Clusterfuck Comments

[HVilleThugg 0]

No, no Charlie...I thought the match was great! I just didn't like how I was elminated...but you know what man...no one would be happy if they were eliminated in kind of a nonchalant way...that's just the way it is. And, you know what...you have to have some of that in there...or your match would suck if everyone was eliminated in some huge dramatic fashion.

 

I was just saying that I wouldn't have chosen to eliminate HVT in that way. That's all...It was a great job man...great job!!

 

Da "didn't mean to seem like the match sucked...kudos" H

[Hank Kingsley 0]

Yeah, but I think it beats Janus' "whistling dixie" way of eliminating Thugg

[Guest Suicide King]

Guys, I think it would be good if we used the comments thread for congratulating the winners.

[janusd 0]

Yeah, but I think it beats Janus' "whistling dixie" way of eliminating Thugg

Shhhhhhh.

 

And congrats, Grap. You beat me out. Shows what Duran knew by believing I'd win, eh?

 

Also congrats to Sacred and Va'aiga, for winning their respective matches, and WC for become zee FIRST NEW CRUISERWEIGHT CHAMPION OMGWTF!!

[the.weej 0]

Allllllllright, I said I'd comment once the Clusterfuck itself went up, and that's what I'm going to do. I also said I'd read Va'aiga's match now, and I swear I'll do that too, but I may not post the comments in a followup. Anyway.

 

First thing's first: Huzzah to Sacred for beating out Landon Maddix with a really good match. The atmosphere, something that's occasionally lackd from your matches, was really enveloping in this one, and I especially thought the references to Landon's history and the neck-psych were nice touches. Great commentary as well. The finish was alright, although I've never really been a fan of those 'I've beaten a guy this way, but I'm going to finish him off in humiliating fashion' endings, mainly because it's not particularly logical. And even if that was the way the match was built, I don't really think Sacred's the type of guy to do that to someone like Landon. It made a little less sense considering he ended up shaking his hand afterwards... but anyway, it didn't read like something you spent one night on, heh.

 

Now. The CF. w00000000t @ SS, and a bit congratulations. I definitely felt your match was the strongest out of the two I sent in to King, and I was hoping you'd be able to pull it out. That's no offense to Janus, either, whom I actually thought put together stronger wrestling for the majority of his match. And if he wants, I can give him a full review later on.

 

Anyway. I have to say that the pacing and organization of the match was about as good as it could've been, so there were no readability issues at all. That was an enormous mark in the match's favour, and I might guess the reason it ended up coming out on top overall. It wasn't without its faults, though... like I mentioned, I think some of the wrestling was bland, and there were too many cute asides in the prose and commentary banter. I also had to question the logic of some of the elimiantions... I think Thugg could've been handled a bit better, and I also have to question Mike going so long, as well as Craven getting both the Diesel push and the most eliminations(I think). The end of the triple-threat struck me as rather... cheap, too, but none of those truly took away from the overall quality of the match. A fine effort and deserving victory all around.

 

-Z