Feedback for the 2/17 show!

[Hoff 0]

Side note: Patty lets you put it anywhere.

[Hoff 0]

I'm going insane tonight.

Try to burn down Hardcore Discussion.

 

Ryan Smith...pfft.

[NYU 0]

 

I'm gonna burn this whole place down if Phenom doesn't leave feedback!

[Guest Failed Mascot]

Damaramu (Damn-uh-ram-ou) n/v. :

 

1. A jock that jumps from sports bandwagon to sports bandwagon and cums within 30 seconds of inserting penis into a woman. Also begs for feedback on his horrid writing while supplying no feedback for the good writing of others.

Examples

 

a) My friend was with his woman and totally Damaramued thus leaving her unsatisfied

 

b) First you like 49ers and now you like the Eagles? What a Damaramu

 

c) He passed out his story along with everybody else but completely Damaramued when it came to sharing thoughts.

[NYU 0]

By the way, that was Hoff. Not me.

 

I would never own a beige visor.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

If you don't watch out, I'll call you a Ryan Smith.

 

I'm going insane tonight.

[Guest Phenom]

I'm leaving feedback.

 

My feedback is: Purple.

 

Thank you.

[NYU 0]

Not to be a prick or anything, but bro, you really do need to leave some kind of feedback once in a while. Just to indicate that you actually are reading through the shows, and you care about other work besides yours. No one's asking you to leave detailed feedback like Hoff, Tony, or I leave most of the time.....but just comment on certain segments. Really. I don't know if I can remember you leaving feedback once since you started here. You certainly take in the feedback others give you, but you never give it out to anyone else. I definitely understand if you might not have a lot of time to do it, but it doesn't take more than a few minutes to just comment on random parts. Even LPYC and Cappa have found the time to leave thoughts once in a while, and I know both of them have particularly tough schedules. Damaramu almost never left feedback -- and people definitely noticed. You don't want to be a Damaramu. It's just not fun.

 

I actually like Frigid's method of only leaving feedback to people that gave feedback the week before. Maybe that might spur more people to leave comments....

[Guest Failed Mascot]

I don't read Phenom's stuff because I get the impression he doesn't read anybody else's. It seems like he does his own thing, sends the stuff in and from there awaits for people to talk about it. If that's how he wants to do it then fine, but you won't be seeing me reading the stuff or commenting on it.

 

Although I do read it when Rando does it because I know he reads my stuff...least I get the feeling he does when talking to him.

[Guest Phenom]

Not to be a prick or anything, but bro, you really do need to leave some kind of feedback once in a while. Just to indicate that you actually are reading through the shows, and you care about other work besides yours. No one's asking you to leave detailed feedback like Hoff, Tony, or I leave most of the time.....but just comment on certain segments. Really. I don't know if I can remember you leaving feedback once since you started here. You certainly take in the feedback others give you, but you never give it out to anyone else. I definitely understand if you might not have a lot of time to do it, but it doesn't take more than a few minutes to just comment on random parts. Even LPYC and Cappa have found the time to leave thoughts once in a while, and I know both of them have particularly tough schedules. Damaramu almost never left feedback -- and people definitely noticed. You don't want to be a Damaramu. It's just not fun.

 

I actually like Frigid's method of only leaving feedback to people that gave feedback the week before. Maybe that might spur more people to leave comments....

The problem is, I can't write about people. I've never been good with critisism, good or bad. I don't have to attention span to write individual coments about every piece. Heck, it takes me 3 days to write a match. If I could have the strength to write a comment about everything I read, I wouldn't be failing English.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

The problem is, I can't write about people. I've never been good with critisism, good or bad. I don't have to attention span to write individual coments about every piece. Heck, it takes me 3 days to write a match. If I could have the strength to write a comment about everything I read, I wouldn't be failing English.

[Hoff 0]

At first glance, I thought the cow was ice cream.

