FEEDBACK FOR THIS WEEKS HELDDOWN!

[Patty O'Green 0]

HD~! is in HE. Trust me.

[Hoff 0]

OMG TEH FEEDBACK IS IMMENSE~! FEEL ITS RAW MANLY POWER OF DOOM~!

 

So....

 

- Awesome opening promo by Crystal to start the show. It gave a "turning the page" feel to the whole night. Widow's return was a nice touch.

 

- The Thrillogy promo was par excellence. Great job keeping Zack's obsessive nature intact and staying true to everyone's character. I loved it.

 

- I loved the payoff for the Muse stipulation. This is going to be very entertaining. This whole segment had me laughing. Skull Kid is a great straight man, for a guy with skull makeup on. Cool segment.

 

- Cool little Blurricane promo establishing Rick/Jude/Parka/Leah/Eddy as an actual stable, and it was cool to hear Blurricane say what he did to Jude. I likes.

 

- Rick Shirley is...insane. I really love this. A lot of us take this very seriously, which is cool, but clearly Rob is having a fucking ball and it's a blast to watch. Keep it up.

 

- I caught a sneak preview of CC's Crystal/Hoff encounter but I loved it. Again, so true to the character. Other people are doing great at writing for me, maybe I'll retire. Heh.

 

- Joseph's promo was spooky cool. The only "critique" I have is that sometimes Joseph seems like a wrestler, and other times like a managerial-type. It's settling more on the former now, but it threw me for a little. Anyway, I am looking forward to the "devil" persona.

 

- As a note, Adam and I split duties on the 24/7 match, so address anything to both of us. I thought it was solid, a little short, but it told the story it wanted to.

 

- Cool debut promo for Daniel Morgan! The gimmick reminds me of the mid-90s "every wrestler has a job" gimmicks. That's meant as a compliment, btw. It should be interesting to see the character develop.

 

- Cool to see the Machine a little on edge after Sunday. Wonder what kind of influence they'll have over the BOD.

 

- Logan and Krista's promo was not just funny, but it was GREAT writing and great character development and I loved it. The tension brewing amidst both the Saints and COD is awesome.

 

- I STILL MARK OUT FOR THE GPX! It's pretty sad. Fun, fast-paced match. A little quick, but still good. Neat to see the continuity with the NNMX being frightened of the Hitmen. Cool ending (really liked it!) and neat little brawl at the end.

 

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BLACK

Yes, yes, thank you SO much for pointing that out, Jim. And I'll admit it, I was a little off my game tonight. Maybe I'm rusty. Maybe it was a bad night. And maybe, just maybe, I had something else other than this match on my mind.

 

JR

Like the SOONERS~!?

 

BLACK

No! Not the bloody Sooners! Get out of here!

 

Awesome. I really like Black...really. I can see him as a future champ someday, and I hope such a thing comes to pass. Very tight promo.

 

- Let me say something. If you're having trouble on the match-writing end of things, work with Tom, because he will have your character doing things that you couldn't even think of, and yet it flows and makes sense. I love when my guys can get involved with his. Tremendous match, despite the "obscenely long commercial break," and I loved the end sequence. Made Hoff look good, and Sly look...well...resillient.

 

- Intense (OMG INTEN5E~!) promo from Taylor, capped by the nice recap of the awesome cage match at AS (which I need to get to feedbacking here). Interesting to see what Kev will do with Bryte out.

 

- Nice little respect promo from Crystal and Sly.

 

- Nice to see Axel with SOME gold. A cool little ME promo, and the dream partner match sounds very exciting. Of course, on that front, let's just say I know something you don't know....

 

All in all a great read. Promo heavy but WELL-WRITTEN, and the matches were solid as usual. In closing...

 

HOFF VS. STEVENS ON THURSDAY!! SET YOUR BAH GAWD VCRS!! GOOD NIGHT EVERYBODY!!

 

And any feedback for me would be appreciated.

