Patty O'Green 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 Well, then. I shall be the first to comment. Randomly, of course. -Leon Rodez promo = very very very good stuff. It was fun to read. -The main event...coulda been better...if RAGDOLL WAS IN IT!!~!~! But since he wasn't, then it was definitely the MOTM. Enjoied the FUCK out of the Stevens/Drek tagging in portion. DREK YOU TAGGED ME?! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL ROFLMAO!~!~ Th4t R0><0R3D iViy 50><0RZ!~!~! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Amazing Rando 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 I'm sorry I didn't get anything in, luckily the stuff can be a HELDDOWN EXCLUSIVE. Coming tomorrow night probably. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoff 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 I LOVE THOSE~! Detailed feedback...hopefully tonight, we'll see. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 One more thing? Purposely skip over the opening segment...I wrote that shit at 4 am, and at the time, it seemed REALLY funny. But now that i've actually had more than 30 minutes of sleep...wow... so yeah, I apologize. I PROMISE I haven't lost my writing ability! I promise! *cries self to sleep* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 11, 2005 Once again the Tag Division for this e-fed is leagues ahead of anything the WWE could pull out at this point. Black T vs TNNME was really good. I picture the Fan/Sk8ter Boiz looking like those nerds that were in Saved by the Bell. Infact I was hoping they would win just so I could picture the nerds from Saved by the Bell having a legit chance at being Tag Champs. Either way, Tony and Patty do a great job together with the Tag Division. Hoff's segment was as usual Hofftastic. Really got over his desire for the belt and how he's just a gentle giant underneath that Clubberin' Exterior. Drek = Kobe Bryant. No means no! At least had she agreed to the sexual passes they wouldn't need any lube since Drek is a greasy whop (HAHAHAHARACISM2005~!) I'll read the Main Event sometime later today. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystery Eskimo 0 Report post Posted February 11, 2005 Either way, Tony and Patty do a great job together with the Tag Division. *Sobs quietly* ...Yeah, I'll do some feed later. Probably. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 11, 2005 I don't know which part you did, not to mention you left no feedback last week so I can't acknowledge you under the rules of my new feedback ways. You are however allowed to attend the post show reception where there will be Kool-Aid and Rice Krispy Treats. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Crystal should weigh 2 more pounds one show out of the month due to "bloating". That's just a random note by the way. Haha, Crystal is the Female Phenom...that's an insult nowadays. FUJIWARA ARMBAR? Something tells me Hoff was looking at that site I found on wrestling moves. CABOOSE Who’s he trying to fool? I saw that kick! Completely intentional! There’s no better way to break up with a girl than to kick her in the face, right? COACH Oh boy, we’re going to get in trouble for that comment. Hey...its true Fun 6-Man tag match on a whole and it does its job of furthering along storylines. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 No feedbackery for the Josie segments? Ken sad...and horny. I MEAN ANGRY!! I MEANT TO SAY ANGRY!! *runs off screaming* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 12, 2005 I gave you feedback in AIM. Thus you shouldn't be angry or horny towards me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Angry? no... Horny? Heh..heh...heh... Still No. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoff 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Frig, I've been using the Fujiwara armbar all along, it's a staple of Chris Stevens' ground-based offense. Fool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 12, 2005 I've read two matches featuring Chris Stevens, so I get a mulligan. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoff 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 So. - JOSIE BAKER AIN'T NOTHIN' TA FUCK WITH!! Cute opening promo from our new GM, getting her over as one not to be played with. And OMG a Kill Bill reference. I thought I was going to die. SO excellent. - "even the diagonals." Awesome. This was good shit with the Saints, Corny, and Holly. Holly showed some more emotion; in fact, the whole thing was emotionallt charged, and Synth was GREAT comic relief. The ending was hectic and a GREAT segue into our fist match. Very well done. - Cool match, I liked it. Some interesting spots, some cool stuff with suplexes. My favorite part was probably the slingshot suplex reversed into the German with the rollthrough...noice. I also liked THE ICE HEART! Very cool. - Neat little "welcome back" promo for the Lightning Crew. I laughed. - Cappa's such a throwback for me. Just a lot of old-school fan hating and cheap heat, and that sort of "big" humor. I like him, a lot. I enjoyed this promo. - WHO OR WHAT IS BRAD BLITZ. I want this guy on EVERY SHOW. I enjoyed the handicap match, but if could say one thing that I'd hope would be constructive. It was odd for me to see P.R. doing Cena's moves. He's supposed to be a big ROck fan, right? And idolized him, patterened himself after him? Right? So...why Cena's stuff? To me, it just seemed very out of place. Still, an enjoyable and well-written match. The Lightning Crew, sadly, doesn't seem built to last this go-around. - Nice cover for last week's Phenom shenanigans. Now, when I say "nice" I don't mean it the way people mean it....but it was good for a laugh. The Docs...let us say are in the PROCESS