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Any other feedback besides "Not bad"? What took off, etc?

 

Well, I felt it was well done, although a bit too grey for my tastes. I'd assume that would have something to do with the character. All in all, my only real complaint is that it lacked that certain something that could turn something from being "very good" to "amazing."

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THat thing is pretty fucking sweet. Its very large though. Try to reduce the size,the background is alright. Background is bland

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I'd say about 7/10 again...again, good, but nothing mind blowing. The only real problem I have is with the text. First off, you really don't need the layer effect on "Jules McKean"...it really doesn't go well with the rest of the banner IMO. I think you'd be better off using just plain black...or maybe you could blend it into the background a bit by playing around with the opacity some to match the cloudy nature of the rest of the banner. Also, you could make the other text a little more visible, it's a little hard to read...I think you need to do something to make it stand out a little more. Besides that, I don't see a problem.

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The above text isn't necessarily supposed to stand out.

I don't mean that you should make have it glowing with flashing lights and stuff around it, I just mean that you should make it a little easier to read.

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