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I agree King. I find it a HUGE letdown when i pour generous amounts of time into a match and i get no coments from it. It makes me feel like i spent all my time writting something and then no one ends up reading it. Why bother? Writting a match that looses is even worse. You write it, and now nobody is for sure going to read it. So to help make yourself feel somewhat better, you post it in a losing matches thread that never gets response to. Lately its gotten a bit better in the JL. There are some that regularly coment, like Ejiro, Judge sometimes if he makes it far enough to my match, and Z every so often. Other than that nobody else seems to really coment much. However i motivate myself in other ways. Like when i pop into chat and everyone tells me im going to loose to So and So, it makes me want to win all that much more to prove them schmoes wrong. Promos are time consuming, at least for me. For me to do a good promo i need to not write a match for one show. Then i can produce ones like my first promo as Johnny Dangerous. Angles are another thing too. Where are they? In the WF i see little Feuds going but nothing really monumental. The IC title seems to have more going for it than the World. I think taking the tw smaller rosters and making one league would fix that. It would be a do or die. Those who put forth the effort survive while those that don't fail. Oh well.
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Since i really didn't follow wrestling all that closely until the summer of 99 i wonder something. I remember seeing Vince McMahon on Jay Leno once and they were promoting a Vince/Shane vs Austin for ownership of the WWF. Did that ever happen and if so what was the results? Austin wins?? AND was that a RAW moment, because that just sounds like an Austin ran WWF would rock my vote.
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::Johnny shoots the state of Ohio:: Anyways, cool card King, but we are back to Ohio. I was trying to get you guys to travel around more, but oh well. It's King's homeland, and he booked.
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Ok umm... JUDGE. You forgot to coment on my match. All i have heard so far is "Damn, you won!"
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We must have a storyline exit for Jack the Ripper! Come on Jack, give JTR a good send off. PM me if you want some help, but at least give a promo for it.
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I wouldn't mind seeing the blood flow.
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What about the wall guy from WcW. Malice or something like that.
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That had to be the show where Mankind did the "This is your life" segment with Rock. Either that or something big happened. I also wonder what the ratings were for the 2001 RAW where Austin won the title back from Angle after a 2 week stint as champion.
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Johnny wearing a clip on tie? Tsk Tsk. Seriously though you put any attempt i thought i had at psychology for my match to shame. That must be where King said were one did well the other excelled. wow...
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Ok so i got have them done. Since quoting seems to rapidly be rising in popularity, i shall convert to that style. Lets roll... Matt Myers with an opening promo Well I thought the opening promo gave an excellent show an excellent kick off. It wraps up a short lived storyline, and shows what the future may hold. I’ll just make a choice quote from it. Had you shown up you might of kept it. Besides you took it from Judge, he took it back. As far as character wise, it gives you something to come back for after his injuries are healed. SPIKE'S PROMO Ok so originally i skipped over this, so i have come back to it by request. I thought this was a pretty cool little diddy, Spike. My only thoughts where it was almost all dialog. I myself prefer bits of action and descriptions of what characters feel, etc. Other than that all was cool. Frost came to give some advice but ending up dishing out absolutly nothing. It humored me well as im sure it was meant to be just that. Good job, Spike! ELIMINATION WINDOW PAIN MATCH “Hollywood” Spike Jenkins vs. Jack the Ripper vs. Insane Luchador vs. Dace Night Dace, Dace, Dace. Looking at the match as a whole this stood out as a well constructed bit of mass mayhem. Also it gives the Window Pane match another notch of goodness. I think Frost would be proud. If only he would comment on this single match *hinthint* Say what? Ok first off I get the general idea that your going for fast paced action but this is almost a Blitzkrieg! It gives a good ‘Jumping straight into the action’ feel, but I think it also confused me a bit on the lack of description. But that’s just me… After reading this segment I found myself rubbing my jaw, imagining how painful that would be. Nice move there. LOL! Spike is a pansy! At any rate, this was a sweet match Dace! I loved the sick finish, it fit so well for this match. I don’t know much about CzW so I can’t say anything like others have. Good match, keep it up. Judge promo puts the crowd to sleep Just kidding. This actually a cool little promo here. It serves it’s purpose well, which is to introduce the basic knowledge that there IS a SJL M7, and Judge is in it! You make intrigue for the other matches by the way you end this which I give much kudos to. Judge RUBS it in bigtime! Man who’s the heel and who’s the face. This is rather amusing if I can say so myself. I don’t see many instances where the face has to get assistance to win. I always assumed faces never loose big matches, they are screwed, cheated, etc. But it was Judge who was screwed… Even if he got him back ten fold. I loved the reaction when Judge drops his robe to reveal his T-shirt, simply cool. Like I said above this was a wonderful promo that begins what could be an awesome angle/storyline, and you end it to where we have to read the rest of the show to find out the rest. Two thumbs up! Wildchild vs. MVS I couldn’t really find anything to quote that wasn’t already used WC. This match was hell a cool! The only part I didn’t really like was the fact that you jobbed again. It makes sense but how many times is Ejiro going to cost WC a match before WC cost Ejiro the European title? Match was well written, high energy, and a fun read! I’ll finish these Comments up later and edit in some quotes for the Wildchild match to the finish of the show. I'm just tired today.
