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  1. zyon

    SWF End-Of-Year Awards

    The Jayson Grant Memorial Trophy - For Wrestler of the Year Scott Pretzler. Yeah I love the character and everything, but the guy has been in big time matches. He's consistent has been involved in good angles. Rookie or not Pretzler in my eyes has been simply awesome. The Divefire Memorial Trophy - For Comeback Wrestler of the Year ELM. For reasons already stated. The Jay Dawg Improvement Award - For Most Improved Wrestler JJ Johnson and at the risk of sounding egotistical, Zyon (Myself). The Axis Memorial Trophy - For Most Under-appreciated Wrestler JJ Johnson. Very consitent and quite the writer. He just always seemed to be floundering around, but lately with CW title win I can see him get more appreciation if he runs with it well. So far, so good. The Rane Memorial Trophy - For Most Impressive Career Toxxic. I've been here for a short time, but I was able to witness the end of Toxxic and it was great. And from scanning other things of his I'd say he's had quite the career. The Fallen Tag Team Trophy - For Tag Team of the Year Wild and Dangerous. They be breakin records, fool. The Midnight Carnival Cup - For Stable of the Year Revolution Zero. The rap was all kinds of awesome. The Ace of Clubs Trophy - For Heel of the Year Scott Pretzler and Jay Hawke. Pretzler has been praised for his dickish abilities and I think that Hawke is an underrated heel. The William Heartford Trophy - For Rookie of the Year Scott Pretzler. The Grand Slam Trophy - For Face of the Year Toxxic- Face version. I enjoyed his face character cause it seemed realistic. Toxxic wasn't just going "Hey I'm getting cheered lets be your basic baby face." No he slowly edged into the role and by the time he was full face I was cheering for him.
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    SWF End-Of-Year Awards

    The Pay Per View Match of the Year Award Toxxic vs Pretzler. Great match used to as Toxx's swan song. Good storytelling and both men came out winners here. The Non-PPV Match of the Year Award JJJ vs. Scott Pretzler. Great match with the story playing off the my vote for PPV Match of the year. The ending was shocking and I'm pretty much a mark for non PPV title changes. The Feud of the Year Award I'll go Spike vs. Tom Flesher/CC. It may be a cliched angle (Wrestler vs. Boss) but its being done quite well. I went back and read the promo where Flesher absolutely destroyed Spike's confidence and that alone won this angle over with me. The Cyclone Comet Trophy - For Promo Writer of the Year Toxxic and Pretzler for this. Both for being good heels and in Toxxic's case having some good face ones too. The Nathaniel Kibagami Trophy - For Promo of the Year Still to come.
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    Lockdown Predictions!

    The Main Event - SWF Cruiserweight Championship Match Pure Rules "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins vs. JJ Johnson © Match reeks of storyline. I'll say Johnson takes it if so and if its a real match then I have no clue. Devon Walters vs. "The Dean of Professional Wrestling" Jay Hawke © (non-title) Hmmm...I'll take Jay Hawke for the momentums sake. Manson vs. El Luchadore Magnifico ELM takes it. Todd Cortez vs. Marcus Ward Cortez takes the W. The Crimson Skull vs. Ghost Machine Crimson Skull wins it with a super power that is out of this world. TKO (TORU Takahara & KOJI Kitano) vs Ced Ordonez and Steven Brody TKO cause the other is jobber. And Spike gets fined enough to feed a country.
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    Smarkdown Commentz0rs

    Opening Promo. That Jay Hawke is such a bully. Anyway it was a very good segment and Hawke showing that he is underrated in the dick heel department. Oh and that Zyon guy was there too. Crimson Skill vs. Martin Hunt Whino! Some decent action filled with mostly hillarious comedy. The Crimson Skull character is pretty interesting and Heff...is Heff. Ghost Machine vs. Nick Blum Ghost Machine bringing da pain...that is all. Backstage with Zyon and Spike No comment Ward vs. Walters. The hosses collide. Good match with Walters mean streak coming into play. No mercy for Ward. The ending was all kinda of awesome. Looking forward to the rematch. Landon Promo Liking the Landon vs. The World approach. I'm sure this is just the beginning for whatever Landon has planned. Zyon vs. Jenkins. Once again no comment. Beatdown Again no comment...I be setting record with these "no comment" comments. JJJ vs. Pretzler. Yeah this was good. The entrances really gave this match a "big" match feel to it. Pretzler has been in a couple of these lately. Oh and can we say BOXING STYLE INTROS...yeah. Pretzler starts off schooling Johnson in the fine art of the arm drag...fear its power. Loved how Pretzler's match with Toxxic fit into the pyschology factor in this match. Congrats JJJ. Rather this was co written, Pretzler written, or JJJ written, it was good. Many things can happen from here. Cortez vs. Ejiro Nice little rush job here. And the interference added to the match. Storylines were developed nicely. Overall good Smarkdown. Storylines and programs starting as we are on the way to Genesis.
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    Which Puroresu star is YOUR character?

    "You are Dragon Kid. As the protege of Ultimo Dragon, you have some big shoes to fill. Your agility and excitement will assure success." Oh well thats cool.
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    Storm comments!

    Good promo to start a promo filled night. The two characters look awesome with the basic, but excellent dynamic of the smaller guy doing the talking and the bigger guy freightening some fools, word. Good hardcore match. Johnson on a three match winning streak and going strong. Nice cruiserweight-heavyweight stuff along with the hardcore stuff. Good match. Starting of a Danny Williams/Mag feud. Good stuff all around with Mags looking more like an asshole after every appearence. The winner of this feud or match is definitely the number one contender to the world title. Another Walter brothers promo. Once again Mathew does the talking and Devon's nod scares me. Good promo establishing the characters. Next up Landon "You can't touch this" Maddix. Playing the dick heel to a tee and Megan auditioning for South Park. Lovely segment setting up a Genesis match. Another good promo. This one from JJ Johnson who looks to take his streak to the cruiserweight champion. Thats basically the geist of it. Nice little intro to the hardcore title match. Bathroom shenanigans are usually great. Ward defends the title showing how much control he has. Interesting final promo. The Walters brother absolutely owned this Storm. Matthew is slick and Devon is the silent awsomeness. Cortez had little to do with the segment, but what he did do added to it. This promo put the Walters over as well as the Landon/Cortez feud. It was good. Overall good show helped by two good matches and good to great promos. The debut of the Walter brothers ruled and character progression on what could have been a throw away show is always nice.
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    Promo: Naked

    Time no matter what you do, say, or feel refuses to stop for anyone. Realizing this fact is definitely the first step toward recovery yet there are some who cannot accept that their day is gone, and night has began. Surgery to cover the scars and memories to block the pain are used to motivate the person battling time. Tick Tock… Running and running my look at you go. Sadly sooner or later refusal becomes the very thing people say they don’t have, but do. Matter of fact that could very well be a shallow yet factual definition of denial. Denial unlike time can be beaten by mentally challenging yourself to succeed. Yeah, you ran a mile under five minutes. Excellent, you benched five hundred pounds. Awesome, the women love you. Evolution, time, denial they all look down on your so called great physical attributes. Sure you can run, lift, and make women gasp at the very sight of your shadow for crying out loud. But to old man Father Time… You still suck. Now when you come to understand Time with a broken hip and all can still out run, bench, and womanize you. Then you can finally begin to fathom what it takes to enjoy a life to its full potential. However, it still begs the question… WHAT THE HELL DO YOU DO WHEN AT THE AGE OF 22 TIME HATES YOU?? Day four, moderate cloudy with a chance of sunshine. A regular eighty degrees outside and with all things including it’s your plain ole’ Thursday. Pedestrians out and about looking for the first chance they can beat the system by taking a crash and earning a profit from it. Highways filled with the annoying buzz of motors and angry motorists honking their horns like it means something. Workers hard at their labor prays the day gets over quick so they can thank their invisible messiah that it is Friday. Of course we can’t leave out the twenty-one and under crowd. Ya know the kids who walk around all damn day with a chip on their shoulder and a finger on the remote. The true villains in the battle against time. The type who could care less that in the coming years they’ll be wasting away doing there nine to fives wishing they could moonwalk back to the better days. Yeah it’s Thursday. Then there are those who willingly or not get spoiled by the old bastard. No matter what age you are the clock isn’t a factor simply cause they are under the impression they beat time. Smoking evolution in this day and age can be quite the triumph especially during a time where the Earth’s inhabitants are afraid of governments, terrorists, drugs, shadows, black cats, walking under ladders, and of course broken mirrors. Years of bad luck…wouldn’t it be easier to just say your fucked and get on with it. Well the one’s who get spoiled are the same zero’s who gets dropped the hardest. A Danny Williams power bomb doesn’t have shit on this fall from grace. And you know what sucks more. Being reminded of it every second. Ring, Ring, and tired ole’ Ring. A cell phone can be heard going off inside a gold STTTTTRETCH limo. The gadgets owner hesitates to answer already knowing the beginning and being apathetic for the end. Of course somewhere in the commandments it reads… “If thou phone ringith, thou must answer it.” A hand missing wrinkles and aging proves the owner to be quite the youth. The description fits since non other than the “Unique Youth” answers it with a painful twitch. “It’s Zy…Zak.” Even through the tunnel of grace Zyon has been able to keep his sanity and not turn into the character he plays, brother. He has even been able to keep his morals and manners well intact as he listens to the other end. “Hey just called to make sure your doing alright. I mean you were doing great things with that title and defending it like a true champion. Are you feeling alright?” Good lord Ben Hardy has found Zyon’s number. Actually it’s just an old acquaintance hailing from Indiana. The youth still making his road trip back to his home state immediately feels the need to hang up on another one of his memories. The pro wrestler throughout his childhood found many people who would remember him and cherish the moment he stepped in the squared circle, nationally televised. John the caller must feel quite proud he was able to get in touch with his SUPER BEST FRIEND, UBER AWESOME AMIGO, and well you get the picture. Of course the former champ could care less. It’s Thursday and the week itself has been one giant get in touch fest with so called “friends.” Hearing different voices pitch out the same questions can be quite tedious especially on a road trip where your home is a limo that garners the attention of EVERYONE. Then again the other option is staying in hotel after hotel signing autographs for hours on end. It’s enough to make you sick. “Yeah I’m fine. Just a little beat up and a bit disappointed in my performance.” Zyon showing the type of charisma that could get him fired from the job that brought him from nothing to everything. “Oh that’s great to hear man. Dude seriously everyone around here was pulling for you to destroy those two jobbers and come home for a victory party.” The ignorance is astounding. Perhaps Father Time should…eh wishing bad things on others can backfire. Zyon can’t help but clutch his head trying to understand the simplicity of an opinion. Jobber is usually a term for someone who invites piss breaks not jaw dropping entertainment. And most importantly, these people rarely win. Nick Blum almost captured the hardcore title, lasting longer than the champion. And Marcus Ward went home with a shiny new piece of jewelry. He may not appear in a rap video, but rest assured he’s happy. Victory Party??? As stupid as the off hand comment was, the youth hits a rock hard revelation. Removing his hand from his face he blinks through his decent hardcore title reign of all imposing terror…yeah. Sure he defended it well enough, but he soon found himself too caught up in the hype. Words like rookie sensation was being thrown around like petite individuals in a mosh pit. John’s opinion was simply word of mouth for the unknown Indiana native. For Zyon a world renowned name, it was a living. The swank limo itself symbolizes what Zyon’s conscience was spewing. Zyon slowly retreats back into reality ending the conversation… “Hey man got to go.” John never got a chance to say bye….oh well. The SWF employee lays his head back resting against the comfortable cushion. The limo driver doing what he is paid to do, drive and nothing else. For the first time the disappointment has been lifted and time has halted. Toxxic defeated Scott Pretzler ending a heated feud. Afterward the three time world champ shaved his head and said goodbye to a career. Evolution Johnny Dangerous knocked of Ejiro as World Heavyweight Champion. A crowning of a new champion simply cannot be described. Evolution Zyon was dethroned of the hardcore title by Marcus Ward. A devastating defeat? Evolution Ground Zero was a night complete of black and white, but the effects were anything but. Zyon age 22 was brought into the limelight when he was ready to call it quits as a human being. A month later, Zyon age 22 feeling naked without the hardcore title has come to terms with life. For the first time in his SWF and Earthly run Zak Owens has been given the chance to see the light. No he doesn’t see God, Father Time, or Chuck Norris. What the “Unique Youth” does envision is a young man willing to continue. A young man able to rise above the flame and lock his previous run through life as a memorable lesson. For the first time in four days Zyon can finally relax and drift off into a beautiful slumber. Victory through defeat…pretty sweet.
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    GROUND ZERO PREDICTIONS~!

