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Basiclly this is the match that I invisioned from the get go when I started the stable, the match that I've been wanting to write since I first joined the SWF, though I was originally to be in Dace's role, but I couldn't find an established vet to tag with. Fuck the tag titles, I just wanted to write this match. And I'm very thankful just for the opprotunity to have cowritten it. Rather I won or not, I'm just glad to have wrote it.

 

This is to be the match that would finally see Danny grow into his role as a capable leader. Sure he does a piss poor job in the beginning, letting Dace killed in every way possible, but in the end he learns he has make sacrifice himself in order to lead Dace to victory.

 

To be honest I was very disappointed with the winning match, I just wasn't expecting a simple work the arm match. I'm not questioning Edwin's marking, he said it was close and what not, and I respect his decision.

 

Stevens: Welcome back to Madison Square Garden for SWF Lockdown!

 

Riley: I think the fans have managed to figure that out, Mark, it’s written in big ass letters on the ring apron for crying out loud!

 

Stevens: Anyway, next up we've got the Tag Team Championship match up.

 

Riley: Also known as another reason for Justice and Rule to show they are the best Tag Team in history. Danny and Dace are overrated untalented slugs, and I can't wait to see Justice and Rule school their asses.

 

Stevens: I'm not so sure if you'll see that one happening Riley, but we could have New Tag Champs, or we could not. We'll have to wait for the ending bell.

 

Funyon climbs through the ring ropes into the cener of the ring to introduce the match.

 

Funyon: "Ladies and Gentlemen, the following match will be a Tag Team Match for One Fall! And it will be for the SWF TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP OF THE WORLD!"

 

Smoke billows out from the entrance, lit red by a gateway of laser lights.

 

"LET FREEDOM RING WITH A SHOTGUN BLAST!"

 

Funyon: "Introducing firstly, at a combined weight of four hundred and ninety seven pounds .. The SWF Hardcore and ICTV Champions ... from the UNHOLY TRINITY ... DACE NIGHT and DANNY WILLIAMS!"

 

Davidian kicks into life with a blast of pyro. Red strobe lights light the entrance ramp. Dace Night and Danny Williams step through the laser mesh, out of the smoke and stride down the ramp into the ring. Climbing the turnbuckles, they raiser their arms to the roars of the fans.

 

Funyon: "Their opponents, at a combined weight of four hundred and thirty pounds .. The SWF TAG TEAM CHAMPIONS ... JUSTICE AND RULE ... JUDGE MENTAL and EJIRO FASAKI!"

 

Sleep Now in the Fire plays into life as Justice and Rule flashes across the Smarktron. Following by Tag Team highlights. A string of red machine gun pyro lights up the entrance way. Striding out in their Magnificent 7 jerseys, the Tag Champs stroll down the ramp under the booing and jeering of the fans. Sliding into the ring, they hoist their Tag Titles over head to the booing fans, before handing them over, and staring across the ring and Deathwish and Horrorcore.

 

Stevens: For a first time meeting for these two teams, there's a lot of heat. Danny and Dace have stated that they are out to take down the M7, and taking the Tag Team Titles would be one huge blow in that .

 

Riley: Mental and Fasaki aren't flippy flop clowns like Wild and Dangerous, Night and Williams are going to have their work cut out for them just to survive.

 

DING, DING, DING!

 

Dace and Judge duck into their respective corners as Danny and Ejiro dance out of their corners to start the match off. Rule dives past Williams, avoiding locking up with the bigger man, instead sending his leg lashing round with an ambushing Spinning Heel Kick, but Danny steps back and he catches nothing but air!

 

CRACK!

 

Williams hammers Ejiro's jaw with an Elbow Smash as he gets up, right before slapping on a Side Headlock, clamping his roid fueled arms around Rule's head. Quickly trying to work himself out of the headlock, Ejiro runs into the ropes, sending Danny for the ride! Williams ricochets off the ropes against his will, running right into sharp Dropkick, that knocks him out of his boots! Rule drops down for a quick cover as Soapdish dives in for the count.

 

ONE!

 

Kickout! Dragging Williams by the arm, Ejiro pulls him back up and whips him across the ring once more. Ejiro follows in and throws himself through the air with a Spinning Heel Kick, but Danny holds onto the ropes! Quickly tagging in Night, they move in on Ejiro as he gets back on his feet.

 

CCRRAACCCKK!

 

Stevens: Double Elbow Smash!

 

Riley: Danny couldn’t handle Ejiro on his own, so he had to get his friend.

