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Guest Crowe

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Still reading the show as I post this.

 

I enjoyed the opening promo a lot, it was rad and damn, it has got me hyped for the upcoming PPV match. Judge's match was great and I really got involved with it, I personally liked your opening, having Hearford come out tteeeaaarrrrrring but then almost losing to a counter move! Great stuff, and you put over Grappler well. Frost's wins with an always solid match, great stuff and gotta love the attacking before the bell. :) Read my match. And now, time to read Beezel and Kibs~!

 

Beezel vs Kibs was far, far, far too short for my liking and the Sean Atlas referee situation could have been teased out a bit more. Now, I admit I liked the booking reading bit, but starting him out in the ring doing the job, then have him 'accidentally' miss things and do dastardly things would have been so much better. The weaving of the King/Stevens occurance from the opening promo into this match was nice though.

 

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Ejiro's match is justice. Ejiro's match is rule. My favourite of the night so far. And I can't be bothered reading the ME's, but I will get around to them eventually.

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Guest Coffin Surfer

Judge vs. Charlie review:

 

Mental dominates from the start, attacking at the bell, getting over the fact that he's angry or that he might be a little nervous about the rookie. Usually it should be the opposite with the rookie/young wrestler attacking early, but the writer gives a good reasoning behind it so I won't hold anyting against it. The early finisher attempt shows that he's perhaps overconfident, which proves to be a mistake and the matches first transition. Judge busting out the Manami Toyota Body scissor counter was pretty sweet and creative. The third Doushime Sleeper ending was brilliant, the vet zapping the fire out of the rookie, finally putting him away. Somebody done their homework, GREAT MATCH!

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Guest Edwin MacPhisto
Judge vs. Charlie review:

 

Mental dominates from the start, attacking at the bell, getting over the fact that he's angry or that he might be a little nervous about the rookie. Usually it should be the opposite with the rookie/young wrestler attacking early, but the writer gives a good reasoning behind it so I won't hold anyting against it. The early finisher attempt shows that he's perhaps overconfident, which proves to be a mistake and the matches first transition. Judge busting out the Manami Toyota Body scissor counter was pretty sweet and creative. The third Doushime Sleeper ending was brilliant, the vet zapping the fire out of the rookie, finally putting him away. Somebody done their homework, GREAT MATCH!

Spot on, really. Charlie had a solid match, but Judge was just on the ball this show. It was a great, great match, and it used movesets to tell a superbly superb story.

 

Hardcore title match has been edited it in! Congrats to...the winner! Mwahahaha!

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Guest kelloggs

First let me say that Wildchild owns and whatnot... I'll come back and comment after completely reading the show, at least the promos... yeah I'm lazy

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Guest Ash Ketchum

I'll read it shortly, but from what I'vew read so far, go Wildchild. You finally got yourself a damn belt. Be proud, Carribean Cruiserweight.

 

Oh, and an AWESOME job of writing from Judge. Wish I could be that good...

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Guest Chuck Woolery

Comments in real-time:

 

GSMS/King promo at the beginning is nice, and makes me wonder if we're going to get a dueling GMs angle, or just a kick-ass match for Genesis. I'm hoping for the latter.

 

Atlas referencing Mike Van Siclen gone. Where did he go, anyway? Mask vs Mask at GZ, and I can't say I'm surprised. My only question is - does this mean Atlas was previously in the SWF?

 

Comments on Grappler/Judge are slim, for the simple reason that Danny outclasses me, and I blindly say "Read Danny's, they're right."

 

"Was it ticking" = gold. Atlas as Tom's lackey wouldn't have been a pick of mine after the Mask vs. Mask revelation earlier, but it works here, so I won't go further.

 

Frost and JD have a blood feud? I must have missed something.

 

CROW~! with the win. Nice.

 

I mark for short matches. I'll assume that was either a rushjob or a collab.

 

Ejiro using the term contiguous makes me laugh, and he brings the pain just like Judge. Who said they were only good as a tag team? ... nobody, which means none of you were wrong.

 

Wildchild as two-time HCG champ = (Y). I think he's going to turn that into a LHW playground.

 

I love the point at the end of International Incident's match where they note beating four different World champs. Nicely done.

 

T-Bone reference. I hope I'm not the only one who gets that.

 

I love all the near falls in the Trinity/Turner match. I'm thinking this helps set up Williams/Strangler at Ground Zero. That, or it's bigass multiman time, and I'm not sure which.

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Guest Powerplay

Okay, my comments:

 

-In a massive swerve, I wrote a good singles match. Whoo! I was due for one sooner or later...

 

-Flesher promo involving shards of glass. I already know what this is leading to, but it's cool to see some great promos for buildup.

 

-A very nice showing from Frost, putting JD over as one sadistic bastard and one who doesn't take losing sitting down. That reminds me... I've never finished with a brawl or started with a brawl on the entrance ramp. I should try that sometime...

 

-Crowe, you are fucking AWESOME. A great match, and the storyline behind it; I was amazed that you did the commentary table so well, and the part with Terrance was something I didn't expect at all. It was just a brief thing, but it still really caught my eye in the match. Utter craziness and a Hardcore match of the Year, DEFINITELY.

 

- I was slightly disappointed with Beezel vs. Kibs. I was expecting something longer than that, and while the stuff in there was solid and made sense, bu I just... expected something longer, I guess :\.

 

- Ejiro is God. Rockin' shit throuhout, with a great counter to the Narcosynthesis in there. Rock on! \m/

 

I'll soon be back with some more comments, but for now I must rest.

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Guest Muzz

I'm sorry to Ejiro, and to everyone that I no-showed. An attack of anxiety left me shaking and... well, I was just unable to write, by the looks of it however, I would have fallen short of Ejiro's brilliant work by miles. Well Done.

 

Great show all round, very excited about the next show..

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Guest The Superstar

Now, whose idea was it to book me against Judge?! [smiley]

 

Seriously, awesome match, Judge, better than my rush job and great show all around.

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