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[Dr. Zoidberg 0]

Fuck...That...

 

 

 

Ragdoll gets eliminated FIRST, and is completely fucking destroyed the entire time he's in the ring? Rockin.

 

 

I mean, shit. Congrats to Drek (you fuckin' earned that shit, man. Shoulda put the title on you after your first match) and all, but c'mon, guys. I hate to complain over this (I mean...it's just an e-fed), but I've put a lot of effort into trying to make Ragdoll look like a violent and dangerous guy, and then he just gets the ever-loving shit kicked out of him? Ugggh...i'm sure if I were sober right now, this wouldn't be a big deal...

 

 

Didn't even get my music right...it's "Somebody told me" by The Killers, now.

 

 

Congratulations to all the winners, though. Special congrats to Drek. I knew about this for awhile, but i'd be damned if I wasn't marking the hell out when it said "WINNER: DREK STONE"...the families would be proud.

 

 

EDIT: And wow...now that I have sobered up somewhat, I re-read this, and MAN!...I am a whiny little bitch when I'm drunk...Sorry about that.

[Stephen Joseph 0]

Yeah, you are.

 

Excellent effort you guys

[NYU 0]

Really good Pay-Per-View with an excellent ending, if I do say so myself .

 

In fact, the PPV was SO good that I think I'm going to give some detailed feedback on it.

 

Surprising, no?

 

The New New Midnight Express vs. Hell's Hitmen - Good way to start off the evening. I was a little surprised to see it turn into a Handicap match right at the beginning, but the concept did a lot to boost Jingus's credibility. He just kicked out of everything the NNMX was throwing at him, and it was great to see him get the advantage near the end. I was genuinely surprised to see The Saints interfere and cost Jingus the match. However, there really was no other way to end this. Now, the NNMX can fight for the Tag Titles next month and Jingus & The Sadist can feud with the Saints. It's a win-win situation.

 

Phenom vs. Pheonix - Phenom needed to squash Pheonix here, and that's exactly what he did, which was good. The match here was pretty decent but again, like last month, I just don't think you're putting enough description into your matches. I mean, the entire match was "Move -- 2 count -- Move -- 2 Count -- Move -- 2 count -- Move -- 3 count." It wouldn't have hurt to stretch it out a little. Have Phenom WANT to put Pheonix through torture. Write about Pheonix's screams of pain. Write about the crowd trying to will Pheonix through this by chanting his name, only to basically fail near the end. You just need to include more. I liked some of the concepts here - the finish was pretty damned cool. I loved Phenom chokeslamming Pheonix through the ring mat. That's the kind of crazy stuff we needed to see from this guy since the beginning. But you really just need to add more descriptions AND more moves to your matches. You'll find it will look a LOT better.

 

Leon Rodez vs. The Mad Cappa - Good interview with Rodez beforehand. We don't often see Leon's serious side come out too often, so it really did a lot to show that this feud was over more than just a title. Anyway, EXCELLENT match! KC has just done an awesome job of capturing Cappa's sadistic side. There were so many great near-falls in this contest, and the uses of the nightstick and the steel chair were handled perfectly. They were used, but not nearly enough to minimize their impact. When Cappa got hit with the nightstick or Rodez hit with the chair, you really thought it was over. I also liked seeing Cappa attacking Rodez afterwards, especially if it means we might see another match between these two. Again, excellent stuff!

 

Invitation to Anarchy - Really entertaining match with an incredibly unpredictable ending. It was just genius to see The Fanboys actually win something like this. Meanwhile, the match itself was very good. The action was exciting, the eliminations were handled well - and most importantly, the foodfight near the end was just fun to read. And like I said before, it was great to see The Fanboys come away with the win. What other team was more deserving to win a mint-condition Luke Skywalker figure?!

 

Panther vs. Brock Ausstin - Another spectacuar match. The psychology here was handled extremely well. Ausstin as the huge monster trying to use muscle to get his way to a win, but Panther showing he was the much more wily athlete by using his brain. Both guys looked really strong here. Panther looked SO determined by going for the knee, despite the fact he was so beat up - AND Brock looked incredibly tough by continually coming back from an injured knee to manhandle Panther. German suplex into the ringpost?! INSANE! I also liked the little touches added during the match - Panther spitting the gum into Brock's face during the figure four was great. I was pleasantly surprised to see Chris Bryte back at the end of the match as well. As usual, the Panther saga just continues to deliver.

 

Global Party XChange vs. Zack/T-Bod - Great stuff! The action was intense and some of the near-falls near the end were downright thrilling. The ending, in specific, was just crazy. From the hot tag to Jackson - to Jackson kissing Candie - to Zack/Tony hitting a School's Out/Spinebuster combination - the ending to this thing was pretty memorable. I was surprised to see Zack and Tony manage to be so functional as a team, and that spells huge trouble for the other teams in the Tag division.

 

Notes: I really liked the commentary with Schiavone/Ventura throughout the evening. I felt it added something special to certain matches during the PPV. Really...odd stuff with the Blurricane movie filming. In this case, odd is good! I just wonder if it's leading anywhere. Great development with the Saints deciding to join the New New Midnight Express. The promo was actually very well-written, and it creates a whole bunch of interesting storyline possibilities in the next two months!

 

As for the Elimination Chamber, people already know that I would LOVE to hear their thoughts on it. Sly and I both worked very hard on it - this match possibly being the one I've worked on THE most since I joined the OAOAST - so it would mean a lot to me, and I'm sure to Sly, if people read through it and told us what they thought.

 

And one more thing....

 

DREK STONE IS THE HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMPION~!~!

 

WOWZ~!

 

AMAZING@~!@!@#$

 

CELEBRATION TIME!!!!111

[Patty O'Green 0]

blah blah blah Saints...The promo was actually very well-written, and it creates a whole bunchof interesting storyline possibilities in the next two months!

 

You lie. Tony, how could you put that disgraceful skit on there? E-fed death before dishonor. I'll break your face, whore. Just kidding. But that segment read a lot better when I was writing it two months ago at three am in the morning after downing some children's Tylenol.

 

Oh, congragulations on your title win, Drek. I didn't actually read the match (or any other part of the show) but I think my man Tony LaRussa would be proud of your victory.

Edited November 29, 2004 by Patty O'Green

[NYU 0]

But that segment read a lot better when I was writing it two months ago at three am in the morning after downing some children's Tylenol.

.....I was wondering why Synth decided to just begin reading random lines from "Animal Farm."

 

Either way, it worked.

 

AND LEAVE MORE BEFF BAK!!! ALL OF YOU!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

*Beff bak = Feedback, for those not as cool and in the know as I.

[The Amazing Rando 0]

C&J take quick elimination.... but the truth is still hiding behind their infighting.

[Adam 0]

Top show guys, you never fail to impress me. I'll get around to reading the whole show later, but the Elimination Chamber was QUALITY. Well done to Tom and NYU for a great Main Event and a great opening exchange between Axel and Ragdoll. As for Ken's comments earlier, I can totally see where he is coming from, but whats done is done.