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5/18 Feedback O'Rama

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It's been an (understandably) slow week around here, likely due to a lot of final exams/papers and all that fun stuff for the students on the roster. At least I certainly hope that's all it is, seeing as how the show was so short this week and nobody put up any type of feedback until now.

 

First segment is...my segment! I'm not going to feedback my own stuff, so that's all up to you.

 

Entertaining B&B squash, which could have been made better if it was "Mr. Hole In One" Barry Darsow offering them a shot at the putting green before the match.

 

Good buildup from the two World Title competitors. I know PK is high on this Stairway to Hell match, and those feelings always turn out to lead to some of our best written matches.

 

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Nice quickie comeback match for CC to get off the write-rust, if she even had any that is. Always good to have someone back in the fold. With summertime here and school not a priority, that should lead to some classic writing from everybody in the next few months.

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You can always count on me for feedback.

 

Zack's been cutting some money promos since the start of the Wildcards angle. You could feel the intensity coming across his words. I dig the Hooligans name for the stable of GPX & O'Hara. I remember when that name was supposed to replace The GPX when they turned heel.

 

Brains & Brawn riding out with the tag belts was a nice touch. Was that the Barry Darsow, as in Smash, Repo Man, Mr. Hole in One Darsow? (My question was answered in Zack's post) Sweet. B&B looking good heading into SO. Uh-oh, we haven't announced that yet, right? Well it shouldn't take a genius to know that's where it's headed!

 

Short and sweet words from the champ, TK and then PK.

 

Leon's line about Jade calling everybody who's better looking than her a bitch and then her reaction was priceless.

 

Got a kick out of the TK, Team Heyross, Jumbo segment. Looking forward to the Sunday Detention match. Alf always delivers on his unique gimmick matches.

 

Unless I missed something, is this the first time Crystal's used a last name? I've enjoyed her character since the heel turn. I think I've said that before but I'll say it again. Good promo and only match of the show!

 

MOTN: Crystal vs. The Marv

 

LOTN: "At the risk of being self defecating...that word of the day toilet paper's pretty good if you need to cut a good promo the night after a curry bender..." -- Leon Rodez

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The last name might have been mentioned once or twice...I know it was mentioned in that short lived feud with Jenny Adams.

 

I've only had the chance to read Zack's promo and Leon's segment. Zack my man, that was intense. I don't know where you're going with the character, but I like the multi layers he has. Very cool.

 

Leon and Jade's interaction was freaking gold. The bitch comment was hilarious.

 

More, better feedback later.

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