 

Phenom, you don't HAVE to do anything, but I'm sure you could muster out one sentence on a few segments a week if you tried. We'd like to hear your take on it (I speak for the group now).

[Hoff 0]

Err, the shit, not the cow...that'd just be weird.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

Damnit Hoff that's a Bull. Also...that is ice cream...I got it just for you. Go ahead and eat it pal.

[Hoff 0]

[Tony149 0]

I finally got the chance to read the "Race for the Gold" match in its entirity, and it was by far one of the funniest things I've ever read in the OAOAST. So many great moments. From the biker rider's revenge on Stone, to "Alix" flashing her breasts, to Gallagher that isn't named Peter getting work, to the priest's using wrestling jargon to spread his message, the Flair (WHOOO and WOOO, for those who think it's spelled the other way) announcer cameo, Stone stealing the tricycle from the 3-year-old, and all the other wild and crazy cameo apperances near the end. But I think my favorite moment was the elderly couple moving at a faster rate than Stone and his ride, even though they need the aid of a cane and walker! That and the Family Guy song at the end.

 

Awesome job, NY. And everybody else who wrote something this week. Hopefully next week's show is just as hot as this past week's.

 

A wrestler's face rubbed into a fat person's ass sweat? Only in the OAOAST!

[Guest Phenom]

This is my best attempt at beefback:

 

Who are The Libertines? They sound like Joy Division.

 

Good Hitmen/Black T match. Who was the face? Also liked the lifeguard bit.

 

I want Hoff to have Dr. Pepper tattooed on his chest.

 

I think “The Show” should be Zack’s nickname.

 

Hoff vs. Axel at AM4 would rock.

 

Kurt Angle? The ‘Sault would be proud.

 

Who is Vince Rusco? Like a faux-Russo?

 

If GPX turned heel, I think that would be awesome. Good match, anyway.

 

I await the Crystal/Axel tape. Bring in Rodez!

 

DQ endings always get me down. Especially when they mean little to nothing.

 

ALIX

Also you can invite Donald Duck, but not Daisy Duck because I don’t think ducks should be having sex. Call me bigoted, or ignorant but I am firmly opposed to duck fornication of any kind!

 

Brilliance.

 

Does Tina have a last name? She should.

 

Two segments together make them both look not as good.

 

Marty Jannetty? Isn’t he, like, disabled? Get Sid Eudy on the line!

 

And what’s up with Holly-Wood? Is that one name or two?

 

I also see a face turn for His Sarcasticness.

 

I didn’t get Cappa’s thing, much like the announcers.

 

Jumbo should be the smartest man on HD but have to listen to the dumbest.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I think I have a feud for Stevens.

 

TSD VS. AUSSTIN>? ZOMG~!

 

Is there a love triangle going on, like Hardy/Lita/Kane? Because that was awesome…for about a month.

 

Good Hollywood/West Hollywood match.

 

Interesting bit with Candie.

 

Commenting on the Run for the Gold would be too much, because it was, well, all gold. From Gallagher to Hick-A-Doo-La, we have MOTY right here. Not since the Ejaculation Chamber has such randomness been seen in the squared circle. All it needed was a robot and you could have ended the OAOAST right there.

[NYU 0]

Nice.

 

Really man, you do that once in a while, and it's all good. You did fine for someone that can't write about people.

 

Hoff vs. Axel at AM4 would rock.

 

But major boos on that.

 

And Tony's the man. Really.

Edited February 20, 2005 by NY Untouchable

[Hoff 0]

Would rock...WILL rock...it's all good.

 

 

Phenom, not to sound like a support group, but that was great. Better than SOME people...and you KNOW who you are...bitches....

[CanadianChick 0]

Sorry I couldn't get this feedback in earlier...but better late than never I suppose.

 

Nice touch with the opening and making the show seem special.

 

Seriously, who wants to "La La" during a wrestling show? Not that many horny girls watch...

 

What an...interesting concept for a match. I'm really liking Josie as the GM. She's such an easily conflictable character, face or heel, which is pretty important for a GM. Any character could conflict with her, easily.