[Patty O'Green 0]

Good show. That's all.

[Zack Malibu 0]

Your feedback is too short. Everyone knows long is better.

 

[Patty O'Green 0]

Says the guy who never posts any.

[Zack Malibu 0]

I don't see YOU working two jobs.

 

And you were supposed to send me something today, remember?

[Patty O'Green 0]

Yes I was. But then I thought about all the times you promised to do something for me and never did it or did it weeks after I asked and thought to myself "Maybe I should make him wait"

[Zack Malibu 0]

So I'll have them by the time I get to work? Awesome!

[Hoff 0]

6 posts, and barely any feedback. You two should be ashamed.

[Mystery Eskimo 0]

Feeeeeeeeed...

 

-I like that the shows come from defined cities now. Has that been happening for a while, or have I only just noticed?

 

-Nice opening promo, putting the title over and the next generation of future champs.

 

-PsychoZack~! I always enjoy characters on mental breakdowns. Maybe that says something about me.

 

-Aww, the poor Saints. Reduced to mere men. Lots of fun in this storyline, I have no idea where its going, which is cool.

 

-Hoff, the ultimate angry man. I'd be scared if I was Gunner. Or Crystal, perhaps.

 

-Justice Inc. sounds pretty cool, a good little promo.

 

-Shirley vs. Dr Anderson...probably the strangest match I've read in a while...awesome. Poor Dr Max. We need to get him some hot (female) valets to make up for having to go through that.

 

-SJ lays down the law...and the Puerto Rican is after the title. That's a lot of contenders already...

 

-Hoff vs Stevens. Good little match, working well to continue the storyline. It's cool that the 24/7 title is gaining in importance.

 

-Woo, debut promo. We havn't had one of those in a while. Looks like an interesting character.

 

-I like Father. Sneaky + Evil = Ratings.

 

-Golf~! With philosophising~! This was really funny. Poor JR. Next week they should go swimming or something, and harpoon the Jivin' one.

 

-Simon vs Dan vs Ned. Short, sweet TV match. I like what Tony did with Hell's Hitmen. I envisage them as looking scary as hell.

 

-Hoff vs Sommers vs Rodez vs Stone. Wow, four guys on the verge of main eventing, I think. This kinda reminded me of an ROH four way, which is a good thing. The Hoff-Stevens feud looks hot, and Sommers-Crystal should be interesting.

 

-Interesting Taylor promo. Looks like a new enemy for Panther.

 

-Aww, Sly and Crystal are friends. But for how long~!

 

-Good to see Axel back. The Australia show is going to be huge.

 

Overall, very good show. Nothing that didnt work and a hell of a lot that did.

[Stephen Joseph 0]

thanks for the input hoff. ill see what i can do.

[King Cucaracha 0]

Kewl show, kewl beans. Possibly more feedback when I get off my sickbed. Until then, Zack's character, COD and Shirley's madness are particular highlights.

[Zack Malibu 0]

Saved By the Bell the college years "suck".

 

I'll get you for that, Patty. Mark my words...I'll get you for that.

[Patty O'Green 0]

Here's more feedback:

 

Sweet mainevent promo by Zack. I liked how Axel was cool and calm while Zack continued to act like a nut.

 

How many singles titles do we actually have?

 

I'm pleased with the way Stevens is being worked into the whole Hoff/Gunner situation. Or maybe Gunner is being worked into the Hoff/Stevens situation.

 

So are Sly and Crystal going to feud? I'd hate to see one of them turn heel in the process. They both make good faces. Anyway, I thought for sure that Drek was going to win that fourway. Color me shocked or something of that nature.

 

Nice to see an actual new guy debut. Not just a new character from one of our existing writers.

 

I like that the shows come from defined cities now. Has that been happening for a while, or have I only just noticed?

 

I've done it for some time, but I just started telling people where the shows would be a couple of weeks ago.

 

Saved By the Bell the college years "suck".

 

hahaahaaaaa!