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My full comments will be up when I'm back from seeing my girlfriend. They will be LONG people... but they will be there.

I know some people are busy and all and only have so much time for the fed, but still. It doesn't actually take that long to read a show in fair detail. Commenting does add on a few hours but then not everyone needs to comment on the whole show. And one of the reasons for the MOTN is, if you only have time to read one, read this one sort of thing.

Well WC, for the PPV itself, I will be doing a "MOTN" poll. As I'm keeping PPV and TV matches seperate as it's not fair to compare them most of the time. Seperate to the comments thread, I'll just do another poll like this one and everyone can be voting to pick of the PPV MOTN. But as for the voting number, it should be more than just the roster. Retirees that are still around, markers, bookers all can and should be voting. But as long as more than just a handfull of people are, it's good enough.

Heh, well it looks like I spoke to soon. The winner is Tom Flesher with his Cruiserweight Title winning match against Spike Jenkins.

*Makes a note to crap on Maddix's match when he reviews the PPV Monday* People and their huge ass matches

Not a sign of a comment...as every focuses on the PPV once again. Still, not a problem. And coming up when these are done...the first Match Of The Month poll as well. These will be very brisk and more just recap as I'm still recovering and I have to work on my match as well. Opening promo: Manson gets himself the show off to rest his injured leg at last as Zed pimps out USJL contenders match. Opening Match: Tom Flesher is out after the CW title and some revenege on Rev-0. The Flesher Superior intros just get better and better all the time. Poor Funyon. Another great Flesher match, with the lower card champ franticly trying to hold onto his belt and scoring a few points against the big bad main eventer. Promo: More cryptic phone calls as Janus doesn't seem to like whatever the hell is going on. n00b Match: Oh joy, what fun these are to read. Mainly due to the curse of n00b writing that hasn't found it's own style or character yet which isn't fun to read. Well, there....that was a n00b match alright. Moving swiftly on. Tables Match: Minor point, Vlad didn't debut against Dace, but anyway. More Kelly ego trip stuff for cheap heat. Solid little tables number. Maybe action overselling at some times but a decent read. Tag Team Match: Ahh, Team Flip Flop in action agaisnt the Wayward Sons. Another really fun match from this team. Same drawbacks as before, but it's being worked on. Carrying over from the first match, the finish is a mirror image which is nice, as is the trend of all speed attacks against the team not working. Hanidcap Match: Random booking brings us this piece of goodness. Much big man kicking ass here, it's a handicap match so it was never gonna be great. Still some plan and ideas of team work saved it. Promo: Zenon's plans seem to have been monkey wrenched and someone is coming back and GZ. Singles Match: Ace faces off against Maddix here...and stuff happens. Ace pulls out another very fun match, working a few good things with Maddix before Johnny makes a run in to build for the PPV. Muzz is again getting back and track and showing he has the goods. Main Event: Toxxic vs Janus, No DQ....it's gonna be a clusterfuck. I do like Funyon's opening notice, very nice. And it soon turns into a complete clusterfuck as half the fed makes a run in for one reason or another...my god! And it all ends on the huge fight. Closing Promo: Looks like Zenon's got problems and is bringing someone else back in as well. The plot thickens and such. MOTN: Tom Flesher vs. Spike Jenkins. Right, I'm tired and still not totally well, live with it. MOTM poll coming up and all that jazz before I start my PPV match.

Looks like JD's got this one in the bag. But I'll call an offical end to this on Saturday night when the month ends. Then the winner can have the fact in their sig or something.

Ok people, vote, it's not hard.

I didn't think Mistress Sarah was an ugly dog?

Ahhh, more ego growing. Max King and Kelly are certainly getting well developed and are probably the most seen of the new(ish) crop of people here promo wise. Which is always a good thing to build your character and stroy lines. But in SWF land, we are the big league. The biggest infact. It's a note of cannon that the WWE dosent really exsist and that we're all stinking rich. Or something like that.