    THE LAS VEGAS CARD Las Vegas Main Event - SWF World Heavyweight Championship Match Ejiro Fasaki © vs. Johnny Dangerous I'll guess Johnny Dangerous. Just a gut feeling. Casino Brawl Landon Maddix vs. Todd Cortez Maddix will win continuing is heel role. It should be close though. Lady Luck is a Bitch - House Rules Match for the SWF Hardcore Championship Zyon © vs. Marcus Ward vs. Nick "The Hitlist" Blum Whoever is not writing the match is the true winner. -=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=- THE LONDON CARD London Main Event - Best of Five Final Match - Canadian Deathmatch Toxxic vs. Scott Pretzler © Toxxic holds Preztler down. Wildchild vs. El Luchadore Magnifico III - This time it's personal! I'll give the nod to ELM. It seems like his heel character could be a big player in the main event scene. SWF International Championship Match - Old School Rules "The Dean of Professional Wrestling" Jay Hawke © vs. Manson Jay Hawke. Manson's capable no doubt, but Hawke is pretty good. JJ Johnson vs. "Hollywood" Spike Jenkins Don't know enough about Jenkins. So I'll say triple J.
  9. OOC: I think this is the best match I've written since being here. I enjoyed using the Mag character a ton. I think I still need to work on description of spots rather than going from spot to spot. But I think this match involved the best description I've done while being here. Near the end I may have went overboard with signature spots, but I want a climatic ending and such. Ending was wrote cause I totally did Mag's heel character and it's been one week. Feedback will be appreciated. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ “Well King our next match should be quite interesting in a number of ways. Zyon and El Luchadore Magnifico have yet to battle it out in the SWF. And last week ELM showed a side of himself that to be honest I never thought imaginable.” Pete says. “Yeah well the Luchadore actually stepped up and proved that he isn’t washed up. Hell I think he is as fresh as ever. And tonight when he destroys that spot monkey who lost last week by the way, I will officially be a part of the luchadore’s fan club.” King says. Pete continues, “Zyon wasn’t the one pinned last week in his first tag match ever in the SWF. As for Magnifico his actions last week will always be remembered as being a dark spot on SWF’s history. I believe the man has truly lost it….” Pete explains. And with that the fans find themselves sitting in the darkness wondering what is going to happen next. HEY HEY!! *BOOM* The intro of Atake FDD’s “Tu Final” is shouted as a burst of red, white, and green sparkles highlight the stage. Smoke clouds the arena as spotlight shines on the evil that has become El Luchadore Magnifico. The man strides down the ramp as the trademark Mexican Flag waves from side to side. His cold eyes staring straight ahead… “And coming to the ring hailing from Mexico City, the one and only EL Luchadore BOOOOO!!!” The fans refuse to let Funyon continue as the jeers outright mute the mic of the ring announcer. The Mexican could care less though as he rolls under the bottom rope and pops to his feet. The lights in the arena slowly return as the controversial foreigner waves his flag proudly. The SWF veteran scowls at his former fans as he carefully hands his flag to the timekeeper. ELM emotionlessly stretches out as he awaits his opponent. “My god, the vibe I get from him is so cold…” Pete mutters. The fans continue to boo until the lights in the arena dim… “I’m Born!” “I’m Alive!” “I Breathe!!” The words appear across the titan tron as SWF’s Unique Youth quickly makes his way out from behind the curtain. Zyon instead of his usual sprint carefully walks down to the middle of the ramp before saluting the great SWF fans. “His opponent hailing from Elkhart, Indiana. The SWF Hardcore Champion, ZYYYON!!! The fans cheering rise to the levels of worship as the youth hops on to the ring apron and flips into the ring. “Vitamin” continues to play as the chorus kicks in. The chorus deserves no special mention though as Zyon skips his usual taunt. Even though he’s young Zyon knows that his opponent is a bit…. unstable. The lights in the arena come back to full force as he unbuckles his belt and hands it to the timekeeper as he catches a dead stare from his opponent. “Weeks ago this would have been a great high flying match for the crowd.” Pete thinks. King though has a different opinion, “But now it is your simple face versus in this case a bitter heel.” Referee Don O’ Connor signals for the bell… DING, DING, DING!!!! Zyon is obviously taking a different approach to this match. His facial and physical expressions say everything that needs to be said without actually saying a word. ELM though continues to show his cold demeanor that first appeared last week while he was choking the life out of his friend…yeah what a friend. The crowd excited as ever starts the match out right… Let’s Go Zyon!! The youth acknowledges the slurring cheers from the stadium that has to have at least fifty percent of its attendees intoxicated by now. The dark quickly swallows the light moment as ELM takes a menacing step toward his young opponent and shows the respect of NONE by whacking him across the face with an open slap! SMACK!!! BOOO!! The fans boo as Zyon was clearly caught off guard by the decline of his opponent’s morals. Of course after seeing what back in the states is attempted murder the hardcore champ should expect worse from the Mexican superstar. Zyon quickly realizing that he could be in the fight of his life GOES TO TOWN on the luchadore! The crowd erupts as right hand after right hand forces Magnifico backwards. ELM quickly finds himself trapped against the ropes as Zyon dispatches phase two in his offensive strike. With a grasp of the three time world champ’s wrist Zyon attempts to whip ELM across the ring. ELM though blocks the attempt by grabbing the top rope with his free hand, as Zyon obviously isn’t one to multi task. The youth stupidly releases his grip on ELM’s wrist allowing the bitter superstar to clean Zyon’s clock with a clothesline! OOOHHHH’s echo as Zyon falls to the mat clutching his throat. Zyon though shows no hint of breathing difficulties as he gets back to his feet. ELM meets him with a right foot to the gut followed by a snap suplex attempt. The hardcore champ though refuses to give in to the angry veteran as he wraps his foot around his opponent’s and blocks said suplex. With the momentum swinging into Zyon’s favor the youth lifts ELM up for a suplex of his own yet the crafty veteran simply spins out of the move and lands behind Zyon. “Both men bringing the counters tonight.” Pete points out. The luchadore forces Zyon into a reverse waist lock and lifts him into the air for whatever a regular fan can think of since Zyon fights back. The youth wraps his legs around the body of ELM and tries to roll through with an incredible pinning counter. The counter though is neither pinning nor incredible since it doesn’t take place. Before Zyon can roll through, ELM lifts Zyon high into the air and drops the youth stomach first to the mat with a reverse power bomb! ELM gets back to his feet drawing the Irish crowd to clap at the talent displayed by both men. King shakes his head, “I thought ELM stepped away from these type of applauses. Hell if he wants a standing ovation all he needs to do is choke another guy out.” The Suicide King though is quickly relieved as ELM looks out into the audience when a look of disgust crosses his face. ELM quickly silences the friendly crowd by taking a step backward and heaving forward with a soccer style punt that connects with the ribs of Zyon! The youth’s eyes bug out as he clutches his ribcage. ELM without any hesitation lifts Zyon back to a vertical base. The Mexican superstar wrestles Zyon who is still catching his breath into a front facelock. ELM with a quick stomp of his foot lifts Zyon up and quickly drops backward with a snap suplex. Zyon sits up into a sitting position as he holds his back wincing in pain. ELM though forces Zyon to the mat and grinds his forearm into his opponent’s face! “Look at this King.” Pete continues, “This is a man who wouldn’t harm a fly if he didn’t have to. Now he is roughing our current hardcore champion up and showing no remorse while doing so.” Zyon’s feet pounds the mat as referee Don O’ Connor has to step in. “C’MON ELM STOP. I’LL DQ YOU!” The ref lay’s the law down as ELM uses what is left of his mercy and pulls his arm away. ELM stands up and shadows the ref’s view as he places his foot across the throat of Zyon cutting off the rookie’s oxygen! BOOOO!!! The fans are ready to wage war on Magnifico as the ref quickly catches on to what is going on. This moment clearly shows that O’ Connor’s law means absolutely nothing to ELM who removes his foot from the throat of his opponent. Zyon pops up into a sitting position trying to catch his breath as ELM lifts him to his feet. The bitter superstar IRISH whips Zyon into the turnbuckle causing his back to slam into the thin padding. Yeaahhh! The fans quietly cheer as the IRISH whip gets cheered for obvious reasons. ELM calmly struts toward Zyon and releases his anger on the youth. SMACCCCCKKK!!! A chop across the chest echoes causing everyone in the arena to WHOOOO in complete unison. ELM snarls at those in the front row for cheering as he ditches the knife edge chop… SMACKKK!!! For a loud European uppercut. Zyon’s head bobbles up and down from the impact as ELM reveals that the sadistic side of his dark personality has taken over. The three time world champ notices a bandage over Zyon’s forehead due to being busted open last week. The luchadore quickly tears the bandage away and latches on to the back of his opponent’s head. “He’s going to use the turnbuckle to open Zyon’s wound he suffered on Lockdown.” Pete explains. “And you know what.” King continues, “It’s a genius strategy. The sight of a superstar’s own blood can easily change how the match pans out. And seeing Zyon bleed is almost as awesome as seeing Wildchild lying limp in the ring after being strangled.” ELM with no remorse throws Zyon’s head toward the turnbuckle, but the youth with not a second to spare forces his foot into the middle rope. This action blocks the attempt to bust the youth open, which in turn causes ELM to panic. Try as he might ELM cannot force Zyon face first into the turnbuckle. ELM desperately tries to back away and regroup, but Zyon fires a weak jab to the Mexican’s gut. The youth then grabs the head of ELM and plays to the crowd for a bit. He even mouths something to the audience before slamming ELM’s head into the turnbuckle multiple times. Each time a certain chant is echoed…and yes it is to spite ELM who recently turned his back on wrestling fans worldwide. UNO DOS TRES CUATRO CINCO SEIS SIETE OCHO NUEVE DIEZ!!! King is confused, “How the hell do the Irish know Spanish???” Zyon skips backwards as a smile creeps on to his face. The youth begins to get the feeling that he is an outer manifestation of what former ELM fans wish they could do to this shadow that looks like ELM. The luchadore slowly staggers backward from the turnbuckle as everything rotates into a trippy motion. The crowd turns into a mass of distorted visions as ELM tries to sustain the reality of what is going on. One of the distorted visions appears on the top rope and leaps into the air. ELM quickly realizes that the vision is his opponent and quickly falls to the ground. Now rather his falling to the ground was a dodge technique or the fact that he momentarily passed out will always be up for discussion. Either way though Zyon crashes into the mat after missing a cross body attempt. The youth rolls under the bottom rope and to the outside as he takes the time to collect himself. ELM though doesn’t give the youth time as he bounces off the ropes and leaps to the outside with a 360 CORKSCREW SHOOTING STAR PRESS WITH A TWIST…OH MY GOD!!! Just kidding. Actually ELM simply stops in front of the ropes and soaks in what he deserves. BOOO!!! ELM smiles as he exits the ring and goes to grab Zyon. The youth though stops ELM with a kick to the gut. The reigning hardcore champion latches on a front facelock as the ref starts his count. ONE TWO THREE FOUR OHHHHH!!!! The fans scream as Zyon is clutching his face while squirming around on the floor. “Did you see that King?” Pete has a brain fart. “Of course I did, I’m sitting right beside you. Honestly what else am I going to do watch these so called people drink themselves to a stupor.” King says taking the time to make fun of the audience. A replay appears on the abnormally special Smarktron showing that ELM was able to push Zyon away causing the youth to turn and smack the ring post face first! Back to live action ELM lifts Zyon up showing off the hardcore champ’s brand spanking new crimson mask. Unlike last week the cut doesn’t take attacks to cause the blood to fester as Zyon’s face looks like a prop straight out of a horror flick. FIVE SIX SEVEN EIGHT Of course ELM will still focus on the cut anyway. The luchadore grabs Zyon and launches him face first into the ring post causing the youth to bounce off like a ping-pong ball. Zyon staggers around bleeding as a couple youngsters in the crowd are forced to look away. ELM cautiously charges Zyon and places his shoulder into the youth’s back forcing the youth to the ground, but not before smacking his face against the steel steps. ELM chuckles toward the front row as he grabs Zyon and rolls him into the ring. “Zyon’s a bloody mess. Where is someone with a conscience to throw in the towel? Cause lord knows ELM’s conscience went up in a blaze last week.” Pete says strongly. ELM looms over Zyon as if he wants to go for the cover. BOOO!!! The fans though convince ELM not to. Way to go guys. The luchadore instead crouches down and repeatedly punches Zyon across the wound. Referee Don O’ Connor once against has to step in. “Damnit! ELM STOP OR IT’S OVER!!!” The luchadore hops back to a vertical base before picking Zyon off the canvas. The Mexican superstar once again hooks Zyon into a front facelock and lifts him into the air vertically. The luchadore let’s Zyon hang upside down as blood begins to pour from his head and down to the mat like a leaky faucet. The fans in the background show their sympathy by covering their eyes as ELM SPIKES Zyon to the mat with a hanging brainbuster!!! The luchadore arrogantly goes for the cover… ONE… TWO… Sudden shoulder up. “Don’t worry ELM it was just a spasm.” King takes a crack at the fighting youth. ELM lifts Zyon back to his feet before locking his hands around the wrist of his opponent and whipping him against the ropes. Zyon bounces back showing the will to compete as ELM launches him up into the air and down to the mat with a back body drop. ELM once again goes for the cover… ONE… TWO…kickout. Zyon still has some fight in him as ELM again rises to his feet. The luchadore goes back to his roots as he perches himself on the top ropes. ELM coldly stares at the mat as Zyon stirs to his feet. The youth staggers trying to keep his balance as ELM flies off the ropes and connects with a missile dropkick to the head. “Looks like even though ELM has probably lost his mind he can still pinpoint an area on the body to attack.” Pete says giving the heel ELM credit. Zyon collapses to the mat as ELM walks up and drops a leg across Zyon’s wide open wound. Zyon pops up covering his face as ELM applies a draining chin lock. The fans usually find things like this boring, but in the shape Zyon’s in a chin lock could do the youth in. Zyon shows signs of life by randomly waving his arms around and maneuvering himself into a worse position on the mat. Magnifico grins sickly as he applies pressure to the rest hold. “Let’s Go Zyon!!!!” The chants start back up as they crowd seems to think Zyon is still conscious. Of course ELM despises the chant itself so he releases the hold. The chant though continues so ELM simply lifts Zyon up and drowns them out with a blistering knife-edge chop! WH…. “Shut UP!!!” ELM turns and shouts. Zyon clutches his chest, but with ELM bantering with the crowd takes the opportunity to place a STIFF forearm to the face of his opponent. The crowd explodes as ELM staggers back surprised. ELM infuriated charges his opponent, but falls into a hip toss. ELM pops right back to his feet though as Zyon staggers toward his opponent. ELM can only dream of the pain he can bring to his bloody opponent, but through the day dreaming comes a dropkick that connects to the face of the luchadore. ELM again is caught by surprise as he staggers back into the turnbuckle forcing Zyon to chase after his opponent. Zyon tries to strike ELM, but his opponent out quicks him and ducks behind Zyon. ELM locks Zyon into a waist lock and throws his opponent back with a release German suplex! However, a bloody Zyon flips backward and lands on his feet. The youth’s legs though can’t hold up as Zyon drops to a crouching position trying to stay away from the daze that takes place when a person loses a decent amount of blood. ELM spins around as his stone stare turns into a fit of rage as he proceeds toward Zyon. The youth though again catches ELM off guard as he shoots himself into the air and wraps his legs around the luchadore’s neck. Zyon then drifts backwards and snaps ELM over with a hurricarana! King is irate, “How can he still do THAT!!!” “Well, I’m guessing his legs are still in good shape even though he has lost a lot of blood.” Pete guesses. Zyon lifts himself back to a standing position as he makes his way toward ELM. The hated Mexican finds himself in the clutches of Zyon who locks on a front facelock. The youth then mimics Magnifico by stomping his foot and slamming his opponent to the mat with a snap suplex. The crimson faced warrior exits the ring and patiently stands on the apron as the crowd is solidly behind the comeback that could be at its peak. After a moment of clutching his back ELM rises to his feet as Zyon springboards into the air, and a look of shock is exposed from under the blood. ELM snaps his leg into the air and tries to knock his opponent out with a super kick!!!! “What the? Hey wait a minute his head should be off of his shoulders!!!” King is a bit dumbfounded. The super kick was thrown at a perfect time, but Zyon simply caught the foot as he landed safely to his feet. Zyon acts before a capable ELM can react by spinning his opponent around and leaping forward. Zyon wraps his arms around ELM’s head and tries a bulldog, but Magnifico counters by lifting Zyon up high into the air and spinning him around before dropping the youth with the La Bomba Fantastica!!! ELM pulls Zyon forward by his legs as a pin fall is attempted. ONE… TWO… TH…kickout. YEAHHHH!!!! The crowd cheers, as Zyon is able to kick out. ELM shakes his head in frustration as he lifts Zyon up and snaps his head back with a few weak forearms. Zyon staggers backward and forward falling into a scoop from ELM who positions Zyon on to his shoulder. ELM arrogantly points at the top turnbuckle pad thinking he has everything under control. The Mexican superstar then takes a few long strides forward before launching Zyon toward the turnbuckle pad with a snake eyes. King brags, “Don’t worry Magnifico fans the lucha superstar has everything under control.” King though has obviously spoke too soon. Zyon stops himself from having his blood stain the pad by grabbing the top rope and pulling himself on to the second rope before ascending one more level. Zyon’s back is facing the ring as everyone in the arena has a pretty good idea of what is next. Zyon, a firm believer in high risk, high reward leaps backwards and corkscrews toward his opponent!! Pete shills, “NO REGARD!!!” Remember how everyone in the arena had a good idea what the counter was going to be. Well that includes Magnifico who dodges just in the nic of time. Zyon crashes to the mat back first as the fans are shocked that the hated luchadore counters the counter. King mockingly shills, No Regard…MISSES!!! Haahaaahahaha.” The youth has lost quite a bit of blood, which is exactly why he has yet to recover from his fall as ELM rises to his feet. The luchadore visibly ticked that Zyon had the gull to attempt a counter. So what does ELM do? Exactly what he set out to do originally. The bitter luchadore lifts Zyon up and directly on to his shoulder as he quickly strides forward and throws the youth face first into the turnbuckle pad. Zyon collapses in the corner clutching his face as random spots of blood can be seen scattered across the ring and on his opponent. ELM admires his work, as Zyon is defenseless as he openly sits in the corner. The luchadore advances forward until he is looking over his downed opponent and kicks him. The luchadore does it again. ELM then sickly looks out into the crowd before unleashing his RAGE on to Zyon with a mudhole stomping, as each kick is thrusted down harder and harder. Referee Don O’ Connor gets between ELM and the fallen Zyon. The ref points his finger at ELM and screams… “HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL Y…” ELM doesn’t allow the ref to finish his sentence as he firmly interrupts him by charging Zyon and putting a sharp knee into his face!!! BOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! The crowd looks mighty offended as the blood and ELM’s hate has disrupted what could have been a lovely spot fest a few weeks ago. Pete is appalled, “King, look at this. ELM…no. He’s not ELM. This man looks to be enjoying the pain he is bringing to Zyon.” “This man???” King continues, “Open your eyes toiler plunger, that MAN is El Luchadore Magnifico…reborn.” The king makes a morbid, but honest point. ELM grabs Zyon by the hair as he jerks Zyon to the center of the ring and gives him a hateful knee lift. ELM’s grip seems to be the only force holding Zyon up as he locks the youth into a punishing abdominal stretch! The former spot monkey holds the current spot monkey in place as Zyon winces in pain. The Unique Youth’s blood drips and cries of pain are muttered from the reigning hardcore champ. And El Luchadore Magnifico isn’t affected in the slightest… “He’s just punishing this kid now. C’mon ELM you proved that you can hurt people. Just stop it.” Pete pleads. King can’t help himself; “You do realize he can’t hear you, right?” “Let’s go Zyon!!!” The fans are screaming as the crimson covered youth begins to show signs of life by squirming and shaking. ELM grinds his teeth, as forcing his grip on to Zyon is becoming quite the problem. Zyon slowly begins to get the upper hand, as ELM’s foot is no longer tangled with Zyon’s. The youth looks ready to counter the hold, but ELM releases him??? The luchadore though would not resort to showing any signs of pity as he kicks Zyon in the temple with a yakuza kick. Zyon falls down to all fours as ELM is once again back in control. The live riot level crowd begins to lose hope, as the blood stains in the ring continue to grow. ELM launches his foot forward in a soccer style punt once again aimed at the ribs of Zyon. The youth though rolls forward allowing ELM’s foot to slice the air. Zyon refuses to stay dead as the zombie like hardcore champ leaps on to the second rope and springboards backward. The Unique Youth moonsaults backward on to ELM and rolls the former three time champ up for a pin fall attempt. “The HALF MOON! Tell me King did it miss? Huh, C’MON YOU GOING TO SAY SOMETHING!!” Pete is definitely biased at this point. The ref dives to the mat wanting to give the youth the win himself, but gives your standard unbiased count… ONE… TWO… THRE….kickout. “Damnit!” Pete says slamming his hand on the table. Zyon’s piercing green eyes look tired, as Zyon’s whole body must be a ball of fatigue. ELM has also taken his share of punishment this match as he slowly gets to his feet. Zyon though is already standing! “LET’S GO ZYON!!!!” The Dublin crowd wants to break the sound barrier. ELM’s facial expressions mirror Satan…if he was pissed off. Zyon though could care less as the youth hustles forward causing ELM to throw a wild clothesline. Zyon easily ducks and stops as ELM turns around right into the youth who locks his foot around ELM’s and goes for the Decline!!! “De…wait ELM just countered!!!” King does some regular play by play. ELM counters by pushing Zyon back against the turnbuckle before he can place is arm across his chest. ELM angry as an ornery bull charges Zyon and for his blind actions eats boot! Zyon literally sits on the top rope as ELM staggers into Zyon like a fish on a reel. The youth locks ELM in a front facelock and spins off the top rope with a tornado DDT attempt!!!! ELM though isn’t one to easily give in as he stops Zyon’s momentum and throws him to a random side of the ring. Zyon lands feet first on to the mat as ELM continues his impression of a mad bull while those in the fans would easily substitute bull for jackass. The bitter ELM again charges and again his rage causes him to take a boot, but this time to the gut. Zyon then hooks ELM into a front facelock once again and flowingly drops backward with an Evenflow Bring Me Down DDT!!!!!!!!!! Pete is just insane, “RIP INSANE LUCHADOR!!!” “No. I don’t care if he’s alive or dead his maneuver doesn’t deserve to win this. YOU HEAR ME ELM!!” Zyon who is shaking uncontrollably from the loss of blood covers ELM, as this would be a hero’s ending. ONE… TWO… THR…kickout!!! SWF is no fairytale. Zyon rolls off of ELM weakly as he pushes himself off the mat and to his feet. Zyon lifts ELM up and directs him into a standing head scissor. “He’s going for the Final Hour. Hit it kid!!!” Pete shouts. The fans rise to their feet as Zyon does the lifting motion, but ELM counters by pushing himself out and latching on to Zyon’s wrist. ELM then scoops Zyon up into the DIA DE LOS MUERTOS!!! Zyon though slides down ELM’s back and spins his dubious opponent around… Scoop… ….AERO DRIVER!!!! The fans explode at the unbelievable counter as Zyon goes for the cover; the fans count along with their fingers crossed. ONE!!!! TWO!!!! THREE!!!!NO! ELM kicks out as Zyon pounds the mat with his blood soaked hands. The youth is left wondering… “This is unbelievable!!” Pete…wait, King says? Zyon again forces him up and waits. The fans are cheering and clapping as ELM pushes himself to his feet staggering. Zyon charges and throws a clothesline, but ELM ducks and when Zyon turns around he locks his hands around the throat of his opponent??? Zyon’s eyes quickly bulge as the opposable thumbs are being pressed into his windpipe!! “HEY REF. REMEMBER WHAT HAPPENED TO WILDCHILD, DAMNIT!!! Pete is pissed. “BREAK IT!!!” ONE TWO THREE FOUR FI… The psycho that is ELM releases Zyon before grabbing the youth and launching him over the top????? Referee Don O’ Connor is shocked as Zyon falls to the floor. “Based on the Cruiserweight addenda…the winner by DQ ZYON!” The fans cheer, but most are puzzled. ELM begins to visibly chuckle and shake before exiting outside the ring and grabbing Zyon. The psycho shoves the youth into the ring. ELM enters the ring as well, but not before grabbing a steel chair though. King is even frightened, “Hey what’s ELM thinking?” Pete knows, “What’s he thinking….NOTHING! The man has LOST IT!!” Zyon drained of all energy thinks it should be over, but the executioner that is Magnifico thinks different. Zyon slowly gets back to his feet as ELM pulls the chair back… “Don’t do it…” Those words are mouthed from most sitting in the audience…and maybe even in ELM’s conscience. However… …He’s too far gone… CRACKKKKK!!!!!! “NO!!!!” Pete yells… ELM shot the chair forward and crushed Zyon’s skull with it. The sick echo frightens many in the arena, as most who were drunk are now sober. ELM’s expression is stone as he drops the chair… ….He’s not done… Zyon’s eyes are glazed over as ELM lifts his victim up. Zyon’s arms dangle at his waist as his legs could be replaced with rubber and you wouldn’t be able to tell the difference. “He’s just dead weight.” King says a bit uncomfortable. The eyes of the luchadore coldly stare into the once energetic eyes of Zyon as the fans do what any person with emotion does… BOOOOO!!! They will not condone ELM. Longdogger Pete will not condone ELM. Suicide King may not condone ELM. People who thought ELM was a hero will not condone ELM. Nobody will condone ELM… …And he could care less… ELM scoops Zyon’s lifeless carcass up into the Dia De Los Muertos. ELM spreads his arms out in a crucifix as many are reminded that god has nothing to do with this. The soulless luchadore pulls his arms back in and swiftly drops spreading his legs out and spiking Zyon’s head into the chair!!! ELM stays seated for a moment before promptly rising back to his feet. He coldly glares at the battered body of Zyon before replaying what he did last week…smiling. ELM exits the ring to silence as a medical team rushes down to the ring… Yeah we need a commercial
  10. Yeah I figured I'd just end up defending the hardcore title. But I posted in the thread just to keep things straight.
  11. I lack plans and stuff. Yep that's pretty much it.
  12. zyon

