Storm Comments

[chirs3 0]

First off, apologies to Mike and Johnny. Mike because I had to go into your account to get some stuff for the show, and forgot I was still in your account when I started posting. Johnny because his promo should have gone earlier but I was just stupid and mixed up the order of my things. Sorry.

 

Now then - why the best show EVER?!

 

Go read Toxxic's promo. Then you'll know why.

 

What's more, the matches I've read so far were extremely good. Can't speak for the main event yet, but from what we've got, you guys put together a terrific show. Kudos.

[janusd 0]

Toxxic writes the best promos ever.

 

Period.

[the.weej 0]

I did the first song promo. Toxxic, you owe me royalties.

 

-Z

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

Wait, so I was seriously supposed to write my match as if it took place on an actual beach?

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

Hrmm... After reading Landon's match, I guess I'm going to have to tweak my stats a bit. Evidently, at least one person thinks that WC's "Rolling Elbow Smash" is a different move from what the move actually is, so I guess I'm going to have to think of a more appropriate name for it.

[King Cucaracha 0]

Wait, so I was seriously supposed to write my match as if it took place on an actual beach?

That's what the card said...one side of the ring against the sea, other against sand. I took creative license with the rest because I've never actually been invited to P.Diddy's gaff.

 

And yeah, I wasn't sure about the rolling elbow, so I just wrote it the same as Manson's Rolling Elbow. Or, at least, I think I did.

 

 

So, what am I now...1-5 against WC? About damn time I showed against him. Yay Manson as new HCG Champ, yay Toxxic for bringing the amusement. Nice to see another side to the 'normal' Toxxic character ever now and then. Yay Arch too, new INT Champ. Yay for no main event. Yet.

[Toshiaki Koala 0]

IL, I'm sorry about going for the cheap win via DQ - I know I said it would probably be a no-contest. To tell you the truth, I originally had it as a DDQ, but I kind of realized at the last minute that the decision and the actual ending didn't really fit together, so I changed it. Hope you're not mad.

[Above Average 0]

Err... Chris you missed my promo. I guess I'll post it. Heh, I'm just surprised you didn't see mine considering I posted in the Community Board about it and your PM box.

 

And Toxxic's promo is funny in that it reminds me of Christian and Tomko, the best promo duo in the business today. Just insert a british accent. Manson asked for a title shot. Received a title shot and then won the title. HARDCORE. And another new champion in Arch. Could be a bad sign for Ejiro, but in the world of logical booking, all the other title changes would mean he's keeping the belt. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

[The Ill One 0]

IL, I'm sorry about going for the cheap win via DQ - I know I said it would probably be a no-contest. To tell you the truth, I originally had it as a DDQ, but I kind of realized at the last minute that the decision and the actual ending didn't really fit together, so I changed it. Hope you're not mad.

 

No worries man, it's all good and nicely done. Huge kudos to Manson and Munarch~!

[King Cucaracha 0]

Some love for my match would be great.

[The Ill One 0]

Everybody will get some luvin' once I finish reading the show.

[Sly 0]

Even me?

[The Ill One 0]

Even you. *Cue heart warming music*

[JHawk 0]

Congratulations to Arch for beating me fair and square for the International Championship. I showed and everything, and he wrote one hell of a match.

 

That doesn't mean I won't write a nasty promo for Lockdown though.

[TheBostonStrangler 0]

Munchie winning gold. Yeah baby!

 

Toxxic, that promo was one of the most bizarre things I've ever read. Nicely done. I can see why Raynor is so proud of it.

[Angel_Grace_Blue 0]

Eww.

 

Buck with a Yankees hat? Gross. Braves man, Braves. Hell, anything but Yankees. Expos is better than Yankees.

 

Kivell going to DQ Buck on Storm, the hard corest of shows? Um, kay...

 

Honestly, I just skimmed that match, but I'll read it in full later, but I'm going to post my match and ask for feedback.

 

Also: ASAP means about a day later?

[Angel_Grace_Blue 0]

I could just edit this in, but meh.

 

Read Jir's match, and it seems he forgot that it was all no rules and such. Silly man. It was a good singles match and whatnot, but I would like TNT/Raynor/whoever read/marked the match to commentify.

 

But, congrats to Ejiro, and also Munchie and Mr. OSITY.

 

As usual, there's no point to this post, so, like, (Y) and stuff.

 

BORT!

[Angel_Grace_Blue 0]

Once more, I could edit this in, but, another 'meh'.

 

In my previous posts, I sounded like a jackass, and it might seem to some that I thought I should have won the match since Ejiy wrote it under the wrong rules.

 

That is not true. Ejiro wrote a good match, with wrong stip. I wrote a nearly-decent, sorta passable match, with the correct stip. Besides, it's not like it was a ladder match, and he wrote a Calvinball match or anything. But, as I've said, I'd like someone to read my match and give me some comments.

 

Also: I suck at the everything, I believe.

 

Finally, stuff seems slippery to me. My fingers are sliding all over my keyboard. I think it's because my fingertips always get dry and the skin cracks and peels, and I end up having no fingerprints, and like, can't grip stuff well. Slippy.

 

Much slippy.

[Secret Agent 0]

Well, I'd read it and comment but it seems like you're wanting marker feedback so that would be pointless for me to do. Sorry.

[Guest Goodear]

It was no disqualification? Well color me oops. Sorry about that but ... well sometimes that happens. I went with the black Yankees het only because I see the people with them in the hood where I work and so I just shoved one on Buck cause he seems style conscious.

 

Anywhose I was pretty much in position to heel it up here since there is no way I was going to get cheered over Buck on Puffy Island. Which doesn't really flow with what I should be doing with Jerry but I figure the Southern wrestling fans that booed the No Limit Soldiers would like it. Looking back I should have slowed down the tappage or taken it just with the Tomikazi ... but I was tired and wanted to end the match which I wrote in one day with no editing. It was a LOOOONG day.

 

I learn everything about black culture at Blockbuster...

[Chuck Woolery 0]

Where do you live, Ejiro? The black Yankees cap is fairly gangsta, but it's not really crunk... crunk would be a Braves cap, although I've seen Trick Daddy wearing a Marlins cap so I guess the Marlins are crunk too. Basically:

 

P. Diddy, Jay-Z, 50 Cent fans: Yankees

Lil' Jon, Trick Daddy, T.I. fans: Braves

Eminem fans: Tigers

[Angel_Grace_Blue 0]

Well, I'd read it and comment but it seems like you're wanting marker feedback so that would be pointless for me to do. Sorry.

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I appreciate any kind of feedback, Johnny.

 

Ejiy (Or anyone, for that matter) what exactly is the Tomikazi? That spot befuddled me something awful when I read it, trying to figure out what had happened exactly.

 

Mike - I'd say that's about right. And stuff.

[Mr. S£im Citrus 0]

Tomikaze = Unprettier, unless I'm mistaken.

 

Unprettier =/= Wild-Driver, by the way.

[Guest Goodear]

I live in Virginia just South of Washington, DC with a fair amount of time spent with the general public. I would have had Buck wear one of those black jackets with the puffy pads things... but I think those are out now that I don't see them anymore. I am still patently unhip though so no one needs worry about it.

 

Tomikazi = Unprettyer but I think Tomi is the 'technical' name since Tommy Rogers of the Fantastics is said to have invented it but I'm sure Nova was involved in it somewhere.

[Angel_Grace_Blue 0]

Or, like, a reverse double arm DDT.

 

BORTY BORT!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Still no comments on my match. I guess anyone who reads it has their eyes fall out or something.