Ohhhhh...the plot does thicken. Even if you're not the first person to use the whole...using alter ego he doesn't really want to thing. Still it's a very good insight into Toxxic's mind and how he thinks and how he really wants to be.

MAIN EVENT TRIPLE THREAT, WORLD TITLE BOUT, TWO OUT OF THREE FALLS Janus© vs "The Superior One" Tom Flesher© vs Toxxic Flesher TAG TEAM MATCH TAG TEAM TITLE BOUT 42nd Street© vs Andrea Montgomery & The Birdman Team Flip Flop TRIPLE THREAT NUMBER ONE CONTENDER BOUT; SUBMISSIONS MATCH Jamie Drazon vs Ace Lezaire vs Dace Night NP SINGLES MATCH ICTV TITLE BOUT Johnny Dangerous© vs Landon "La Cucaracha" Maddix Coin toss says Johnny actually. SINGLES MATCH USJL TITLE BOUT Manson© vs "The Icon" Max King Manson to stay on this run. HARDCORE MATCH HARDCORE TITLE BOUT Martin "Big Country" Hunt© vs Sean Davis Davis. SINGLES MATCH Ced Ordonez vs Munich Ced with some flash. SINGLES MATCH ??? vs Candace Myster Man. MALL BRAWL V Austin Sly vs "The Corona" Vladimir Everheart vs Edward James vs Petey the Irish Penguin vs Ryan Dustin vs ??? Gotta go with Vlad

Dustin, just stop trying to connect and re-enter the /server irc.phaznet.com command. Should sort things out.

Canadian Hammer = Inverted Powerslam (the Old Dominator) Over the shoulder in a Canadian Rack, fall forwards, slamming them chest first into the mat. The Inverse of the Bulldog's Powerslam.

Why, because post people dont know real Satanism from the medieval, Judo-Christian satanism for kiddies. It just feels slightly too big a step to take for just one match and leads me to think it's a character direction you're taking, that's all.

Ok, this is gonna do badly I can bet. Unless you really know something about Satanism and stuff (and more than just who Crowley and Lavey are) another Manson loving poser doesn't make for a good character. It's a hype promo, which is always good but don't buil a character in a direction you know nothing about.

Definatly, this angle got off the ground running fast which really helps it. Maybe a little SE but certainly interesting.

Ahhh, Toxxic's plugging the holes on the leaking ship I see. Well, if know one else if condifident about his stable, Toxxic certainly is. Still, building up the 'character' of the stable adn hyping the show which is all a good thing.

Abdominal Stretch w/ Inverted Facelock Basicly, it's your ordinary AS but while you use one arm to hook their near arm, you use your other arm to clamp on an Inverted Facelock (Dragon Sleeper style) can be done seated or standing.

Yes WC it is just you being chauvinistic. I'm sure there are women in the world that would kick the crap out of you in a real fight. Just because you don't see strong female wrestling characters in mainstream US wrestling doesn't mean they dont exist. I'd be just as scared to get in the ring with Aja Kong as with Vader. I think Annie firmly showed a women can work just as well in this fed as a man. And did any of this stuff with stats happen for her? Ok, maybe you can push the limits with someone's body size and etc but you dont have to be big to be strong all the time. I'm not saying Candace is a great example of this one, but oh well.

There is an area for your finishers, just called finishers. If you have a look at other people's sets, you'll see how it's set out

