Secret Agent

... Okay. So is this the actual ECW arena, and yes, I'm that out of touch.

Ah cool, I got some feedback. Thanks, King! I know the transistions were basically non-exhistant... One move transistions, but they have always been my weakest point and in this match i had to make them quick. :\ I can also say that I have never quite understood transistions in general, and how they should be properlly built. Unlike most of these people around here my only wrestling knowledge comes from the WWE Attitude era and forward. Transistions that I see are: Rock gets beat around the ring for a few minutes then suddenly rockets out of the corner and lands an elbow into someone's face, or Kick! Wham! Stunner! Is that not how they are to be done? I'm guessing not. transistions are probably what will always keep me at the bottom of the card. EDIT: Yes, King, I know he had much better moves and had I gave Edward more control in the match I probably would have done a few more. However, if you noticed they are mostly all impact moves, and with his strength(that being 9), Johnny would have been a gonner taking a straight, full match of all those. Anyway... I have read Landon's first two promos thus far, Toxxic's promo, skipped my match, and read the Cruiserweight match. Landon's promos were nice, and I'm rather surprised that you have so much free time on your hands to write three different segments. Some sort of interaction between Clark and Landon would have added a little into that, but I suppose you were saving that for the actual 'concert', we'll have to see when I get there. Toxxic's opening promo was cool too. Short and to the point, but one thing. The way you do commentary throws me off a bit. It might be just me, but a single line space between Comet's lines and Bobby's would make it easier to read. Crap, Tom just made Alan Clark a straight victim with that match! The commentary was amusing as always, and making it a non title due to Flesher being over the weight limit was a nice added touch, enabling a Flesher victory while still allowing Clark to have a good run with the Cruiserweight title. The heel tease was cool too, but we'll have to wait and see if it's a full turn or just for this match. Either way I liked. Two (Y) (Y). On with the rest of the show...

How about the matches you marked? feedback, or thoughts? I'll post my comments when I finish reading the whole show.

Well I think it's suppose to be the off spring of the shark that comes before it. Like Jaws 2 shark is Jaws 1's baby, Jaws 4 is jaws 2 baby, while Jaws 3 is a seperate lunatic Michael Meyers shark. I don't remember much about Jaws 4 except I seem to remember the ending that made no sense as I only saw it about 10 years ago. However, wasn't the shark like frantically swinging it's head back and forth with blood spurting everywhere as Ms. brody had some flashbulbs going off? That's oddly how I remember it, and to this day it still sounds awfully strange.

I don't know, WC, but I'm quickly losing intrest in this. Come on, Card, speed up the progress here, you know my attention span is very limited here.

Now, now, Toxxic. Remember, I'll be picking up the slack for WC while hes away, so there are still others for you to face.

Good promo, outside of what Z already mentioned, but I liked it none the less. You should of had Alan remind Landon about his failures recently as a good come back, that would have been sweet! Keep it up, maybe when i think of something to do singles wise I'll post a promo.

Okay so... after re-reading my first post after actually reading all the post in this thread I got more to say. Yes, I can here the groans already. Anyway... On the subject of storylines and feuds, long and short and what not, its obvious that everyone has almost a different view on it. Thugg hates them drawn out, which is fine. However, we are here to have fun most importantly and if a long feud is what makes it fun for Dace, than so be it. A short one for Thugg, so be it. Nobody should be reprimended for which way they prefer as a nice balance between the both makes for a good atmosphere. Afterall, if we are here to have fun that doing what makes it fun for us should be the way to go. CC, however should not have to even go so far as to HAVE to post a thread detailing whos got what, and who doesn't. It is not what they are here for, IMHO, CC should be hands off. Rather they should be here to coordinate and make some kind of sense out of all our charaters and plots, figure out where every one should be placed and turn it into a card for our shows. Not to mention being the judges on who wins and who looses. If you want a storyline get off your ass and find one. You don't have to be in a feud to have a storyline, just make some goals as to what you want to accomplsih out of writting here and what will make it an enjoyable experience for you, and do it. Don't wait or expect someone to just say, "Here, Billy, go feud with Toxxic." Doing such ruins what this fed is about, which as Mark already stated, the writers have total control. So... in a roundabout way, if the Fed is in a slump we as the writers have nobody to blame but ourselves for not producing Angles/Feuds/Storylines, or for some people MATCHES, etc. This Fed will only be as good as everyone makes it no matter what CC does... Unless of course CC really did have a glass ceiling in place and was screwing people over, which I don't see happening as they would be destroying their own fed. The point is not to expect CC to do anything more than they are doing right now, and I wish people would stop adding so much pressure to them. We have already lost King and Mark, we don't need to loose the rest of them too. Anyway, if you all decide to make a thread about who needs a feud and start assigning them out, please leave Johnny out of it. I have plans on what I want to do, even if I don't know who it will be with or against. </rant and rave>

