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24 hours to live...

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This is just to get something started...  For all the rhymers, let it be rock, rap, poets, whatever...  Write a rhyme or something that starts out...

 

"If I got 24 hours to live..."

 

Continue from there...

 

Lets see your skills...

 

B "Want to see the good rhyming skills" O

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Guest Perfect_Bo

I guess I'll start..

 

 

 

If I had 24 hours to live, 24 then it’s no more, so I only got one life to give.

Smoke a blunt for every hour right to the head.

That’s 23 and a half until my final breath.

I’ll probably try to find my pops, shit, not to reminisce.

No hugs and kisses, just kill him, squeezing the imph.

Am I wrong?  Don’t matter, cause I’m down to 22.

In hours, but not only that, it’s also the hammer that shoots.

Plotting for destruction, am I evil?  You’re damn right.

Plotting for the sequel, it’s going to happen, tonight.

I got nothing to lose, Hitler, got nothing on me.

Holocausts for the city that never sleep, shit, come home with me.

I’ll go to Cuba, and try to find Pac.

And when shit gets hot in the block, I’ll just stand in my spot.

Hustle to make the paper so I can give to my seed.

Make Gee’s for education so he can run the industry.

When I got 9 left until my sacred death.

Plotting some other shit so people can lie in their deathbed.

I use to be a shy kid, but now it’s my time kid.

People that fucked with me get infected with something worst than the Ebola Virus.

Now that I got 8, and it’s not time to wait.

I go to the Taliban country and test their fate.

And now that I’m down to one, do a remake of WW1.

And kill a whole bunch of bastard just for fun.

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Guest Red Hot Thumbtack In The Eye

off the top of my head

 

i've got 24 hours to live...

 

"...and no extra second to scroll the page

down to general chat

where this should sit

and age.

For now i know

soon is my time to go

but not to general chat

where "association" threads flow

i was afraid i would be looked past

though i know it wont last

in the music folder this goes

so my pre-fabbed rhymes are cast"

 

im just fucking with ya

 

no serious offence intended.

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Guest KOR420

If I had 24 Hours to live

 

I wouldn't be flowin,to the weed spot is where im goin'

I'd order up 3 nickels and 4 dimes,and I'd be too weeded to spit these rhymes,smash the whip into the front of the house,slap ya spouse,thats what ya'll get for shootin my name outta your mouth,see my girl give her all i got till she earl,rob the jewelry store hit my mom up wit pearls,hit the thruway give the cops a chase,blastin out the windows cocksucka here's a taste,fly off the ramp and give it a laugh,with my last few minutes I say goodbye to the ave.

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Guest Tomato Can

If I had 24 hours to live, just think, where would I go, what would I do, who would I screw?

 

Aww, I suck at this ...

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If I had 24, forget about being raw...

I would cry my self to sleep, but fuck it, what for?

Forget being violent, I'm going to do what I can.

To make these last 24 hours the best for any man.

Do I get high?  Hell yeah, why not.

Try every drug in the streets, but the last will be the pot.

The trees, the leaf, smoke that good fuckin weed

Till I get high off my ass and I cant hardly breathe.

Forget shootin mother fuckers, get back at you, I'll get someone to shoot their mothers, of your lovers, brothers, sister other mother.

Confused?  So is me dying.  I'm still trying to figure it out, shit, I'm denying it.

Now i'm down to 23, I'm in da streets with my peeps, smokin that good Ari and drinkin that Henny.

Now I'm down to 22, I'm still a bit confused of what to do, so I grab the twenty two, and shoot in the sky that's blue.

It's down to 21, hours, now it's semi-fun, take a shower for an hour, killin time, no, I'm not a coward.

Now I'm down to 20, drink until bottle is empty, now I'm drunk by my self, my life feel so empty.

at 19, I go back home, pick up that chrome, shiny like pearly whites, free to disroam.

11 trees to the dome, 13 keys by the phone.  Call my nigga tone, get some bitches because I'm ready to bone.

the bitches comes at 18 hours left, they leave when it's 8 hours left.  

Now it's down to seven, do thugs go to heaven?  After 9/11 in my city, I know I aint going to heavin...  

Cause I'm killin any mother fuckers that look arab, fuck being rasist, I'm gettin at em'.  I'm like an addict, go new school, and old fashion.  Put their mouth to the curb, and then I smash em.

Hours has pass, and now I'm down to three, call my wify and my seed and say I would love them for eternity.

Make love to her tenderly, just one last time, hold her close to my arms and say everything will be just fine.

Tell my daughter to grow up like an independent female, dont be a scank, and dont be scare of wanna be thug ass males.

When it's down to one, tell my niggas to bring all the guns, cause WWIII is about to come, so lets have some fun.

So now when there's only minutes left, just for my breath.  I'll go to every precient that I can, shooting and scream...  BX

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Guest KOR420

NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE very dope,mine came off the head and i was friggin tired but your last post was dope as fuck

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Guest TheyCallMeMark

Check out 'dis rappin' shit, yo, dogg.

 

If I had 24 hours to live

I'd stroke and choke for the jizz

Then I'd wait  for the boner to die

So I could take a wizz

 

It would feel great

And I can't lie

That's what I'd do

Before I died

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Guest DokDoyle
If I had 24 hours to live, just think, where would I go, what would I do, who would I screw?

I know this...but where is it from? I hate when I know I know something...but have no idea from where?

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Guest KOR420

24 hours to live - Ma$e,DMX,Lox(Man i been listenin to we are the streets for the past week for some reason) but thats the song

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I guess I'll start..

 

 

 

If I had 24 hours to live, 24 then it’s no more, so I only got one life to give.

Smoke a blunt for every hour right to the head.

That’s 23 and a half until my final breath.

I’ll probably try to find my pops, shit, not to reminisce.

No hugs and kisses, just kill him, squeezing the imph.

Am I wrong?  Don’t matter, cause I’m down to 22.

In hours, but not only that, it’s also the hammer that shoots.

Plotting for destruction, am I evil?  You’re damn right.

Plotting for the sequel, it’s going to happen, tonight.

I got nothing to lose, Hitler, got nothing on me.

Holocausts for the city that never sleep, shit, come home with me.

I’ll go to Cuba, and try to find Pac.

And when shit gets hot in the block, I’ll just stand in my spot.

Hustle to make the paper so I can give to my seed.

Make Gee’s for education so he can run the industry.

When I got 9 left until my sacred death.

Plotting some other shit so people can lie in their deathbed.

I use to be a shy kid, but now it’s my time kid.

People that fucked with me get infected with something worst than the Ebola Virus.

Now that I got 8, and it’s not time to wait.

I go to the Taliban country and test their fate.

And now that I’m down to one, do a remake of WW1.

And kill a whole bunch of bastard just for fun.

LOL that sucked.

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