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LAST MAN STANDING European Ejiropean Title Ejiro Fasaki© vs. Insane Luchadore Ejiro to retain his © ELIMINATION TAG Contendership for a European Title Contendership Match Dace Night/Janus vs. Jack the Ripper/James Morin Ohh, this could go so many ways. I look for a break out star to come out of this, or Jack to get back into the heat of writting! SINGLES MATCH "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins vs. Fugue Fugue "FIVE WOUNDS" PROGRESSIVE STIPULATION MATCH; TWO-ON-ONE Non-Title Johnny Dangerous and Wildchild vs. Judge Mental Not that i would make any predictions on my own match, but Johnny D has been waiting for a while for a shot at Judge even if Z thought i needed back up. Whoever wins i think this will be MOTN.
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Yes indeed. Excellent show. I will make in depth comments once i have had a chance to read everything throughly and it sinks in. I second this. You want to improve, well help us improve as well.
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with that in mind... I call the opening promo.
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::wonders what it was that gave him that extra tiny edge to pull this one off::
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The boards have been down, fool.
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The one and only Crimson 11/14/02 thread
Secret Agent replied to Secret Agent's topic in Smarks Junior Leagues
Yup, you got it. I originally modeled Johnny Dangerous to be Johnny Barracuda. His suit, hair, deamoner(sp?) and everything. His boss Sydney Kassle is a cross between Natilia and Sydney. I love me some Danger Girl! The suit Johnny wears to the ring is supose to be like the one Johnny has on in the party scene at the beginning of the second chapter. You know right before the infamous bubble bath sequence Abbey Chase has before knocking out the Peach with a bottle of champaign. So really he doesn't wear a Tux. The others here who only know Bond, wrote him in the Tux, not me. -
Ok so as of the time i write this the show hasn't even been posted yet, but so what! I would also like to make a plea that we continue to make comments on all the matches if we possibly can. People have been doing good at that lately, I just hoped it wouldn't start lacking. Actual comments will come from me for all the matches once the show is posted and i have had time to read it. I'll even coment on any losing matches that get posted as well. I know my thoughts probably don't mean squat, but i know i always love to read someone discussing my match whether they are the best in the fed or not. Thanks, Johnny Dangerous!
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A pretty good match, as said above. The only thing i see here, is try to start sentences off with something else besides somebodys name. There is a ton of Andrew, Wildchild, Rickmen, to kick off every sentence, which makes the match a bit stiff. Also try combining some of those sentences a bit. Other than that i think it was pretty well done.
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OPENING PROMO Matt Myers has a few words to say regarding last week’s show, and his current situation. Will he show? That is the question burning on all of our minds! ELIMINATION WINDOW PAIN MATCH “Hollywood” Spike Jenkins vs. Jack the Ripper vs. Insane Luchador vs. Dace Night EEk. I hate predicting a four way with so many bright writers. It could go either way. Someone could become a breakout star from here, but i will go with the King of the upset... Jack the Ripper. CRUISERWEIGHT RULES MATCH Wildchild vs. MVS The Wildchild to put a Vertebreaker on MVS! SINGLES MATCH Janus vs. James Morin I think James is dead. Janus. SINGLES MATCH Johnny Dangerous vs. ??? Woah is me. All i will say here is the odds do not look good for me. MAIN EVENT WORLD TITLE MATCH Ejiro Fasaki vs. Judge Mental Is that so? Well in that case.. Ejiro to pimp out Judge VEGAS style! Ejiro could do it here. All he has to do is pray Judge gets swamped with homework and the rest is history!
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I hope so, Mark. Along with various other things im sure we will all iron out in the coming weeks. I think this is the first step in the right track, good work my man.
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Time to merge the WF and JL together so we can have one fat roster, until it picks up again in terms of recruits.
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Johnny Dangerous is laid back. Although he's down in the farm leagues.
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The one and only Crimson 11/14/02 thread
Secret Agent replied to Secret Agent's topic in Smarks Junior Leagues
What no comments on my match anyone? Hmph, Johnny is feelingz left out of the inner circle here. Well me and Judge are the only ones to comment anyways. I thought there were at least a few other nice writers here. Maybe not.