 

Danny steps out into his corner before Soapdish can complain, as Dace shoots Fasaki out across the ring.

 

Smack!

 

Running after him, Dace floors Rule with a stiff Lariat only to be Clotheslined right off his feet by Mental!

 

Stevens: Judge must of made the blind tag, catching Dace by surprise!

 

Riley: Haha, that was brilliant!

 

Picking Night up by his hair, Mental hammers into his chest with a series of blistering Knife Edge Chops!

 

SMACK!SMACK!

SMACK!

 

Scooping him up, Judge drops to one knee, impaling Dace on it with a Backbreaker! Reaching out, he tags Ejiro before rolling Dace into a Camel Clutch! Ejiro takes a run up from across the ring and drives his knee straight into the unprotected face of Horrorcore!

 

CRACK!

 

Rule slings Night throat first over the second rope and sprints back across the ring. Charging back, he leaps up and dives down with all his body weight onto Dace Night's back, while at the exact same time, Justice jumps from the apron to the floor, planting an elbow into the back of Dace's head on the way down!

 

“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

 

Pulling Dace off the ropes, Fasaki makes a quick cover.

 

ONE!

 

 

TWO!

 

 

Kickout! Even as Danny is diving across the ring to make the save.

 

Williams heads back to his corner as Soapdish yells at him, but Ejiro gives him a helping hand with an Dropkick to the back of his head.

 

Stevens: And even as Danny tries to save his partner from the pin, Ejiro Fasaki wont let him get out of the ring so easily.

 

Riley: Please, Ejiro was just helping him back into his corner, that's all.

 

Night pushes himself up to his feet, trying to shake his head out, but just gets his bell rung again, courtesy of an Ejiro Enzugiri!

 

CRACK!

 

Then smoothly tags out to Judge Mental! Judge climbs into the ring, grabs hold of Night's legs and starts to roll him over for a Boston Crab. Dazed but not completely out of it, Dace tries to scramble backwards along the mat towards the ring ropes.

 

Stevens: Judge is looking for that Boston Crab he loves so much.

Riley: Working over that back, and there's nothing Danny Williams can do about it, he's just got to sit in his corner and watch his young partner get annihilated.

 

Finally locking his arms, Judge rolls over and sits back into a Boston Crab.

 

Not wanting to stop at just a Boston Crab, Judge moves his arms down, clamping his hands just under Night's knees, pulling his legs and spine even further back.

 

Riley: Ohh, and look at that, Judge Overhooking the Crab, to add that extra wrenching on Dace's spine. Just so beautiful.

 

Soapdish drops in along side Horrorcore, checking if he wants to quit, even as Justice leans back with the hold, trying to get every last bit of torque working on the spine. Shaking his head furiously, Dace reaches out, attempting to claw his way out of the hold and too the ropes. Leaning up on his arms, Dace starts to drag the hold weight of his body and Judge Mental's towards the ropes. On the other side of the ring, Williams starts to beat his hand on the turnbuckles, beating up a call from the fans.

 

STOMP! STOMP! LET'S GO DACE! LET’S GO!

 

Struggling onwards, Dace reaches out, but falls just short of the ropes. Judge grits his teeth and tries squeezing tighter, leaning back even more than he already is into the Boston Crab, to try and cut Dace off. One last time, Night sends his arm out...

 

just managing to touch the ropes.

 

Stevens: He made the ropes!

 

But even as he does, Ejiro races across the apron and just stomps on Dace's fingers, causing him to let go in a cry of pain. The fans vent their disgust by lowering their thumbs and shouting taunts at Ejiro.

 

Riley: Look how helpful Fasaki is, checking for the ref to see if Dace made the ropes or not.

 

Stevens: Like hell he was!

 

Tired from all that pulling, a sweaty Judge Mental releases Dace, and tags in Ejiro. Mental adjusts his tights and takes a deep breath like he’s just ran a marathon as he climbs out on the apron, and lets Ejiro take over. Ejiro drags Dace up by his hair, whips him off the ropes, and gets a good bounce himself! Dace sling shots off the ropes, and finds himself running back at a charging Ejiro for what will surely be a head on collision! With a dazzling display of athleticism, Ejiro twists into the air, catching Dace in the mouth with the elusive Spinning Heel Kick!

 

Riley: What he couldn’t land on Danny, he certainly can land on Dace.

 

Stevens: Williams does have more experience with Ejiro.

 

With Dace laid out, dead center in the ring, Ejiro gets a good bounces off the ropes, and hurdles over him! Running across the ring, Ejiro heads for the ropes, but it's on the same side of the ring as Williams, who heads for Ejiro. Ejiro leaps onto the second rope and...