A comments a go-go. Opening promo action: Someone is onto Johnny Dangerous about a return. The house is not taking bets on Wildchild. First match: n00b noshows an easy win. Bah Second Match: Nothing great, but I throw something short and passible together. Third Match - USJL Title Time: Manson's back history is covered here, just to set up what he's gone through and that he's still worked injured. Things kick off and Manson slips and slides his way into scoring first blood in this match. The writing isn't Tom Flesher, but Manson is a more than capible writer when he does try. TMM fights back and uses Manson's stun gun tactic against him to turn the tables. But then Manson brawls his way out of the corner, make at least a few shots rather than a one shot transistion. Nice little comment about the Slingshot suplex as well, along with the good old one count, leaving room to build up to more dramatic counts later on. Manson works him over on the mat, pulling off the same sort of style (I had him) used in the match against Dace, keeping a seemingly better opponent grounded and under control. A transistion back to TMM with a missed corner charge and a one count again. TMM reverses the situations and holds onto a Facelock and Manson shows a little flash trying to handstand out of the hold. Manson finally manages to pop out only to get Lariated down. Only thing seeming to be lacking form this match so far is any sense of heat or who's side the crowd is one. Ok, I spoke to soon as TMM gets the hold back on and now we have some crowd heat. Manson jawbreakers out of the hold but shifts to the attack without really selling almost getting choked out, the offence jsut shifts. But then there's some basic psych as he counters the Stun Gun a second time, scores one of his own and a roll up. Goes for an STO but counterd into a German. Match is starting to feel jumpy here, without any real heat sections or selling from one section to the next. Inverted Facelock blocked with a counter straight out of the Smackdown games, but Manson's knee collapses in the bring, with the knee being the only constantly sold thing here. Missed clothesline and Manson stays incontrol with a Sleeper. But TMM escapes, backdrops out of a Powerbomb due to the weak leg and scores the Reverse Half Nelson STO for a close fall. Manson counters the Tornado DDT with a Spinebuster, another close fall. At least the drama build is consistant here. Backslide for another near fall. Another counte rand Manson wins the little race to the finish and picks up the win. There where good things and bad things here but it came out ok. Manson can write when he does, but he needs to work a little on adding spice and extra range of descripion to his writing. Along with more focused matches and more consistan ideas of selling. But it's about time he won something and I've very sure he can continue to improve. Promo Time: Someone is feeding bate to the fishes it seems, as Johnny talks about WC's return so a hiding TMM can here. Another Promo: Rev-0 and Birdman have a little run in about the rumours Birdman is out to get someone in the fed. Interesting.... Forth Match - Tag Team Action: Kelly makes a great tool for playing up King and his ego. Sometimes it reads like a bad Tom Flesher/Suicide King rip off, but it creates interest in the character and makes him stand out in the mid card. Very good touch to show off the huge speed advantage of "Team Flip Flop" as Birdman and Andrea just flip over the sneak attack. With two really fast characters, it's very easy to make opening form double teams and tag team work, the opening distraction and missile dropkick is the first good example of this as well. And the good old one count, which always helps, as it gives you more room for dramatic build. Team Flip Flop break off into almost Heelish work, working over Hunt in the corner, but it's two people who's style's are the same so they jell, under the leadership of a vetern, taking advantage of the rookie(ish) heels. Hunt powers out but misses and corner charge and Birdman goes straight back to the arm again. Again Drea catches the heels sleeping and uses the usual heel work against King to keep him out of action because she's fast enough to pull it off. And more simple of speed basic and effective arm work on Hunt. And the heels finally pull it back as King pulls the top rope down as Andrea is racing around, turning the speed against Team Flip Flop. Good old heel beat down kicks off, including the underused Eye Rake on the ropes. Birdman shoots in to help Andrea out but it does as much harm as good, and now the heels can break out their double teaming, as King takes Drea out. Certainly make for a very dynamic and interesting tag match here. Lacking a certain crisp and descriptive edge of maybe JnR but still a very good match so far, very smoothly written and clear. Drea outpaces Hunt again and he gets Splashed by Birdman (high speed makes the swift hot tag counters SO much more affective and gives you more to do IMO) Birdman also takes a mean bump from a Back Elbow, King might not be that strong but those sort of little touches show you power the balance of skills lie in a match. Funny little jab at PETA while we're beating on the Birdman. Quick combo from King puts the Birdman in danager but again it's broken up with a big Splash. Again Andrea plays the vetern just outsmarting the heel, taking him out with a Dropkick and Tonado Hangman. Birdman gets in another sort of hot tag and Drea takes King down. Really good combo from Andrea again, showing just how fast she is, also KOing King with a diving kick, catching Hunt sleeping again and scoring a Corckscrew Moonsault. Little double team combo puts King down, Birdman goes up top and nails his finish as Andrea takes Hunt out with another dive. Really fun tag match and Birdman and Andrea make a brilliant Flip Flop team without spending all their time doing mad dives. The few bad points are the starting focus on Hunt's arm is just left and never talked off again and the order of the heat. Having all the heel control in one larget section in the middle might have helped the heat. But still a damn good match. Fifth Match - Four Way Nuttiness: Sly carries out his idea of just cutting the opening comments because he doesn't like them. Hey, it works just as well. C/P entrances of doom, but with a multiman, there's no need for anything flash and why take up too many works with loads of extra intro stuff. Starts off looking like it'll be two on two as the heels and faces pair off. Gilbert tries to slide in but gets caught by Clark and Dustin as Sly makes a sneaky side entrance. Clark takes a low blow and Dustin gets chop blocked as the heels make for an early double team. Clark gets doubled teamed again but Sly and Gilbert only for Sly to turn on Gilbert and start attacking him as well. Dustin tries to dive in but jsut gets tossed over the topes for his troubles. Sly goes to the outside and leads Dustin up the ramp just for NTD to chairshot him from behind the curtain. Clark finally tosses Gilbert out but then Sly climbs back into the ring and clobbers him with the chair and takes him out to win the match. A rush job but Sly still writes well anyway. More Promo action no folks: Johnny proclaims his ICTV Title win then Maddix rolls in to spoil the party. A few heated words and Landon blasts him with a chair as he demands a rematch. Drama people, drama. Sixth Match: No show that makes my job easier. Promo time again: Toxxic and Flesher run into each other back stage. Ohhhh at the shower hazing joke. Then Flesher just takes Toxxic nail, nailing him with a Palm Strike, a Yakuza Kick and then an Ego Buster. Then just sits him against the wall and pours beer down this throat. Evil and certainly a heat getter for the up coming match. Seventh Match - Main Event Time: Flash back to Janus brutal use of the Demonstar Driver on the last show. Ced and Munich come out just to get blind side by a sneaky Janus and the Equalizer. Knuckle Bomb, Chokeslam, Elbow Drop and it's over. Short and sweet. Still, Janus looks like a fucking monster as rightly he should. The World Title Match is gonna be a war. Match Of The Night: Andrea Montgomery & The Birdman vs Max King & Martin Hunt If you read just one match folks, read this one.

