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[Toxxic 0]

Uh... yeah... I beat Tom Flesher. In singles competition. I can only assume that he had to no-show, but still

 

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH BABY!

 

As for the rest of the show... I LIKED Birdman's match, that had a really slick, pro vibe to it. I don't think it's going to be long before he does start moving up the card and compete against whoever he wants to be competing against.

 

Big up to Drazon for beating Clark, no easy feat these days.

 

Also big up to Muzz for beating Dace, that's a fucking challenge and a half.

 

Respect to Johnny for beating Landon (unless Landon wrote to job, I don't know why he would but the promo at least gave him an excuse to), new ICTV Champ bitches.

 

Manson won the clusterfuck, good on yer son.

 

And my boys had to no-show - correction, SPIKE CHOSE to no-show as the Ozzfest was more important. Expect a sXe bitch-slapping soon.

 

COngrats to Hunt too, being on the winning side certainly paid off with that stip.

[Guest Suicide King]

Damn. A night of rather well written upsets.

[Dace59 0]

Right, finally time to get one with the comments.

 

Open promo that ends up being a special on the website. Read it there people. Read it. And them comment on it to show you actually read it.

 

 

Opening match:

 

The traditional hype the rest of the show to start things off with. Just incase any of the fans missed all those adverts we put out for the shows. Vlad goes in swinging but isn't a match for the young powerhouse. Edwards is finally carry on some of that stuff he showed against Janus in the handicap match as he swats Vlad down. Very nice putting him over as a big power threat as Vlad's quick counter just gets turned against him and results im him getting slammed again. Now here early close falls make sense, as it's a short match and Edward is strong enough to inflict enough damage. Vlad is still moving a littke quick for someone getting nailed so hard though. Still, as Vlad fights back he uses his speed to take the big man down, rather than his power alone. And Vlad goes after the neck, following on from his own offence so far. Goes for the Front Facelock Choke, gounding the big man and taking him out without outstriking or out powering him. But Edwards is strong enough to just drag Vlad up to fight out of the hold, allowing him to get back on the offensive. But Eddy J goes back to the Powerbomb again and it gets countered. He tries to deadlift out of the Choke again but that gets countered as well, back into the Choke for the win. Well written little opener with a decent story to it. Again making the most of a small word limit to fit a match into.

 

 

Promo time that actually makes it onto the show:

 

And again wrestlers are using their manages to complain about the booking. What happend to just beating up the boss to complain? Still, it's a helpful insight into the Birdman character and what his motives are and such and such. And a random man in a bird suit just became an interesting character...good job.

 

 

And now that same man in a bird suit takes on the newest old person on the block:

 

I see Birdman's move away from his first script style. Though I wouldn't write it off as a file experiement. Maybe something to try again after more writing experience. Still, it does make things smoother to read. Good job with hyping Andrea's return and giving her a big ovation. Very nice and makes it look like she's slipping straight back into the groove. Very smoonthly written opening wrestling trade off. It's a standard indy spot fest opening, but it's good to show how closely matches these two are in speed, and it's all basic, carry on that rookie vibe Birdman said he was aiming for. No problem showing off either one's speed here while keeping things simple and easy to read. A little quick on the transistion, and a missed move would have worked better with two fast flyers really. Nice run of chest targeting dives though, which sets up Birdman's finiser nicely and showing how flying finishers can be set up with other flying moves. Basic psych with avoiding the second stinger splash as the race of close falls is on. Birdman fights back and again goes after the chest with the spots to the ring post. Andrea fights back again, misses the dive this time and Birdman his his dive for the win. Definatly a set up from his first match, working in some pysch and all. Main problems are with the selling as it's not really mentioned at all and doesnt really affect either personals style. That and the transistions which are very fist, simple one move afairds. But for someone new it's something that can be worked on without to much of a promblem.

 

 

And now onto our Hardcore Frat Match.

