Tony149 0 Report post Posted November 2, 2008 Show's up in HE. Left spaces for Rodez/Black and the ME. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dr. Zoidberg 0 Report post Posted November 2, 2008 HOLLA!! Co-Main Event!! More feedback when I get back from SF, but off the top of my head: 1. Heartland Halloween Hootenanny was A+ stellar. 2. Excellent Zack/Moneymaker promo. 3. Malaysia/Mr. Dick vs. JR-D/KID was HEEEELLLLLLLSA the rule!! More detailed versions of ALL matches when I get back. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alfdogg 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 Great choice for the opening video. Nice match between Baron and CW. The commentary was really good, too. Another terrific promo between Zack and Moneymaker. Great stuff as usual from Patty with the MSM segment, and the preceding mixed tag. I wonder where this whole angle goes from here, specifically the interaction between Malaysia and Krista. And at the Johnny Jax cameo. Nice job by Zack on our segment. This was our first real interaction since the DA got back together, hopefully we can get some more in before it runs its course. I felt kind of guilty shoving all the work off onto him, but I felt the segment would come off better if I did it that way. I could never keep up with him promo-wise the way he's been going lately, especially while trying to split my best stuff between Alf and Reject. The tag title match was tremendous. The action was non-stop, and I liked the ending, with all the leaders getting involved. Terrific I-C title match, with CMJ cementing his prick heel status in the aftermath. Should be interesting to see the status of Jereme Grey and his title. MOTN: tag title match LOTN: "I ain’t trynna dis on Mister Moneymaker’s steez or nothing, but I ain’t seen one good thing outta Baron since Mister Dick went Ike on his Tina Turner ass. This dude’s like a ho in a Lifetime movie. We gonna see him out in the middle of a flower field singing “Its not right but its okay” by Whitney Houston. This dude has more pussy in em then a Designing Women marathon. Ol Delta Burke ass nigga." - Coach Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alfdogg 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 P.S. Friday: Pacers 95, Celtics 79 Sunday: Colts 18, Patriots 15 fucka buncha Boston Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alfdogg 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 P.S.S. COACH Who wants to sex Synth? "I'll be expecting royalties for this!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tony149 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 (edited) Heartland Halloween Hootenanny: Fun opener. Awesome beyond words. The bit with TT and MISTER Warrior had me LMAO. CW vs. BW: Tough loss for BW after it seemed like he had it won. Strong exchange between Zack and Moneymaker. MD/Malaysia vs. Krista/Jade: Titty twister~! Had a blast reading this match. Middle School Musical was goddamn hilarious. Alix going off on her mother and then without missing a beat asking the kids to vote Maya was priceless. Plus you can’t go wrong with the Ghostbusters theme. I wonder if given a choice, do you think Terry Taylor would much rather be remembered as the object of Krista/COD's jokes or the Red Rooster. I mean, bound and gagged or this. You decide. For the longest of time I thought Zack had beaten Alf for one of his title reigns. As it turns out, they’ve only met once on a now defunct PPV (Ashes II Ashes, which we dropped after learning it was an SWF event) during Alf‘s first reign. Their segment has me wanting to see another go between the two. DS vs. Sandman9000: After winning the opener I thought DS might get the title here, but SM was too much at the end. Truth be told about the 4 way tag match, I actually stopped in the middle of the match to rewrite the entire thing a couple of days before the show. Hated what I originally had and scrapped it completely. Grey vs. Ragdoll: The ending had me fooled. Thought for sure we’d have a title change. CMJ was badass at the end doing whatever the hell wanted, stealing the IC title. Match of the Night: Mr. Dick & Malaysia vs. the Duncan Girls Quote of the Show: “GOD DAMN, YOU ASSHOLE! You ever heard of FUCKING LISTERINE?” -- Tony Tourettes Edited November 3, 2008 by Tony149 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ed Wood Caulfield 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 The main event has been edited into the show! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Cucaracha 0 Report post Posted November 3, 2008 As has my match. My one of 2 and a half matches that is. Hence why it's only being edited in now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tony149 0 Report post Posted November 4, 2008 Here’s the rest of my feedback. I also noticed Charles Robinson appears to be our referee of choice. He almost got used in half our matches had I not written him out of the 4 way tag in favor of Clem. Black vs. Rodez: Excellent back and forth counter. What can I say, I suck leaving feedback! 