The name Northern Lights Bomb is just a gimmick name, same as Northern Lights Suplex. NBL = "Scoop" Brainbuster. (Facelock, but rather than grabbing the tights, you reach one arm between their legs) Lift and slam as Brainbuster. Snow had 2 version of the Snow Plow. 1) A crappy soft Northern Lights Bomb for the WWF 2) The Scoop Slam lift to Inverted DDT (sort of like a crappy Cradle Emeral Fusion.

MAIN EVENT NO DISQUALIFICATION NON TITLE MATCH Janus vs. Toxxic Janus again. SINGLES MATCH Landon "La Cucaracha" Maddix vs. Ace Lezaire Lezaire with some fire back in his ass. THE AT THIS POINT REQUISITE HANDICAP MATCH! Sean Davis vs. Ced Ordonez and Munich Davis. TAG MATCH Andrea Montgomery & The Birdman vs. THE WAYWARD SONS!!! (Edward James and Alan Clark) Team Flip Flop. USJL CONTENDERSHIP TABLES MATCH "The Icon" Max King vs. "The Corona" Vladimir Everheart Vladimir all the way. SINGLES MATCH "The Paladin" Chance Silver vs. Candace Coin says Candace. CRUISERWEIGHT TITLE MATCH "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins vs. "The Superior One" Tom Flesher Flesher if he wants it.

8 people left off the card? Go rest and all but I hope this isn't WWE syndrome. I know it isn't really, as when we have a large roster, show size is limited by the number of avalibable markers and the work they can acctually do.