 

Little stuff to get the stage set for this one, a needing thing in matches held outside the arena. Cool touch having Dustin pull up in his care with his own theme music playing in it. I give props for that idea. I sort of get the Rodney King refence, but I know enough about it know it helps set the scene of Dustin just getting mugged by the frat lot here. Not keen on the sudden face come back thing, but at least he takes out the two none wrestlers without a problem. I think having lots of frat jokes on hand to spice up the commentry helps Hunt to strenghten it up rather than have it being too dry. Hunt slightly got him self into a corner where it goes seem like Dustin can actually win this match, but at least he has Dustin getting in a few house related spots and still trying to sell his knee as he does them. Still, he does get Hunt over as a really cocky and dick heel just screwing over the face in this situation. I'm amazed that Dustin is still moving with the bumps his taking. That commerical break was just random, but at least it was funny. Ahhh, a run in by a rival frat...not things look slightly less unfair for Dustin. DDT through the table (lots of table bumps here I notice) And to the outside of the house and Dustin looks like he could have this thing won if it werent for the crooked ref and all. A lot of the comes backwards are just simpe striking stuff, but it's the best that can be done in an odd hardcore match like this one. Dustin still wants to go flying even with a bad leg but gets caught again, another last second kick out. Then it's finally only. Ok gimmicked hardcore match. But the balance is way to far against Dustin and it leans to a lot of his comebacks having you wonder when the hell is he gonna go down as he doesnt even look like winning due to the ref before far to bent.

 

 

Promo time again.

 

Pespi Max with Lemon? Oh dear god. And the ICTV Title will be on the line in a No Gravity Match...w00t and all that. And a nice little breaking the forth wall joke about Tom's one. Maddix's ego runs wild on us all again. Mwahaha.

 

 

And now for our 4way clusterfuck of the night:

 

More Flesher love than you could shake a stick at. Which I'm sure Riley would very much love to do anyway. Usual multi-man intros just to get everyone down into the ring to start off this madness. Odd little counter point to start with, as King and Manson go head to head while Munich and Ced have time for a little handshake of respect. I do like to see all four guys actually wrestling at once in a match like this. Ok it's a 4-way and they're hardly the easist things to write and make great wrestling from, but the effort is always good. King goes straight after Manson's knee but that remembers there are two other guys that could win the match without him so he has to try and keep tabs on them as well. A usal clusterfuck of spot after spot with everyone getting thie offence in turn. Still, the slightly innventive ones back up for the bad situation, like with Ced ducking a pair of clotheslines as he works Manson over, only for Munich's one to take King out. Suicide Dive for a teasing on a set of count outs. Back inside and they pair off again, trading off more spots and another close fall that gets broken up at the last second. Manson's knee gets worked over again as Ced goes up top but gets crotched. A cool Superplex/Powerbomb 3 man stop, nothing new but good to see in mulitman matches. Manson takes advantage and tries to sneak in a cover but it gets broken up again. Ced takes Munich to the outside and dives after him, finisher reversal between Manson and King, Manson gets the cover and the win. Soild mid card multi man, definatly one of the better one's spot wise in a while. And showing that Manson can write a decent match when he tries and this was a 4 way. Nothing majoryly great, but well written, following, described well enough and decent shifts in action.

 

 

And now for a nice one on one match folks:

 

