Secret Agent

I liked your promo first off for obvious reasons. (Y) @ mentioning my charater. Secondly, I'm glad to see you establishing some charater to your...well charater. Keep it up, and I look forward to your Smarkdown match.

I say you defend a title on any show. However, maybe Storm can be the spot for bigger matches... Like matches with mini-feuds brewing, ect. Instead of waiting 6 weeks for that one PPV for the match. Don't regulate my favorite belt to be a bush league title, or unimportant.

Wow. I can't believe I'm saying this, but excellent, Kibs. I think this will benefit a lot of people if they take the time to read this. I think I'm going to save this article and Dace's for future use on the net, if I can ever get off my ass and finish something up... so long as it is okay with you.

Does this mean we can look forward to a return of the Judge soon than?

Johnny's been here since about 2 weeks before you, WC. As for the other charater that everyone hates... I started him about 2 weeks after Suicide King, then quit and came back, quit and came back, ect. The funny thing is that I'm just now starting to get anywhere.

Edwin/Wilson or Comet/Wilson would probably be fun to write. You would have two color guys though, so that would be bad most likely, and writting Edwin might also be quite the task for those involved. I dunno, I'd kind of like Comet to stay as he is fun to write. I'm not sure on Divefire though, Z, and thats most likely because I really don't remember what kind of charater he was other than a former IGNWF Commissioner.

The problem is just that we have 2 color guys on commentary. I personally like Comet, and switching Bobby up with a heel play by play would be good. You could also switch them both and make the heel color and face play by play. Like Stevens/Riley was. Something comparable to Monsoon/Ventura. Using King or Stevens might conflict with storylines though. Especially Stevens.

Where is this Lockdown going down at? Madison Square Garden, The Kingdom, ect?

Well, thanks, WC. I'm just pouring out a little liqour for Dub-Cee. I'm glad you liked it, at least thats one person who likes it as opposed to the "Damn this is a long promo, Johnny!" I'll have to do some comments tomorrow when I get home from work, so more later!

Well, you most certianly could help him with the "having nothing" portion... show him how to no show, Muzz!

Damn... who was that one dude in the JL about a year ago who was in the U.S. Air Force and a former member of the once mighty Clan. Well... whatever his second charaters name was.

Fuck, did I miss it? My bad. Well, Happy Belated Birthday anyway, Landon!! Rock on!

Nothing, Janus? hell, just have Janus brag a bunch.

Comments time, and from someone else other than Dace. I'll break this up though, As I just got done reading the LMS, so It'll take me a minutre still to comment on this and the one that follows before doing the last 2. SINGLES MATCH Ced Ordonez vs Ryan Dustin This match had some really nice moments to it. I liked Ced¡¦s entrance along with the opening moments of the actual match ¡V both men really trying to take the lead followed by some quick near falls. However, all this seemed a little dry with out any commentary from Comet or Bobby, but you sold that decent enough by saying they allowed the match to stand on its own merit. Even still, this is the first I have seen two commentators who actually shut up. Still going on about the commentary though, I liked the middle portion where Comet actually called the action leading to a near fall. That¡¦s something I had though about doing before myself, but never got around to trying it out. The crowd is chanting for Dustin? I thought he was a heel, I guess I better recheck his stats. None the less they chant for Ced later on. Oh, about time we saw the Cross Lighting done by Ced Ordonez for a change. ƒº I really liked this match. A good fast paced opener that tells everyone Ced Ordonez is back! SINGLES MATCH Munich vs Jay Dawg Next match is pretty cool too. Jay Dawg returns with a win. There really isn¡¦t a whole lot in this match that actually stands out as good or bad other than one thing. Possibly it is nothing actually wrong, rather a difference in writing styles, but I swear 90% of the sentences start off with ¡§Munich¡¨ or ¡§Jay Dawg¡¨ or some variation of the names. Maybe I¡¦m just nitpicking but it becomes a bit repetitive after a bit. Good job though, this was fun to read still. PROMO And here we have the debut of Sean Davis. Can¡¦t really say much from this as it really does nothing more than make note of Davis being a heel. I look forward to more on Storm from this one. PROMO II Spike¡¦s promo¡K I can¡¦t believe I forgot about that bit either. Good deal though, I liked. CAGE MATCH CRUISERWEIGHT TITLE BOUT Johnny Dangerous vs "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins My match is next and I guess I shouldn¡¦t really comment on it. There were a few things that stood out to me after rereading it, and that was just the working of the neck and back that was suppose to be ¡§Johnny will be able to lock a submission on from any angle by working over more than one body part¡¨ really didn¡¦t progress a damn thing. Anyway¡K CASINO FLOOR BRAWLTAG TEAM TITLES BOUT Hollywood Boulevard vs Crow & "The Notorious" John Duran I will say this. I normally hate these matches ¡V ones that take place in bar rooms, casino floors, American Gladiator matches, etc. Nonetheless I read this one and was pleasantly surprised. You guys crafted an enjoyable read that played far better than any match in this vain that I have watched on WWE in days past. I liked the opening of this with Duran having a game of Blackjack that¡¦s interrupted by Crowe wanting to get this match going. However, after Crow taking a thick glass like they use in these casinos to the forehead¡K I think he¡¦d be KO¡¦ed--Duran too and especially after that stool shot to the side of the head. Cortez winning the jackpot off a quarter then throwing the coins at Duran, along with MVS sitting down at the poker table only to loose his wallet was equally nice. The spot where the referee stops counting and starts watching the horse race was rather hilarious as well. My only real question is; where did this crowd come from that started chanting and cheering. Earlier on they didn¡¦t even know who these guys fighting in the casino were? other than that, awesome job with the stipulation¡XI liked it a bunch!

I echo Landon's statements. The show is mega stacked and this is going to take me a minute to tread through. However, before certian folks shred these matches apart I better explain mine. There is psych that leads to nothing in there. I didn't exactly get enough time to hit every plot element within the match that I was working on and had to rush. It will probably be nothing more than a simply average match in the end, but oh well. I'll actually comment on other folks' match after reading this show. For now, congrats to everyone who wrote, and more so to those who won!

bleh... I only got 8312. That's after I didn't have time to flesh out much of the plot points I started on.

The Gund? What about the King's arena? We've only used that like once.

Where does this show take place?

I'll be polite. Z, my reply is in your PM box. Toxxic, yes that was what I meant. Though I have no desire to regain the US belt, so I guess it doesn't matter. Dace, thanks.

Dace, thanks for the comments... but why do you continue to blast everything I do week in and out? It is starting to become seriously annoying. The shots to MVS' head are there to weaken him, same thing for the leg spots. I did the armbar finish because it was YOU and Tom who suggested it as instant tap with no work to that body part. By the time the end came; Mike took a ton of abuse to his head and leg, that was the entire point. He was physicially weakened and continuing was not an option. Also a release suplex out of the ring is not all that deadly... I have referances from matches. Like Y2J vs Christian WM20 which is where I stole that spot from if you don't think so.

Your fine, TNT. I was just starting to worry that you fell off that cliff again or something.

Does this mean we get more time to write Smarkdown then?

Grumpy old vet? Whats that supose to mean? That match sure shocked the shit out of me by winning. never have I wrote a match faster since I had like 3 hours to write the whole thing before going to work Friday. Thats why nothing gets sold, Dace, sorry.

You know... I hate to bitch about anything, but why bother with a contendership match. I'm still the USJL #1 contender since March.

Then why did you bother to even reply?