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Guest redbaron51
Posted (edited)

Okay maybe its something a little extreme and been copied, but its something i did on my own, with no help so... here it goes.

 

American Inc.

 

(Writen by S. Simon)

 

Bass Intro

 

What we can and can not do

Its up to me and you

The earth is changing

The earth is healing

But we can not stop it from burning

 

If there's a problem

Why can't we stop them?

Society isn't the problem

Its the government's problem

But we can't stop them.

 

The madness ends now

But how?

Not now

Its American Inc.

 

(Guitar Solo)

 

Is the justice blind?

Is the truth hard to find?

What if justice can see?

Will the innocent go free?

But the guilty, would we leave them be?

 

If there's a problem

Why can't we stop them

Society isn't the problem

Its the government's problem

But we can't stop them.

 

There madness ends now

But how?

Not now

Its American Inc.

 

(Outro solo)

Edited by redbaron51
Guest Edwin MacPhisto
Posted

It's awfully generic. Find a good riff and talk about murdering hookers a bit, though, and I'm down.

Guest Dmann2000
Posted

While on my Megadeth kick last week I wrote out the chorus to a song, no lyrics though

 

Violent

 

Do you think I'm Violent?

Well you ain't seen nothing yet

If I start to think I'm Violent

You better hope I soon forget

 

That's all, I came up with a metal album title though

 

Phoenix (From Among Ashes)

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