More Flesher loving jokes for the opening. And Clark's problem of having taken a Demonstar on the show before his highlighted as well. Heh @ the parralell about the Whipwreck/Cactus street fight match to this one. Slow, paced start to help build up some tension for this one. Clark gets draw into a striking dual with JD and promotly looses, so he has to fall back on his speed, even with his bad neck, to hold his ground. Rana, clothesline in the corner for Clark. But then JD catches him with a Judo Throw and just Headbutts the shit out of him, showing he can win a striking dual in any way he wants to before just tossing Clark through the air. All the bumps are being discribed as Clark taking back bumps to protect his neck, saving the issue of his completely wrecked neck just for now. Alan's had a bit of a personality transplant as he becomes more agressive in this one. Alan goes after the back to try and set up the cloverleaf, but JD fights out like the tough bastard he is. Lovely moment as JD just kicks Clark right in the nuts, it's almost out of a movie. JD DDT and this one could be over, but Drazon has other plans. And lovely payback as Clark just uppercuts JD in the nuts for payback. Alan goes straight back to attacking the back, again looking for that submission. Clark just jams the chair into JD's back to try and get a submission from it here. JD fights out of a Boston Crab just to take another chairshot to the back. JD counters out with an Iron Claw and a great little controling spot where he counters Alan's strike to make openings for kicks to leg, setting up the Crucifix Legbar. But he pauses rather than going after the neck again and Clark grabs contol back. Finally Clark locks on the Cloverleaf and it looked to be all over. But he battles out with the piece of cable that was choking him out in the first place. I have no idea what JD feeling all guilty about the neck are, but it happens again as he has Clark set up for a Dragon Suplex. Kick to the nuts get caught, Dragon Screw, JD's Avenger, it's over. Interesting submissions match, odd way of handling Clark's neck, but it shows how you can work around serious problems like that and make over body parts the focus of a match. And shows that JD does know what he's doing when he shows and he's really intune with his style, wrestling and writing wise.

 

 

And another much. The least fun of all to review, the one where you lost.

 

(Y) @ Ace's intro interrupting Comet's little welcome back speach just to piss him off. Few lines about the big difference in style beteween these two and the simple ways in which Ace could even it out, unfairly of course. Ace gets written as a complete cwoard and it works really well. He just slaps Dace to start with and inreturn gets nailed with a few chops. Ace tries to take things to the mat but even with his speed advantage, he just gets outpaced and out powered by Dace. Ace tries a fast attack, scores a close fall from a sneaky school then goes back to trying to out Dace again, but as he goes for a Hiptoss, he just gets blasted in the jaw. Ace slips out of a Suplex and gets another fall, clearly showing now that he's got enough of a speed advantage to keep himself in this one and be able to actually do some damange to Dace. Ace gets cocky with his mocking as he dives in for a Crossbody just to get caught at slamed. Close fall so soon makes Dace look strong but even I think it might be over doing it a tad. Series of elbow smashes, Ace sneaks out again but this time Dace just comes straight back to flatten him. And that old thumb to the eye comes into play to help Ace out. Ducks a wild Lariat to hook on a Cross Face Chickenwing, I do like the ACE-HOLE chants as well. Dace finally fights out and nails a Dangerous German for another close fall. Steve the Cameraman makes the perfect heel invervention and allows Ace to nail the Ace Crusher but Dace still kicks out. Ace tries it again but Dace just drills him with a few more Elbows and then Defenestrates him, but Steve invervens again and places Ace's foot across the ropes. Sean Davis runs in, get revenage with a Kendo Sitck shot, allowed Ace to lock on a Deathlock STF for the win. And again Muzz shows he's getting back in the flow and that he's a damn good writer. Can't feel bad about that. Mainly as I was with my gf rather than writing. COUGH *hide's the scratch marks*

 

 

Tag Team Action now people. Yo and shit.

 

Rev-0 making their first outing as a tag team and the 'new' tag champs make their first outing as well. Much a do about nothing as both teams make their way down to the ring with pyro and all that flasht stuff. Rev-0 just jump the stand in tag champs, trying to start a mugging, but Davis gets dumped over the ropes and Todd saves his stand in partner. 42 Street having a little game of rock paper scissors to see who starts the match before this thing really gets underway. Spike slaps Todd around and tags in Davis. Todd scrambles for the tag but TMM doesn't want any part of Davis, so he gets forced into the ring by the ref. TMM tries to get rapid fire against Davis bust just isn't strong enough and gets planted for his troubles. (Right after being on the phone to my gf for 2.5hours and it now being after midnight, everything is going into rush mode. Live with it.) I mark for TMM breaking out the pant pulling down spot again. And then for TMM trying to hump Davis to force him back into a roll up. TMM and Todd are jelling really well as a team and still keeping the important balance of comedy and serious actions in a match, not making anyone look too stupid. The crowd slowly warming to Mask's actions against Rev-0 works nicely as well, and 42nd Street get the win to show they're real tag champs.

