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As I'm no longer going out with her, no. Though I have an even more twisted replacement.

Yer, but he asked nicely. And I'm a lazy student.

An Upright Figure Four as the attacker kneeling down for reference. It's not a matter of lift for Maddix being able to land on the ropes of the Back Body Rope, it's the fact he's not agile enough land like that. And Maddix does flip out of the Neckbreaker. After his crotched on the top, Sacred hooks him up for one as Maddix is hung out, but Maddix kicks of the turnbuckles and flips over Sacred. I dont think he could have done that, with his state and speed. The LON is a bad move to try and get over as out of nowhere. As it's not an out of nowhere move. Doesn't have the ease of set up for it. You'll either have to rethink your plan or it or change the move. As I was saying with trio moves, it's a coming problem in the WWE, and it didn't mix them up at all. Only way you can really have a fight out at two is if you build a huge spot around the three moves, with the two that hit taking ages and each one being a fought out struggle. But that isn't in Maddix's or Sacred' relam.

Hmmm, guess I should do those comments like Maddix asked for. I like the pulling of the fairy tale line into some gags. Build to the first transistion from the headlocks is ok, Maddix doing the clothesline before going to a faster spot. But it mentions Scared being dizzied from the Headscissors, but not about the hits Maddix took to the face. Little unbalanced. Not personally happy with the German being used so soon and lightly, but it would have made a good spot to shift from the bridge and try to roll into a rear mount to go for the Narco... I always hate seeing a trio move countered after the second one, it rarely makes any sense. It's a good move having Scared just flatten Maddix when he comes in with the forearms, but Maddix was back on the attack to quickly, I'd have seen him more escaping and regrouping then out blitzing Scared. Against feels like Maddix just slips back into control to quickly, but at least he does it by out pacing Sacred and taking him down quickly. But the dueling Dragon Sleeper/ Cravate hold spot into the Inverted Facelock Backbreaker is pretty nice, though it's a point that should have gone into the Dragon Clutch for the first fal, as it'd have been a dramatic way to get it on. Maybe having shifted the build ups around, and it as the culimation of Maddix's fight back for the first fall. I really dont think Maddix is fast enough to pull off landing on the top rope form a back body drop. Like Toxxic, I dont agree with the flip out from the neckbreaker either, pushing the speed just a little to far. Though it lets Sacred play the out foxing vetern again as he takes Maddix out. At least that point is conistant. Again, Maddix counters to quickly, rather than slipping away from Sacred and using speed against him. And once he's got Sacred down, Maddix doesn't seen to show any sign of any of the damage he's just taken. As for the comment about Sacred wouldn't have tapped if it was a one fall match, that just makes the Dragon Clutch look really weak. It's a finisher, it doesnt take that much work for a finisher to put someone down unless they're fairly tough. Going to the leg, Sacred again takes the superior vetern role and looks in control. But I dont like the fact he doesn't fight back while he has the Upright Figure Four on. And being knocked backwards wouldnt turn it into a Figure Four, as Sacred would be on his knees, with Maddix's legs trapped under his. Sacred's then made to look really unfocused by not capitalising on his knee and neck work by going for a chop fest. But at least it's some sort of paced duel for Maddix to try and gain control again. Added to the fact he doesn't just kick or tackle Maddix's leg out from under him. Then it's made even worse that the leg work doesn't come into play in turning to turn the Narco over. A good pay off would have been to have Maddix try it and fail as his leg gives out and he has to tap. Still, at least it leads into a fall for Sacred. And now it's not til much after the submissions, that Maddix actually does some sort of selling on his leg. And Sacred seems to be suffering far to much for the offense Maddix gets in, which is never that big. And yet again, Maddix seems to make an all to quick and strong counter after taking a big ish bump. It never ends up feeling like Maddix is tougher than Sacred even though he is, which hurs the sudden come backs. Final fall is definatly rushed, feels more like a first big spot thing that anything. Ok, so this mostly sounds negative as crap. Dont take it that way...just the mood I'm in, honest. There's good stuff there, but a lot of flaws and good ideas that where missed out.

You're a good man GS, it's been good having you around and such for all the time I've been here. Have a good time man, dont have much to say beyond that, but it counts.

Well, Aussie mp3 only "Black" Metal band By Dawn Cursed released an Xmas EP, it's sort of there.

He showed last time, which is scary.

But at least I didnt actually have anything to send in. In other news, the lazy student life is great.

Bah, teach me not the check that I actually sent things when I'm really tired. Sorry people I'm a fuck up.

*Looks at his sent box* Ok, so that message didnt go through. Ahhhh fuck!

http://www.yucubetoo.com/moves/alpha_bomb.gif

Which is a Fall-Away Slam set up to Powerbomb as stated.

Big log but not the normal massive tree trunk that broke the camel's back ok. In other news, good work people and such and such. Maybe after Xmas I'll get off my ass and start doing full comments again.

COLD FRONT CLASSIC FINALS 2 OUT OF 3 FALLS MATCH #1 Landon "La Cucaracha" Maddix (SWF Intercontinental-Television Champion) v. #3 Sacred Maddix TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH Revolution Zero (Toxxic and Sean Davis, SWF Tag Team Champions) v. Hollywood Boulevard (Ghost and "Urban Legend" Todd Cortez) Rev 0 HARDCORE MATCH Danny Dagda (accompanied by the Rockettes) v. Carnage Whoever I feel like. Oh the POWER! HOLY HELL MATCH "The Icon" Max King v. Manson v. "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins Spike by a whisker.

<DnD Mode> He rolled a straight 20 </DnD Mode> Seriously, it was the same as the difference between you punching someone really hard and you bunching up for, throwing all your weight behind it and almost breaking every bone in your arm because you hit them that hard. Finishing moves dont have to end matches. I was using a mix of "enough damage and sig move will do it" and emotional artistic licensce to make it count.

You've got the win if you make Toxxic job to something legit but simple that he'd complain about. *Lariats Toxxic and makes him sell it for DAYS!*

Maybe next time it'll even go somewhere.

*Slips Tom some more money and walks away*

Right, I'm going out for the evening with, "da boyz", as it where. If no one hears a sign from me when I get back, it's a DNS. Because I'll be back a bit after the deadline and I am not waiting up for anything. But in other news, I live in hope.

*High fives back and w00ts*

And how far under 90% they think it is.

It's definatly ture Z and it never really did happen apart from a few random blimps. It' as good as any human done system could be really.

The continuing the match with a broken arm was a hell of a thing in the first place. The powerbomb spot was never going to be the end anyway...Kawada went right to the end. Though I really wouldnt have liked to be taking his nasty ass brainbuster when he only has one arm to use. And was the TD'91 came out of a botched spot and stuck. I think 6/3/94 was the first time it was really used.

MAIN EVENT - TAG TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH Team ANGER (Christian Fury and David Cross) © vs. Hollywood Boulevard (Todd Cortez and Ghost) vs. Revolution Zero (Sean Davis and Toxxic) Also going to go with HB, to just edge it out a team. BATTLE OF THE BEHEMOTHS Carnage vs. "The Icon" Max King King to retain. OBLIGATORY HARDCORE MATCH FEATURING DANNY DAGDA Danny Dagda vs. Manson Manson, but I'll see about that one. CRUISERWEIGHT CHAMPIONSHIP MATCH "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins © vs. Kaine Spike, unless his balls suddenly drop to distract him.

*Slides Tom fifty bucks and walks away whlistling*