 

AHH! My mind's eyes are BURNING with the mental image of JR in a bikini! BURNING! I like how the match clearly depicts the intelligence vs. strength factor, with intelligence eventually winning. Not to say Black T lacks strength, but you get what I'm trying to say. Simple match stories like that, with HH just purely relying on strength while BT relies on skills, intelligence and teamwork to get the eventual win are great. Oh, and the ref not counting because of the illegal man in the ring is a very nice touch.

 

Psh, I can't believe Hoff sold out! Come on now, Dr. Pepper is great, but A&W Root Beer is the only pop to sell out your soul for. Anywho, good promo. When Hoff said "backfighter", I thought it said "backyarder". Now THAT would have been uncalled for!

 

The tag match was too short, but whatever.

 

Hawaiian shorts and a button down white linen shirt? Zacky, get some style man! I'm not going to touch the Y Chromosome comment as it's been telegraphed already. Man, it must be such a pain to get outsmarted by a chick all the time! Good promo, because now I'm intrigued who the returning team is.

 

I can't help but notice the lack of Crystal signs.

 

Question: Wouldn't Hoff be hard to chant? One syllabol names are strange. The timing has to be perfect! Another question: what's a goomba? Good promo between the three, as we have tension no matter what match there is at AM 4. Good to build up prior to actually knowing what the match will be.

 

I can't even begin to describe just how much of a mark I am for GPX. I really can't. If they were a real team, I'd be like a Jeff Hardy fangirl for them. Seriously.

 

Are the Saints going to break up? Are GPX turning heel? Because if they did, I'd probably mark out for them even more, because that's what a good fangirl does. Another good tag match leading to the Anderson Cup finals. I loved how with all the cool moves, the tension between the Saints and the not-so-subtle heelish tactics by GPX shined through. And a nice, intense after match beatdown to boot.

 

Isn't Axel a sweet talker? Oh, well maybe not since he has about a gazillion enemies. Well, at least he's a ladies man.

 

That conversation between Josie and Alix made my head spin. I think everybody knows a girl similar to Alix. My friend is like that, and she provides entertainment all the time.

 

I'm a bit surprised that Lindsay got so much offence on Tina. Fun little match. I like that the women's division is slowly getting built up. And that little sword fight thing was pretty cool. And my eyes hurt from ALL THE CAPITAL LETTERS.

 

Marty Jannetty? What kind of strings were pulled to bring him in?!?! The ratings increased 10 fold just because of his face! Cool way to use the settings in the match.

 

That should be a fun 6 man tag, since I'm assuming Jim will get his ass kicked. That's always fun to see.

 

HA! "Get to the point!" Best line that a crowd member shouted out, ever. EVER.

 

I feel sorry for Jimbo. The poor lug doesn't get any love.

 

Brock Ausstin, heh? That'll be an interesting match to say the least. I get this perverse pleasure about people getting their asses kicked. I should really get help...

 

Alright, now I don't feel sorry for Jimbo. Bastard! Like a scene taken out from a movie, but eyes got watery during the embrace of Axel and Crystal...okay maybe not, but good job Adam!

 

Whoa, wait a minute! Do Tina and Candie have the same entrance music? Fun prematch banter between Candie and Cole about Ned's fashion sense. Another good women's match, and I enjoyed this one even more than Tina/Lindsay. Candie's random age comments didn't hurt either. And Blood on the Dance Floor? B-R-UTAL! Ouch! Nice finish too! I really think this match could have been the main event...

 

...until I read the main event. Oh dear god, I laughed hard during this. Job to God? Fucking brilliant! I can't even point out everything I loved about it. Whoever wrote it knows it's genius.

 

Wow, this took a longtime.

[Zack Malibu 0]

HEY! I've worn that very outfit before, and it is stylish!

 

Also, total markout for Tony making another OC reference in his feedback.

