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I'll feedback everybody who feedbacks the work me and Calvin did together in a couple days. Till then I'm going to sneeze and blow my nose until my mucus glands explode.

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COACH

…..what about when Crystal had it?

 

CABOOSE

Well, nobody was even watching HeldDown at that point.

 

:(

 

COACH

Could it have something to do with the way he’s acted? Has he ever considered that?

 

CABOOSE

Come on, Coach. These people have been known to cheer Crystal, for chrissakes. How dare they boo Drek Stone!

 

:(

 

I’m stuck defending my title against that hag Crystal in a MIDCARD match

 

:(

 

Other than the TOTALLY UNNESSESARY Crystal insults, good opening segment. Just to emphasize my total distraught over the obvious character trashing, I shall make the face one more time.

 

:(

 

ALIX

Krista Tyler Myrick. OMG SH00T NAMEZ!1111

 

That got a laugh outta me. Actually the whole segment got a laugh outta me.

 

“FRANK, YOU’RE LATE ON YOUR CHILD SUPPORT!” Hollers a ghastly overweight female in the audience.

 

WHAT?!? Ah, randomness. A writer's best friend. Good match.

 

Hey, how did Josh go from getting bitched slapped to interviewing the someone? HUH?!? Funny segment with Black, Tony and Ventura. Though I don't condone hitting woman...unless you're a woman yourself.

 

Good match with GXP and Love Doctors. Man, I'm such a mark for GXP. I'd so be one of the girls screaming. Like the Hardy fangirls.

 

And the new Calvin debuts! Cool, can't wait to see what he comes up with.

 

Axel's everywhere tonight!!!

 

CABOOSE

Then why can't Crystal have her bitch out here. I gotcha.

 

OH BURN~!

 

Huge props to Zack for doing the match. I know he has a very busy schedule, so thanks man.

 

Damn, Zack is everywhere too!

 

Good main event. Hilarious commentary by Zack and JR.

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But it was done in a LOVING context, so that means it's okay.

 

Feedback coming SOON!!

 

Not tonight. But soon!

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Good show, feed later.

 

Oh, whoever wrote the Disciples of Chaos thing...don't just use our characters randomly like that, especially when we have a big match the same show, it just screws up continuity. I thank you.

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Feedback....well, whenever I finish the AP feed. But a comment. Let me know if you liked the little backstage thing I put up. If people did, I think we should or at least could do more, as something to advance storylines and/or add depth to our characters.

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Hey Calvin, credit Papacita with the PRL segments. I didn't write anything this week, that was all him. Those segments were great by the way, Papacita. You wrote Tha Puerto Rican perfectly. It was a wonderful job. Thumbs up.

 

The show was great. I liked the commentary during the COD/Black T match. I thought it was very funny. And I also like the new direction Calvin Szechstein is taking. I guess it's safe to say that the Thrillogy is gone now, huh? I mean, Hoff is a face and was kicked out of the group. Calvin is now a face. And Zack is paying more attention to The Original Elite then to the Thrillogy. It's sort of like how The Nation of Domination ended. Everyone just moved onto different things, and the group slowly faded away. Well, it was fun while it lasted. I thought the Thrillogy was awesome.

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Good stuff guys

 

Edit: Sometime you should trying using different Fonts/colours for things. Like matches in blue, Interviews Italicized, etc. Just to give it a different look because at least for me it all sorta blurs together. Just an idea.

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All this talk about Calvin when his best days are behind him. The 70s Dude is clearly the big name today~

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"Goodies" would've been an excellent theme song

I’ll defend Ashlee and my hastily chosen theme song until the end of time.

 

The Anderson Cup excites me. Even though I already know both the result and the finish to the resulting AM match. Let me rephrase my statement; The matches I don’t have to write for the Anderson Cup excite me. Sexually. My nipples stiffen when I think about the BlackT/NNMX match this upcoming HD~!

 

In real life I don’t think Jesse and Cole would have much chemistry. But they were written well in the GPX/LD match. Tony took a jab at the OC! I take it you watched the show and were unimpressed?

