a sweeping wave of wonderfulness over the promos of this entire board forever?!? probably not. But it was damn good.

 

Frankly, you people make me want to cry, since I don't write promos this good.

 

*sniffle* If anyone needs me, I'll be in the corner, weeping.

 

Good stuff!

[Guest BigTim2002]

Once again, Outcast, your promo just fucking blows me away...

 

I swear you are fucking great...

 

Not sucking up at all...his promos about Tyler are always SWANKTASTIC~!

[Guest Lerrin Breggan]

Damn, very nice! I do like the themes of these promos, and as usual, you are keeping your high level of promos intact! You really do make me fear your inring return, and I hope I never have to face the psycho that is Tyler McClelland!!

[Guest Beingz0wningj00]

Hey Oot... I think JD needs some bitch to taste some of his strudel... any chance that she is available?