Anglemania IV Feedback Thread

[Patty O'Green 0]

DORKS!!!!!!

 

Once again I’m missing Dharma and Greg. But now its thanks to my gardner!

 

I’m with Coach, they shoulda worn masks in the Joy of X match. KC writes these multi person matches pretty well. I’d kill my own father before I ever agreed to write a four person contest. Don’t tell him I said that! Very exciting pro wrestling spectacle. Maybe I’m stupid, but KC got me to believe that Rodez wasn’t going to go over. You don’t have to comment on the “Maybe I’m Stupid” bit. I already know ya’ll think I’m a super genius.

 

Tony, did you write that Larry Zybysko thing? If so nice job!

 

My match! Figuring that everyone else would try to write a dramatic or epic match, I just tried to write a short, exciting spotfest. I changed Kris’ graphic again. The problem with finding a good pic is that I made her too old.

 

I have to admit that I didn’t even know what a Texas Death Match was. Why Texas? Texas isn’t that hardcore. West Virginia. Now that’s a hardcore state. Coming straight out of Compton? Naw, fuck that, coming straight out of Morgantown. I own a shirt that says “It’s all relative in West Virginia” Onto the match, Calvin being so pissed that he just stormed right to the ring was a nice touch. I should note that he has the best entrance music in the fed. Going through a barbed wire table covered in glass? Good lord, that’s the bump of the night. Intense match, that put over both men really well. Hooray! Mascot stepped his game up, son. T70D would make a good challenger for Axel’s title. If Mascot and Adam actually got along that is.

 

A COD skit! Tony actually wrote the Elmer Fudd part and Cornette giving Alix 5 bucks. Like I told him, Tony and I are fucking the game up with straight stupid rhymes!

 

Six man action. More well written entrances! They read more like a book then a wrestling match, which is a good thing. I knew Zack’s team was gonna win because Zack doesn’t job to wrestlers with penises. If the C.Note (CWM) wore a mini skirt, his team might’ve got at least a count out victory. I enjoyed the whole match, but enjoyed the ending sequence most of all. And I guess that’s what you’re supposed to like best in a wrestling match. Zack and Eski did a good job capturing that big match feel.

 

Mario Logan/Phenom weeps at the outcome of the main event. In truth I wanted Drek to retain, so we could at some point see the e-fed dream match of Zack Malibu vs Drek Stone for the world title. Very good, well written (my favorite phrase!) match. Nice brawling and some cool spots (double burning hammer and the choke slam off the apron.). Congrats to Adam.

 

So tell me, was Sly supposed to win the world title at AM? Dish the dirt!

[NYU 0]

So tell me, was Sly supposed to win the world title at AM? Dish the dirt!

That will all come out when I finally write my shoot interview.

 

And not to hype it all up or anything, but we're talking some really interesting stuff here. And Damaramu trashing. Everyone loves Damaramu trashing.

[Tony149 0]

Tony, did you write that Larry Zybysko thing? If so nice job!

Yes. For some reason I've been dying to write "20 glorious years" for quite some time, so I knew if I did it it would have to be with Larry himself. Considering he was apart of one of my favorite tag teams (w/Arn Anderson) and stables (Dangerous Alliance), I decided to break him out for the AM tag match.

 

I had planned on saving this until I feedbacked more of the show, but to quickly touch of some comments from Eski...

 

He has a unique writing style of his own, but I couldn't tell what he wrote in the 6 man, that's how good the match was. Everything blended in perfectly.

 

The AM V ad was used to transition from the previous match to the next. I had expected Zack to do a video package, and it would have gone there, but I never got one in time so I used the ad to give some time before going to our next match. I just went with TP&C for AM V because WM did the same thing. We can always change it and say a bomb scare forced us to move the event to another location.

[Patty O'Green 0]

And not to hype it all up or anything, but we're talking some really interesting stuff here. And Damaramu trashing. Everyone loves Damaramu trashing.

Oh my god, post that shoot interview right now. I'm not even joking.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

I have to admit that I didn’t even know what a Texas Death Match was. Why Texas? Texas isn’t that hardcore. West Virginia. Now that’s a hardcore state. Coming straight out of Compton? Naw, fuck that, coming straight out of Morgantown. I own a shirt that says “It’s all relative in West Virginia” Onto the match, Calvin being so pissed that he just stormed right to the ring was a nice touch. I should note that he has the best entrance music in the fed. Going through a barbed wire table covered in glass? Good lord, that’s the bump of the night. Intense match, that put over both men really well. Hooray! Mascot stepped his game up, son. T70D would make a good challenger for Axel’s title. If Mascot and Adam actually got along that is.

I have no problem with him on a personal level. At the same time The 70s Dude has only been around for a few months. A feud for the World Title just wouldn't be good for him. Not yet at least.