    LOCKDOWN COMMENTS

    Lockdown starts the way it should...a promo from Darth Maddix. I enjoyed this promo a lot and the direction he is going really adds to his characters selfishness. Oh and this line ruled... "He beat up a robot. Big whoop." sneers Maddix. "Last week, my toaster broke, so I put my foot through it. Does that impress you Ben?" Next up is the tag match. To be honest I haven't seen Manson's portion of the match. Eh no big deal. The headlock getting cheered spot was cool. Kings comments were a joy to read. The ending was cool too, good tag wrestling from the former REV-0 members. Good match. Toxxic vs Ghost Machine was what it needed to be. A good match, but it was pretty much filler. I hope we didn't run GH off, but it looks like he's nothing more than a jobber now. Eh well... The Jay Hawke promo was cool. The actual match stipulations gave me a headache. Will be a fun match, I'm just glad I don't have to write against Hawke in a match like that. Toxxic promo. I wasn't around to know the characters of Jet and Card. I guess it's just the Toxxic character opening up more. Wildchild vs. The good wholesome albeit angry ELM. Great match. The added element of ELM being desperate for a win here adds to the match. A real good match which is what I come to expect from ELM and WC. Wildchild vs. Majin ELM- The heel turn. PERFECT. Really good way to do it. The dude just went psycho, and the whole choking thing worked for this segment. It was awesome, nothing else can be said. I just pity the next guy he has to face I mean that person is in some deep...wait a minute...crap. Anyway it was another good Lockdown. I must say that I dig the heel characters of this fed. The face ones are just as entertaining, but the latest heel turns have been done awesomely.
  13. zyon

    Storm Comments~!