Well, most seem to have posted some good thoughts. I will agree with Mark though, it is not CC’s responsibility to find you someone to feud against. Doing so would wreck what this fed is about. On the subject of long plots versus short ones: The basics of my storyline that caused the epic Johnny Vs Wildchild feud and Genesis match was probably the most preplanned thing I have ever done. I wanted to start with a plot, a reason for Johnny to be there, and if I wanted to retire a good way for him to do so. However, making WC the ‘Mystery Man’ that Johnny was after was done only after I waited to long to go ahead with the story and by that time the original person had something else going. So a change had to be made, and there was one person willing to do it. To make a long story short; by the time the entire story was done it had been stretched out over the course of a year. Using certain points as reference as to when actions happened, then adding things in to make it where the whole story was nothing more than a tag title feud with Justice and Rule Vs Wild and Dangerous. I thought I had an excellent thing, and when not a damn soul gave a shit or even noticed it was a huge let down… And I don’t think I would even care to do another plot on my own again. So that’s the problem with a long one. A short feud like Tom Flesher Vs Ejiro Fasaki which lead to Ejiro becoming World Champ was a good short one. Man wants title, man gets shot and takes it, man wins, end of story. Same goes with Flesher Vs Wildchild. Too many of those can lead to a bad thing, as we will have nothing but the same crap going, so a good mix of long and short feuds/Angles/Storylines help to really round out the fed. On another subject… but this seems to be more related to me than others, but when I am told that a certain match is not on my radar, but others who shouldn’t even have a radar for it to even be on, are getting the match, it kind of irks me. It seems to be more of a storyline type of situation that puts those people in those spots, but I think that at a certain point and place one should have to earn that match, regardless of their feud or storyline. There will probably be only one person who will actually know what I am talking about since I am being so vague with this subject, so If I confuse the rest, my apologies. I aim not to offend or start a war, I’m just saying my piece like Thugg asked for, then shutting my mouth. Thanks! Im sure this entire post made no sense though, I'm much too tired.

*Sigh* I guess I'll just hang all these number one contenderships back on the wall then.

Z, can we not have the show minus the one match your missing? I was looking forward to reading a few of these matches all night while at work. That and I need all the time I can get to write the next match. I'm the slowest typist the SWF has ever seen!

Im sorry to hear that last line, Grand Slam. I think you have done a great job of booking excellent matches, and been pretty damn fair on the outcomes. Even if I did blow a fuse over one decision... which was totally wacked. *toast* to one of the best damn booking careers coming to a close! Grand Slam's cards will be missed my me no doubt.

Grand Slam. 23rd is Tuesday, are you sure this isn't due Monday the 22nd?

Yeah... he'll lay down for Johnny first. Okay, so maybe he won't but still, the cockroah shall be squashed before he ever gets to Clark.

HHH to Smackdown? What about Evolution, they wouldn't break the group apart would they?

Hey, hey now, Toxxic. Just because it was only one move does not take away from the power of the move. Many have fallen to the MI Slam.... right Rando?

By the way, Toxic, I don't think you have a partner. Liston isn't around.

The only people I'd like to see Benoit drop the title to is Kane or Jerico. But that's only if they build Kane back up as a true force to be reckoned with and not someone Shane can manhandle. Jerico is believable so long as he gets back to his 2000 face-days and not this chicken shit heel that champ that we saw in 02. Other than that, Benoit can keep that strap until the company folds.

I'd like them to stick that title match against Rock in it. You know the one that nearly caused a riot when they though Benoit actually won the belt before we got a dusty finish.

So... Do you think HHH will go to Smackdown now? He hasn't held the WWE Title in a while.

It could be they coughed up the cash for Goldberg and him going over was a stipulation to resign.

... And would we still have Brock had the WM Main Event been Brock/Benoit? Since I didn't get to see this I wonder if the WM 20 DVD will have all the crowd heat on Goldberg/brock or if they will edit it out. Hmm...

Dammit! What other contendership do you have? I don't know if Liston is active or not...we will find out with this match. Da "has to go yell at the rest of CC for a minute" H Uhh... World title, yes thats it. *Gets ready to crack the Grap's neck*

Excellent. Then I shall have 2 #1 contenderships. Title belts here I come!! BTW: Is Liston active? I haven't seen him post in a while... or be booked.

... Did WC request the show off? Blast I was hoping to get in as much W&D tag team action as possible before WC leaves.