Guest Dace59 Posted May 11, 2003 Report Posted May 11, 2003 The sounds of the movie Scarface can be heard in the background, somewhere outside the room. There's a bathroom cabinet slash mirror, and the only light around is coming from the strip light attached to the top of it. Even under the thick lines of black and white paint that make up his Black Metal mask, the scars on his face can clearly been seen, along with the stitches. One gloved hand, covered in silver rings, all with long and sharp claws rises up and slowly starts to pluck them away. There isn’t a wince or a sound as each and every last one is pulled out from the flesh. A claw strokes along the line passing down his eye. Closing it tightly and gritting his teeth, it slashes downwards, ripping the skin wide open. A scream of pain, as he moves onto the line. Another slash, another scream, another river of blood pouring into the basin below. A set of permanent scars across his face. Unscarred, unfading.
Guest realitycheck Posted May 11, 2003 Report Posted May 11, 2003 ...well, that was disturbing. Nice(?) work, Dace. -Z
Guest 5_moves_of_doom Posted May 12, 2003 Report Posted May 12, 2003 After rereading that, I think that I understand it a little more now... ...Dace is hurting himself, because he's hardcore. But his stitches aren't staples, so he's not Foley yet. ...um, yeah... short, but it gets a point across, I guess. Not the best promo ever Dace, but certainly intriguing, and not generic by any means. I could have just edited over my last post, but I figured that raising my post count couldn't hurt. Keep up the good work, though.
Guest Dace59 Posted May 12, 2003 Report Posted May 12, 2003 There's the hardcore fact, and the constant dark under tones. They'll be lots of theres here and there through my SWF life. They're building to one of two out comes.
Recommended Posts
Please sign in to comment
You will be able to leave a comment after signing in
Sign In Now