    Opening Promo This was a good promo from Landon. I love how he's playing the chicken heel. All the talking before Cortez's appearing really did play off Landon's ego. And after Cortez entrance the tease of him hurting Landon was cool. Zyon vs JJ Johnson. I'll comment on Johnson's critiques that I can only make sense of. In your stats your entrance does say there is sparks coming from the ceiling and floor, which I had in. It also says there is sparks coming from the ring posts when you get to the ring. I guess I count sparks as pyro of some sort. As for me outstriking you with one forearm. Well it wasn't me outstriking you it was you out smarting Zyon. Cause after you fell you grabbed a chair and blasted Zyon. The question marks were used to point out that something was fishy. As for me outstriking you in other parts during the match, well you can blame Chuck Norris for that (And the face that I'm still figuring out people's characters.) Damn you are right about the Kendo Stick thing...my bad. As for lead pipe-forearm comment. I explained the forearm and as for no selling the lead pipe. The shot came from a fatigued and very weak hooker what can you expect. You could make a prostitute tap out, but I only meant for her to be in the hold for a few seconds. I guess the description led to you thinking she was in it for longer. Reverse hurricarana, yeah its a big bomb thing. But its a signature move so I figured it can get the win, but it can be kicked out of too. Yeah she jumped off the table...damn. Ghost Machine vs. Todd Cortez Fun match all around. Wasn't a total squash, but really put Cortez over as being pissed off. The commentating was also fun as well. The balcony moonsault was sweet. And a robot being set on fire is just great....or is he a robot? ELM Promo Liked the direction this was going in. Nicely written and yet another possible storyline has been added to the SWF. Jay Hawke vs. The Incredible Manson Fun match with a nasty ending. The Hulk music at the end was cool. Not much else to say. WC Promo Ok I'm really getting a peter parker/Mary J feeling from WC and Ejiro's sistser. Good promo keeping with the usual WC/Ejiro sister saga. Mak Francis vs. Wildchild Melissa Fasaki, ok thats her name. Well her involvment in the match added a nice element. I don't know if this was purposely though, but WC came off as an indirect heel with Fasaki getting involved and all. Thats probably just me though. Good match overall. Toxxic Promo...Word Promo that got the point of the series being more about pride than titles. And it being more about Flesher's amusement than anything else. Landon vs. ELM Flag stuff was fun. Liked the heel Landon character. ELM played face in peril most of the match, which added to it I believe. The ending sequence was cool and the match as a whole was a fun read. Pretzler vs. Toxxic Beginning of match is a nice touch, showing that these too are nearing the hatred. Pretzler rules...enjoyed the "boring" beginning. The multiple chants and words from the crowd are fun to read as is "Christ on a Cracker." The ladder spots are great as well. Great hardcore match. Again another good show in my eyes. And the promo's were good as were the matches.
  14. zyon

    SmarkDown Comments

    Yeah I'm definitely new school. As far as the Dragon suplex being a transition move. I don' think I used it as so since then end of the match came soon after. The dragon suplex was definitely a potential move that could have ended the match. But after going back to read the match I definitely could have took more time to sell the move. As for the DDT I guess it matters what kind of way its used in. I also picture WWE/WCW guys being different from SWF guys. I agree the dragon suplex used to definitely be a good finisher, and I can see the reason why people wouldn't want to take the move. But when Regal and more importantly Steven "Lifetime WWE Jobber" Richards kicks out of the move, I guess I don't view the move as completely DEATH anymore. And as for Arn Anderson. I'll admit I don't remember him much as a wrestler, but I'm sure I've seen him get plenty of wins with the spinebuster. Also at least in my opinion I remember AA's DDT not being special at all, as compared to Ravens and Jake Roberts.
  15. zyon

    SmarkDown Comments

    Thanks for the feedback WC, and I'll try to explain some of your critiques to try and make more sense of some things. Thats just a simple way to say the fans are cheering. I probably could have worded it better. Yeah after learning my mistake (Two posts down) I definitely could have worded it better. I'm not really sure what this means, I'll get back to this later. Yeah I can see where your coming from here. But Zyon easily would have been counted out if Cortez not rolled him back in. And Zyon's offense after the spot at least for a little bit was a forearm and an arm drag. I guess I have a twisted sense of timing of when a wrestler has recovered from a move. I'll work on it. The nitpicking is perfectly fine. To be honest agree with your comment about King. I actually tried to write another match cause of my mistake by having King be too much of a jerk and other pacing issues. As for Cortez putting his foot on the rope. I figured beat down or not that is the easiest way to break anything, rather it be submission or pin fall. I find it harder to push 200 lbs lying on you off than simply lifting your leg and putting it across a rope. Yeah your right about the Cyclone. I wanted to add the word modified in the match somewhere, but just didn't have enough space to add one word, again my mistake to pacing. As for the heavy bombs, I'm not really sure what you mean by that. I'm guessing you mean it was too spot tastic. And if that's the case I don't know. My character is one who wrestles a spotty style, but I don't think it was nonstop action with both guys hitting signature after signature. Then again I could be wrong and maybe you could point specific things out. I hope I made some sense of the critiques you had. But I really do appreciate the feedback.
  16. zyon

    SmarkDown Comments

    Opening Promo The Scott Pretzler character is right now my favorite. I enjoyed his promo and the way he calls Toxxic his friend one moment and then threatens him with the Snowflake Clutch the next is quite sinister. Also the little jab at "Proved You Wrong" being grammatically incorrect won me over. Griffonosity vs. Triple J...osity. The early miscommunication with JJ and Jay was a nice touch. Banning elbow comment got a laugh. The wish thing was definitely a hoot. Overall good tag match. Triple J would make a good team. All Flashbacks. I say that I enjoyed all flashbacks and really set the tone for the World Title match. Add that with Ejiro's real life problem and I thought we had the World Title changing hands. Zyon vs. Zack Malibu. Now I'm guessing Zack didn't show and even if he did he probably sent a rushed match. So I'm glad I won, but if given the chance I would have definitely wrote the ending different with Landon interfering or something. Also for pretty much everyone that reads my matches. Win or lose if you see a flaw in my matches or know anything that could make my matches better please don't hesitate to tell me, thanks. Johnny Dangerous vs. Mak Francis Nice fast pace match with a great finish. Got done what it had to. I got really nothing else to say. Toxxic vs. Scott Pretzler. Ok I was enjoying the hell out of the beginning. I will say that it would have been cool to see these two in a total hardcore war against each other as opposed to their gentlemen's hardcore match. Anyway Jenkins return is awesome since I came in a week before he got fired I think. So I will enjoy learning more about his character. The whole return was nicely done taking both the heel and the face out. And Flesher even made an appearence. This match had everything...well everything but an actual match. Ejiro vs WC First of, mark out for boxing style opening...check. Really good match with great wrestling between the two. The ending was the next best thing to a clean finish since it builds torward another exciting angle. ELM vs. Danny Williams Match was great. Arm work was a nice touch especially since is must really hurt ELM mentally knowing he did the smart thing and still felt the wrath of the Axe Bomber. The end really put the move over as a legit finisher. Overall good Smarkdown with plenty of development. Can't ask for anything else.
  17. zyon

    The New SWF AIM Screename Thread

    I think my name should be added to the wrestlers list. As for screenname cerozero0.
  18. zyon

    Smarkdown 7-11 Predictions!

    MAIN EVENT - Three-Time World Champion Classic, Vol 3.0 El Luchador Magnifico vs. Danny Williams Rules: Standard. Word Limit: 6000 ELM wins it evening the series up. PURE RULES - SWF World Heavyweight Championship Ejiro Fasaki © vs. Wildchild Rules: Standard, with Pure Wrestling addenda - each wrestler has three rope breaks. A wrestler loses a rope break when he throws a closed-fist punch or uses the ropes to break a submission hold. If a wrestler with no rope breaks left attempts to use the ropes to break a submission hold, the rope break is of no effect and the submission stays on; if he throws a punch, he is disqualified. Word Limit: 7000 Hmmm, I'll say Ejiro. SUBMISSION MATCH - SWF World Cruiserweight Championship Toxxic vs. Scott Pretzler © Rules: Standard, with cruiserweight addenda, and the stipulation that the match may not end with a pin - countouts and disqualifications are in effect, but the only clean way to win is by forcing your opponent to submit. Word Limit: 6000 Pretzler wins the first match and retain the CW title. SINGLES MATCH Johnny Dangerous vs. "The Franchise" Mak Francis Rules: Standard. Word Limit: 5000 Dangerous with a win heading into PPV. SINGLES MATCH Zyon vs. Todd Cortez Rules: Standard. Word Limit: 4500 That one guy. TAG TEAM MATCH Arch Griffon and Manson vs. "The Dean of Professional Wrestling" Jay Hawke and JJ Johnson Rules: Standard. Use the tag ropes. Word Limit: 4500 I'll say the team of triple J...osity.
  19. zyon