of winning me over. This was good. I liked Pigley trying to get to the next question after JINGUS showed up. - Okay, that Rodez interview was NICE. I like that he's not ashamed. Moreover, it was in character. I was feelin' it. - "Spend Time With COD" is my new desktop. Somewhere along the line, and I'm not sure where, but I became a HUGE Alix Spezia mark. I can just picture her in that hat, too. "When he beat Drek Stone it was like they beat Drek Stone," I loved that line. Nice match that put over the tag champs, as well as Cappa's attitude. - Ha, Drek is scared. Whoever wrote this of you two, and I think it was you Ken, I liked it. - I WANT A CHEESE STEAK! I think I'll go to Hooters after I get paid next week. anyway, good promo by the Dude, I like the subtle humor very reminiscent of Foley in his "dude" days. Then there was a midget. Anyway, it was nice. - I love that episode of the Simpsons. Cool, but kind of spotty match here. I realize it was done to put the Boiz over, but it left me a little flat. Maybe it's personal preference, as I was WAY more into the more technically-savvy Black T/NNMX match from earlier. I DID like JCE holding Synth back. What could it mean? Is he just looking out for Synth? Is he pissed at Logan? Poor, poor Logan. - The Candie/Josie promo was very good, and I enjoyed the intervention of S**** K****. Calling Zack a pain was a great way to convey real emotion by Candie. Well played. So...yeah. Everything else was mine except the finish of the six-man, which NYU rocked and I already told him as much. So leave me feedback. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ed Wood Caulfield 0 Report post Posted February 13, 2005 - WHO OR WHAT IS BRAD BLITZ. I want this guy on EVERY SHOW. I enjoyed the handicap match, but if could say one thing that I'd hope would be constructive. It was odd for me to see P.R. doing Cena's moves. He's supposed to be a big ROck fan, right? And idolized him, patterened himself after him? Right? So...why Cena's stuff? To me, it just seemed very out of place. Still, an enjoyable and well-written match. The Lightning Crew, sadly, doesn't seem built to last this go-around. Well, if PRL just did The Rock's moves and mannerisms, he would be seen as a Rock-ripoff. I do moves that The Rock doesn't do, like The Five Knuckle Shuffle, so that P.R. can have a vast moveset and doesn't come off like a Rock wannabe. Besides, The Rock isn't the only wrestler I look up to, even if he is the most obvious. I also take a bit from Shawn Michaels and Hollywood Hulk Hogan! Another good show, in a series of them. I love the Chicks Over Dicks eBay auction. That was awesome. Cappa is doing an awesome job as a heel. Hoff was right, there is this old-school vibe coming from him. I am enjoying Josie as HeldDOWN~! GM, her segments at the beginning and with Candie were nice. Leon Rodez's promo was pretty funny. I am enjoying The Dude character. He's pretty funny. I like it. The six man tag was pretty good, and I am interested in where the Crystal/Axel relationship is going. Good show, gang. Thumbs up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 13, 2005 I am enjoying The Dude character. He's pretty funny. I like it. Get a little more detailed and you'll get feedback in return Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest cosbywasmurdered Report post Posted February 13, 2005 lolrz I lik dood. Yeah, good show. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest The Mad Cappa Report post Posted February 14, 2005 Here's feedback from me! - Great opening segment that got Josie over as the unfuckwithable type of GM. I too marked over the Kill Bill reference. - The segment between The Saints, JC, and Holly-Wood was heavily emotionally charged and I could feel it. Interesting to see where all the parties involved go after this. - The Black T/ NNMX match had very interesting uses of the suplexes and as a result, the usual great match from either one of those teams. - Good backstage segment describing Hoff's feelings about the title and Josie motiviating him to entertain the crowds even more. - So the Lightning Crew is back and it was a very funny segment. Mr. Boricua is still dumb, would be interesting to see Ms. Lindsay Gonzalez in a Women's title match someday, and maybe Vitamin X has something there about LC merchandise possibilities...... - Thanks about the compliments about my character having an old school vibe. I just try to channel the cheap fan hating that I can remember from some heels into his promos to antagonize the crowd and get the crowd to participate! - Like what Hoff said, who is Brad Blitz? I was laughing that even referee Nick Patrick got in on the beatdown on Brad. Enjoyable handicap match and I'm glad to see PRL writing matches for the OAOAST again. - Cute cover up for Phenom's last week segment with Black T in it. I'm wondering when the DoC is going to start defending the 24/7 belt. - The Love Docs/ JINGUS segment makes me want to see HH face off against the Love Docs at ZH. JINGUS scaring Tony Schivaone cracked me up. - Good interview segment with Leon talking about his porn past. The fact that he's not ashamed about it makes him much more cooler. - Patty wrote a good match on the COD/ Cappa & Rusco. Even though I think I haven't said it, I have been a fan of Patty's writing ever since he debuted as Shattered Dreams and I was glad to finally have Patty use my character for a match. He got down what my character is about while at the same time getting COD over more. - Interesting segment involving Drek Stone and Josie. Poor Drek not getting a break and not getting to main the last two PPVs! Can't wait for the Hoff/ Drek match at ZH. - Cool touch of the Dude using a RETRO Patriots jersey in front of the Philly crowd to