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I thought it was a fairly good show. I've only really had a chance to skim though.

 

My props were f'n left out though! Why am I always forgotten?

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My props, too, were left out. *cries*

 

I'll give more detailed comments later (maybe), but first off, big ups to Sly, not because he did so much, but because he did it all with such quality. Sly man, that was amazing.

 

By and large I thought the show was excellent; it was entertaining as hell with lots of good matches, and it built well to AM, too.

 

And please, everyone, read the Ejaculation Chamber match. I can't remember laughing that hard.

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You're way too kind. If I didn't know better, I'd start to think you were being insincere. But nonetheless *blushes* thanks.

 

And if anyone less impressed would like to comment, please do so, as this was my first real foray into match writing. Any critiques would be welcome.

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Haven't had the chance to read everything yet, but *MUCH* love for the Ejaculation chamber. That was funny as hell.

 

I'll have more comments once I've read everything.

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I swear, I spit up water when the Grren Ranger showed. I had to change shirts.

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Great show guys, awesome effort all round.

 

OK, lets start with the obvious:

 

Super X Cup: Sly, this was, put simply, awesome. MAD props go to you my man, because all the matches, plus the little AJ slight heel turn at the end, were just great. The Pure Wrestling rules really added an extra element in a night of No Holes Barred matches. I'm really looking forward to the build up for Lyne-AJ.

 

Zack-Rags: Ken, great writing. Good back and forth match, with all the high spots you coiuld ever want. I didn't really understand the Malibu handshake at the end though. Hopefully I'll understand in the next few weeks.

 

Hoff-CWM: Hoff, if this is what you can produce in your first big match, I know when you get experience, you will be an amazing writer. This was a great match, and the non finish was somewhat appropriate, as we haven't seen the last of these two.

 

Ejaculation Chamber: GOLD. GOLD right the way through. The Green Ranger run in, the appearance by God, Frank Stallone, just everything. Wow, just wow.

 

Skull-Ryan: Dama, yet another really cool match, that sets up the feud between Dama and Smith quite nicely. Good stuff.

 

BPP-Black: Im not too sure of the whole background for this one, because I skim through IZ, but again, really good match.

 

8 Man Elimination Match: Really ghey. The worst match ever...

 

...no seriously, I was happy with the way it turned out, and feedback would be greatly appreciated. Please. PLEASE!

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Great show. I loved all the matches. The Super X Cup was awesome as was the Ejacuation Chamber Match.

 

My phone got disconnected and thus I was unable to send in the segments I wanted to send in for Zero Hour. Chuck, would it be okay if you edited my segments into the show, please?

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Mine and Hoff's props have still not been edited in!

 

Edit by Northstar: Don't be so snarky, sparky. I just added them in.

Edited by Northstar

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Guest FrigidSoul

I'd like to think that me, RRR, and NY Untouchable somehow helped inspire the choice for Urkel to be god. Either way I laughed hard enough where a tear came out. Absolutely beautiful.

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I do not appreciate my fiancee being made fun of in the E.C. match

I didn't know this was a storyline.

 

MAKE FUN OF ME ALL YOU FUCKING WANT.

 

BUT YOU FUCKERS WILL NOT INSULT MY FIANCEE!

 

GOT IT?

 

For everyone who commented on the match, I HOPE YOU FUCKING REALIZE WHAT WENT ON.

 

THIS IS A GODDAMNED EFED. SHE IS NOT INVOLVED IN THIS. I AM.

 

You all hit very low on this one. very fucking low.

 

I hope you all are happy.

 

 

This is a very very very low thing to do.

Edited by Stephen Joseph

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Mine and Hoff's props have still not been edited in!

 

Edit by Northstar: Don't be so snarky, sparky. I just added them in.

Excellent.....finally........*laughs*

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And things appear to be getting heated here.

Maybe we should all step back and just think......"good wrestling". Our biggest show of the year is coming up and everyone has to put on a good match to make it the best ever. Breath young grasshoppers!

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I do not appreciate my fiancee being made fun of in the E.C. match

I didn't know this was a storyline.

 

MAKE FUN OF ME ALL YOU FUCKING WANT.

 

BUT YOU FUCKERS WILL NOT INSULT MY FIANCEE!

 

GOT IT?

 

For everyone who commented on the match, I HOPE YOU FUCKING REALIZE WHAT WENT ON.

 

THIS IS A GODDAMNED EFED. SHE IS NOT INVOLVED IN THIS. I AM.

 

You all hit very low on this one. very fucking low.

 

I hope you all are happy.

 

 

This is a very very very low thing to do.

Hey, Stephen, I can't speak for anyone else, but I thought that you knew about this. And, I don't think any of us realized you'd take it so personally. I don't know you at all; I was just laughing at something that was written humorously, and it seems like a lot of people were in the same boat, especially with Urkel and the Green Ranger and all (it didn't seem like the focus of the match was on you all that much). Still, sorry for laughing.

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It was not funny, nor appropriate, to involve her.

 

I could handle a spoofing of me...but even that is pushing it considering the past history that exists.

 

Supes and AP would have to have known I would take this very, very personally. They never asked me about it, no mod ever let me know this was going on.

 

Last night Jenni's parents were so mean to her, she almost drove through the night up to DC to move in with me. It will probably happen.

 

I am not in a mood to put up with shit like this.

 

Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go yell at her parents.

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I apologize.

 

 

 

Everyone, when I was writing the Ejaculation Chamber match, I didn't realize that Billy Crystal would be hosting the Academy Awards the same night that Zero Hour was supposed to take place. Since we all know that someone can't be in two different places at the same time, I feel that Mr.Crystal being present in the Green Ranger costume not only hurt the realism of Ejaculation Chamber match, but the whole PPV itself.

 

In retrospect, I should have made someone different under the Green Ranger mask. Hopefully you can all forgive me for ruining the integrity of the event.

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Guest FrigidSoul

I still wanna know which one is the fiance. I'm guessing the heavyset girl with pretty cute face and huge knockers. I could be wrong however.

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Okay...

 

THAT WAS FUCKING UNCALLED FOR.

 

Thankfully, I don't have any pictures of my fiancee up on the web anywhere. Sorry to disappoint, she's actually rather thing and rather short and rather cute.

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Guest FrigidSoul

How was it uncalled for? I was just curious and the only pics I've seen of women you're with is that girl at a wedding thingie you were dancing with and that heavyset girl in the blue shirt. While being heavy she still had a cute face and giant breasts. I don't think I insulted her in anyway.

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It just is. It doesn't read well.

 

Maybe I'm just very pissed off. I have a pictures library on my site somewhere that has pictures 3 or 4 years old. That's what they used.

 

They should never have posted the pictures, or the people, or referred to them.

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Guest FrigidSoul

Well the one in the blue shirt looked ok. If she had a nice personality and hasn't slept around I might hit it.

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Guest FrigidSoul

I wouldn't just use her for sex, I'd go out with her.

 

I hate to tell you this but...people are going to sooner or later have sex with your friends. They might even have children~!

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WHOA! Jenni is your fiancé???!!!?

 

Popick, you really need to chill out. Stephen Joseph Poplex is different than Stephen Joseph Popick, why shouldn't Jenni be different than Jenni? Really, all you're doing with this is giving us more material to work with.

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