    SWF Storm Comments

    Toxxic/Pretzler promo. I enjoyed it, and I can see how Toxxic is slowly becoming a little bit more gullible considering that he is not only dealing with a former stable mate, but is dealing with a friend perhaps. So Toxxic's trust lies in the right direction I guess character wise. Todd Cortez vs. JJ Johnson. Well the testicle attack seemed quite painful and having it done in BOLD TEXT made it seem worse. The Riot Act Plus through a table would have been insane, but the counter did just fine. The way Cortez was put through the table was nice. The finish was what it had to be and the match as a whole put both men over as some tough people. Pretzler Interview. "The Critic" channels "The Game" here as he feel absolutely no regret for taking a title that was handed to him. He then though unlike the real life superstar actually explains an accurate statement on why he deserves it. Pretzler brought the heel heat by barely giving a damn about Insane Luchadore's death. To be honest I absolutely enjoyed this promo and after seeing how cool and calm he is around his "friend" Toxxic and then to see this promo of him being a complete dick is fun to watch. ELM/Toxxic promo. Promo that got its point across nicely. For somebody trying to turn to the light side Toxxic's only real friend(s) are on the dark side....Interesting. ELM vs. Austin Sly First a foremost I enjoy the "kick chair in opponents face" spot, so bonus points. I'm not really familiar with the SLY character, but him taking it to ELM was a neat surprise. The paper spot was pretty funny. The ending I believe would have made more sense if ELM was a heel, but I enjoyed it non the less. Zyon promo... No comment. Ghost Machine vs. Ejiro I'm sorry, but having Zangeif appear was the greatest thing ever, period. The rest of the match just does not matter. (It was good, albeit short, but good non the less.) Martial Law promo. The promo was well done and the Darth Maddix heel turn should be cool to witness along with the Martial Law feud. King's nacho bit was quite funny. Wildchild promo. Nice little promo with Melissa comepletely no selling Johnny. This is leading somewhere cool I think...yes I use cool a lot. Pretzler vs Toxxic II I would have marked out if the match was called two minutes in because Pretzler bit Toxxic's ear off. Anyway good match with Toxxic's demons being a nice backstory in the match and yes Pretzler is just an asshole...and it's awesome. The finish was good as it proved that even though Pretzler didn't stay with the gentlemen's agreement, it proved that he is indeed on Toxxic's level. Lets see where the two go from here. WC vs. Jay Hawke vs. Zyon. Now the match that will obviously get the most comments from me. First and foremost excellent match. WC got the Zyon character down pretty well. The early teaming between Zyon and WC was fun to read. Hawke staying in the fight and being the wildcard was nice since he was the submission expert out of the bunch and stuff. Zyon and WC saving each other from Hawke's clutches was good. Loved the announce table spot. The crowd bit was great as I also like crowd participation in the matches. One critique is the nip up after the Snap. I am glad you followed the move description to a tee, but I think nipping up after going through the match that Zyon went through was something that just stood out at me. The finish of the match out of character I enjoyed. But in character at least for me it was a bit of a bummer. I guess I didn't really see Wildchild as a submission wrestler and having Zyon tap out in his first loss kinda hit me by surprise. I'm not really disappointed or anything since you described the tap out nicely as like I pointed out earlier going through a match like that could definitely get a guy to tap out. I guess the finish kinda came out of nowhere in my case, but don't get me wrong I am ok with the finish and everything, and character wise it showed that Wildchild knows a thing about submission counters and it should help him against Ejiro who lives on that stuff. Overall it was a very good show and found the increase in promoing to be a very good thing.
  20. Yeah my word pretty much only highlights spelling mistakes and sometimes grammar mistakes, but most of the time it won't really give a way how to fix it. Don't get me wrong I know how to use word and for that matter I know how to use grammar and stuff relatively decent, not like I don't have a clue or something. Like I said my run on problem is a little bit cause of my not total understanding of grmmar (Commas, and stuff) but I may just not pay attention to the fact that I am indeed writing run on sentences. I think about a spot and I write it and sometimes I'll just type and type, still conscious enough to know to add in periods and some commas, but admittingly sometimes I'll miss things because of my style I guess. Oh and Hawk yeah I guess I overlooked the rareness of the Hawk Swoop cause of the style I talked about above. And since my match loss, technically it still hasn't been used.
  21. Yeah I've came to an understanding that I have a run on sentence problem. I find it harder to find these run ons when writing wrestling matches as opposed to other creative writing. But yeah I've always had a little problem on where to insert commas and semi colons and such. English classes at my school aren't big on grammar marks like commas and such. Its my fault thugh cause when I write a match and go back a re read I usually focus on spelling mistakes, spacing, and rather or not the sentence makes sense as opposed to rather or not it keeps going and going. I'll just have to read my matches more carefully and hope I don't start adding a comma after every other word now. Oh and I know that when reading my match on the boards that some of the spacing between the action and commentating is wrong. I guess that happens when I transer my matches from word to the boards, so just ignore that mistake.
  22. Well here's mine. And its pretty scary that there are quite a few similarities to my and WC's match (I loved the announce table spot in both matches.) But yeah comments and suggestions on how to do better would be appreciated. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “This episode of Storm has just been flat out fantastic” Longdogger Pete starts, “And now it is time for tonight’s main event.” “Pete you would be correct and the winner of this hardcore extravaganza will be in line for a World Title shot, expect it all to be laid on the line tonight.” Suicide King gives his opinion of the main event. The crowd anticipates what could be a classic as the lights dim… The oh so familiar “Learn to Fly” by Punk Floyd blares across the stadium as the hated International champion walks down to the ring ignoring the boos that follow. “How can they boo this man, he should be not only cheered but should also be celebrated.” King announces slightly annoyed at what he is hearing from the crowd. Jay Hawke continues his stroll to the ring as the audibly loud… “HAWKE SUCKS!” “HAWKE SUCKS!” ”HAWKE SUCKS!” Chants fill the stadium. Hawke simply ignores what he could view as simpletons as he gets on to the ring apron and wipes his black boots across the very same apron. After some arrogant boot cleaning Hawke enters the SWF ring and slowly removes his robe while admiring his past work that is being displayed on the Smarktron. “Jay Hawke could be a little out of his element here tonight.” Pete says. King just shakes his head in confusion, “Pete you immensely underrate the INTERNATIONAL CHAMPION, please give him the respect he deserves.” Back in the ring Hawke has disrobed and shows off his physique before retreating back to a random corner in the ring… “I’m Born…” “I’m Alive…” “I Breathe…” The words blink on and off on the Smarktron as if they had the attention to induce vomiting. “Vitamin” by Incubus is played over the PA as the fans after a few seconds of sitting rise back to their feet as SWF’s “Unique Youth” walks out with his Hardcore title. Zyon stops at the top of the ramp and stares off at the thousands with a big ol’ grin across his face. “Now this guy…he just deserves to be pissed on.” King expresses. Pete though retorts, “C’mon now be fair you know as well as I do that all competitors in this match have recently been on a roll of some sort.” “Yeah well he STILL deserves to be pissed on.” King no sells Pete’s retort. You stare at me like I'm a vitamin. On the surface you hate, but you know you need me. I'll come dressed as any pill you deem fit. Whatever helps you swallow truth all the more easily. Zyon runs down the ramp and energetically leaps on to the ring apron and then mockingly wipes his shoes off before flipping into the ring and going directly into his headbang/arm raise taunt that gets the crowd to simply explode with cheers. Zyon soaks in the cheers for a moment before going back to his corner… The cheers though are forced to continue as “Let’s Gets Dirty” screeches across the PA causing everyone around the world to cheer a little inside. “The Bahama Bomber” one half of the SWF Tag Team champions come out to the fans still on their feet. Wildchild walks down to the ring slapping a few hands on his way as he quickly enters the ring and goes back to his corner while pumping his fist toward the crowd getting a surreal amount of cheers for it. The lights in the arena come back on as Funyon enters the ring… Pete starts to mark out, “Oh man boxing style intros.” King can only make fun of him, “WOOOO, boxing style intros YEEHAW!” “Introducing first from the Hall Of Fame City of Cleveland, Ohio and the reigning SWF International champion, JAYYYY HAWKEEE!!!” Funyon announces. Jay Hawke takes his title off and raises it in the air to a chorus off boos and words that would make a sailor blush. Funyon continues, “His opponent hailing from Elkhart, Indiana the current SWF Hardcore champion, ZYYOOONNN!!! Zyon almost mimics Jay Hawke by taking his belt off, but he obviously gets a much different reaction. And finally, “Their opponent coming to us from the Bahamas, and on half of the SWF World Tag Team champions of the world, WILLLDCILLLD!!! Wildchild already had the belt draped across his shoulder so he quickly just points at his title and takes the cheers that are almost automatic at this point. Funyon casually grabs all three title belts and makes his exit towards the timekeeper’s table leaving referee Viktor and the three competitors to do their thing. A hush falls over the stadium as Viktor takes a deep breath waves his hand toward the timekeeper… DING DING DING!!! It has begun… Jay Hawke, Wildchild, and Zyon all makes their way towards each other in a circular fashion as the Ukraine fans rise to their feet and begin to mentally place their bets… SMACK! The first blow goes to Jay Hawke who levels Zyon with a right hand who comes back with a right forearm. Wildchild then inserts himself into the brawl by running up from behind Zyon and taking him down with an elbow smash. With Wildchild turned away Jay Hawke then quickly rolls his opponent up looking for what some would deem as a cheap win… “He’s going for a cheap win.” Pete says. See. ONE…quick kickout. Yes the roll up did catch Wildchild off guard, but there is just no way that the “Bahama Bomber” is going to lose such a big match to such a small move. Wildchild gets to his feet at about the same time as Jay Hawke and stuns the International champ with a kick to the gut followed by a leaping scissors kick that does not connect. Wildchild though lands on his feet only to be taken down by a sleeper hold drop that was applied by Zyon… “What does Jay Hawke have in his hand?” Pete wonders… “Pete are you seeing things again, I told you opium is bad for your vision.” King explains. Pete though is definitely right as the “Dean” attempts to whack Zyon with a lead pipe that he must have had hidden in his robe or something. Zyon though sees it coming and ducks the oncoming shot and then sweeps his opponent to the ground before jumping into the air and crushing the skull of Hawke’s with a double knee stomp. “Kinda ironic that the technical wrestler out of the group is the first to get a weapon.” Pete jabs at King. King uses the cop out, “Hey it’s legal so don’t give me that smart attitude.” While Hawke rolls around on the ground clutching his face, Wildchild has exited the ring and reaches under the very same ring and pulls out a trashcan full of toys for the sick and demented. Wildchild rolls the trashcan into the ring and goes to follow only to be stomped just as he enters by the Hardcore champ. Zyon then empties the trashcan letting the fans have a look at weapons such as the kendo stick, staple gun, miniature stop sign, and the list just goes on. Zyon reaches down to pick the kendo stick up, but before he can grab it Jay Hawke rises to his feet and takes out Zyon’s right leg. King is amused, “Yes my man Jay Hawke bringing the wrestling to this garbage match.” Before Hawke can continue the attack though Wildchild walks up and kicks Hawke right in the chest with the backing of those unforgiving shin guards. Hawke’s air leaves his system as he doubles over allowing for Wildchild to lift Hawke up and dump him on top of the trashcan with a simple body slam. “RAAAA!!!” The fans cheer as Hawke clutches his back as he rolls off of the trashcan. Zyon is back on his feet as he makes his way toward the “Human Hurricane” and is immediately met with a hurricarana that snaps Zyon over with ease. Wildchild follows up the cruiser attack with a 360 leg drop across the throat of his opponent of same age. Wildchild then lifts Zyon up and whips him into the turnbuckle. Wildchild though doesn’t come charging in with his magnificent speed. Instead the “Bahama Bomber” grabs the trashcan and then charges at his opponent…only for Zyon to get his foot up and kick the trashcan into the face of his opponent… “WHOOOAAA!” The fans cheer as the trashcan hitting face is echoed across the stadium. Zyon turns and sees his opponent down so he attempts to bring the flash by performing a split legged moonsault, but Jay Hawke is all NO POBO and stops Zyon causing the youth to be crotched across the top rope. Jaw Hawke then maneuvers Zyon into the tree of woe leaving the “Unique Youth” defenseless. Hawke looks to inflict pain on to his opponent, but before he can Wildchild is back on his feet and he simply kicks the “Dean” in the back of his head and then takes him down with a reverse DDT on to the trashcan! “OHHHH” The fans cheer as Hawke’s head bounces off the trashcan. King comments, “That no good sneak attacker, the least he can do is face Hawke like a man.” “But King,” Pete adds, “This is not only a hardcore match, but also a triple threat match. Ya know all men are at a disadvantage when it comes to being attacked from behind.” Wildchild then sees Zyon in his trapped position and smiles. Wildchild then places the trashcan across the face of Zyon and calmly makes his way back to the corner as the fans rise to their feet. Pete is frightened, “This cannot end well…” Wildchild then sprints forward performing a handspring and then leaps into the air and places both feet into the trashcan kicking it back into the FACE OF ZYON!!! “OHHHHH” The fans cheer as Zyon falls from the tree of woe motionless for a second before clutching his face in agony. King smiles, “Well payback is not only a bitch, but also a pretty hefty hospital bill.” Wildchild looks to want to go for the cover, but Hawke is back to his feet and ready to go. Wildchild charges his technical opponent and leaps for a cross body, but Hawke in one motion counters with a snap power slam on to the S…T….O….P sign. Hawk stays on for the cover… ONE… TWO….kickout. Wildchild knows there is just too much on the line to…well stop. Hawke though now has his point of attack targeted on the “Bahama Bomber.” Hawke lifts Wildchild up and lifts him into a side slam position, but drops on to his knee with a painful looking backbreaker. Wildchild rolls off of Hawke’s knee as Zyon tries to get to his feet, but the “Dean of professional wrestling” remembers his focal point on Zyon. Hawke grabs a kendo stick… SMACK!! Zyon falls back to the mat clutching his leg/ankle region after a stunning shot from a Jay Hawke kendo stick. The not hardcore expert drops the kendo stick and calls a mental audible by grabbing the trashcan lid and looks to nail Wildchild with it. Hawke comes forward and thrusts his right hand with the lid towards Wildchild who ducks and runs to the opposite ropes and comes off with a cross body that connects this time. The wild one though rolls off the cover and exits to the ring apron where he springboards just as Hawke is to his feet and STUNS HIM DEAD with a flying forearm smash. Hawke is knocked back into a turnbuckle where his center of gravity becomes unstable causing him to fall down into the bottom turnbuckle. Wildchild then exits the ring and grabs a steel chair and once again enters it. The “Bahama Bomber” then sets the chair up on its legs as he takes a few steps back before launching into the air looking to hurt his opponent. Zyon though limps forward and gets in front of Wildchild and then leaps into the air as Wildchild begins to descend and takes him out from the air with a spectacular “Cyclone” hurricarana that is not followed by the cover however. “YEAAHHH!!!” The fans cheer for the move, as does one announcer… “That was incredible!” Pete says… King decides to hold his tongue as he and his partner watches the match. Zyon then rolls to the outside and on to the apron and waits for Wildchild to get back to his feet. When he does Zyon springboards into the ring and takes one half of the Tag champs down with a missile dropkick. Zyon rises to his feet and turns…RIGHT INTO A CHAIRSHOT from the now standing Jay Hawke!!! King scoffs, “That’s what he gets for getting in Wildchild’s way earlier.” Pete simply adds, “That was just a nasty chair shot…oh god he’s bleeding.” That is right the “Unique Youth” once again finds himself to be wearing the crimson mask as he lays on the mat staring into the lights. Hawke with chair in hand makes his way toward Wildchild with the same intentions on his mind. Wildchild is back on his feet, but with a glaze looked in his eyes as Hawke charges and gets ready to swing the chair, but Wildchild simply slides under Hawke and takes him down with a quick side slam that causes the “Dean” to lose the chair. Wildchild turns defense into offense as he lifts Jay Hawke up and whips him into the ropes and takes him down with a signature leg lariat. “Bo-hama Bo-mber CLAP CLAP CLAP!” The fans bust out an interesting chant for Wildchild as he grabs a steel cookie sheet that was just lying around and waits for Hawke to get back to his feet, which he does pretty swiftly. Wildchild swings the metal sheet toward Hawke, but can’t follow through as Hawke kicks Wildchild in the gut and strips him off his weapon. Jay Hawke then uses the metal sheet and smacks him in the back with it for reasons that are obvious. Hawke swings back and once again comes forward and gives Wildchild another shot with the steel sheet except this time to the back of the head. Wildchild falls to the mat, which allows Hawke to place the “Bahama Bomber” into an excruciating camel clutch!! King announces proudly, “He’s going to tap, I can hear his back snapping!!” “I got to give it to him,” Pete continues, “Hawke has weakened that back on Wildchild and with Zyon pretty much blinded by his own blood this could mean a world title shot for the “Dean.” “Damn right!” King fires back. Back in the ring Jay Hawke has Wildchild right where he wants him as he continues to pull back arching the back of Wildchild who refuses to tap even through the requests of Viktor. “Don’t’ Tap!!!” The fans chant as in the corner Zyon starts to slowly get to his feet, as the sight of his own blood does absolutely nothing to him since he’s seen it a lot lately. Zyon then comes off the ropes and dropkicks…Wildchild in the face with