 

CRACK!

 

Stevens: Elbow Smash! Fasaki was going for the Lionsault, but Williams just drilled him with that Elbow to give Dace a fighting chance of making the tag!

 

Riley: Now that was uncalled for, were only five minutes in, and the challengers have already desperately resorted to cheap tactics.

 

Both of the legal men are now sprawled out in ring, trying to force their bodies to move so they can make it to their corners for the tag. The crowd comes to life, trying to get Dace back on his feetl

 

CLAP! CLAP! CLAP!

GET THE F UP! GET THE F UP!

CLAP! CLAP! CLAP!

 

Slowly rolling over, Dace Night starts crawling on his forearms towards his corner, even as Williams grabs the tag rope and leans so far over the ropes he's almost into the ring.

 

Stevens: Dace is on the move, if he can make the tag, it'll turn the tide of the whole match.

 

Riley: He'll never make it, the Tag Champs will have a plan for something like this. Probably a sexy plan too.

 

Even as Dace works his way to his corner, Rule pulls himself back onto his feet with the aid of the ropes. Stumbling towards Dace, he does the most effective thing possible to stop Dace reaching his corner.

 

“BOOOOOOOOOO!”

 

He kicks Dace between the legs as hard as he can, stopping Night's advance on his corner, dead.

Soapdish is right in Ejiro's face, asking him where he aimed that kick, but Ejiro taps his inner thigh, claiming that it was a kick to the leg.

 

Riley: I told you they had a sexy plan.

 

The crowd launches a fresh assault of boos and jeers as the ref lets Ejiro get away with the Low Blow. Not taking any chances, Ejiro Fasaki heads back across the ring and tags out to the rested Mental.

Judge heads across the ring, taking the barely moving Dace and pulls him back into the middle of the ring. Danny looks across the ring in a rage.

 

Stevens: The only reason why Deathwish just doesn't dive in there to clean house is because he knows Justice and Rule will just use it as a reason to double team Dace even more.

 

Riley: And what's wrong with that? Nothing.

 

Pulling Dace up by his tights, Judge stands behind him. Stepping on leg in between Night's and pulling a leg back, Judge bars one of Night's arms with his own in a Abdominal Stretch, then with his over arm, wraps it around Dace's head in an Inverted Facelock.

 

Riley: Cool, a Stretch Thumb. Now all Judge has to do is wait for the tap out, or for Dace to pass out from lack of blood flow to the brain, either way it’s a victory.

 

Stevens: I think you mean Stretch Plum, Riley. It'll be wrenching on the shoulder and neck of Dace, but also his ribs and back as well. With the working over he's been given in this one, I don't know how long he hang on.

 

Knowing he has to stay on his feet, Dace painfully struggles his way towards his corner even as he begins to lose consciousness. The crowd begins to enthusiastically chant....

 

“DACE NIGHT!” BOOM! BOOM! “DACE NIGHT!”

 

Dace extends his free hand as he inches his way closer and closer to Danny Williams’ out stretched hand! With veins bulging out of his head and neck, Mental strains to add pressure to the hold, hoping to speed up the process, but he can’t seem to stop Dace from hauling ass to the sanctuary of his corner!

 

Stevens: Even in the hell that is the Stretch Plum, Dace is still fighting to make the tag!

 

Riley: Who wouldn’t? I’d want to get out of the match too, but you know what, it an’t happening.

 

The chant picks up some steam as Dace’s finger tips grace Danny’s, but Mental releases the Stretch Plum, and relentlessly drags Dace back to the center of the ring by his tights! Dace ends up seated in the middle of the ring, allowing Mental to clamp on another Dragon Sleeper for the....

 

Stevens: HELD WITHOUT BAIL!

 

Mental puts his scariest face on, as he violently twists poor Dace’s torso from side to side, working the torture style Stretch Plum like a mofo! Unable to stomach his partner’s abuse any further, Williams stomps his way into the ring to an oddly warm reception. Concentrating on making Dace tap, Mental pays no mind to the ICTV Champion and continues twisting Dace in disgusting fashion! Soapdish tries to get in Danny’s path, but Williams shoves him out of the way, and starts hammering Mental’s temple with mean spirited Elbow Smashes!

 

Stevens: Dace may be held without bail, but Danny is gonna stage a breakout!

 

Riley: What the hell? Mental and Ejiro have to sneak around the whole damn match, while Williams gets to walk right in there and do whatever the hell wants!

