Twisted Intestine
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http://youtube.com/watch?v=0CcycaiEDrs When/What was that for? I don't recognize the guy at the end, but it looks like a late night talk show?
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Could you pass the US citizenship test?
Twisted Intestine replied to CanadianChris's topic in General Chat
It's okay, we learn nothing about America either (From high school of course... We learn plenty from the media). English history we get. Australia is ran by convicts. -
So I have finished readin "I drink rats milk". I'm going to start with the bad, so I can end my post on a good note because overall it was an enjoyable read. The Bad: - Typos throughout. You would benefit from having somebody read through it with the purpose of looking for the typos. - Near the beginning, I found it hard to relate to the main character, Anthony, because I had more in common with the "David" character, so what seemed weird to the narrator made the narrator seem weird to me. - At certain points mostly in the first half of the book, I sometimes got lost in the dialogue, and couldn't tell who was saying what. I don't know if that's my fault, or if you need more references in some of the dialouge heavy scenes as to who is speaking. - Near the end of the book, it seemed a little weird to me that the "David" character would come back (I think he did it twice?) to town just to talk to Anthony for all of five minutes before leaving again. Or is it to be assumed he had other business to attend to in the town as well? - One little thing that bothered me... Ant said something like "The woman I fought with was Beth, but in her smile I can see Mary, the woman I've been falling for" ... Or something like that. Anyways, then in the next chapter he keeps on mentioning how she used to be Mary but now the woman he's in love with is Beth. Do you understand what I'm saying? The Good: - Good pace throughout the story, never got bored. - The dialogue was very real, especially during the fights between Anthony and Anna. - Interesting characters. - The story itself was interesting. - Very descriptive writing - sets a good picture in the readers mind of what they're dealing with. All and all a job well done. I'd probably give it ***/*****, probably changing to ***1/2 if just a little problem like the typos were fixed. Oh, and Anthony should have had an affair on Anna with David. Then there'd also be the added drama in the David/Anthony/Mary triangle of all of them having fucked each other, and the possibility of a 3way.
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The Things That Anger You Thread.
Twisted Intestine replied to Man Who Sold The World's topic in General Chat
Do you work at a big store? If so, can't people just buy 10, go put them in their car, come back and buy 10 more etc? -
We're all winners!
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You're one to talk.
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I really liked the first one, and this one looks like it's going to be far better than the first one.
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Could you pass the US citizenship test?
Twisted Intestine replied to CanadianChris's topic in General Chat
I scored 30%! Woohoo! Do they use different questions, or the same ones for every test? Because if they're the same, I can easily memorize 20 answers to become a US citizen. -
Oh yeah, now that it's over I can say that a few other characters I wanted to pick are: Daken (Wolvie's son) Windego Omega Red There was another girl I wanted to, but I think I've forgotten who she is now. Edit: I also really wanted to pick Shredder.
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My team's the best. Everyone else have all these obscure bland characters... All my characters are like CHICHICHI!! DIE! POW POW POW! WHAMM!! WE ROCK! Everyone else's are like "Hey.. would you like some tea?"
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We're supposed to rank? Wel that's easy, I rank me #1 thanks!
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Boo to using PMs. I was going to see who ranked me lowest and get vengeance!
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I would have gone with the original Doc Ock.
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Be sure to treat her real special tonight and tell her you love her.
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Andrew, there's a WWE DVD thread here: http://forums.thesmartmarks.com/index.php?showtopic=88971
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It's also Canada day.
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I'm gunna clone an army of evil robot yous's using... Mister Sinister completes my team... Look at how dark my team is, they all have red eyes and shiiit. Mister Sinister's physiology was altered by Apocalypse, giving him an extended lifespan including superhuman strength, stamina, reflexes, and tremendous resistance to injury. Since then, Sinister has copied mutant genes into his own body to provide for additional powers; shapeshifting, allowing him to regenerate from massive damages; formidable mental powers; Sinister has been referred to as one of the five most skilled telepaths known to Exodus, and has demonstrated telekinetic abilities in the past.[12] He has also been able to project concussive force bolts and generate force fields possibly psionic in nature. Sinister has the psionic ability to take instant control of the minds of other persons. He also has the ability to establish mental blocks in the minds of others, thereby preventing them from striking against him. He also has the ability to project his mind into the astral plane. His clothing is of an unknown composition, and seems to function as body armor.
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Way of the future, or to the scrap yard?
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He can pick The Mask, but I can't pick Ninja Turtles? The Mask?!
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Still, how's he find these people? Does he google people on death watch or something?
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Okay then, change it to 30 or 40% of the population of this message board.
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Nope. I bet for every 100 Americans you asked maybe 1 or 2 would know who he is. For every 100 people internationally under 1 person would know. To be famous you should at least have to be known by 30 or 40% of people.
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Yeah, it's stupid researching people who are almost dead, I like just picking random celebs. Next year the rules should be that they need to have a certain level of fame like be famous for acting or music or a sports star or something... Not the oldest living person in Kansis City.