[Mystery Eskimo 0]

As I said somewhere else, I think the Dude could be the perfect challenger for the X title right now.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

The only person I'm anxious to see feedback now would be Tony. I know he too was looking forward to The 70s Dude and Calvin match (or at least it appeared that way) so I'm wondering if I get a thumbs up from him as well.

[Adam 0]

And not to hype it all up or anything, but we're talking some really interesting stuff here. And Damaramu trashing. Everyone loves Damaramu trashing.

Oh my god, post that shoot interview right now. I'm not even joking.

*has the inside word on what will be included*

 

God that convo was hilarious Rob, you should post it in its entirety.

[Mystery Eskimo 0]

He has a unique writing style of his own, but I couldn't tell what he wrote in the 6 man, that's how good the match was. Everything blended in perfectly.

If anyone's interested, my part was the start up till CWM attempts his first Pollycutter and Zack hits him with a spinebuster.

 

Six man action. More well written entrances! They read more like a book then a wrestling match, which is a good thing.

 

I was trying for a more deeply written, dramatic style to start things off so glad you liked it.

[Tony149 0]

The only person I'm anxious to see feedback now would be Tony. I know he too was looking forward to The 70s Dude and Calvin match (or at least it appeared that way) so I'm wondering if I get a thumbs up from him as well.

Enjoyed the Dude's pre-match promo, it was short but being able to picture the character speaking in your head really puts it over. The Magical Mystery Tour of Funk? Awesome. Another thing I also liked was the old school effect used for Calvin's promo -- you know, opponent in ring, cut to back for quick interview. It was even shorter than the Dude's promo, but showed the seriousness of the match.

 

From the double juicing, both men crashing through the barbwire table cover in glass, and to the Dude winning by hitting the Draft Doodger from the second rope, it was a fun match to read.

[NYU 0]

Oh no Tony, you're not getting away that easily.

 

Feedback Drek/Axel too. Or else.....

[Tony149 0]

Oh no Tony, you're not getting away that easily.

 

Feedback Drek/Axel too. Or else.....

 

I was actually reading that match before I saw FM's request. Halfway through it and enjoying it thus far. Epic entrances. Lots of commentary -- good commentary at that. Might as well give it a "I like it" because I'd probably end up use the same two or three phrases for everything. As Patty would probably say with all his hipness, I keep it real.

 

EDITED:

 

FM touched on it earlier, but reading Cole's 10,000 pounds comment in its original context is hilarious. Didn't he say something similiar to the tombstone (not the move) during one of the Buried Alive matches?

 

More comments on the main event. Loved the entire match from the opening bell to the post-match celebrations. We should've gone Russo and had Hoff beat the snot out of Axel at the end. Who would of saw that coming?

 

I'm guessing Adam wrote part of it, but I keep learning something new everytime I read a Drek Stone match. NYU's style is impeccable. It's no wonder he won Best Writer at this year's Angle Awards. Although I had to re-read the part when Drek hits the Stonecutter out of nowhere because it said "He then lifts AXEL up over his head for the Diamond Cutter..." I was like WTF, but it's good to see nobody's perfect.

 

Bit off-topic, but what happened to the Fall of Haim? Since a FOH show is more than likely out of the question, reveal who got in.

Edited April 7, 2005 by Tony149

[Adam 0]

We can still have a show if people want, but if you want to know who got in:

 

Calvin Szechstein

The Superstar

Mystery Eskimo

Sandman9000

The Blurricane

Ragdoll

[Hank Kingsley 0]

!

[Guest Failed Mascot]

Which means you have to come back and write a bit, Mr. Supes.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

oh, and CanadianChick needs to leave feedback as well since she said she would.

[Hank Kingsley 0]

We'll see, Mr. Soul.

[alfdogg 0]

We can still have a show if people want, but if you want to know who got in:

 

Calvin Szechstein

The Superstar

Mystery Eskimo

Sandman9000

The Blurricane

Ragdoll

Well, fuck right off, you guys.

[Adam 0]

More feedback:

 

The Heavenly Rockers vs. The New New Midnight Express

We have an amazing Tag Division. I could stop right there with my praise for this match, and the division as a whole, but I won't. The fact that the OAOAST has around seven active teams that could concievably challenge for either tag title is astounding. It takes me back to the WWF in 2000. Very good match to end a very good feud.

 

Joy Of X

The beginning of this match was somewhat of a markout moment, as Ken knows I always enjoyed the K Money character, and it was awesome having Supes back, even if it was only for one night. I never got to see a whole lot of Rando when I entered the company, but what I have seen has always been good. To whoever said that King C is one of the best writers in this fed, I second that. Obviously he gets his skills from his background in the SWF, but I always seem to enjoy his work, whether it be a comedic segment or a match such as this. Im glad Rodez went over, his momentum is great right now.

