She did, actually. It's just all the other lines were so short (What'll it be, Marv?) that it didn't come through as clearly. If you see it again concentrate and you can tell she's not just using her normal voice.
The vintage delivery was very cool and worked well with the "timeless/90's mixed with 40's" vibe they were going for.
Agreed. She really captured the stereotypical female victim that appears quite often in film noir.
To be honest, I thought everyone involved with the film did a good job.
I still say Madsen did a mediocre job at best. His delivery seemed kindof akward to me (not sure if akward is the word I'm looking for, though)