Secret Agent

I call opening promo

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Umm, Thugg...

Surely there is more than one promo that was good, Tammo.

Johnny Dangerous Vs Fugue - The one where Fugue makes his surprise return as the JL M7 begins to be formed. Plus not a damn soul would nominate any of mine if I didn't say it myself.

Are you saying we can take cheap shots at King without worry of bans or removal from the fed?

I thought you were on vacation?

Like I told you before, the hell with Quiz until he grows a mustache!!

Although I am sure that this will stand out on it's own one day as a good promo for a chuckle or two... It doesn't compare to Ejiro's. I wouldn't normally compare the two like that, but you kind of did that on your own. Still, it's got some good moments if you don't look at it that way, and I'm glad to see you doing some promoing for Quiz & Show. Sort of anyway...

I liked it, WC. I can get in more depth if you prefer.

Wow. I like this, except for the non-spacing of one charaters dialoge to the nexts. You have one really huge paragraph that makes it a little hard to read because it's all crammed together. On a side note, I like your style, and I think you can be a valuable asset to the JL. I'm anxious to see your match on Crimson. Good Job!

What the heck, Mak? I thought I just did respond to the disection of my match. If you want me to comment then ok: Wildchild promo - I liked this. It was very direct and brief. The only the missing was a DUN-DUN-DUNNNN!!! Thugg/King/Stevens I'll just comment on the entire series of promos for this. First off, I have enjoyed most of the storyline that has been building for several shows now, but was starting to wonder when Grand Slam would come back in. He dissapeared after Ground Zero(I think) and we haven't heard a peep since. The build through the show is nice with King promising that tonight is the night H-Ville Thugg surrenders to him, and then wrestlers pleading with him not to sign dem papers! Why can't any of them go out there and make a stand against King themselves?? They have 2 working legs, and arms. I don't know, but I think I would have liked to see a bit more wrestler interaction. I also know there has been a title tournament going on, but King rounding up his loyal followers to take on Thugg's rebellion would have been fun to see. I see a little bit of it with Flesher/TBS but not too much more. Anyway, the next part, written by Grand Slam I think... was a pretty good read. It was about damn time Grand Slam returned! However, what strikes me as rather odd IS how he came back. King got Lynn fired from her job, canceled Bases Loaded development deal, fired Grand Slam, and Stevens came back because he bought some stock.... Now maybe I have forgotten the charater of "Grand Slam" Mark Stevens, but WHY did he not just beat the holy hell out of King for all that? He had nothing else to loose job wise, so why wait until he could round up some stocks and join up with Thugg. Also, I think you guys could have stretched out the war between King/Stevens a few more shows before making the Genesis challenge for the SWF Commish spot. King seemed to spit that challenge out rather easily. Now, I know all three of you are mods so please don't ban me for all that. That's just what I was thinking after reading all of that. Wheew: more to come after a breather!

Well, Thankyee Kindly! To answer some of your things, Duran: I have been doing a ton of reading lately, and all the books were written in past tense, so I guess it kind of rubbed off. Plus, I wrote my "The Wrestling Identity" in the past tense, and it seemed to go over pretty well, so I wanted to try it out in the match writting department. Comet smacked Bobby Riley in the head for saying that "Oklahoma City was a nice place... "As long as nobody drove a yellow Ryder truck into the arena." It's a slam on Oklahoma basically, talking about the bombing of the Alfred P. Murrah Federal Building where a Yellow Ryder truck filled with explosives was used. Since I live in Oklahoma City, and actually lived through that, I figured I could get away with mocking it. I wonder if anyone got my Michael J. Fox line. A Skrull is an alien shapeshifter from the Marvel Comics Universe. I guess I should take out the super hero referances as nobody but me, or possibly Ejiro would get them. Also, I was just trying out that finishing move to see if anyone liked it. I asked dace about it and he said he never saw it done before, so I *thought* I created a finishing sequence. Hince, I wanted to use it. I'll stick it in rare moves. Thanks for the comments, Duran. Ejiro, thank you too, and yes It was only a 4000 word match. edit by Grand Slam - I loved the skrull comment. Cracked me up actually. The Ryder Truck thing was a bit much though...

Edwin, I'll give you a dollar if you tear into my match.

Uhh... what about Kurt Angle? He can wrestle, AND talk on the stick!

Well, I needed one more match to kill someone in. Then I had planned on promoing non stop every other day until G4. This is fine, King, I'll break up the promo match thing.

Mak, I'd like some on mine, please.

So it's come to this, eh? Four sentences and your the World Champion. I don't know, but I don't think that's any better than no showing the way I see it. You could have at least made a 1000 word squash, but then the two others could have done the same as well. Anyway, As for the English Dragon match... that was pretty swank!

Not to be a dickhead or anything, but I feel that I donate quite a bit already. If not I'd gladly help with this.

... 25. They seem to think I act 12 though.

I fine show it was! I'd like any comments on my match if I could. it's been some time since I wrote one of these, and I'm probably rusty as all get out. Thanks! EDIT: Sometimes I wish WWE shows were this good. If I got something like this show at the Ford Center from WWE, it would be unbelievable. The return of Grand Slam, Justice Vs Rule, Flesher/Double Jepoardy Vs TBS/ Trinity... Anyway you get the point. I would actually go everytime they came here, which isn't all too often anyway.

Did I do that bad on Smarkdown?

Well, I'm not quite as young, but your old and grey compared to me, Dub Cee! Oh, Happy Birthday, Silent. I'm sure you'll no-sell it though.

What, nobody has any intrest in the tournament anymore? At any rate I guess I'll start this thread for the first time ever in the SWF. THE TEMPLATE! Opening Promo - Micheal Craven Singles Match CIA v. Crow No-DQ Singles Match "The Sinner" John Duran v. Annie Eclectic Non-Title Challenge Match Mak "The Franchise" Francis v. Johnny "The Barracuda" Dangerous Hardcore Title Match WildChild © v. Xcalibur Six Man Tag Match "The Superior One" Tom Flesher, Quiz & Show v. Dace Night, Va'aiga and The Boston Strangler G4 Tournament (Loser's Bracket) Semi-Final (Non-Title) "Judge Mental" William Hearford III v. Ejiro Fasaki

What are all the categories? I forgot.