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More comments when i get back from work. For now - thank fuck my team won, and if Zenon ISN'T in charge any more, then who the hell IS?

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Guest Ghetto Bird

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Well... I guess that'll teach me to read the promo shows... excuse me while I wipe this egg off my face.

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More comments when i get back from work. For now - thank fuck my team won, and if Zenon ISN'T in charge any more, then who the hell IS?

<Kelly>ME!

 

Anyway, I really enjoyed that show. And I can't wait to see what the next one has in store.

 

I'd give more detailed opinions, but for matches...I think I suck at that. ^^;;;;

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Guest Horse hockey!

My first no show and I hated doing it. Alas, work and school pulled me away.

 

Fury, enjoy that belt while you can. :angry:

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BORT!!

 

That made me stop reading for a bit and laugh. Though, in all honesty, GOdrea says "BORT!" while Andrea does not. I mean, I've never seen Toxx call anyone 'sunshine' in chat. And such.

 

Good show, except for the no-shows, and the loss-ification.

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Just for the record, there's no-one as the storyline commissioner at the moment. In storyline, you could say King is 'entertaining' new commissioner ideas, although he probably won't be deciding on something anytime soon. A commissioner isn't really necessary for anything.

 

-Z

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BORT!!

 

That made me stop reading for a bit and laugh. Though, in all honesty, GOdrea says "BORT!" while Andrea does not. I mean, I've never seen Toxx call anyone 'sunshine' in chat. And such.

 

Good show, except for the no-shows, and the loss-ification.

Well... 'sunshine' is more of a thing that I would say if I was getting worked up with someone face-to-face. And even then not often. I would never really type it.

 

God I am shattered.

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Guest Evan Douglas Wolfe

Crap. Sorry about the no show folks. Four power outages (yes, four) due to Hurricane Jeanne combined with a couple of twelve-hour workdays will do that, I guess.

 

I wish I'd known Uncle Filthy wasn't going to show. I should've sent in the song I was going to have him sing before the match, if I had written it...

 

"E is for Evan, my opponent tonight,

 

V is for Violence, my favorite delight.

 

A is for Ass, and yours I will kick,

 

N is for Nada, THE SIZE OF YOUR--"

 

At this point the match would've been interrupted by Evan's music.

 

Ah well. I'll get started early on this next match.

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No worries, Evan. Thanks for letting us know you had a reason so the bookers don't chalk you up as a kid who joined and forgot about the fed.

 

I'll try to read the show some time this weekend.

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Guest Suicide King

Silly Birdman. Z is teh toasted!

 

Yes, King is now taking applications for the position of Commish! Currently the fed is running itself much as it previously has without a commish, but we're keeping the window open. It's like this. If you think you have an actual compelling storyline idea for it, please propose it to Zed. If you don't, well, we've done the hell out of commish storylines over the past two years and it might be time to give it a rest.

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OK, here we go. It's eyes down and look-in on...

 

Birdman being VERY silly. I may not always read the matches in full, but I ALWAYS read the promos. Cos they might be, you know, important?

 

Opening promo from Max King - does well at establishig his character further as the ultimate cocky heel, but he'll have a hard time playing that "best rookie" title up when I'm sitting on my 2nd World Title reign... ;)

 

Carnage vs RKade - decent first match. Nothing special by any means, but the word limits are always low in the card. Pay attention to the way other people write the commentators, but that'll come with time. A couple of the descriptions jarred a little - RKade doubled over and in a clothelineable position following a spinebuster? - but generally pretty tight, and I liked the 'FREAK' chant. That's a little something that could go a long way, in time.

 

Actually, fuck. Imagine a Carnage/RKade tag team. Weird AND hossy.

 

 

Evan vs Filthy - well, while Ebony is fun, DNS sucks.

 

 

Davis vs Fury - 1st person is odd, but I do have to say I like the way Fury interlinks 1st and 3rd so we still get the wider picture. I'll be intrigued to see the rematch, if there is one.

 

That's all for now. Need to sleep

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Davis vs Fury - 1st person is odd, but I do have to say I like the way Fury interlinks 1st and 3rd so we still get the wider picture. I'll be intrigued to see the rematch, if there is one.

Hell, I'm game. :)

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Guest Horse hockey!
Hell, I'm game. :)

You'll be more than game once I'm through with you.

 

Grrrrrr. Fear my cuspids.

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Guest Ghetto Bird
... Birdman being VERY silly. I may not always read the matches in full, but I ALWAYS read the promos. Cos they might be, you know, important?

Eh???

 

Why do people keep saying this? I mean, I know why Drea keeps saying it; she just likes to call people silly, but seriously: aside from the fact that I failed to notice that Zed was no longer the commissioner, what was "silly" about my promo?

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Not knowing that Zed had blown town after flipping off King is silly enough.

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Well, you see, Birdman...

 

The SWF writers are often a bastardized mixture of muppets and Furbies. The "muppet" part is expressed when we act as silly characters in promos and then keep character in comments and other out-of-character posts.

 

The "Furbies" part includes recording anything said that sounds 'neat' and repeating it ad nauseam.

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