 

Mental tries to hang on, but the elbows just won’t stop, until he is left with no choice but to release Dace and shield himself! His mission accomplished, Williams returns to his corner to a rousing ovation!

 

Riley: Sometimes these people really make me sick, Stevens.

 

Having shook off the elbows, Mental gives Williams a long hard intimidating stare, before refocusing on Dace. Mental drags the stretched out Hardcore Champion to his feet, applies a rear waistlock, and throws him over head!

 

CRUNCH!

 

Dace lands neck first on the mat, while Mental bridges on his tippy toes, holding him in place for the pin!

 

Stevens: BEAUTIFUL GERMAN SUPLEX, COULD BE ENOUGH!

 

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Williams drops an elbow on Mental’s exposed abdomen, breaking the bridge, and stopping the count! Heating up, the fans stomp their feet in addition to clapping as Williams marches back to his corner. Mental just hangs his head down in the corner, looking extremely disappointed.

 

Riley: Well it could have been enough if it wasn’t for that damn Danny Williams!

 

Mental sits up, rubs his sore stomach, and once again, gives Danny the evil eye. Looking frustrated, the Judge stiffly climbs to his feet, and tags in Ejiro, who is more than willing to get in the ring! Ejiro hurries into the ring, frantically pulls down his knee pad, sprints over to Dace, leaps into the air, and drives his exposed knee into his forehead!

 

“Oooooooooooooooooooh!”

 

With out warning, Ejiro springs to his feet, and drills Williams with a sudden Dropkick, that sends him flying off the apron, and down into the guardrail!

 

CLANK!

 

Ejiro swiftly takes the opportunity to drag Dace up his hair, duck his head under his arm, hook a leg, and with a great deal of effort manages to snap back with the big man on his shoulder!

 

BOOOOM!

 

Dace lands hard on his upper back, and Ejiro keeps him that way with a high angle bridge!

 

Stevens: BRIDGING BACK DROP, I DIDN’T THINK EJIRO COULD GET HIM UP!

 

Riley: THIS IS IT, THERE’S NO DANNY WILLIAMS TO MAKE THE SAVE THIS TIME!

 

Soapdish hits the deck, and starts the count!

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO1/2....

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Williams comes diving back into the ring, pushing Ejiro over, breaking the bridge! Once again, the crowd gives an explosive pop for Danny’s effort! Mental throws his arms up in the air in disgust, and uncharacteristically blurts out a profanity or too.

 

Riley: I feel ya Judge, I feel ya. This is indeed getting very, very irritating.

 

Stevens: Williams’ guardian angle act is really starting to get into the heads of Justice and Rule, as well as my colleague.

 

Williams gets up, and starts to walk back to his corner, when a pissed off Ejiro suddenly drills him in the back with a Jumping Knee! The impact knocks Williams through the ropes, on to the apron, and down to the floor!

 

“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

 

Mental applauds the actions of his partner, and screams at him,”Let’s take this one home, Fasaki!”

 

Ejiro drags the half head Hardcore Champion up by his wrist, walks him all the way to the M7 corner, where he forces him to double over with a wristlock! The worried crowd gasps in terror as Ejiro swings his leg over the back of Dace’s head...

 

BOOOOOOOOM!

 

driving his face into the mat with a gruesome Guillotine Face Crusher!

 

Stevens: FASAKI FUSER! FASAKI FUSER!

 

Riley: THIS HAS TO BE IT, DANNY’S OFF IN GOD’S COUNTRY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!

 

Moving his fastest, Ejiro rolls Dace’s carcass over, and hooks one of his huge freaking legs for the pin!

 

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO1/2...

 

 

 

 

Williams comes rolling in from the outside, sprinting across the ring faster than anybody has ever seen him move before!

 

 

 

 

TWO3/4....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Danny breaks up the pin with a quick, snapping Elbow Drop! No longer able to contain themselves, the screaming fans rise out of their seats, stomping their feet so hard they look they are running on tread mills with the speed turned all the way up!

 

Stevens: AND ONCE AGAIN, DANNY WILLIAMS COMES TO THE RESCUE OF HIS ROOKIE PARTNER!

 

Riley: Justice and Rule need to quit playing around, and just take that bastard out for good!

 

Snarling like a wild animal, Mental slaps Ejiro’s back to tag himself in! The Judge rushes into the ring, and starts brutalizing Danny with vicious Haymakers to the body, and head as he tries to climb to his feet! Ejiro joins in on the fun trapping Danny in a front facelock, as Mental pounds his kidneys and ribs with closed fists! Having beating Danny until his knuckles hurt, Mental ceases the attack, so Eiro just dumps the battered ICTV Champion over the top rope! With Danny out of the way, Mental helps the limp Hardcore Champ to his feet, shouts, “Cover me!” to Ejiro, and than ducks his head under Dace’s armpit, grabs a waistlock, snapping back for the Northern Lights Suplex Pin!