 

OAOAST Tag Team Championship: Chicks Over Dicks vs. GPX

I've already commented on how much I like the tag division, and this was another example of it. COD could hold the belts for another three or four months, and I'd be happy. Very entertaining.

 

The 70's Dude vs. Calvin Szechstein

Fast and furious action in this one. Mascot did a very good job here, as this was a feud-ending, and therefore, big match. I love Texas Deathmatches, or what I've seen of them. Brutal ending spots, and a good ending that put both men over as tough competitors. Good job.

 

Only the six man to go...

[Guest Failed Mascot]

To whoever said that King C is one of the best writers in this fed, I second that.

I said that but I'm sure I'm not the only one to have said it. Happy to be working with him now.

[CanadianChick 0]

And the slowly but surely feedback continues...

 

Tha Puerto Rican vs. Panther

Is a Rage in the Cage different from any other cage match? And how long has PRL been using "The Champ is Here"? Isn't that a ripoff of a ripoff? AND WHY ALL THE CAPITALS?

 

The chair fight thing is creative, but it seems to humourous for a match that is suppose to be serious. I don't like that. Comedy has its place, and it's not a cage match. Oh, and this needs a finish.

[Adam 0]

I won't be feedbacking the PRL-Panther match, partly because I don't have the time to read it. Im pissed Panther didn't go over though.

[NYU 0]

At this rate, CC is going to finish her feedback around June.

[CanadianChick 0]

You're just bitter because your match is last.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

At this rate, CC is going to finish her feedback around June.

We better hope she doesn't hit a snag then.

[CanadianChick 0]

Bitches. The whole lot of you.

 

Killings vs. Brock

 

CABOOSE

What the hell? Did he spend those three months training watching Christian matches?

 

BURN!

 

I like the Killings character. Someone who is outright awful...that's pretty rare for OAOAST. And the cheap win fits here. I do hope Brock stays a relatively strong character in OAOAST though.

 

I'll do the tag match by the end of the night.

[Tony149 0]

Because Patty wanted it...

 

COD-GPX: Even if the match had sucked just reading "Jazze Phizzle Productshizzle" would of made up for it. But the match didn't suck, so together with "Jazze Phizzle Productshizzle" it was a fun match to read. I'm surprised the addition of GPX's catchphrases into their theme song caught on, well, at least this one time.

 

COD on The Tonight Show? Screw that. They're obviously Late Night w/Conan O'Brien material. Them and the Masturbating Bear together is money, I say.

 

I was talking to P.O.G. yesterday and gave him feedback before I had actually read the match, telling him in advance that the match had hilarious commentary. He told me it didn't. He lied. Then again, I think he thought I was talking about the commentary from Triple C rather than the funny and sometimes goofy (in a good way) one-liners used during the actual match itself.

 

In closing, the match rocked. We had a celebrity, Alix getting buzzed before the match, and two great tag teams getting it on in a non-sexual way. What more can the awesome OAOAST tag team division provide?

 

Burning Sensation When You Urinate? Abosolutely hilarious. That's recently named, isn't it? I don't recall seeing the sunset flip piledriver referred to that before. Maybe I'm wrong. But I know I'm not wrong in saying COD need their own TV show. Ned could be the area bastard.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

Johnny heads to the opposite corner and raises the roof. Not literally. Because that would be impossible and a building code violation.

Awesome

 

From Alix sniffing rubber cement to the Asia Man dressed as The Godfather all the way to the hot tag where we saw

 

Alix hits the ring, a 5'5 ball of glue sniffing fire!

all the way to the end it was a great and fun match to read. Alix screaming out that she's CooCoo for CocoPuffs while getting all full of adrenaline was great and so was the name of that finisher. Patty is super-dee-dooper

 

Only the 6 Man left and to my knowledge only people involved in that affair to feedback are Tony and Eski. That's pretty sad guys

[Zack Malibu 0]

Johnny heads to the opposite corner and raises the roof. Not literally. Because that would be impossible and a building code violation.

Awesome

 

From Alix sniffing rubber cement to the Asia Man dressed as The Godfather all the way to the hot tag where we saw

 

Alix hits the ring, a 5'5 ball of glue sniffing fire!

all the way to the end it was a great and fun match to read. Alix screaming out that she's CooCoo for CocoPuffs while getting all full of adrenaline was great and so was the name of that finisher. Patty is super-dee-dooper

 

Only the 6 Man left and to my knowledge only people involved in that affair to feedback are Tony and Eski. That's pretty sad guys

Yes well in two weeks when I'm back down to one job again and done with classes, I'll feedback.

 

Yes folks, you read that right. Back to one job. Realizing it was killing me to even try and continue to juggle two jobs and college, I have resigned (for the time being) as a teacher.

[Guest Failed Mascot]

You could juggle both properly if you took my suggestion of having your students do the work from the other job.