 

 

No Gravity Match:

 

Johnny scores the first point with a counter to a corner whip. Landon evens the score by skinning the cat and scoring a dropkick. All looks like it's working it so far, cockiness getting the best of both guys to start with. Nice thing with Landon just going straight back up and scoring a second point in a row. Johnny ducks a third Lariat as Maddix goes for it one time to many, neckbreaker, quick fistdrop to even the score. Johnny makes the mistake of chasing Megan as she interferes and gets flattend by Card at ringside. Rolls Johnny back in and Landon scores with and Elbow Drop. Maddix scores with the elbow againas Johnny actually sells the first elbow drop. Landon doesn't go for it again, shoots Johhny into the corner but just gets kicked in the face. MI slam, Maddix's counters with an Armdrag, something different. Johnny fights back and scores a top rope bulldog. Low Blow from Maddix and he goes up again, Johnny catches him, Avalanche German for another point. Johhny goes straight back up just like Maddix did before, Frog Splash but the ref is distracted. Card takes Johnny out with a DDT and wakes Maddix up. Maddix struggles up for another dive but takes to long and Johnny moves. Johnny grabs the chair, takes out Card, then splatters Maddix and scores an SSP for the win.

 

 

And now finally, at 1Am, the main event:

 

Toxxic's won and all that stuff. Go him.

Opeing and stuff. Janus promises mushc death as he would, talk of their past, etc, etc. Toxxic stars off outpacing Flesher again, gets cocky and gets caught with a German Suplex as Tom is smart enough to do a none release version. Bwahahaha @ the SUMA reference! Toxxic tries to take on Flesher at his own game and it costs him. Roll up spots of doom. Toxxic goes back to outpacing Flesher to take him down agian. Tom fights back, dumps Toxxic again, scores an Exploder 98 and goes back to choking out Toxxic. Flesher goes for the Caffeine Bomb again, Toxxic reverse and goes for the Superior Stretch Beta. Toxxic Shock Sydrome for a close fall. Second Rope CB finally gets the win. Janus runs in and takes Toxxic out to end things.

 

 

MOTN:

 

Jamie Drazon vs Alan Clark - Submissiosn Match.

 

Right, it's almost 1:20 AM and I'm going to bed.

[Guest Beingz0wningj00]

I sweaR... any effort you put into a match, when Dace reviews it, it justy feels worth it.

[HollywoodSpikeJenkins 0]

Actually, what happened was Davis was going to write the first half of the match. I would then finish it. She was suppose to send it Friday, but I PMed her as I was being dragged out of my house and out of state. I tried to struggle, but it was no use. Davis couldn't finish the match, so there we are...

 

 

Not to mention when I got back sunday, my comp was dead again. I just got it back today from the same repair shop that had to repair it for the same reasons that caused me to leave after the Clusterfuck. BAH! I'm back now, and I demand a rematch.

[Guest Horse hockey!]

Don't give me that shit, Spike. You were going to start the match, send me what you had and an outline before Wednesday (read: Ozzfest), I'd write the rest and then send it to you Friday for review.

 

I don't care about your damn excuses, but don't you even think about pinning this shit on me.

 

If you were trying to be sarcastic, I'll apologize ahead of time. It's been a rough night, and that's the exact kind of stuff I do not want to see.

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

Well, this faction definitely got off on the right foot...

 

EDIT - Waitaminute... she?!

Edited July 22, 2004 by Mr. S£im Citrus

[Guest Horse hockey!]

Yes, she. I have no penis. I have big boobs.

 

I was going to go on and say I have a brain, but Austin didn't seem too amused by that addition.

[Sly 0]

I made a difference.

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

 

Do you ever find it challenging to write as a man? I don't think I could write a woman convincingly.

[Guest Horse hockey!]

No real challenge. Though some might say my men are too sensative.

[HollywoodSpikeJenkins 0]

Whoa...

 

 

 

I take full blame for this. Yikes...