 

BOOOOOM!

 

With Danny on the floor, Ejiro stands guard as Soapdish starts the count....

 

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO1/2.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO3/4....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Dace wiggles a boot under the middle rope, prompting Soapdish to halt the count! The crowd once again feels Madison Square Garden with the rumbling sound of foot stomps and cheers! Mental sits up, pounds his fist into the mat, and shouts,”Dammit all to hell!”

 

Stevens: Mental was so worried about Danny Williams breaking up the pin, he failed to take into account that he executed the Suplex far to close to the ropes.

 

Riley: I can’t believe what I’m seeing, Dace has been hanging on by a thread for the past five minutes, yet they can’t seem to drive the last nail in the casket.

 

Shaking his head, a depressed looking Ejiro returns to his corner at Soapdish’s behest. Mental spots Williams climbing back on the apron, so he charges like a bull, sending the ICTV Champion back to the floor with a huge Shoulder block! No longer playing around, Mental violently jerks Dace up by his tights, and slaps on a Full Nelson to the horror of the crowd!

 

Stevens: Mental, setting Dace up for the DRAGON SUPLEX!

 

Throwing a monkey wrench in his plans, Dace doubles over as far as he can, dropping down to his knees in a desperate attempt to save himself! Not to be denied, Mental releases the Full Nelson, and slices the back of Dace’s neck with some razor sharp Knife Edge Chops!

 

SMACK! SMACK! SMACK!

 

Mental reapplies the Full Nelson, and uses it to force Dace back on his feet! Camera flashes light up the arena as Mental bridges back, letting the Hardcore champion land unprotected on his cranium with a release Dragon Suplex!

 

CRUNCH!

 

The momentum carries Dace all the way on to his knees, where he gradually goes limp, and flops forward, face down on the mat!

 

Riley: DID YOU SEE THAT, RIGHT ON HIS HEAD, STEVENS!

 

Stevens: DACE IS OUT COLD, AND THIS ONE LOOKS LIKE IT’S ALL OVER!

 

Mental rolls Dace’s lifeless corpse over, and covers him for the pin!

 

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO1/2....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO3/4....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THREE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Williams flies into the ring like a bat out of hell, breaking the pin up with a punt to Mental’s mouth! Not stopping there, the crowd goes absolutely crazy as Williams pulls Mental up by his hair, and starts rattling his brain with Elbow Smashes!

 

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

 

Mental goes down like a sack of bricks, but Danny doesn’t get a break as Ejiro eagerly rushes in to take his partners place! Ejiro gets the jump on Danny, managing to nail him with two straight Elbow Smashes!

 

CRACK! CRACK!

 

Dazed and confused, Williams wobbles in place allowing Ejiro spin clockwise, firing his......

 

Stevens: SCREAMING ELBOW!

 

but Danny ducks!

 

Swooooooooooooooooooosh!

 

Williams waits for Ejiro to complete his spin, so that they are face to face again, before spinning clockwise himself.....

 

CRAAAAAACK!

 

flooring Ejiro with a Spinning Reverse Elbow!

 

Stevens: AND DANNY WILLIAMS SCORES WITH HIS OWN SCREAMING ELBOW!

 

Without a second to lose, Williams kneels beside Dace, and dramatically rolls him out of the ring to the safety of the floor!

 

Riley: What the hell is he doing?

 

Stevens: He’s getting Dace out of harm’s way, Danny knows that he can’t take much more abuse, he has to protect him!

 

Williams turns around to find Mental stumbling to his feet, so he leans deep into the ropes, and launches himself at him! As Williams approaches his target, he draws back his arm for a big running elbow.......

 

Swooooooooooooooooosh!

 

but Mental ducks underneath Danny, catching him in a rear waistlock! Before Williams can react, Mental throws him over head, dropping him right on his dome to the shock and dismay of the crowd!

 

 

CRUNCH!

 

Williams rolls through on to his feet, and with glassy eyes, staggers side ways to the ropes like someone who just got off a roller coaster. Williams lets himself fall over the second rope, and flop down to the arena floor near his fallen partner.

 

Stevens: DANGEROUS GERMAN SUPLEX!

 

Riley: YES, ANOTHER HEAD DROP, GOD BLESS JUDGE MENTAL!

