Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Good effort this week gang. Post your thoughts/comments/likes/dislikes/love poems here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hank Kingsley 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Better than I - Z Axel, work on your matches. I give this an 8. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tony149 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 7. Nothing that would hit a 9 or 10 but very good. I enjoyed the promos, especially the Calvin/Crystal debate. The more I read the skits/promos the more I become a fan of Calvin. EDIT: I didn't write the IZ PSA this time, it was Stephen. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Axel, work on your matches. I didn't think I did my best either, but could you please elaborate when you say that???? You don't know how pissed off it makes me if someone bags out my writing ability and doesnt bother to tell me what was wrong with it. Im in a crap mood now, Thanks. Oh, good show, gave it an 8. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystery Eskimo 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Better than I - Z Axel, work on your matches. I give this an 8. Blatant bias. Good show though. 7. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hank Kingsley 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Blatant bias. !!! and Axel, I just said that to fit in haiku form, you know? Like I said in the Angleslam feedback, you just go from spot to spot to spot with no build at all. Try to build suspense to your spots, don't just go move after move. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Alright, and thank you for elaborating. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stephen Joseph 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Firstly, I had a second segment in GCF for a WEEK and Zack tells me he won't use it the day of hd. Seriously, that's put me in a foul mood, because that could've been rewritten to make both of us happy. Instead, some work that I did was slouched off because someone didn't get on the ball. Now, onto my thoughts. Work on your breaks. The very first transition, Cole announces Axel will be in the ring. He's not in the next segment. This makes no sense. Just cut off his intro and cut to him right in the ring, or say he is coming out next. Axel, flesh out your intro some too. You went from the stage to the ring with minimal description. Tim Moysey and Charlie Hoss was an effect segment I completely couldn't understand half of the Church of Northstar bit. The gramma was funny though. I would've put the match with Mad Matt in a different segment too. An iZ ad. Well at least something made it on iZ talent appearing on hD? Getting better. Actually, Jay's done a good job with this feud idea. Good final match, good promo by Calvin ----- Okay, so the show was an average hD show. It gets props for Calvin's and Jay's segments, the strongest of the night. What you don't get props for is some unsavvy editing and a lack of writers. There were 6, and 2 were iZ guys. I'm giving this show a 6, and I hope you can get more people to write for your next show. If anything, that's why I didn't give you a seven. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Cole never said Axel would be in the ring, he said "take it to the ring", as all announcers do for an upcoming bout. All that was said was that Axel's Open Challenge would be the first thing on the show. The Northstar segment and match fit into one segment, similar to how wrestlers have prematch promos before their matches to hype whatever angle they are in at the time. Why have an interview with Northstar, break, and then come back to a match with the guy we saw 2 minutes ago? As for the segment, granted I didn't look in GCF all that often this week, but the segment in question did damage to hD~! and tried to make IZ look better on our show, something that no hD~! talents have done on your program. Two weeks in a row we've had IZ guys on the show, and while that's fine, I'm not going to let my show get bashed DURING THE SHOW. You wanted an IZ character to squash a hD~! character HIS FIRST NIGHT OUT. There was no reason for it, it didn't fit into the flow of the show, so why use it. It was just an IZ ego boosting piece. I'm all for brand rivalry, hell I wanted it from the start. But no one from here has shown up on IZ and tried to kill off PRL's crew or anything similar, and you guys would refuse to have that done. Why should my reaction be any different? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Jay Z. Hollywood Report post Posted October 17, 2003 no one from here has shown up on IZ and tried to kill off PRL's crew or anything similar, and you guys would refuse to have that done. Why should my reaction be any different? Why not? I'd support that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystery Eskimo 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Or if anyone wants to kill off Naz Mistry, thats also fine. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stephen Joseph 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 I think my point Zack, is that you could've told me that you didn't like the segment way prior to Thursday and I would've gladly re-written it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NazMistry Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Or if anyone wants to kill off Naz Mistry, thats also fine. You suck. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mystery Eskimo 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Tune into IZ next week, where Naz takes on a SHARK! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Naz vs. Nas, to draw in that gangsta demographic, and confuse the shit out of the announce team. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NazMistry Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Shut up Preppy boy. Naz Vesus a Shark whould outdraw you and that douchebag AlfDogg anyday. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Shut up Preppy boy. Naz Vesus a Shark whould outdraw you and that douchebag AlfDogg anyday. Alf yes. Mario vs. a Strawberry Shortcake bop bag would outdraw him. As for the greatest fighting champion in OAOAST history, you'd have a bit more trouble. Too bad you're on the other show now so the much anticipated (by no one, really) Zack vs. Naz match can't happen. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NazMistry Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Zack versus Naz? Why does Wrestlecrap come to mind? Maybe because you suck Zack. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zack Malibu 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2003 Zack versus Naz? Why does Wrestlecrap come to mind? Maybe because you suck Zack. Ahem, you yourself stated I'm the coolest person you've met on here. Take your pseudo cynicism elsewhere, lucha-man. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest NazMistry Report post Posted October 17, 2003 I'm sorry. I'm still wondering why I have not been banned yet? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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