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Watts rises from his seat with a look of surprise on his face, as the camera pans over to show none other than ALFDOGG

 

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Watts rises from his seat with a look of surprise on his face, as the camera pans over to show none other than ALFDOGG

 

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How original!

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I'll have you know It took me a whole 5 minutes.

 

that was good shit though Alf. Did you pawn the WDW title?

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Alf's segment was real good. I've read the last...three or so Helddown's and you guys have majorly impressed me. we've come along way from Anglesault Vs Edge in the mainevent

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I'll have you know It took me a whole 5 minutes.

 

that was good shit though Alf. Did you pawn the WDW title?

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I'll have you know It took me a whole 5 minutes.

 

that was good shit though Alf. Did you pawn the WDW title?

WDWchampion.jpg

How original!

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COACH

Alix's ploy to embarass Dan may have back fired, but if I were Dan I'd watch my back right now, he might have just made this PERSONAL! We'll be right back with more in your face action!

 

CABOOSE

Heh. Just like Alix just got!!

 

COACH

Yeah, that was the joke.

 

CABOOSE

Oh.

 

Come on, fess up. Did you get that idea from Family Guy?

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Alf's segment was real good. I've read the last...three or so Helddown's and you guys have majorly impressed me. we've come along way from Anglesault Vs Edge in the mainevent

What the fuck? When did you get back???

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Well that's always good to know. Good show anyway guys, great angle with Patty at the end. AP is going to be glorificent.

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I've read the last...three or so Helddown's and you guys have majorly impressed me.

hey, The 70s Dude has been involved the past 3 HeldDowns...

 

I = ratings

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Funny promo by Alix. I used to love Recuse Rangers when I was younger, so the entire segment earns 10 more points just for making me relive a childhood memory. The stuff involving Black and Alix was well done. If it weren't for the fact COD want BT, one could say BT are treating them like objects.

 

First a Recuse Rangers reference, then an appear by Barry Horowitz. What more could you ask for in the opening two segments of the show? I love the name of That 70s Dude's finisher.

 

ZACK'S PROMO, as well as ZACK'S MATCH, were to the point. I don't think I've ever seen him like that focus before. :) (FYI: Those segments hadn't been edited in at the time of this post)

 

The Love Doctors have sure come a long way since winning the HI-YAH Inter. tag titles. Perhaps they're developing quite an ego? They've obviously developed psychic powers since they know about the Anderson Cup that has yet to be announced. :lol:

 

Further capitalizing on our 18-34 year old demo, the Axel-Crystal segment was nicely done.

 

Only skimmed Hoff-Jumbo, but I liked how Hoff finished Jumbo off with the "ANGRIEST spinebuster this side of the Atlantic". It did a good job showing how ready Hoff is for Stevens at Anglepalooza.

 

I was feeling the A.J.-Stone segment. I thought A.J.'s promo did an excellent job explaining what he's gone through and why he's back.

 

The Saints and NNMX finally exploded!

 

When Patty asked me to write Krista-Tony for HD I wasn't too sure. Even though T.O.E. are currently feuding with COD, I didn't know much about their characters, but once the comedy bit popped in my mind everything came together. I felt it was one of the better matches I've written, and with the amount of things I have to write in the upcoming weeks, I'm glad it didn't suck.

 

ALF!

 

Holly nearly went Hell's Hitmen on Candie. Poor thing.

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Guest Phenom

Holy crap! It's C-Dub-M......Dub-M!

 

I move that we declare CWMwasmurdered as President of the OAOAST.

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COACH

Alix's ploy to embarass Dan may have back fired, but if I were Dan I'd watch my back right now, he might have just made this PERSONAL! We'll be right back with more in your face action!

 

CABOOSE

Heh. Just like Alix just got!!

 

COACH

Yeah, that was the joke.

 

CABOOSE

Oh.

 

Come on, fess up. Did you get that idea from Family Guy?

I don't remember it from Family Guy...but I probably stole it subconsciously. Or something.

 

Good show, anyways.

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Guest Failed Mascot

I'll leave feedback when the entire show is up.

 

I'm talking to you Mr. "Work two jobs that interfere with my e-fedding" Malibu~!

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Guest Failed Mascot

You should quit your jobs, live with your parents, and e-fed like the rest of us.

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Coach: What are you talking about Boose? The OAOAST is hotter than ever and kicking on all cylinders

What a shameless liar the Coach is! Anyway, much like Tony, I like the name of T70G’s finisher.

 

I didn’t do the AP ad because I was to busy watching Newlyweds on DVD.

 

I figured that Tony would do a better job with the Krista/T-Bod match then I would so I asked him to write it, and what do ya know? It turned out to be very good. Jivin Jr is nuts. Cute touch with those guys from Married With Children.

 

Eski, did a nice job on his part of the Alix skit. Again, Jr is nuts.

 

The rest of you'll get some form of useless feedback later.

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