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[Dace59 0]

We lost... boooo! Hisssssss!

 

Danny won ................

 

YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!

 

<Breaks out the party in a box>

 

Real comments to follow in the morning.

[Hank Kingsley 0]

Sweet mother of pearl.

[Cuban Linx 0]

Oh well. Congrats to Ash on what looks to be a very nice match. I was happier with my match than any i've written in a long time, but i guess i still have some work to do if i want to compete with the best.

[Chuck Woolery 0]

Meh... I'll be the first to admit that my match isn't my best, and I realize it.

 

I'll also admit that while I'm happy for Danny... I hope he can hold onto the title. And I was really hoping Ejiro would pull out a win, because he's probably my favorite character in the fed. Still, big ups to Danny for the win.

 

Everything else on the card looks nice... Matthews holding two titles at once is reminiscent of one of my early ideas for Double Jeopardy, which was to have him win the ICTV, US, and HCG titles, while holding the tag belts with me. It also reminds me of my favorite promo ever, with Stryke and Chris Wilson sitting in a limo... but I digress. Nice show all around, and big ups to all the winners.

[janusd 0]

Good show. Dace and I wrote a fun match, but we were running out of space so although it was fun, it felt a bit rushed. Congrats to Johnny and WC for getting their tag title shot.

 

TRINITY PRIDE~! Danny's champ~! Hmm. Now we need Dace to win a title so the entire Trinity can be goldholders.

 

Again, good show. (Y)

[Dace59 0]

Right now.

 

Go Va'aiga. It's another brilliant string of promos from you. Trashing the office was a nice touch. You are, as I have said before are a great, great man. Nice murder of X too.

 

Congradulations to Grappler. Fighting his way to being a double champion (Y) Good man.

 

And Tom did a nice job, for someone that was worried about doing Hardcore. And you're intro did come off very well.

 

As for the main event. I'm not surprised Danny broke out something differnet for the finish. Showing how tough Ejior is and how he can take all the big moves.

 

The comment about "Maybe he should have worked the right arm" from the Eblow Suicida was a nice little smark touch.

[Coffin Surfer 0]

Thanks to everyone who congratulated me on my Title win..........Dace, Janus, and Chuck.

 

This is honestly something that I never thought I would be able to do. Afterall, I don't the know the first thing about writing, yet I'm surrounded by a bunch extremely talented writers that appear to have done way better in English than I did. Considering that I've actually won something with my writing for the first time since like first grade, really does mean alot ot me. Yeah it's just a wrestling e fed, but still, I feel honored.

 

Time is another issue that has crippled my writing here, since I never seem to have any. Still, I will try to find the time to defend the Title as much as possible.

 

Once again, thanks everyone......Dace, Janus, Chuck.

[Guest Goodear]

Well Danny, no one has ever denied that you have the ability to write matches 'move-for-move' but lately you have totally stepped up your ability to describe the action more effectively as well as your commentary.

 

You = The Man

 

PS: I would feel bad about leaving you without a main event feud ... but Va'aiga is cooler than me anyway. =-)

[Rawknight 0]

PS: I would feel bad about leaving you without a main event feud ... but Va'aiga is cooler than me anyway. =-)

Dude you wrote me into the GROUND with that time limit draw at genesis how dare you accuse yourself of < me

[Ace309 0]

Let me just say that I, for one, never thought Danny would be able to do this. As he mentioned, I think everyone's noticed that his writing isn't his strong point.

 

His mind for wrestling, on the other hand, has always been incredible, and he's been stepping up the writing steadily... so steadily, in fact, that I think he caught everyone by surprise here.

 

Seriously, Danny, I'm impressed. This is an accomplishment, and you should be proud of the effort you've put into this fed in the nearly two years since we faced off on our first JL show. Congratulations, and here's to a nice, long reign.

[Rawknight 0]

Let me just say that I, for one, never thought Danny would be able to do this. As he mentioned, I think everyone's noticed that his writing isn't his strong point.

 

His mind for wrestling, on the other hand, has always been incredible, and he's been stepping up the writing steadily... so steadily, in fact, that I think he caught everyone by surprise here.

That's why I was so stoked to get the win over Danny. Danny writes like me and Dace, only better. I hope I can improve my writing to the standard of my wrestling liek Danny has done - then I can be a consistent world champ level dude too!

[HVilleThugg 0]

Are you kidding me Tom?

 

I have been saying for like a year now that Danny was the bomb and could be champ, but no one listened to me. I knew it because he reminds me of a less puro version of me. You're right, his writing is not his strong point like Edwin or those guys, but he's got a great knowledge of wrestling and a great eye for a good match. He knows how to tell good stories with his matches, and I know that if you can do that, then you're gonna make it big in this fed. How do you think I won two world titles? I can't write a lick...but it's the story...the heat...the drama you can create with your match. And Danny does this better than anyone in the fed, which is why I knew he'd be champ.

 

Da "until da masta shows him how it's done" H

 

PS - Congrats Danny!

[muzz 0]

How do you think I won two world titles? I can't write a lick...but it's the story...the heat...the drama you can create with your match.

Curry: OMGZ UNTAMED THROUGH TWENTY JILLION TEBLES!!!!

 

NTD: HE'S DEAD CURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[HVilleThugg 0]

Hey now...It works.

 

Don't hate.

 

Da "loves his CAPS LOCK and super long spaces" H

[Coffin Surfer 0]

Now that's more like it.

 

Sorry, I didn't mean to come off like I was in need of an ego stroking or something, it just felt odd to see a World Title change only get four comments.

 

Thanks everybody.

[Ace309 0]

Now that's more like it.

 

Sorry, I didn't mean to come off like I was in need of an ego stroking or something, it just felt odd to see a World Title change only get four comments.

 

Thanks everybody.

Fool.

 

Once you win the world title, you have to get accustomed to people ignoring everything you do.

 

'Tis the way of the world.

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

This is honestly something that I never thought I would be able to do.  Afterall, I don't the know the first thing about writing, yet I'm surrounded by a bunch extremely talented writers that appear to have done way better in English than I did.  Considering that I've actually won something with my writing for the first time since like first grade, really does mean alot ot me.  Yeah it's just a wrestling e fed, but still, I feel honored.

....

 

 

I don't see it.

 

 

If you don't know the first thing about writing, I must suck on ice, because you're waaaay better than me!

 

I'm not the least bit surprised that you're the champion; I've had you pegged as the best, or second-best writer in the fed the whole time I've been here. I'm only surprised it's taken you this long.