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I'm sure the spacing makes no sense but I just wanted to post that stupid fucking thing!

 

Edit: I know The Fanboys match was bad but I couldn't post the show with only one match.

Edited by Patty O'Green

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I would like a handjob!

 

Also, I understand now what Hoff ment when he said 'Shit goes down.'

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Nice opening promo from Zack. It's better than that description amkes it sound. Really good.

 

Interesting stuff from SJ. I never know what to expect from him.

 

Rodez's promo was amazing! I was really liking what he had to say. Also, awesome, AWESOME match set for AP.

 

NYU wrote a much better promo than he likely realizes.

 

Sometimes I read Patty's matches and the way he describes things disturbs me. I like it though.

 

Nice to see Axel with some direction.

 

Awesome COD promo. Nice reference to Michael Savage. That guy is freakin' batty.

 

Dude...dude. That Axel/Crystal promo was chill. I'm FEELIN it~! Seriously, I like how this is all building on the past, and Adam is just doing some great writing. I like it.

 

That 70s Dude. Yikes.

 

I was enjoying Alix and J.R. on commentary. Quirky Alix is one of my favorite interviews, so this was cool. The match turned out pretty good, as well. Big upset, and some hot action. Well played, Clerks.

 

Any comments on Hoff's return would be more appreciated than you realize.

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That 70s Dude. Yikes.

is that a good or a bad yikes? I agree about the opening promo. It shows you don't need to swear a bajillion times to get a point across.

 

Any comments on Hoff's return would be more appreciated than you realize.

I liked the use of "bellows". I also pictured Hoff as Thing of the Fantastic Four during it since he was clobberin' stuff.

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I liked this one line the most

 

ROSS

HOOKER REFERENCE! HOOKER REFERENCE! PROSTI-BAH GAWD-TUTION!

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I would give detailed feedback, but as I was writing it on the Fast Reply option, I went in and edited the part of the show that has Black T's and Cappa's promos because the way the show was originally formated, it had Cappa beating up Watts, then Watts returning to announce the stips for next week's BT-Saints title match which wouldn't make sense considering Bill got beaten with a baseball bat. By now you know what happened. I lost everything I had written when I edited the show.

 

So, let me say I really enjoyed the show. After I lost the feedback I had written I stopped reading the show and won't finish it off until later today, but shout outs to Zack and Patty for the 6-man tag. Everybody did a good job.

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Frig: good yikes. I realized I never answered you. An entertained yikes. An "I can't imagine where he's going with this" yikes.

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I lost everything I had written when I edited the show.

This happens to you quite a bit.

 

In order to compensate for the fact that I know next to nothing about pro wrestling, I have to employ a level of perversion and depravity. That Frankensteiner match was based off a true story. Every event that took place out of the ring and some that took place in the ring has happened in some shape or form.

 

I would think that Zack would to want to maim Chris Stevens, considering young Stevens is the reason Zack got his ass kicked. Nice return by Hoff with a swerve at the end! I kind of expected a swerve but what I was expecting was for it to be Calvin who attacked Hoff and not Zack. But that would've made no sense. But since when does wrestling have to make sense? Anyway, Stevens made Hoff cry! That's mean!

 

I thought we all (Zack, Hoff, and I) did a good job on the mainevent.

 

Did I imagine this or did Stone Cold come out and interrupt a Chris Stevens promo a few weeks ago?

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I thought the swerve ending was great.

 

And the Frankies-Fan Boys (Fannies?) match was rather amusing. I think Patty should write all Fannies matches, and have them get molested by chimps. Or something.

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I just hope I created enough of a buzz to make people looking forward to this character. I got real bored and mapped out alot of shit with this one. Its going to be a minor tribute to one of my all time favorites; Mick Foley.

 

 

 

I'm just shitting on him a bit combining it with a horrible Mike Awesome gimmik.

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The Hoff written ending was insane. Even I didn't know the full details behind it, just that he wanted to come back and pick up on the story. Kudos to a job well done. Oh, and watch your back, bitch!

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I thought the swerve ending was great.

 

And the Frankies-Fan Boys (Fannies?) match was rather amusing. I think Patty should write all Fannies matches, and have them get molested by chimps. Or something.

I'm one step ahead of you....

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