 

I swear I don’t remember agreeing to write the FS/HH match. But somehow I wound up writing it anyway.

 

One time in Anaheim I saw a Wrestlemania renactment show where peeps basically just did matches from Wrestlemanias past spot for spot. Anaheim was a long way to drive to watch someone botch a People’s Elbow. The point of all this is that I think The Puerto Rican needs to talk in third person. Also, I don't like Anaheim. No sir. I do not.

 

ZACK

......Sorry bitch, this isn't a veterinarian. You can't get your muzzle fitted here.

Hahhahahhaah!

 

Hey! A new GM! Hooray! If this means the end of Bill Watts I’ll be forever happy!

 

I’m very surprised to see T70G and Calvin feuding. I never would’ve guessed those two would get together. Anyway, I look forward to the feud if only for the promos!

 

I liked Hoff’s “Exclusive Footage”. It was a nice little touch for his storyline. And it was smart to post it in the HE folder instead of in the HD folder.

 

Edit: Hey Alfdogg wasn't on this show! That means his retirement stipulation was legit! I'm shocked!

Edited by Patty O'Green

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Good show, feed later.

 

Oh, whoever wrote the Disciples of Chaos thing...don't just use our characters randomly like that, especially when we have a big match the same show, it just screws up continuity. I thank you.

Don't look at me on this one...though I am very open to writing next week's stuff. Ya'll get in touch with me.

 

 

I honestly had no idea what was going on, and left it in the hands of...the co-champ, I believe.

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In real life I don’t think Jesse and Cole would have much chemistry. But they were written well in the GPX/LD match. Tony took a jab at the OC! I take it you watched the show and were unimpressed?

 

I swear I don’t remember agreeing to write the FS/HH match. But somehow I wound up writing it anyway.

On the recommendation of Zack, I tuned into the show 3 weeks ago and I'm still watching, so I guess I like it. I'm a little confused as to what's going on because I had never seen the show before, all I know is the father of the mother doesn't like the guy his daughter is dating, who I think dated Mischa Barton's character, who's involved in a lesbain storyline, and the guys are doing a comic. Because I hardly bother watching Smackdown nowadays, and Thursday isn't a big viewing night for me, I'll keeping watching. The last time Zack recommended something to me, or I should say mentioned something to me (WCCW, which made me pick up the Best of the Von Erichs DVD), I ended up liking it, so maybe lightning will strike twice.

 

You agreed to write the HH-FS match a few weeks ago. I remember you saying you looked forward to writing the Frankies.

 

If they ever worked together, I think Cole would benefit because Ventura would be all over him for everything Coleism Michael Cole does. If you can't work with Ventura, you know you suck. Monsoon could. McMahon could. Schiavone could. J.R could, even if he was irked by hizzoner. At the very least, a Ventura/Cole combo would provide some very funny moments.

 

I haven't read the show yet, so I'm not sure what this new GM deal is all about, but when Watts is supposed to be a throwback to when Commissioners just made announcements and whatnot, not physically involved. Over the years he's become what Teddy Long, Eric Bischoff, and all other GM/Commissioners are today.

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I'll have comments for all the whiners about not getting any comments....later. Promise! I'm already late for a dinner date, as it stands. But let me just say that I'm thrilled Patty got what I was trying to do with the post being in HE instead of here. I dunno, I wish we'd do more stuff like this, the House Show reports, tc.

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Good show, feed later.

 

Oh, whoever wrote the Disciples of Chaos thing...don't just use our characters randomly like that, especially when we have a big match the same show, it just screws up continuity. I thank you.

Don't look at me on this one...though I am very open to writing next week's stuff. Ya'll get in touch with me.

 

 

I honestly had no idea what was going on, and left it in the hands of...the co-champ, I believe.

Uhh......

 

(runs away, calls Tony149 on the phone)

 

You stink!

