Guest redbaron51 Report post Posted June 17, 2003 (edited) Okay maybe its something a little extreme and been copied, but its something i did on my own, with no help so... here it goes. American Inc. (Writen by S. Simon) Bass Intro What we can and can not do Its up to me and you The earth is changing The earth is healing But we can not stop it from burning If there's a problem Why can't we stop them? Society isn't the problem Its the government's problem But we can't stop them. The madness ends now But how? Not now Its American Inc. (Guitar Solo) Is the justice blind? Is the truth hard to find? What if justice can see? Will the innocent go free? But the guilty, would we leave them be? If there's a problem Why can't we stop them Society isn't the problem Its the government's problem But we can't stop them. There madness ends now But how? Not now Its American Inc. (Outro solo) Edited June 17, 2003 by redbaron51 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Murmuring Beast 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2003 What kind of music will accompany it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest redbaron51 Report post Posted June 17, 2003 pure straight out metal Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Your Paragon of Virtue 0 Report post Posted June 17, 2003 You're an angry young fella. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Edwin MacPhisto Report post Posted June 17, 2003 It's awfully generic. Find a good riff and talk about murdering hookers a bit, though, and I'm down. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Dmann2000 Report post Posted June 18, 2003 While on my Megadeth kick last week I wrote out the chorus to a song, no lyrics though Violent Do you think I'm Violent? Well you ain't seen nothing yet If I start to think I'm Violent You better hope I soon forget That's all, I came up with a metal album title though Phoenix (From Among Ashes) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Murmuring Beast 0 Report post Posted June 18, 2003 SHOW ME THE MUSIC~ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mecha Mummy 0 Report post Posted June 18, 2003 Improvement over the first song I wrote, which is intentionally awful to fit into my random comedy style... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