a basement style dropkick. Before anyone can react negatively though Zyon gets to his feet and with kendo stick in hand brings the pain by smacking Jay Hawke across the head with not one, but two shots before the International champ decides to let go of the hold. Hawke rolls out of the ring as a bloody Zyon follows. Hawke backs up into the ring post and finds himself trapped as he begs off. Zyon just wickedly smiles and looks to kick Hawke in the gut, but Hawke was ready and catches the foot. Zyon then with the bad ankle goes for an enziguri, that Hawke dodges causing Zyon to smack his ankle across the steel post!! King is overjoyed, “Did you see that Pete? Hawke tricked him not once, but twice, fricken brilliant!!” Pete is a little bit confused, “King are you…marking out?” King shrugs the comment off, “Of course not…” Before Hawke can inflict any more damage to the downed youth, Wildchild makes his presence known as he gets on to the ring apron and surprises Jay Hawke and the crowd by hitting the International champ with a diving bulldog! Wildchild turns Jay Hawke over on to his back and goes for the cover… ONE… TWO… Kickout. Before Viktor can get ready for a three count Hawke finds someway to kickout. A bloody Zyon pulls himself back to his feet only for Wildchild to grab the limping cruiserweight and tosses him into the safety barricade chest first, and he follows by tipping Zyon over the safety barrier into the hordes of SWF fans. Hawke who is back on his feet charges Wildchild who is taunting the crowd, which gets the usual cheers. A fan actually warns Wildchild that Hawke is coming so the “Human Hurricane” promptly turns around and back body drops Hawke over the safety barrier into the crowd that absolutely hates him. Wildchild then grabs a steel chair from the timekeeper’s table and sets it on its legs. “What is he doing?” Pete wonders. As Hawke and Zyon get back to their feet they both look to attack each other, but they don’t as they turn…and their eyes grow. Wildchild sprints forward and leaps off of the chair before flipping over the safety barrier and on to his opponents knocking a few fans down in the process… “Holy Shit!!” The chant echoes across the stadium… Pete speaks, “Ok that was just awesome and please for those watching do not try any of this stuff at home.” “Yeah” King adds, “Cause if you do I’m sure that these people won’t treat you like Wildchild and will probably be quite pissed you knocked their beverage out of their hand.” Wildchild is the first to his feet as he raises his arms causing the fans to go insane as he grabs Hawke and they go up the stairs toward the upper part of the stadium that has been transformed thanks to the SWF. As Wildchild and Hawke make their way toward a level area where the fans are having to be held off by security, Hawke begins to awaken from his stupor and nails Wildchild with a stunning knife edge chop before throwing him face first into a steel rail. Wildchild staggers backward into Hawke who then maneuvers the “Human Hurricane” into a reverse DDT, but modifies it by dropping Wildchild’s back across his knee. “Hawke, you suck!!” A rabid fan speaks out as Jay Hawke just ignores the negativity as he sits Wildchild up and places a knee into his back multiple times before lifting him up and placing him in a standing dragon sleeper modifying it so he can place the point of his left knee into the spine of Wildchild’s back. “He’s going to tap right in front of his fans.” King states Wildchild tapping. Hawke continues to apply the pressure, but Wildchild refuses to tap but does not refuse to move as he continues to squirm and try to get free. Hawke quickly gets sick of the squirming and releases the dragon sleeper and spins his opponent around and slams him on to the concrete with a belly-to-belly suplex. “YEEEEEE!!!” “The fans are cheering???” Pete is utterly confused. “Yes!” King continues, “It’s about time he gets the respect he deserves.” The “Dean of professional wrestling” looks at the crowd confused that is until he turns around and looks up to see…Zyon on a balcony!! The blood covered youth without hesitation leaps off the balcony and lands on a shocked Jay Hawke with an INSANE cross body!!!! “WOHOOOOAAAA” The fans cheer, as Zyon obviously can’t stay on Hawke for the cover as he clutches his ankle while Hawke simply tries to understand what just happened. Wildchild is in the back trying to lift himself up and does, but not before clutching his back as he exits behinds the black curtain and comes back with a steel chair wrapped in BARBED WIRE!!! “Who in their right mind would just leave that lying around????” King wonders. “YEAAHHHH!!!” The fans explode as Wildchild waits for one man to rise with the patience of an assassin. Zyon stays on the ground clutching his ankle as Hawke starts to show motion and soon he is back to his feet. Hawke with hate in his eyes looks to take advantage of Zyon’s prone state and does by placing the Hardcore champion into an ankle lock!! Pete could see the end, “Oh man Zyon is going to have to tap…” Pete could possibly be right as Hawke applies the hold and quickly applies a dreadful amount of pressure while Zyon can only scream in agony as he slowly raises his hand in the air. However, before Zyon can tap Wildchild steps in front of Hawke and slowly raises the steel chair wrapped in barbed wire. “Oh fuc…” Hawke mouths as Wildchild bring the chair down and strikes down Hawke with vengeance causing the International champ to fall to the side, bleeding!! King is pissed, “How could that bastard do that, oh no he’s bleeding.” “But King” Pete tries to explain, “This is a hardcore match remember, this is much different than an Olympic match or showing rookies the ropes.” Wildchild drops the chair and looks to cover Hawke, but Zyon trips the “Bahama Bomber” up. Zyon then gets to his feet and dodges a leg lariat from Wildchild. Zyon who is now behind Wildchild grabs him in a waistlock and takes him over with a German suplex and tries for the bridge… ONE… TWO…ankle gives out. Zyon’s ankle gives out on the bridge causing Wildchild to have Zyon in a pinning predicament… ONE…shoulder up. The pin was sloppy and not well done at all. Wildchild and Zyon both get to their feet as Zyon makes Wildchild eat forearm and then lifts one half of the Tag champions up and drops him with a fall forward slam that effects Wildchild’s back in ways that pepper spray effects criminals. Zyon then limps over toward a railing that keeps the crowd away from the action and performs a “Half Moon” moonsault on to Wildchild…and stays on for the cover!!!! ONE…. “This could do it.” Pete mentions… TWO!!!! Shoulder up. Wildchild does not give up though as he gets the shoulder up. Zyon then lifts Wildchild up and pushes him down the stairs that lead them to that portion of the arena. Wildchild keeps his balance for a second, but soon he trips and falls backward rolling down the stairs in a seriously NASTY fashion. Wildchild at the end of the bumpy ride hits the safety barrier back first before falling to the side. Zyon then grabs the barbed wire chair still wrapped around the head of Hawke and chases after Wildchild… Which begs the question, why didn’t he pin Hawke? Rookie. Zyon cautiously descends the stairs and makes it to the end rather quick as he tosses the chair over the safety barrier and goes to lift Wildchild who takes a page out of Zyon’s book by catching him off guard with a European uppercut. Wildchild then leaps forward and tosses the “Unique Youth” over the railing with a “Freefall!!!” Pete marks out, “FREEFALL, over the railing!!!” “I must admit that was pretty cool, but I’m sure that took quite a bit out of Wildchild too.” King makes a good point. Wildchild slowly makes his way over the railing as Zyon is up and staggering toward the other side of the ring. Once Zyon gets to where he wants he turns his bloody face around and waits for Wildchild who runs and leaps off of the steal steps and looks for a hurricarana, but Zyon takes a step back and KILLS Wildchild with a modified spinebuster on to the steel SWF ramp!! Zyon goes for the cover… ONE!!! TWO!!! THRE…break up. “Where did he come from???” Pete wonders aloud. King backs his earlier claim up, “I told you to respect this man!!” The man that King is talking about…Jay Hawke. The bloody International champ was able to break the pin attempt with a leg drop from the safety barrier. Jay Hawke then lets his inner cruiserweight take over as he leaps back on to the safety barrier and as Zyon gets up flies off with a blockbuster that snaps Zyon’s neck on to the steel. Hawke quickly rises to his feet and looks to now attack Wildchild who is on his feet leaning against the safety barrier. Wildchild though pops up and grabs Hawke by the head and slams him bloody face first into the safety barrier. Wildchild continues his assault by then whipping Hawke into the steel steps back first… SMACK!!! The steel steps echo as Wildchild then lifts Hawke up and rolls him back into the ring. Wildchild then gets on to the ring apron and of course springboards into the air and tries a frog splash on to Hawke…that connects!!!! “OHHHH!” Well he did connect, but it was with the knees. Wildchild rolls off of Hawke’s knees as he clutches his gut. Wildchild rolls back into the turnbuckle and pulls himself up. Hawke charges and eats boot for his trouble. Jay Hawke staggers backward as Wildchild must take to the air again as he pulls himself on to the top rope only for Hawke to charge and crotch Wildchild on to the top rope. “DENIED!!!” King happily states. Hawke then grabs the dented trashcan and places it down where he hopes for Wildchild to land. Hawke climbs up after Wildchild… “YYYYEAAAAHHHHHH!!! Pete says, “Oh no…. not a ladder.” “I guess if Zyon wants to win he needs something from his element!!” Back in the element, indeed. Zyon grabs a ladder from under the ring and sets it up right next to the ring on the side that Hawke and Wildchild is on. Zyon climbs the ladder, noticeable favoring the right ankle as he climbs. Hawke tries to hook Wildchild into a superplex, but before he can Zyon is on the ladder on the outside and is kicking at Hawke with the good leg. Hawke begins to lose his balance as the weak, but effective kicks land on to the body of Hawke. One kick goes high and hits Hawke square in the face letting Wildchild then push Hawke down on to the trashcan back first!!! “YEAAAHHHH!!” The fans cheer as Hawke falls on to the trashcan denting it even more. Zyon now climbs a few rungs so that he is above Wildchild. The fans rise to their feet as the youth is obviously planning something. Zyon then with little to no hesitation leaps off of the gigantic ladder from the outside and on to Wildchild wrapping both legs around the “Human Hurricane’s” head and dropping him with an amazing outside to inside hurricarana!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh my gawd… “HOLY SHIT!!!” Chanted loud and chanted proud. Pete is in awe, “That was INCREDIBLE!!!” “I knew it!!” King adds, “The kid simply just doesn’t know any better.” Zyon who has one knee on the mat throws his arms to the side and taunts the fans who’s cheering is on riot levels. The bloody youth rises to his feet and limps toward Wildchild and goes for the cover as Viktor starts the three count… ONE!!! TWO!!!!! THREEEEEE….nope!! Before the three count Zyon is pulled off by Jay Hawke who then puts Zyon into an ankle lock and this time with a heel hook!!! “Oh No!!!” Pete exclaims. Zyon buries his bloody face into the canvas as he yells at the heavens. Hawke applies the pressure, which is evident from the veins popping out of his body. Zyon lifts his body off the mat and rolls toward the ropes, but Hawke keeps the hold on as the fans are very into the match… “PLEASE DON’T TAP!!!!” The fans cheer as Zyon is actually able to roll out of the ring…BUT Hawke somehow still has the hold on. Out on the floor Zyon is right in front of his fans who are practically begging him not to tap. Zyon continues to bury his head into the ground as the air in the arena has definitely changed. The place was rocking from the cruiser hardcore spots they were witnessing. Now the place is rocking over what could be a technical finish in a hardcore match. Pete is with the fans, “C’mon you can hold on!” King on the other hand, “What do you mean his ankle must be severely screwed up, he’ll tap.” Zyon once again raises his body from the floor and tries to power out…and he does!! That is for a second until Hawke just reapplies the hold and continues to add the pressure as Zyon raises his hand once again… AND AGAIN Wildchild is there for the rescue as he runs against the opposite ropes and launches himself over the ropes that are facing Hawke and Zyon. Wildchild then comes crashing down on to Hawke with a flipping missile dropkick that causes the technician to FINALLY break the hold. Wildchild then lifts Hawke up and walks him toward the announcers table… Pete is scared for his life, “Ugh…King what do we do???” “We stand our ground…see ya!!!” Suicide King ironically values his life as he quickly leaves the table, as does Pete, but their mics are still attached. Wildchild smashes Hawke’s face into the steel post, which allows Wildchild to clean the table of monitors and other stuff. Wildchild then attempts to place Hawke on to the table, but the “Dean” fights back with a jab to the rib and then a knee to the back of Wildchild, which leaves the “Bahama Bomber” open as Hawke goes for the “WING SPAN!!!” The deadly submission though is quickly countered as Wildchild backs Hawke into the steel post causing his grip to form into nothing. Wildchild then tosses Hawke on to the table as on the other side of the ring Zyon is now visibly on his feet…well at least on one of them. “What is Wildchild planning???” King is now the one wondering what is going on. Pete answers, “Well whatever it is, it can’t be any good for Hawke or our table.” Wildchild gets on to the table with Hawke and then kicks him in the gut and hooks him and FINISHES HIM with the devastating “WILD DRIVVVVAAAA” through a TABLE!!! “Holy…” Yeah you know what they’re chanting. It’s about that time where the announcers MARK DA FUCK OUT!!! “OH MY GAWD, HAWKE IS DEAD!!!” Pete announces. “OUR TABLE…HAWKE….OH MAN!” King lets out some words. Wildchild takes a breath and rolls Hawke over on to his back and goes for what HAS to be the three count… ONE!!!!!!! TWO!!!!!!!!!!! THRRRREEEEEE…could it be? Match NOT over. “Zyon is able to break up the pin.” Pete says trying to catch his breath. “Our table…” King mutters. The bloody “Unique Youth” and the “Human Hurricane” start to brawl with Wildchild getting the advantage after a kick to Zyon’s could be busted ankle. Wildchild then backs Zyon into where the steel steps are and hooks the Hardcore champ into a front facelock and then lifts him up into a suplex, but Zyon counters as he flips out and lands on to the steel steps feet first. Zyon then clubs Wildchild’s hurt back and hooks him into a front face lock and launches himself off the steel steps and looks to drop Wildchild with a modified tornado “Bring Me Down” DDT, but Wildchild swings the body of Zyon around and positions him on to the ring apron. The athletic Wildchild then leaps into the air and kicks Zyon right square in the face!!! “Gamengiri, King!!!” Pete announces the signature move. “Yes Pete I know,” King continues, “And yes I know is almost DECAPITATES HIM!!” Yes it seems King is over the announce table now, but you must love the Longdogger impression. After the “gamengiri” Zyon falls on to the apron and rolls back into the ring, which gives Wildchild the moment he needs to pin Jay Hawke…who is nowhere to be found! That is until he is found on the other side of the ring pulling out a table… “Has Jay Hawke lost his mind?” Pete asks. “Of course not,” King adds “He is simply adapting to the match that he is in, and you know what I hope he beats these spot monkeys at their own game.” Hawke slips the table into the ring as he and Wildchild both enter it. The SWF ring is stained with blood and all sorts of weapons as Wildchild rushes Hawke and goes for a left forearm that Hawke counters into an arm bar attempt…which Wildchild COUNTERS with the “Caribbean CUTTAAA!!!” Wildchild rolls on top of Jay Hawke as Viktor does his job… ONE!!! TWO!!!!…shoulder up. Wildchild honestly though he had it there as he just shakes his head. While this happens Zyon limps over to the table and sets it up in the corner hoping for someone not named “Zyon” to go through it. Zyon turns around and comes face to face with the “Human Hurricane” who kicks Zyon in the gut and then runs to the opposite ropes and leaps into the air taking his opponent down with a furious “Whiplash!!” “That could do it right there…right there King!!” Pete screams… “I know, I know.” King answers. Wildchild though opts to not go for the cover as he goes to climb the top rope, but not before clutching his back. Wildchild though toughs it out and ascends the turnbuckle and looks to fly on to Zyon, but before he leaps he notices Jay Hawke who stumbles toward the perched “Bahama Bomber.” Wildchild leaps off the ropes and onto Hawke with what looked like a double ax handle, but Hawke slips through the ax and locks Wildchild into a belly-to-belly performs the throwing style of the move as Hawke sends Wildchild into and through the FRICKEN TABLE…OUCH!!! “OHHH…Shit!!!” The fans cheer in their language Wildchild just got broken through the table back first. Hawke staggers back to his feet and stares at his handy work before turning…”SNAP!!!!” “SNAPPPPP!!!” Pete exclaims. “Pete would you please calm down, Jesus.” “Look at the ring,” Pete continues, “Jesus has nothing to do with this carnage.” Hawk is down on the mat clutching his chest as Zyon gets to his feet and sets the ladder he had earlier up inside the ring! The fans rise to their feet as Zyon ascends the ladder and literally after every rung he clutches his ankle. The “Unique Youth” though continues to climb and stops about three rungs away from the top. “What is he up? Pete questions…AGAIN! King though has the answer, “Let me put it to you this way, I’m getting some serious flashbacks from 13th Hour.” Zyon grabs his ankle, but soon the pain goes away as every single person in the stadium is on their feet. Zyon can’t help but admire the view as he grabs the top of the ladder with his hands and after a few small bounds slingshots himself over the ladder and looks for the LEG DROP OF ALL IMPOSING DOOM!!! It misses… “Oh no…” Pete mutters. “Oh YES!” King sure isn’t shy. Zyon is motionless on the mat after going for it all as Hawke crawls over to Zyon and slowly starts locking Zyon up…”WING MOTHER OF GOD SPAN!!!” “No…look King he isn’t even fighting back.” Pete sounds saddened. “It’s because he can’t.” King says with a grin. Viktor lowers and listens for Zyon to mutter words that associate with giving up… AND AGAIN!!! Wildchild gets to his feet and staggers over to Hawke as quickly as possible and kicks the “Dean” until he releases the hold. Hawke soon lets go as Wildchild lifts Jay Hawke up and begins to LOCK HAWKE up with what looks to be the “WILD RIDE!~~~” “YEAHHHH!!!” The fans cheer as Wildchild has Hawke up, but can’t deliver the move since his back is too weak and Hawke is able to counter as he floats over into an amazing bulldog counter. Wildchild’s back just couldn’t sustain the weight it was holding. Hawke gets to his feet and makes arm motions that say, “It’s over!” Hawke then goes to the top rope and faces toward the crowd readying the deadly “Hawke Swoop.” “Hawke turn around!!!” King screams? We soon find out why as Zyon with ladder in hands is on his feet and he simply tosses the ladder into the back of Hawke who then tumbles over the ropes and to the ground smacking apron and steel steps on his way down!!! The fans cheer and chant as the two fan favorites are left in the ring. Zyon goes over to Wildchild and lifts him to his feet and kicks the “Bahama Bomber” in the gut and goes for the “Final Hour” but Wildchild counters by pulling himself up and European uppercutting his opponent back into the turnbuckle. Wildchild then grabs the Kendo stick and… CRACK!!! Yes that is an action. The Kendo stick snaps on impact as Zyon’s head floats backward. Wildchild then grabs his opponent and places him on the top rope and goes to climb up after the Hardcore champion. Wildchild then puts Zyon head into a head scissor as he faces toward the ring and looks out into the crowd as it hits everyone…. including shilling Pete! “SUPER WILD DRIVER!!!” Pete exclaims. Wildchild goes for the double underhook portion, but then Zyon pulls a…well Wildchild and pulls himself out and then brings the LEGALIZED CHEATING with a low blow to Wildchild. Zyon then weakly pushes Wildchild off on to the ladder below causing the “Human Hurricane” to land face first on to the ladder. Zyon then perches himself on to the top rope as the fans rise to their feet. Zyon lets his hurt ankle hang off the ropes purposely… ONE LEGGED FINAL FLASH…OMG!!!! Zyon hits the finisher on to the back of Wildchild who just had all the air driven out from him and more injury to his back. Zyon then flips the wild one over and goes for the cover… ONE!!!!!!! “Could he…” Pete stops. TWO!!!! Jay Hawke rolls back into the ring… THREE!!!!!!!!!!! But he is a second too late!!!! Funyon doesn’t dare enter the ring, “And your winner, ZYON!!!” The fans rise to their feet and applaud as they should as the three competitors gave it their all. “Classic…” Pete mutters. King doesn’t dare argue. The camera pans on to the ring covered in blood, sweat, weapons, did I say blood? “Well what a night, for Suicide King, I’m Longdogger Pete thanks for tuning in…fucking amazing.” You get one last look at the carnage… Fade To Black