 

Mental sits up with a very satisfied grin on his face, in fact he has to refrain himself from laughing. The Judge helps Ejiro to his feet, who also sports a huge grin after seeing Danny take a sick German Suplex. Knowing that there’s no one to protect Dace now, Justice and Rule journey outside of the ring, and attempt to retrieve Dace’s corpse, but Williams frantically crawls on top of him. Mental and Judge show no mercy, and begin viciously stomping away at Danny Williams while the crowd “boos” away in disgust.

 

Stevens: Williams is doing everything in his power to save his young partner, even if it means sacrificing himself!

 

Riley: Ah, how sweeeeeeeeeeeet.

 

Having stomped a mud hole in Williams and walked it dry, Ejiro pulls Williams up his arm, and whips him into guardrail with authority!

 

CLANK!

 

Danny slides down the guardrail, now only able to watch as Mental lifts Dace up on to his shoulders and rolls him back into the ring for further abuse! Ejiro anxiously slides into the ring, while his older and more patient partner uses the steps to properly enter the ring.

 

“BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

 

Working as a team, Mental and Ejiro help Dace to a vertical, grab his arms, and whip him into ropes! Ejiro steps in front of Mental, so that he catch Dace with the Flapjack!

 

Stevens: JUSTICE AND RULE, LOOKING TO PUT DACE AWAY WITH THE GAVEL BANG!

 

Riley: The Gang Bang, what the hell?

 

Ejiro ducks low to catch Dace’s legs.....

 

CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

 

Ejiro catches something alright, a running High Kick, that finds it’s mark right under his chin!

 

Stevens: YAKUUUUUUUUUUUZA KICK!!!

 

His partner down, his target still up, Mental plows forward, his arm extended for a good old fashioned clothesline....

 

SMAAACKSMAAACK!

 

but Dace catches him with a Lariat as well, and both go down!

 

Stevens: DOUBLE LARIAAAAT! DOUBLE K.O.!

 

Riley: This is a travesty, how the hell could Justice and Rule let this happen!

 

Stevens: Easy, even though he took a beating for it, Danny was able to give Dace a break from the constant punishment he had been endearing throughout the course of the match. The extra time allowed him to summon just enough power to get himself out of a certain death situation.

 

 

To say this gets a huge pop would be a huge understatement, the stands of Madison Square Garden are in complete chaos with people jumping in circles, pumping their fists into the air! Encouraging Dace to get up first, the fans restart a familiar chant...

 

“DACE NIGHT!” BOOM! BOOM! “DACE NIGHT!”

 

However, Mental is up first, while Dace has barely stirred since taking the Lariat. Mental rubs his throat a few times, and than signals to the crowd that it’s over! The crowd lets out a collective gasp as the Judge drags Dace up by his tights, and slaps on the dreaded Full Nelson!

 

Stevens: HE’S GONNA DRAGON SUPLEX HIM AGAIN!

 

Riley: ALRIGHT!

 

Suddenly, the crowd explodes as Danny comes storming into the ring! Williams starts hammering Mental’s back with heavy forearms like only he can! Mental gives in to the pain, allowing Danny to jerk him off his partner, and slap on a rear waistlock! The fans leap out of their seats as Williams lets out cry of effort, and somehow powers Mental’s wide, bulky body off the mat! Unable to properly bridge under the heavy weight, Williams just falls back, tossing Mental over his head!

 

CRUNCH!

 

Mental lands hard on his upper back, and folds all the way over on to his stomach while the crowd raises the roof with a monstrous pop!

 

Stevens: DANNY, GETTING SOME PAYBACK WITH A RELEASE GERMAN ON THE JUDGE!

 

Williams scrambles to his feet, finding Ejiro staggering up as well! Danny lets out a battle cry, and charges....

 

CRAAAAAAACK!

 

liquefying Ejiro’s face with a nasty Jumping High Kick that sends him tumbling over the top rope, and down to the floor!

 

Stevens: DYNAMIC KICK!

 

The crowd is now giving a constant pop as Williams goes against Soapdish’s orders by grabbing the wrist his fallen partner, dragging him across the ring to his corner! The crowd blows the roof off the place as Danny steps out on to the ring apron, and slaps hands with Horrocore! Dace sluggishly rolls out on to the ring apron, while Danny leaps into the ring, all fired up and ready to go!

 

Stevens: Well, that’s one way of getting it done!

 

 

Riley: There’s no way that’s legal, tonight’s officiating has been a farce!