generate cheap heat! Funny segment that got the Dude involved with a midget. The Dude lately has been one of my favorite characters and here's one thing I should recommend that the Dude should do during a match to piss off the people. That is he should steal Disco Inferno's Village People's Elbow (YMCA) and use it as a throwback to the 70s and to piss off the crowd! - Good match between The Saints and the Fan Boiz as the Fan Boiz try to get fan support. Even though they lost, the Fan Boiz have nowhere to go but up. The crowd chanting "YOU'VE GOT SERVED!" to Logan made me laugh. - Good segment between Candie and Josie as Candie expresses how much she wants the Women's title and the tension between Candie and Josie was fun to read. Can't wait til the KID/ Holly-Wood Women's title match next week. - Interesting segment between Hoff and Axel. I wonder where the Axel/ Crystal relationship is going to end up. - Fun six man tag match and it was interesting to read that Hoff's team wasn't that focused on the match and Drek using his intelligence to take advantage of it to win the match. Good show. This gets a thumbs up from me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 So, I take it no-one has any objections towards Josie being GM? Eeeeeeexcellent. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chuck Woolery 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 I laughed at the opening segment. See, cuz I actually remember IFW. They shoulda fuckin' pushed me, man. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoff 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 Okay, fill the rest of us in. What's this IFW the kids are all talking about? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 The IFW was this e-fed me and Cal were in a while back (were you still MVS then, Cal?) and the guy who ran it, "Tornado" or some dumb shit like that either A. got head from this dude "The Great One" and gave him the world title, or B. They were the same guy. Either way, it was all based on Promos and the like, and me and Cal being seasoned IGNJL/WF, SJL/WF veterans, we wrote some rockin promos. But still, they jobbed us out like little bitches. I mean, in retrospect, it WAS just an e-fed, but at the time, I was pissed. I mean...fuck. I never even knew net-nerds existed until then. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 (edited) HOLY SHIT, MY FIRST DOUBLE-POST!!! STOKE!!! *balloons and confetti drop from the ceiling as a huge parade is held in my honor* Edited February 14, 2005 by CandyColoredBlues Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hoff 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 So nice you had to say it twice. Thanks, Ken. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Patty O'Green 0 Report post Posted February 15, 2005 I’m going try and feedback people I didn’t feedback last week. COLE Wow, that match/segment/commercial was really good! COACH Don't you remember what it was? COLE I'm high on soap! Eski is a comic genius. Cole didn’t answer the question with “No. I’m high on soap!” or “No I don’t remember because I’m high on soap!” he just said “I’m high on soap” leaving us to determine what affects, if any, his soap eating ways have had on his memory. Eski, if I was to take a mate on the merits of their e-fedding humour, I’d select you. How long has Jingus worn a mask????? I’ve been reading matches with him for months and I knew of no mask. Unacceptable. Eski, the wedding is off. Anyway, I thought Tony and I (95% Tony) did well with The Saints/NNMX skit. That Leon Rodez skit was excellent. Rodez being unashamed of his past, instead of making a BS apology was good. Last week I didn’t get a chance to mention that I really like the angle. I had an offer to be in a movie once. The director asked me if I wanted to come back to the studio for a private audition. I should’ve known something was up when his movie studio turned out to be a Super 8. Josie is sooooooo much better then Bill Watts! Candy already heard my praises for his part of the Candie skit. So no use repeating myself. I hated the Sk8er/Saints match. I know I wrote it. But I had no fun writing it. Hoff didn’t enjoy reading it and trust me when I say it was even worse to write. I actually did it in ten minutes, as more important writing projects have now taken precedent over the OAOAST. I even forgot to italicize the lyrics to Heart Shape Box. Sad. I’ve barely been able to skim the mainevent. But I feel “Bam, baby that’s what I like” is one of the funnier things ever said in this e-fed. Cappa’s a pretty easy cat to write. He’s created a very flexible wrestler and that’s always beneficial. On the subject of old school heels: to me old school wrestling is 1999, but I still dig his character. Midget impersonators are always good for laugh. I swear to god I thought the midget was going to pee on the Dude. I have no idea why. The Dude’s decision to move away from Dancing Queen hurts me greatly, but Patty’s still down with him. The phrase “Magical Mystery Tour of Funk” is insanely cute! Can that fit on a t-shirt? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Failed Mascot Report post Posted February 15, 2005 Maybe. If somebody wants to make The Dude a T-shirt and run it by me just so I can see if the colors are right and shit then go for it. It can be pimped during the show as being sold on OAOAST ShopZone. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Phenom Report post Posted February 15, 2005 I’ve barely been able to skim the mainevent. But I feel “Bam, baby that’s what I like” is one of the funnier things ever said in this e-fed. Fun fact: I thought that, along with the Warren Peace character, off the top of my head. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
