Corey_Lazarus 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 January 7, 2004 Feedback me and stuff. Poor and basic and ugly HTML, I know, but I whipped it up while watching the tape out of the corner of my eye. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Styles 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 You obviously put a lot of time and work into it so it deserves to be read and given feedback. Off the bat I'd reccomend using the font for your final thoughts at the bottom for the whole thing because the red typewriter like font was hard on the eyes. I think it fills a good void for those who were used to reading Dames Diatribes. You seem to have more of a stream of conscious kind of style where you recap and just type whatever's on your mind at the time (although it might be easier to read and a little tighter to just point out the main spots of the match.) You're a fair rater and while there's a clear anti-Dutch bias you gave the X match a high rating and the opener a little higher than I would have. Resthold Kid? Hah, that's a little harsh. You even admitted he did a good job in the match. It seems like it took a lot of time to do, but if it's your thing, keep it up. Maybe ask Dames if he'll put it up on the site? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Corey_Lazarus 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 Yeah. Courier kinda sucks, so I'll probably change it to Garamond tomorrow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SamoaRowe 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 Your review was perfect for someone with my attention span (I was raised on Sesame Street, afterall). I enjoyed the review, agreed with much, and understood where you were coming from on the parts that I disagreed with. Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Michrome 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 I enjoyed it Laz, keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tommytomlin 0 Report post Posted January 10, 2004 Good review, but can we make the whole review in Grey text like the analysis at the bottom instead of red? I think my eyes are about to explode Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Real F'n Show Report post Posted January 10, 2004 nice review Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Mosaicv2 Report post Posted January 11, 2004 priceless report corey just priceless!! "JEFF HARDY IS DEAD... & WILLOW THE WHISP IS REBORN... YOW!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest JacK Report post Posted January 12, 2004 Wow, that was pretty good. I expected you to be all biased about everything, but that didn't come accross at all. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tawren 0 Report post Posted January 12, 2004 Good review Laz, you are an excellent writer. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest Dynamite Kido Report post Posted January 13, 2004 Good shit bro, I enjoyed the review. Keep em coming...... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