 

Williams sprints over to Mental, helps him to his feet, so that he can drive him back into the ropes with a flurry of nasty Elbow Smashes!

 

CRACK! CRACK! CRACK!

 

Williams takes Mental by the hand, and shoots him off the ropes! Danny jumps into position in the center of the ring, while Mental speeds back...

 

CRAAAAAAACK!

 

stopping the Judge dead in his tracks with a High Kick!

 

Stevens: THE BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!

 

While the Judge wobbles in place like a drunk, Williams drops back into the ropes, and rockets forward......

 

CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

 

laying Mental out with the cringe inducing Elbow Smash that sends the crowd into a riot!

 

Stevens: RUNNING ELBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!

 

Danny drops down on top of the Judge, tightly hooking his legs for the pin! The super hot crowd counts along with Soapdish!

 

 

 

 

“ONE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“TWO!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“THREE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Ejiro dives through the bottom rope, knocking Danny off the Judge!

 

Riley: YOU SHOW HIM, EJIRO, give Danny a taste of his own medicine!

 

Pissed, Williams hops to his feet, and drags the weary Ejiro up with him! Williams cleans Ejiro’s clock with bruising Elbow Smashes, that leaves the little guy reeling! Danny casually spins his wobbly foe around, dips his head under his arm pit, and snaps back at a beautiful high angle.......

 

CRUUUUUUUUUUNCH!

 

planting Ejiro’s head into the mat at a damn near perfect 90 degree angle! The sight of the rarely used suplex sends the already mega hot crowd into nuclear overload!

 

Stevens: DANGEROUS BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACKDROP!!!

 

Riley tries to say something, but the ear shattering ovation of the crowd drowns it out! With Ejiro reduced to a state of death, Williams sets his sights back on the legal man, Judge Mental! Williams stomps his way over to the Judge, and starts to help him up, when suddenly, he gets a hard kick in the gut! The wind knocked out of him, Williams doubles over, unable to breath, allowing Mental to grab a 3/4 headlock and drop drive him down to the mat!

 

BOOM!

 

Stevens: SURPRISE WITNESS!

 

Drowsy from the Running Elbow, Mental lays motionless on his back for a few seconds, before rolling Danny over, and throwing an arm over him for the pin!

 

Riley: END OF THE NIGHT, STEVENS!

 

Stevens: AFTER COMING SO CLOSE, DANNY AND DACE’S QUEST TO TAKE THE TAG TITLES, ENDS IN TRAGEDY!

 

The once booming crowd watches on silence as Soapdish starts the count...

 

 

 

 

ONE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO1/2....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

TWO3/4....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THREE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! Even in his weakened state, Dace dives into the ring, breaking up the pin with a Double Axehandle! Hope returned, the crowd comes back with a blast of cheers and foot stomping! Mental leaps to his feet like a mad man, grabbing Dace by the hair, and pulling him up as well! Mental looks Dace in the eye, kicks him in the gut, and....

 

BOOM!

 

drops him with the 3/4 Neckbreaker!

 

Stevens: SURPRISE WITNESS! DACE HAS JUST RETURNED THE FAVOR TO DANNY, SACRIFICING HIMSELF TO KEEP THE MATCH GOING!

 

Riley: YEAH BUT HIS SACRIFICE IS IN VAIN, AS THE JUDGE HAS COMPLETE CONTROL OF THIS MATCH!

 

Mental looks around the arena, and points down to Danny as he gets up, as if to say your hero is finished! Focused like a predator eyeing lunch, Mental patiently waits for the sore necked ICTV Champion to stagger to his feet. Danny turns around, and Mental fires a kick at his gut....

 

Riley: THERE IT IS!

 

that is caught! Danny drops Mental’s leg, and spins in place.....

 

CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

 

decimating the Judge with his favorite strike! The crowd erupts like a volcano!

 

Stevens: ROLLING ELBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!

 

Mental spirals to the mat, and Williams just flops on top of him! Once more, the fans count along!

 

 

 

“ONE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“TWO!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“THREE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NO! The Judge shoots a shoulder up, but it doesn’t piss on the crowd’s or Danny’s parade! More determined than ever, Williams drags Mental up to his feet, positioning him in a standing head scissors! Williams takes a couple of deep breaths, and links his hands tightly around Mental’s gut!

 

Stevens: HE’S GOING FOR THE POWER BOMB!

 

Riley: WHERE’S EJIRO, DAMMIT!