[Hank Kingsley 0]

Hey guys, instead of just going through and deleting old stats, you could've moved or reposted them into an archived stats thread, or something. Now that somebody needs them, I have to use whatever little memory I have of my character and draw up stats all over again.

 

Sheesh.

 

 

EDIT: by the way, you guys are doing well, and that's good. Keep it up.

[Guest The Mad Cappa]

Ok, here's feedback from me!

 

- Hoff did a good job mixing up NYU and CCB's opening segments into one. I have no idea who the Libertines are. Then Josie annoucing the new Run for the Gold match helped set up the main event later on.

 

- Since when did LaLa become the theme song for HD?

 

- Great match between HH/BT that showed the differences of both teams, one using strength and the other using intelligence, with the better team winning.

 

- Hoff selling out to Dr. Pepper. I personally don't care for Dr. Pepper but Hoff made it seem something to drink. Hoffamaniacs. Oh dear lord......

 

- Phenom has definately improved over the last couple of weeks. However, this match, I felt, could've went a little bit longer. I concur with some others here that Warren Peace needed to be used more sparingly, at the most inappropriate times!

 

- Hmmmmm.... I wonder who is going to return next week to face Zack.

 

- Drek literally owned Hoff and Axel in the promo! Nice to keep building up to the ZH match and to the mystery of either Hoff vs. Axel or Axel vs. Drek for AM4.

 

- The 70s Dude segment with the Cuban man was hilarious.

 

- To answer Hoff, I wrote the grainy segment to explain that Rusco wasn't going to show up at Cocoa Beach while at the same time doing a mini throwback to the video segments leading up to ClimaXXX. To answer Phenom, Rusco WAS based on Russo, but heavily restrained. I came up with Rusco as Cappa's old manager back when Cappa debuted 2 years ago. He left a couple of a months later and I just brought him back last week as the lawyer.

 

- The GPX/Saints match was wild! With questions arising between GPX possibly making a heel turn or The Saints breaking up, or whom did Holly-Wood mean to throw the racket to. In the end, it was great to see the NNMX show a mean streak as they beat up on poor Synth.

 

- Awwwww. Axel trying to win back Crystal's trust. This has been a very interesting storyline.

 

- Cool little commercial of the ClimaXXX DVD.

 

- Poor Jumbo getting weasled into wrestling Axel. Other than that, entertaining match that knew it wasn't going to technical at all.

 

- Funny interview segment with Alix and Josie. Alix also reminds me of a friend I used to hang out with.

 

- I was actually shocked to see Lindsay get that much offense on Tina considering she never really wrestled a match before. Dueling chairs was a unique segment!

 

- PR screaming about chairs cracked me up. This set up nicely to the PR/Panther match at ZH.

 

- Fistfull of sand! The Dirty Hippy's Elbow! Brilliant! I was kinda surprised to see the 70s Dude use Jannetty as his opponent. This match helped put over how dirty the Dude is.

 

- Cute segment between NNMX and Holly using talk show-esque techniques.

 

- I hadn't realized until Patty pointed it out about how Stevens always (and failing) to take out Hoff all the time. Jumbo having an M.B.A. Hmmmmm....

 

- Good Josie/Dude segment. The Dude has became one of my favorite characters that I can't wait to see what he has in store for Brock!

 

- Awwwww again. Axel saving Crystal from Stevens and Jumbo to earn back her trust. Or is it? Can't wait to see what lies in store for this storyline.

 

- Intense match between Holly and KID for the Women's title that was made overall better with the Candie commentary. She should commentate on Holly's matches from now on. I'm still trying to figure out how the Blood on the Dance Floor can be physically possible.

 

- Wow, just wow. Like I already told NYU, this match was off the wall! I was literally rolling on the floor laughing when I was reading this! MOTY so far. It was hard to find specific favorite moments since thaey were all hilarious and great! I really don't know what else to say about this match.

 

Overall, an excellent show. Can't wait to read next week's.