 

(hangs up)

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But let me just say that I'm thrilled Patty got what I was trying to do with the post being in HE instead of here. I dunno, I wish we'd do more stuff like this, the House Show reports, tc.

I couldn't agree more. For the longest time I've been dying to ask Papacita if he could make a OAOAST Control Center for the PPVs. My idea was to do this on the last HD before the PPV with J.R. standing in front a superimposed logo with the date of the event underneath it. I never got around to asking because I didn't have the time to write a rundown of the cards. Maybe we could still do it. Instead of J.R., we'd use Savage. Everybody knows Randy Savage has a unique voice, but reading it takes it to a whole other level. And yes, that means I thought your after show segment was excellent.

 

Hoff vs. Drek at Zero Hour? I guess the question is -- which match prevents Stone from ME'ing yet again? :)

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I couldn't agree more. For the longest time I've been dying to ask Papacita if he could make a OAOAST Control Center for the PPVs. My idea was to do this on the last HD before the PPV with J.R. standing in front a superimposed logo with the date of the event underneath it.

I actually did something similar to this back when PRL was on IntenseZone. I would send segments on the last hD~! before the PPV every month with Josh Matthews standing in the OAOAST Control Center running down the card. I stopped doing this when PRL went to HeldDOWN~! for some reason. Maybe I can do it again?

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Go for it.

 

Tony -- if anything stops Drek/Hoff from MEing I'm gonna find you, and WHEN I DO.... *dun dun dun*

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I actually did something similar to this back when PRL was on IntenseZone. I would send segments on the last hD~! before the PPV every month with Josh Matthews standing in the OAOAST Control Center running down the card. I stopped doing this when PRL went to HeldDOWN~! for some reason. Maybe I can do it again?

Yeah, I remember those. I'd like to see 'em come back with a graphic with whoever is running down the card in front of the logo, like old school WWF/WCW control/event centers.

 

Hoff, don't go a-lookin' for me if you don't ME because it's Popick's show.

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Hoff, don't go a-lookin' for me if you don't ME because it's Popick's show.

How is it the Papa's show? You're the President since Zack Malibu was relieved of his modurating duties.

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Zack is still one of the 403 mods of the OAOAST.

I know, but after the incident in which he was demoted to just a Member, Tony ascended the throne.

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You know, I didn't even notice Zack is no longer a TSM Mod. That makes 2 OAOAST Mods who were TSM Mods. I bet it's because he doesn't have the time to Mod the board with his schedule, kinda like me, except I was always here, just rarely posted outside OAOAST.

 

The opening was one of the weirdest things I've read, but found it quite hilarious. I mean, "banana shaped 'impliments'"? Only in the OAOAST.

 

I forgot to mention this in the Anglepalooza thread, but let me say that I think Drek Stone would have one of the coolest entrances in wrestling if he were real. It doesn't look like much, but with his character and that theme blaring in the arena, I know it'd probably send chills down my back.

 

Awesome opening segment. Our World Champion puts Triple H and J.B.L. to shame. He doesn't hog the show, but when he appears, it usually means something is going down. I also like how next week's main event was announcement after the action in the ring. It wasn't done too soon, nor too late, just right. The randomness of J.R. and Tazz talking out of nowhere reminds me of Family Guy, where things that make absolutely make no sense occur but its randomness is what makes it funny. Same thing there. Patty already mentioned it, but the little shocked face used was priceless. Reading the segment, then seeing that for the first time in its original form had me rolling on the floor. Not literally, but you know.

 

I read C.O.D.s promo a couple days ago and couldn't stop laughing. Combine with what they did later in the show, I think we did a good job putting them over HUGE.

 

For go from one Patty segment to another. Damn, some of the oddball stuff -- weird chants, Sadist pinching his nipple and moaning -- written into the match is down right hilarious. Very good use of the font for Hell's Hitmen entrance. Whenever I write another HH match, I'm gonna ripoff what you wrote, saving me the trouble of writing what they're doing as they head to the ring. You don't know how funny, to me at least, it is seeing "Oh, baby" written in big, bold red lettering.