  23. “Romania…never thought I’d end up here.” A thought is expressed. The thought is coming from non other than Zak Owens AKA Zyon. One of the newest editions to the SWF locker room is out on this day having a bite to eat and just enjoying the fresh air. Zyon’s meal is a simple peanut butter and jelly sandwich that can easily be finished in less than a minute, but the 22 year old is in no hurry. His choice of liquid for this meal would be his favorite pop, which is Sprite. “End of the World Tour, huh?” Zyon questions the road schedules tour name since in his case this is anything, but the end. This is most definitely the start of a new for the former Indy journeyman who would never had seen the western side of the United States let alone the other half of the world. With a quick slurp of his pop Zyon finds himself enjoying the silence of the area he has stationed himself currently. No cars… No criminals… No factories… Just peace. The man who earned the title “Patron Wrestler Of Athens” thinks back on the world that he came from. A world that was totally different from the current one he lucked into. This world was one of growing up without a family and witnessing countless crimes that he wanted absolutely nothing to do with. Then One day… “Yo Zak come with me to get a pack of cigs.” A gruff voice from the past echoes. Zyon at the time was a confused teen living on the streets cause he simply had no place else to go and nothing to do. He was also involved with the right kind of people who had minor flaws that involved robbery and murder…nothing too tragic. Yeah these were the right people, no doubt. Zyon at the time was a simple follower and he did just that, and like a flash it was over. The teen he went into the nameless store with was shot dead right in front of his face over a pack of smokes. Was it worth it? Eyes wide open and gasping for breath the flashback teen version of Zyon was soon abducted by the police. While riding in the white and blue vehicle the youngsters face was cleaned off all red residue while the shock had not yet settled in. Before you could say “home” that is what exactly the youth was given. He was taken from the streets and thrown into an educational system that involved the one thing that Zyon loved…sports. At the time there were no ESPN passion commercials that got teens into sports. It was either desire or a lack of anything else to do. In this particular fifteen year olds case it could be described as both. Well in no time Zyon known better then as Zak found himself participating in any sport he can get into while actually staying academically eligible. The streets were gone, but no road is paved in gold. After graduating Zak Owens found that he either had to go to college or enter the work force. During Zyon’s high school years he found himself being trained in the art of pro wrestling so the college and work force option was quickly thrown away. And with those options gone, back came the streets. As todays Zak Owens bites into his sandwich he can’t help, but twitch at what happened to him after graduation. Yes he was able to get quality wrestling training for free, but he had to do without everything else. Sure he found shelter in others homes and practically lived off those he could describe as…acquaintances. Ever since the age of 16 a hole was in the soul of the now “Unique Youth” and even as he worked the Indy’s the hole stayed. Never having enough money to get anything can do that to a man. Then one day… “Zak Owens?” 22-year-old Owens was having a meal…the only thing he could afford. He was approached by mysterious men in suites, no not the C.I.A. The men quickly introduced themselves as agents of a widely popular wrestling franchise… WW…ok I won’t even go there. “SWF” Those are the initials that the men worked for and then like the saying goes…”He was offered an offer he couldn’t refuse”…or something like that. “You will be working the opening match…impress us.” The past speaks again… “Ugh…ok.” A confused voice answers. *BLINK* And with a twitch Zyon found himself staring off into space while he was approached by…children??? “Ugh…. hmmmm…. Mr. Zyon, sir…” A voice basically whispers. Zyon gets to his feet and looks down on the two children who can’t be above the age of twelve. Zyon is momentarily stunned at the fact that these two complete strangers know who he is… “Wait a minute…” Zyon thinks to himself as he has a sudden flashback… “You will be expected to work house shows and weekly television events that will be broadcasted around the world…” A voice from the past explains. Zyon once again finds himself back in present day and now understands what is up. “Yes…” Zyon says with an overly friendly tone. The kid’s eyes grow as they are obviously shaking in their tennis shoes. “Could…. you…well…. could you sign this for use???” One of the kids can barely get out. Zyon looks down and sees the kid handing him a black shirt with the letters SWF printed on the front. Zyon grins and gladly accepts the shirt and pen that is handed to him. “Sure, no problem.” Zyon says as if he is a veteran at this kind of stuff. Zyon places the pen in his right hand and casually signs his name on the shirt. The youth then gives the shirt and pen back to the two younger than him as the boys silently celebrate and then leave, but not before saying… “Thank you.” And with that the strangers were gone and Zyon finds himself once again alone, back in his element. With such a lightless past the Zyon of today involved in the limelight, has a question that only others can answer for him. “Am I famous???”
  24. Edit: A lot. Moves, stats, style, entrance....etc. Look it over. Preliminary Question: I found Smartmarks when looking for wrestling commentaries that I enjoyed reading, and then found the e-fed on the boards. Smarks Board Name: Zyon Real Name: Zak Owens Wrestlers Name: Zyon Nicknames: (The) "Unique Youth" Height: 5’11 Weight: 200 lbs Hometown: Elkhart, Indiana Age: 21 Face/Heel: Face- Laid back with a love for competition. This love for competition may have the youth coming off as a bit arrogant. Stable: None Ring Escort: None Weapon(s): Ladder- Loves to experiment with these. Quote: None as of now. Looks: Long stringy brown hair. Easily goes over his eyes. He mostly wrestles with his hair drenched in water. His eyes are still that mystical green color, think Sephiroth from FF7. Upper attire consists of a T-shirt with a giant Z on the front. Opposite color rules are in affect. Example: Black shirt, white Z. Lower attire consists of baggy jean shorts ranging from blue, green, black, khaki, cream colored, etc. Shoes are a regular black athletic pair. Other features include faded scarring hidden throughout his body and a youthful look that gains appreciation from the female audience. Ring Entrance: The arena goes black as the words “I’m Born”, “I’m Alive”, and “I Breathe” alternate on the Smarktron. “Vitamin” by Incubus kicks in as the crowd immediately goes into a frenzy. After a moment of build the young Zyon emerges through the curtain, and pauses at the top of the ramp. Zyon scans the excited audience before busting out an innocent grin as he sprints down the ramp. Zyon leaps on to the ring apron before flipping into the ring with a simply leap and twist of the wrist. Once in the ring, Zyon energetically performs a simple head bang before lifting one arm into the air ending the entrance. (Note: Change ring entrance as you see fit if the wording doesn’t exactly fit your style and add the Funyon stuff anywhere you like.) Stats: Strength: 3- Not the strongest guy, but can lift those long enough to his a slam or quick suplex. Speed: 10- Zyon’s greatest strength. Since the back injury Zyon has taken a new approach to wrestling. He’s decided to stop holding back since every match could very well be his last. Also SWF’s high priced workout machines have helped Zyon’s conditioning and quickness. Vitality: 5- A bit above average toughness, well conditioned, but his back is a weak point since the initial injury. Charisma: 2- Has the ability to talk, and may throw out a good promo once in awhile but he lets his in ring work tell the story. Style: Not much has changed since his run before the injury. He still loves to fly, and will use his speed to cut down his opponents. However, since the injury Zyon has let go of all drawbacks and has mentally prepared himself with the fact that every match could be his last. He’s a bit more spotty because of his mindset, but he still continues to TRY and wrestle with the technicians. Also since the injury Zyon has gotten better with strikes. Yes, he’ll never be a brawler but the term scrapper suits him just fine. While he was out with the back injury, Zyon studied film to try and chop his rate of screwing up his spotastic offense in half. Signature Moves: Half Moon: Moonsault that can be performed after spring boarding off of…anything. It could be ropes, steel guardrail, steps, chair, pretty much whatever. No Regard: Glorified corkscrew body attack from the top rope on to a standing opponent. Zyon will usually run up the ropes instead of climbing on to them, and maybe as a counter to being thrown in the air he may if lucky land on the top rope and be in position. Aero Driver: Scoop slap into a piledriver, otherwise known as the Juvi Driver. Just to add a little flash to the move Zyon will perform a quick spin before spiking his opponent to the ground. This move has been known to catch some opponents off guard and could possibly give Zyon a win if he’s lucky or if the opponent is really fatigued. Decline: Reverse Russian leg sweep, otherwise known as the Flatliner that Kanyon used, not the maneuver that Jarrett and Hasan uses. Springboard Forearm Smash: Zyon goes out to the ring apron and springboards into the air using the top rope. Zyon pulls his right arm back keeping it at about the same level as his chest. Keep left hand forward while he kicks his feet through the air. Before he reaches his opponent, Zyon pulls his right arm forward and blasts his opponent with a charged forearm smash. Basically AJ Styles springboard forearm smash if you have ever seen it. Dawn: 450 Splash. Will go for the cover if able to. Can be done off of a springboard as well. Dusk: Double jump split legged moonsault (Credit Triple J Industries). Zyon springs from the second rope to the third rope before dropping down and letting his legs clip the top rope sending the youth in a flashy moonsault. Snap Brainbuster: Vertical brainbuster where Zyon lifts and immediately spikes the opponent into the mat. Zyon has not mastered the move to give off the visual that he just killed his opponent, but the opponent takes quite a bit of damage and will probably wake up the next morning with a headache. Powerbomb: Done only to cruisers. Zyon follows through with the move not allowing the opponent to drop until he has been slammed into the mat. Comparing it to Eddie Guererro’s quick powerbomb would be efficient. Wicked Cutter: Move starts with Zyon holding his opponent with his left arm in a reverse front face lock, think reverse DDT position. Zyon will then use his free arm and the rest if his body to twirl said body putting the opponent’s throat across his shoulder, and then dropping down with a stunner. Mikey Whipwreck’s whippersnapper in other words. Common Moves Snap: Zyon’s front dropkick to the chest that is followed up by a kip up if he is able to perform one. Has been used more recently as a momentum changer, but can still be used offensively as well. Forearms: Zyon’s favorite strike. One doesn’t pack too much power, but many in succession can get the opponent reeling. Ranas: Any type of rana you can think of. Springboard, top rope, reverse, and using a rana to counter a move is not out of the question either. Suplexes: No he is not a suplex artist, but he can dish them out. Quick less strength using snap suplexes are his favorite. Textbook vertical suplexes are cool too. German suplex with bridge is lovely too, as well as belly to belly. Zyon is capable of tiger, dragon, and full nelson suplexes but he usually doesn’t bust them out unless the opportunity arises. Outside of ring dives: Zyon’s doesn’t wear a mask, but is capable of plancha’s that make lucha libre competitors blush. Corkscrews, suicide dives, flips all comes with the package. His favorite though is a simple dive over the top rope that mimics the Swanton’s motion, and ends with Zyon smacking the opponent with his shoulder blades/back. Top rope moves/Springboards: Guillotine leg drops, moonsualts, flying headbutts, corkscrew attacks. Don’t forget the opponent can be standing as well, which would bring in Missile dropkicks, flying clotheslines, top rope cross body. Slams: Textbook body slam and power slams are go in this category. Others are front slams and maybe an over the shoulder running powerslam, but that would only be done on cruisers. Guerilla presses are obviously out of the question, but tilt a whirls are not. Dropkicks: Standing and basement two footed dropkicks are included. Others would be enziguri, low dropkick to knee, running corkscrew dropkick. Elevated basement dropkick: With the opponent sitting in the corner, Zyon latches both hands on to the top rope, and lifts himself into the air. Zyon uses the momentum to swing backward gaining momentum before swinging forward and placing both feet into his opponent’s chest. Breakers: Back breaker, knee breaker, and gut busters accompany this field. Be creative with chest and gut busters since Zyon like to soften up the front if possible to make the Final Flash more devastating. Tilt a whirls are in affect. Knee to head: With his opponent slouching (standing) in the turnbuckle Zyon will sprint forward leap into the air and place both hands behind the opponent’s head while he simultaneously drives his knee into the opponent’s face. Roughneck strikes/holds: Zyon is in no way a brawler, but because of his size he may have to resort to scrapping. So if he is in a bind he will use eye rakes, headbutts, chokes, pull the hair, and in worse case scenario a low blow. The fans usually don’t boo Zyon for these actions since they understand that the definition of face and heel doesn’t matter when you’re on the receiving end of an ass kicking. Other strikes: Sharp kicks to the hamstrings, elbow smashes, closed fists. Low, middle, and high kicks. Roundhouse, spinning back, and leaping wheelbarrow kicks apply to Zyon. Flash Kick: With his opponent doubled over, Zyon will perform a standing moonsault sending one of his feet into the opponent’s face. Guile’s flash kick from street fighter only without the wave the sometimes follows. Submissions: Yes even Zyon knows a few submissions. ARM bar, Arm BAR, ARM BAR, arm bar. May also bust out a single legged crab cause god knows grabbing the other leg would be too much technical work for Zyon. He can do restholds like hammerlocks, chin locks, and head locks but he doesn’t like to rest if he doesn’t have too. If all else fails Zyon will find a limb and pull on it until he either hears his opponent tap out or until he hears a snap, crackle, and pop. Rare Moves: Imperfect Design: A sloppy crippler cross face that should only be busted out in submission matches or rules that apply submissions being the way to win. Fallen Angel Legdrop: Ladder usage only. Climbs ladder almost all the way leaving a run or two open. The youth will then grab the top of the ladder and shoot himself over the ladder and drop down with a suicide leg drop. Not necessarily rare since it is a favorite, but it can only be used in ladder matches. Final Hour: A spike cradle piledriver causing the opponent on impact to either crumble or bounce a couple inches off the ground. Used to be a finisher, but Zyon has evolved a little with his move set. When busted can easily win a match, but can also be kicked out of. Sky Twister Press: Zyon starts off by facing the crowd. He then performs a moonsault while transitioning in the air into a 450 splash. Basically a crisp Phoenix splash performed with the users legs tugged in. Blitzkrieg’s WCW finisher if you need a resource. Game Over: The RARE move that puts the opponent down. You get hit with this, and it should be over. Heavyweights are safe from this unless Zyon can some how get them on his back with help from the ropes or something. Anyway the move goes as followed. Zyon lifts his opponent into a reverse fireman’s carry position (Torture rack) and elevated his opponent with the hand that is closest to the head. He uses the other hand to spin his opponent; all while Zyon sits down driving his opponent head first into the mat. Basically a Burning Hammer except the opponent is spiked in front of the user not to the side. Finishers: Final Flash: A beautiful yet destructive Swanton Bomb on to the opponent. Zyon starts by obviously diving off the turnbuckle and when he is completely vertical he slowly starts to tilt downward like a vulture flying down on to its prey. Zyon lands shoulder plexes first instead of just flopping on to his back. The move is done to perfection and can be done on higher objects than the top turnbuckle. Still the primary finisher. 911 Aero Driver: Sheer drop pumphandle Juvi Driver. Zyon places the victims near arm in between their own legs. He then pulls his opponent’s wrist backward trapping it against their own knee. From there Zyon lifts using the trapped arm for leverage before spiking the opponent head first into the mat. The same thing as the 911 Juvi Driver. Blitzkrieg Spike: 720 DDT. Springboard on to the ropes and while in the air Zyon turns and looks at the audience. He comes off the springboard with his back to the opponent before twisting back toward the victim. While in the air, Zyon hooks a front face lock and the moment causes both men to twirl into a 360 where Zyon drops the opponent with a spiked DDT. Not an ultra RARE move, but it is a finisher that doesn’t need to come out every match. Feel free to write Zyon screwing the move up as well since it is a difficult move to master. Same as Jody Fleish’s 720 DDT Bio: I’ll put one down sooner or later.
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    One and Only "ECW: One Night Stand" Thread

