Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Based on a "things to watch on August 28th, 2003" ratings format. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Zack my man, I loved it. That unsanctioned match ruled, with the return of Foshi and everything. I thought the Triple Threat match was great ( ) and so was the X-Title match. I great way to build up to a big Pay Per View. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LaParkaYourCar 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Why are the VMA's #1? I couldn't make it 5 minutes through that without weeping for this generation's taste in music. So what did ya'll think of the video package I wrote. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 The video package was great, really captured the moment, and the feeling between the two teams. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Why are the VMA's #1? I couldn't make it 5 minutes through that without weeping for this generation's taste in music. So what did ya'll think of the video package I wrote. Because any show that features Kelly Clarkson and Amy Lee from Evanescence (nominees in the same category, mind you) is an automatic number one. All I saw on Smackdown was the awesome Guerrero babyface promo/Cena rebuttal. Good looking girls win out over my markdom any day, though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Thanks for the good words on the Unsanctioned match. Truth is, I wrote that up spur of the moment, and it just seemed to flow. Foshi was going to write the match this week, but ran into some unfortunate circumstances and couldn't get it done. So I saved his ass j/k. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LaParkaYourCar 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Why are the VMA's #1? I couldn't make it 5 minutes through that without weeping for this generation's taste in music. So what did ya'll think of the video package I wrote. Because any show that features Kelly Clarkson and Amy Lee from Evanescence (nominees in the same category, mind you) is an automatic number one. All I saw on Smackdown was the awesome Guerrero babyface promo/Cena rebuttal. Good looking girls win out over my markdom any day, though. Bah Smackdown was really good this week. The VMA's just pissed me off. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lightning Flik 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 My Thoughts On The Show Segment = Post. Opening Segment: A little short and bitter sweet. It was a nice opener, don't get me wrong, but it made me hoping for a lot more than a quick spiffy encounter. Still sets up that match nicely. 3/5 Second Segment: Lovely shrilling by Coach and Cole for our PPV Screams Of No Reply. Must say that the little added interview piece with Jay is nice. 3/5 Third Segment: Whoever wrote this gets mondo props as I'm really into this Zack/Calvin feud from that. It really illustrates Calvin's tendencies of being a great heel and wonderfully played out. 4/5 Four Segment: Jay vs. Ragdoll is a great match as it basically builds on "can Ragdoll retain" theorum. Great match and I must say that I would look forward to these two in a feud for the title. 4/5 Fifth Segment: Nice promo by Axel that hints at a feud between the two. I could buy into that. Really could. And of course, we have the "good" commish trying to make sure Zack doesn't get himself killed with his request. Much better than some other bimbo GM on a TV show that is SO coping our name. 3/5 Sixth Segment: Ok. We just recently get a person promising us that everyone's been lied to and then we have this person talking about truth? Excuse me, but I must point out the similarities. And as for the triple threat match, this person who wrote it knows how the fuck to write one up. Though the double kip up is a little contrived, it's still a great match overall. 4/5 because of the match. Seventh Segment: Again with the truth segment. I'm beginning to wonder if we are about to have Ron Killings join our federation or something. And then we have Crystal making an open challenge for next week. 2/5 as there was no substance to it. Yes, things got advanced, but nothing really stood out. Eighth Segment: Excellent hype video for the Tag Team Titles. Really nice work and hopefully the match will live up to expectations. 4/5 Ninth Segment: So we'll learn about the "truth" at Screams Of No Reply? Why am I not surprised? And so the unsanctioned match begins and my lord is it really unsanctioned: lights out, chairs, and kicking ass all around. Zack, I don't know how the fuck you do it, but geezus... You pull out all the stops yet again my friend. 5/5 Personally, I know I rate it out of 5s and should vote according to that, but I'd watch the show, so I gave it a 9. Yes, short, but I'm not really in the mood to write a long diatribe today. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 (edited) Jay...you bastard...my music's "Deceptacon" by Le Tigre! Damn you! It's fine, man...but THAT...is how an X Title match should be written, my friends! Jay, you pimp daddy you...JUMP TO HD! FEUD WITH ME AND EVERYONE! PLEASE! TRIPLE THREAT FEUD! JAY VS. RAGDOLL VS. MAD MATT! Everything else was MONDO COOL!~, except for the ominous stuff. If this is anything but Raven saying he's joining the OAOAST, I'm going to be very upset. EDIT: There...it's Raven now...fuckers... Edited August 29, 2003 by What? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lightning Flik 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Everything else was MONDO COOL!~, except for the ominous stuff. If this is anything but Brian Kendrick saying he's joining the OAOAST, I'm going to be very upset. Spanky? Maybe I need some help, but I don't get why you'd say that? I'm figuring it's Raven if any real wrestler shows up for OAOAST. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 yeah, I don't even know what I said...I kinda tuned out when I wrote it... ...yeeeah...hey, what's that?! *hits Slacker with the X Title and runs away* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lightning Flik 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 *Turns around* Eh? What? *Gets hit with the belt shot and sells like I've died from a headshot in Unreal. However as the X Champion tries to run away, he goes head onto into CHOKO~! who breaks him in half with the spinebuster* Choko: Yous baddy man. Yous hurty poor Dory. Baddy yous. Baddy~! *Then just as an added bonus, Choko winds up and nails a denutting kick on same said X Champion* Choko: Choko nos knows whats to thinky. Choko thinky it be newy peepy~! YAHS~! *A gurgling sound erupts from the stomach of Choko* Choko: Oks. Nows that be all finny, Choko getty nighty snacky. *Goes off to get something to chow down on as Dory is still dead from the belt shot.* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 *blank stare to the sky...officially knocked coocoo...for...COCOA PUFFS?!~!* I got owned by Choko Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Thanks for the kind words Flik (I wrote the Triple Threat). I'm looking foward to the Revolution Tourny final this week. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lightning Flik 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Good writing then Chosun. Very well writen. I highly enjoyed it and can't wait to see more from ya. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 Well I'm going to be writing the Revolution Tourny FINAL for AngleSlam with Axel vs. The Mad Cappa, so you get more from me. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lightning Flik 0 Report post Posted August 29, 2003 ALRIGHT~! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