5 man prism: Writing intros can be a pain in the ass. But what a match this was. MOTY candidate IMO. Overall, strong show. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Cucaracha 0 Report post Posted November 4, 2008 Well, at a loss for actual constructive feedback, I give you my random observations and comments of The Halloween Spectacular. Heartland Hootenany: Ah, nothing says fun like a big multi-man chaotic opener. Unless you're writing it. Not entirely sure I kept up with everything without a map to hand or personal experience of the venue, but it was entertaining whatever was happening! With a huge wacky roster like ours, these matches always work. MISTER WARRIOR pounds on his chest, then runs to the railroad track and hops onto the train, and the camera watches as he rides off into the distance. Hilarious. I can just imagine Warrior pumping his fists like a maniac as the train very slowly pulls away into the distance. Warrior's one of our greatest characters and he only ever shows up in these things. Maybe that's why. I hope the baby stroller was unoccupied. Lots of entertaining chaos, all over a switch to open a gate. It's like a TNA gimmick match would be if they realised their own camp value! Hmm, I originally thought Sandman was in the match, shows how much attention I pay. Anyway, very entertaining start and a good bit of roster management from Alf. CW vs. Baron: It always amuses me how Coach and Cole can go from semi-competent wrestling announcers to a completely insane pair of characters and back again depending on the segment. It beats their run on SD. Many LOLs at the Stewie Griffin t-shirt being more over with the fans than some of the roster. You don't treat a t-shirt like that if you're a real man. I had to look up 'puissance'. I have failed. This was a nice change of pace, a perfectly good midcard match. And I mean that in the nicest way, honestly. $8.99 for a wrestling figure? I'm thinking it must be an accurate price since Zack's got the inside track, but I would have thought a brand new OAOAST figure would be more than that. Boy, that must be a hell of a figure collection needed to own every OAOAST superstar, nevermind alternate attires. Zack/Moneymaker is sizing up pretty nicely. You know, if it happens. Wink wink. COD/Mr. Dick and Malaysia: Hey, I wrote this one! The, quote, 'semen geysers' weren't my idea though. You go to Patty when you want that kinda entertainment. Stay classy LA. Jade getting tied up in the ropes was gold. Middle School Musical: I have just one question... where the fuck did Beck come from!? I got halfway through and I swear he wasn't mentioned, then all of a sudden he's banging on the window! Zack getting two interviews, that's what happens when you're feuding with eight stables at once. Next week, Vinny Valentine and Biff Atlas bust on The In Crowd! Nice little exchange, interesting to see where it leads. Sandman vs. Denzel: Again, a nice little match, nothing needlessly long like my matches. Glad Sandman retained too. This Heartland Title reign could carry on for a long time and I'd be perfectly happy, he is the division. 4-Way Tag Title Match: Nice way to write Sly out. Uhm, again. I'm ashamed to say I don't know what the Outlaw rule is in reference too. Once more I have failed. A ton of chaos in this one, plenty of entertainment for all and maybe Sly wasn't written out after all! What do I know? Another big win for Reject too. Jereme vs. Ragdoll: Cole worrying about warmth when confronted by a lady in a skimpy costume, continuing his sometimes homosexual, occassionally assexual OAOAST persona. I'm tailing off here with usefullness at the end, but this was some interesting story progression, gets CMJ across nicely. 5-Way Match: Well it's half mine so I'll just say Ed did a hell of a job finishing it off. I really struggled getting into any sort of rhythm writing my part though for some reason. MOTN: 5-Way Prism Match, even though I wrote half of it! OMGTHECORRUPTION~! LOTN: "My addiction to those very same gummy vitamins ruined my career and destroyed my family." Maya Duncan Blanchard Truest LOTN: "Its interesting how the OAOAST works. Jock Mulligan began has career as a silent, respectful, moderately dressed cowboy struggling to make a name for himself. Now, he's a vulgar, mean spirited jerk and we can see his cock ring through his tights." Michael Cole Return OTN: "Please. I have aids." Johnny Jax Funniest Sudden And Unexpected Change Of Subject OTN: COLE Mackenzie, The Enterprise seems to be recruiting Baron Windells, or at the very least you all have been scouting him for a while. I know stables are popular these days, and you’re all about recognition and prestigious institutions. But, you don’t need a big name or big things behind you to do big things. Jimi Hendrix did some great things in the army. MACKENZIE Jimi Hendrix also faked being a homosexual to get out of the army. COLE How’s your painting going? MACKENZIE Good. Thank you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