    The PPV was cool, and I honestly think that it will have changes on the WWE. Not huge by any stretch, but a couple changes that could turn the WWE to a wider audience like those at the PPV. Now a couple things did cross my mind... Could Vince possibly sign Joey Styles. I mean sure Styles would have to drop the swearing, but he shills just as if not better than JR and he made some good wrestling calls throughout the night. I bet Vince loved the shoot comments rather than hating them. I really could see Styles as the replacement for JR or whoever as long as Styles would be up for the job. The Awesome vs. Tanaka match was fun, but was JBL really amazed at them. I did notice that he seemed to be having fun and cheering when each man kicked or out, but was he enjoying the match or was he enjoying the fact that two ECW wrestlers were beating the crap out of each other doing what JBL and others calls garbage wrestling. I think his reaction could go either way. As for Awesome or Tanaka joining the cabinet...I doubt that just cause Awesome already had a run in the WWE and did nothing of note, and I don't see Tanaka as a WWE guy. Now the Heyman and RVD shoots were awesome. The Heyman shoot was definitely in your face, but I think the RVD shoot had some subliminal messages. The big one being "Look WWE you fucked up with me, now I'm coming back from injury and you have one last chance to use me right." His comments about his vocabulary and his one comment after having Fonz state his TV title track record about "Now thats how you use RVD." I think that RVD's shoot was to put over ECW, but I think the bigger picture was that he was trying to show the WWE that they have one last chance with the "Whole Fucking Show." Oh and on that note if RVD stays on Smackdown and Triple H isn't shipped over there in the draft I can honestly see RVD winning the gold after he returns from injury thanks to that shoot promo at the PPV. The night as a whole was fantastic, and I believe WWE needs to pay attention but I think the emotion and excitement was there only because it was One Night Stand. Now if WWE went 360 and became more like ECW the emotion and excitement wouldn't be there after a while. So basically WWE needs to add little elements from One Night Stand and ECW's history as a whole if they want to stay fresh and open themselves up to audiences like the One Night Stand crowd. Then again its 50/50. Things could stay the same. RVD comes back and gets shits on, WWE remains the HHH show and WWE stays what it is currently and entertains everyonce in awhile. Seriously I thinks its possible that RVD, Heyman, and ECW may have opened Vince's eyes or it could have been just another Sunday.
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