 

Well, at least the GM segment was well written.

 

I already told Eskimo what I thought about the Black T promo he wrote, but I'll repeat it for you all -- it was grrrreat!

 

Excellent Tha Puerto Rican promo. I know he didn't write it, but it'll be good to see TPR return because he always brings content.

 

Considering I spent a majority of my time working on C.O.D.-BT, I thought the GPX-Love Doctors match came off really well. I wasn't happy with the way the match was originally written, then I didn't like the second version, so I rewrote the entire thing a few days ago. Like revision is a common thing, it's something I've rarely done until the last week. And I'd like to believe it's paying off.

 

Good segment involving '70s Dude and Calvin, as was the JAE segment.

 

Nice return for TPR, with the chaotic aftermath. Again, an announcing cameo, this time Vince McMahon. I like it. It's becoming a running gag. One I think most find funny.

 

Very interesting backstage segment with Zack, Crystal and Axel. It could lead to a number of possibilites down the road.

 

Now that I've read what Eskimo referred to in his post, I agree with everything he said. I did find Warren Peace looking like Gorilla Monsoon funny, though.

 

MALE BONDING~! Axel and Hoff. Caboose's "family channel" comment was cute. Ewww, a man said "cute".

 

Having never heard "Getting Away with Murder" and wondering how it sounded, I really enjoyed it and Zack's Angletron video. Nice little match that followed as well, continuing the what-the-hell-is-going-on deal between Axel and Crystal.

 

Another strong promo from Calvin, and good response by '70s Dude afterwards. I liked the disco ball being used as a weapon.

 

I believe the main event tag match is the best match I've ever written. My matches are normally short but I really made an effort to make it seem epic. Everything just clicked and I'm really proud of it...even if Black T lost.

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See that? My entrance video made someone a fan of my theme song.

 

Someone needs to make updated OAOAST Soundtracks like Supes' did back in the day, so we can put them on CD's.

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Ok, its been a couple days and I shall now leave feedback for those that left ACTUAL feedback(unlike NYU's cheap attempt :angry: ). Before I do that I need to get something off my chest.

 

I heard Lala for the first time on a shampoo commercial today. I kind of heard it at the Orange Bowl but the boos were drowning Ashlee Simpson out. Let me say I will never buy whatever shampoo was being advertised by this horrendous music. Ashlee Simpson is nothing special to look at either. She resembles a young Dustin Hoffman with long black hair and boobs. Somebody is going to lose their music privaleges over making this the theme to the show. Now on to the feedback!

 

Patty has made me a C.O.D. mark. I have to say that I'm sure the WWE wishes they had a tag team that could perform like these two fictional girls. The promos are great, the characters are great, and they're very athletic as well. If these two actually existed and were in a promotion on TV then I would certainly make it a point to tune in and try to catch them each week. Great wrestling and masturbation fodder all in one!

 

I don't know what to think of Patty's tag match. I'm really not a huge fan of swearing be used as I've always thought its an easy way to express something unintelligently. I'd like to see the swearing cut down as its also used so often that it really has no impact when you need to make a point intense. The crowd reactions were real good and Sadist sucking on his own nipples frightened me. The match overall was good and I always love seeing a good Yakuza kick being used.

 

Extremely good tag match. It really was Main Event caliber. Again though, too much swearing...it just takes alot away from everything for me. I'm not some Bible Belt man who is against cursing but when its just thrown out there like nothing it becomes tedious and boring real quick. I also think it hurts Zack Malibu here because he just sounds too simple rather than hitting them with some good barbs or something.

I love Jiving J.R~ If the real Jim Ross read any of this he would cry. I'm waiting for him to announce that he has just pooped his pants or something along those lines.

 

WWE should feel pathetic. An e-fed written by a bunch of fans just having fun with it have a tag division hundreds of times better than anything thrown out there by the WWE in over 4 years.

 

Well there ya go. See? If you're not a Damaramu then I'll leave ya feedback.

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