 

Barely able to open his eyes, Ejiro raises his head up, and begins crawling towards his partner, but Dace grabs on to his boots, holding him just out of reach! Ejiro stretches his hand out like a zombie reaching in a window, as Williams bends his knees, and with a might heavy, powers the monstrous Judge up on his shoulders!

 

“HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYAH!”

 

Williams deeply doubles over, nearly slamming Mental through the ring with a thunderous Powerbomb!

 

KA-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

 

Williams leans deep over Mental’s broken body, sliding down his legs for the pin!

 

 

 

 

“ONE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“TWO!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.........

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“THREE!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

DING! DING! DING!

 

The sonic blast of the crowd nearly crumbles Madison Square Garden to it’s foundation!

 

Stevens: IT’S OVER! NEW CHAMPIONS! NEW CHAMPIONS!!!

 

Riley: THIS IS THE GREATEST TRAGEDY I’VE EVER WITNESSED! TAG CHAMPIONS, ROBBED OF THEIR GLORY BY POOR OFFICIATING!

 

Nearly in tears, Williams releases Mental, and starts jumping up and down in celebration! Ejiro buries his head into the mat, covering his ears, not wanting to hear the final word.

 

Funyon: The winners of the match, and NEW TAG TEAM CHAMPIONS...DANNY WILLIAMS AND DACE NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT!!!

 

The crowd gives an impressive ovation, but it’s obvious the fans are pretty worn out. Soapdish hands the titles to Danny, who is looking after Dace, waiting for paramedics to check him out. Williams lays his belt over Dace, and raises his hand up to an heroic applause.

 

Stevens: Don’t go anywhere, fans because we’ll be right back!

Edited by Coffin Surfer

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Guest Edwin MacPhisto

It was close as hell, Danny. I loved your match infinitely and that's why I asked you to post it. J&R's worked a little better overall, though. I'll try to provide some more feedback for you guys tomorrow, but I'm working on the card now.

 

Don't be deterred at all. J&R still portrayed Danny as one heck of a leader, and I think you're gonna do a fine job with the Trinity.

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Guest 5_moves_of_doom

I now have the sudden urge to read both of these tag matches as soon as possible.

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Guest Goodear

To be honest I was very disappointed with the winning match, I just wasn't expecting a simple work the arm match. I'm not questioning Edwin's marking, he said it was close and what not, and I respect his decision.

 

I meant to write something about this earlier but ... uhm ... forgot and stuff. Anyway I just thought I would mention that I think you're doing a bit of a disservice to Judge and myself by catagorizing our match up as a simple arm grind. We really did go out of our way to make quite a few different deep storytelling points in the match and just used the arm as our vehicle.

 

For instance the match had the following elements...

 

1) Danny playing leader trying to carry his team to the tag titles but perhaps taking too much onto his own shoulders.

 

2) The past matches with Danny and Ejiro (especially the first one) and Ejiro's apparent weakness to the powerbomb

 

3) Judge being the Anti-Hardcore.

 

And there you have it.

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Guest Coffin Surfer
I meant to write something about this earlier but ... uhm ... forgot and stuff. Anyway I just thought I would mention that I think you're doing a bit of a disservice to Judge and myself by catagorizing our match up as a simple arm grind. We really did go out of our way to make quite a few different deep storytelling points in the match and just used the arm as our vehicle.

 

For instance the match had the following elements...

 

1) Danny playing leader trying to carry his team to the tag titles but perhaps taking too much onto his own shoulders.

 

2) The past matches with Danny and Ejiro (especially the first one) and Ejiro's apparent weakness to the powerbomb

 

3) Judge being the Anti-Hardcore.

 

And there you have it.

I wasn't implying that the match was bad, just not what I was expecting. The arm route just seemed a little too obvious this time out, infact that was exactly what I was expecting you guys to write. So when I read it, I'm not gonna lie, I felt a little disappointed.

 

But that's just my opinion, which has no bearing on the quality of your match. And I wasn't trying to disrespect your match or take credit from it.

 

I did really like the Danny carrying too much weight on his shoulders story, but in the end it felt more like a sub plot, while the arm was more like the main storyline of the match that ended up factoring the most in the ending.

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Guest Dace59

Danny, I didn't know doing this match idea ment that much to you man...

 

Damn.

 

Now I want to take J&R on and get some damn payback.

 

*Takes out a Battle Axe*

 

Yes I do plan on using it as a weapon.

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Guest Goodear

Considering what I just shot myself with in the Judge vs Ejiro EPIC... I can't say that I fear a battle axe at the moment.

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Guest Goodear

* pulls battleaxe out of his head *

 

I have now learned to re-respect the battleaxe.

 

AHIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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